One Piece: I Have League of Legends

What's wrong with this name? Why do so many people criticize Tianyou? I think Tianyou is a good name. He's the father of Chinese railways, Zhan Tianyou.

The subject matter was alright, but the writing was poor. The author constantly criticizes himself, and the romance scenes were awkward; I skipped them. When Ace said, "Those who bully my brother, though far away, will be punished," I was turned off. (End of story)

Regardless, with so many people criticizing him, the fact that he was able to finish writing is truly impressive.

I was just passing by, read the synopsis, and your protagonist's name is too weird. Leaving a mark, goodbye!

The ship's crew is too strong, acting as babysitters and stealing Luffy's spotlight. The captain doesn't act like a captain, and the crew doesn't act like crew members. They're too weak and can't do anything. The main characters are always the underdogs winning. It's exciting, but it's illogical. Fanfiction is meant to be funny and entertaining.

I advise everyone not to read this book by such a lousy author. This book is disgusting.

This book is fucking garbage. Just look at the protagonist's name, Wu Wang Tianyou; it's disgusting. The author is a complete idiot.

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The paragraph breaks are painfully disjointed.

Putting everything else aside, the protagonist's awful name alone is enough to make you want to curse. Martial King Tianyou? What an idiotic name, and it's even from before the transmigration!