The Strongest Navy

Just because Momonosuke was trampled into blood by Kaido in Chapter 446, I want to give this book a thumbs up🤣

I've read more than 200 chapters, oh, a time-travel novel of the novice Aoten-ryu disguised as a fan…

""Purple Gold Dragon King Halberd" is a good second choice, such a shameful name

It makes me laugh so hard that you want to marry the empress because she has paid so much for you? So do you want to have sex with the corpses of so many men who died for you? If you think someone is beautiful, just say so. And don't say anything, don't let innocent people get hurt, take care of the people more, you are really tall, are the soldiers on the Sansou warship that is sunk before every war not innocent? Can be saved but not saved? Your logic is really weird 🤫 The most important thing is, has the author seen through One Piece? What is Sakaski's character like? What is Kizaru's character like? Dorag as Sakaski's commander did not appear. I won't say much else. Im-sama and the like, an author who only watches anime and not comics can do a lot of research.

I really can't stand the explanation at the beginning. What does it mean to not know about Devil Fruits and just eat them when you're hungry? Brother, I want to ask you. Devil Fruits look so weird, but you're not afraid of poisonous fruits poisoning you. The protagonist is also an adult on earth, right? Do you have any common sense? ?

This book is about One Piece, but the protagonist rescued an old man on a small island in the East China Sea, and then the old man gave him a particularly simple and magical bracelet called the Dragon King Bracelet, so the protagonist's weapon is the Purple Gold Dragon King Halberd. . Hehe

Disgusting, just two words to describe it. Disgusting. The protagonist treats his gay friends like his wife. He doesn't want to be separated wherever he goes and gets angry if others touch him. I can fuck you

One Piece World, give me a Chinese name. Do you want to make me laugh to death?

I just think that in fan novels such as One Piece or Naruto, the protagonists have Chinese names, and they always appear in drama every minute... I don't know how you feel. For example, in One Piece, all the protagonists have Western names, and the protagonist is named Tang Ming. It feels so awkward...

No wonder I still have so few monthly tickets after writing several novels. There is a reason! There is no problem with the extension of the plot, but there are quite a lot of flaws in the details, and it does not take into account the readers' feelings at all. The author said that he has read One Piece and still made so many mistakes, which shows that he didn't write carefully enough!

The name of this move is so chuunii, the Japanese manga has turned into a third-rate fantasy style

After reading a few chapters, I have a big question. The test of strength in One Piece is doli. Is it measured in kilograms? In the world of science and technology, there are special testing machines, and in terms of time, if there is a clock or something, you have to buy an incense stick, which is very awkward.

The concept is too awkward, the writing does not stick to the theme, and many of the names and chapter titles are particularly embarrassing.

Another natural blow. . . Tell me, in which era in the past and future will the peak powerhouse belong to the natural system? . .

I haven't made it through six chapters. Shen Nong is dead and I have to burn paper.

The author is under 15 years old

I read a little bit of this book, and I couldn't stand it when I saw some of the so-called friends. To be honest, I really hate those guys who keep holding back the protagonist. Every time I have to withdraw a lot of suffocating plots for them, those so-called best friends don't know how to get out since they are so close? Why don't you think you have some ideas? I read the above a long time ago. Now that there is a shortage of books, can any interested readers tell me if that so-called good brother has left? Or is strength at least not a hindrance?

What is the significance of that Jamie thing? Inexplicable brotherhood?

I persisted until the end of Chapter 4. . . . I really don't know what the author's brain is thinking! ! ! ! ?

It felt weird after reading a few chapters. The character creation of several characters is all kinds of weird... This Jamie is really poorly portrayed. I didn't read the back part. I really can't think of any meaning for his existence. Moreover, for such a loser, Chiyo still likes him... I really have to accept your logic. Would such a woman who stands out from the crowd and is very outstanding in the generally male navy fall in love with such a loser? Is it because the male protagonist is too hard to see through? Curiosity may be the beginning of liking, and having a clear view is just a spare tire. You want to write that they are in love with each other, forget about it, and then forcefully break up and then get together with the male protagonist. Brother, do you have to do this just to start a harem? Jamie, this is no different from cheating, right? Chiyo doesn't like him very much either, she just feels like an honest man who can marry... Then when you write like this, one gay friend, one harem, two bad guys... What does this mean? Communicating with friends is also very strange... The writing style feels like a junior high school student's composition. The title of the book is The Strongest Navy. After reading it for a long time, I felt that it was a romance novel, or semi-fantasy.

I think it's very good, you can check it out if you like

Rotten. I've seen 6 pictures and I don't want to see them anymore.

What a magical beginning, I vomited

The author has definitely never watched One Piece

It's too poisonous, both in terms of the plot and the name. Farewell. By the way, I'll change my name to Xiu Xian One Piece.

To be honest, this cover is really ugly.

What was born? The Communist Party says that direct jurisdiction is absolutely equal and there can be no shady secrets

How many Jamies did you write about in the opening pictures?

I don't understand what Momonosuke did and why he is so annoying🤔🤔🤔