The Planar Elevator

There is too much emphasis on ninjutsu, which is a bit biased towards Japanese comics. Ninjutsu defeats martial arts, Taoism and so on. The influence of Japanese comics on Chinese people is indeed gradually deepening. Nick Fury was not blinded by a screw, it was caused by the element-eating beast in the Agents of SHIELD series, and it was too easy to tell all his secrets to others. The theme of "Infinite Flow Traveling Through the World" is very good, and the writing is also good, but the excessive emphasis on ninjutsu and the abilities of Japanese comic characters is not very good.

I really can't stand it anymore. The main character, the Madonna, is childish. The author has a narrow vision (such as bathing cities and hotels). They are all high-end industries. I wrote about a oriental family that has been in the family for hundreds of years, but they actually have a vision of bathing cities. The KTV is so LO. The whole family has no official status. The family has not had a multinational company for hundreds of years. It still wants other people's bars and plunders. A whole merchant family will kill you in a matter of minutes. Why are you afraid of you and will use any means to do it? For such a LO bar, for such a long-awaited family gathering, their whole family feels like they have a rural outlook, I think there is actually a hot pot city 😂 I laughed to death, knowing that the person who framed me actually said what he wanted to do at the family gathering. When I saw Chapter 240, I don't know what he did to ruin his reputation. He could do it with one bullet, his vision is super LO, the Rubik's Cube himself said that it would surpass Microsoft, how much is Microsoft's market share? With hundreds of billions of dollars, are you comparing it with hotpot cities, bathing cities, and KTVs? Comprehensive data, based on my 20 years of reading experience, the score is 19 out of 100 at best. It is a novice village level, which is not even comparable to the level of big cities.

It's chapter 75, and the protagonist is still thinking about the fact that he was framed? You have obtained the super artificial intelligence, why don't you just let it hack in and look for evidence? Can't we just look forward to the accident that happened in that year? Do you insist on relying on this to get the plot?

At the beginning, he licked everything, and he thought that he could easily resolve the hatred between Xiao Feng's family. You must know that it was the revenge of his mother, and the culprit of Xiao Feng's dilemma!

A slight smile, a slight startle, a slight pause, a slight startle, a slight panic, a slight pause...! Author, are you running out of adjectives? Aren't you tired after using it over and over again? And the protagonist has traveled through so many planes, and he doesn't even understand the most basic thing, that what you see with your eyes may not be real? And you are really constantly pulling people offline just to make up the word count!

Feeling pretty good

There are too many things added, it's a mess

The protagonist seeks immortality, but he treats those powerful moves and techniques (such as sword control and Taoist techniques) as useless and putting the cart before the horse. How can one obtain the method of immortality without great ability?

If you have character flaws, give up. People with martial arts skills traveled through time, and they were pestered by a martial arts fan! Although he has martial arts skills, he is still a poor guy. I laughed so hard that I didn't think about how to deal with it all day long after I was wronged. I was pestered and manipulated, and I even treated a strange female neighbor differently. Scrap material

The real family line is a bit uncomfortable, there are too many adjectives, and there are some suspicions about the word count, but other things are very good.