Legendary Clan Leader

I finally finished reading it. Although it's just the table of contents, as a seasoned bookworm, it feels no different from actually reading the whole book.

It's a bit awkward to read. I've read 150 chapters, and it seems like you're writing a typical Chinese history of internal strife. The human race is clearly incredibly weak, yet they don't know how to unite, and the internal strife is so severe—it's ridiculous!

I heard it was poorly written at the beginning but improved later, but I've read a hundred chapters and it's full of slogans and pretentious sentimentality, it's incredibly awkward. Some comments say that the best parts start after chapter 200, and suggest starting reading from there, but I gave up!

The content is utterly ridiculous. Two humans send 500 children to another race to attack one human? Does the author think they don't need to pay for their intelligence? This is the barbaric era, not the Three Kingdoms period! Wouldn't humans be killed if caught colluding with another race? A tribe only has a little over 10,000 people.

I posted my story on Qidian, and my only reader is my roommate. Today he threatened me that if he's my only reader again, he'll tie me to the bed and insert a 30-centimeter-thick "cylindrical" thing into me... In order to stop him from finding excuses to lust after my body, I have no choice but to advertise. I hope you guys will forgive me. The book is titled "The War of the Ages".

It's supposed to be about tribes, but it's full of trendy slang. It's so hard to get into the story! But I'm really curious why this book has nearly 200,000 followers, so I'll just grit my teeth and keep reading 👀. If another phone pops up, I'll immediately give up!

The subject matter is excellent, but the writing was a bit weak at the beginning. I'm a stickler for logic, so there are some points I want to criticize. Everyone in the story is ruthless and decisive, easily killing hundreds or thousands of people. Please, just think about it. In the Great Wilderness, the survival rate is naturally less than one in a hundred.

After reading the first few chapters, I couldn't bear to continue. The protagonist went to rescue people from a tribe of equal strength with only 20 tribal soldiers. Compared to his own tribe, Black Mountain should have around a thousand warriors. Yet, the protagonist silently entered the wedding hall and killed his own young chieftain with a single blow.

Having read over a hundred chapters, I initially thought it was a conquest-themed story because of the title "Clan Chief," but now it seems more like an upgrade-themed story. The writing is alright, but the protagonist's personality doesn't seem suited to be a hegemon. He either needs to be ruthless like Xiang Yu, or he needs to be patient.

I've read 50 chapters, and the most troubling point is the Mountain and River Seal, a legendary magical artifact crafted by a peerless master from the Investiture of the Gods era. Even if it's internally broken, it left behind a medicinal treasure but no cultivation techniques?