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Ever since discovering that his junior disciple was actually a junior brother, Ji Yisu has been hounded by this clingy pest. His excuse was perfectly reasonable: “You’re the only one who knows my secret, so you have to take responsibility for me.”
Nian Miao was eighteen when the sect leader decided to marry him off for an alliance. He sought out Ji Yisu and pleaded pitifully, “I’m finished if they discover my true identity. Why don’t you marry me, Senior Brother? Or we could elope.”
Ji Yisu refused coldly: “I’m not marrying you, and I’m not eloping. I can’t beat them, so what does that have to do with me?”
Yet on the day of the wedding, he ultimately could not hold back. He took Nian Miao away, and from then on they wandered the world without a home. Nian Miao, on the contrary, was very happy.
The second time Nian Miao was to marry, Ji Yisu personally pushed him away: “Nian Miao, we share the affection of father and son and the bond between teacher and disciple, but absolutely no romantic feelings. It would be best for you to marry someone else. That way, I can finally sever my ties to the mortal world.”
But when the wedding day came, he still could not accept it. He ran off and snatched Nian Miao away.
Crying in his arms, Nian Miao asked, “You don’t even like me, so why do you care if I marry someone else?”
He had forgotten what answer he gave. He only remembered how sorrowfully Nian Miao had cried, how sweet his kiss had been, and how tightly he had held him.
The third time Nian Miao was to marry, Ji Yisu, now a demon lord, stormed into the Celestial Realm alone, shattered the Ninth Heaven, and pointed his sword at the gods.
But this time, Nian Miao was cold and exhausted. He took the initiative to let go of Ji Yisu’s hand. “Senior Brother, I don’t like you anymore. Will you let me go?”
In the past, Ji Yisu had been unable to love him. But when he finally became entitled to love him, Nian Miao had already severed his emotional ties and decisively cut him off.
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In Nian Miao’s memories, he had gone through three marriages in the mortal world.
The first was when he was eighteen. The sect leader had forced him into a political marriage, and with nowhere else to turn, he begged his senior brother to help him escape. But his senior brother had his own path to walk and did not want to bring along a burden like him. He refused coldly: “This is the best ending you can hope for.”
Heartbroken, Nian Miao developed the desire to take his own life. Yet on the day of the wedding, his senior brother still came to save him. From then on, they wandered the world without a home, but they were extraordinarily happy.
The second was twenty years later, when his secret love for his senior brother was exposed. His senior brother left him without mercy. “Nian Miao, I feel only the affection of a teacher and disciple and the love of a father and son for you. Nothing more.”
Despite exhausting every possible means, Nian Miao could not make him stay. His heart turned to ashes, and a friend came up with a plan: “Pretend to marry me. If he truly has no feelings for you, he won’t interfere.”
Nian Miao agreed without holding out any hope. He never expected that on the day of the wedding, his senior brother would really come and take him away again.
Crying, he asked him, “Didn’t you say you didn’t like me? Why do you still care if I marry someone else?”
Perhaps the rain had been too loud. He did not hear what his senior brother answered. He only saw how wretched the man looked, followed by a kiss that had been twenty years late.
The third was his marriage to his senior brother. They had carefully prepared for it for a long time, invited countless friends, and immersed themselves in boundless joy. Yet on the day of the wedding, the situation changed abruptly. His senior brother hid him away, leaving him unable to see anything. When everything finally grew quiet again, he did not even see his senior brother’s corpse. All he found amid the ruins was a sword his senior brother had left behind.
“Husband and wife are meant to follow each other in life and death. My senior brother is gone, so I should follow him too. But I cannot die. I will use its blood and head to offer sacrifice to my dead husband.”
Holding his senior brother’s sword and wearing wedding robes stained with his blood, he set out along the road his senior brother had never finished walking.
A similarly melodramatic and bittersweet historical danmei novel: Thinking of the Faraway One
In his previous life, Nan Mi fell in love with Zhuang Chao at first sight and pursued him relentlessly. Everyone in the capital knew how deeply and devotedly he loved Zhuang Chao. He did not care, and even requested an imperial decree, willingly marrying Zhuang Chao as his male wife.
However, Zhuang Chao avoided his relentless pursuit as though fleeing a scourge. He felt nothing but disgust, and after being forced to marry him, that disgust reached its peak.
They spent three fractured, cold years as husband and wife. When Nan Mi learned that Zhuang Chao intended to marry a secondary consort, he finally understood what it meant for his heart to break and die. He gradually became bedridden and gravely ill, eventually ending his mistaken life amid regret and pain.
Reborn, he reflected on everything he had done in his previous life and realized it had all been wrong. A melon forced from the vine is never sweet, and Zhuang Chao would never love him. No matter how desperately he clung to him, he could not change reality. It would be better to let Zhuang Chao go, and to set himself free as well.
He would never become entangled with Zhuang Chao again. He would try to live a new life without him.
What he could not understand was why, after being reborn, Zhuang Chao instead began clinging to him of his own accord, saying that he would never miss his chance again and wanted to spend the rest of his life with him.
But Nan Mi was so tired. Loving Zhuang Chao was truly exhausting. He did not want to love him anymore.
In his previous life, Zhuang Chao had always thought Nan Mi was the most annoying person in the world. Nan Mi constantly claimed to love him and pursued him relentlessly, never caring about his wishes. He was overbearing and domineering.
He had even requested an imperial decree that forced Zhuang Chao to take him as a male wife, cutting off Zhuang Chao’s path to contend for the throne.
They spent three fractured, cold years as husband and wife. More than once, Zhuang Chao thought that he had to become emperor. Once he did, they could divorce and never see each other again.
When he finally returned after seizing the throne, all that awaited him was a withered skeleton. Three years later, he fell ill from his unresolved grief and died in agony before his dead wife’s grave.
Reborn, Zhuang Chao cherished this life with all his heart. He had finally understood that everything from their youthful dependence on each other to their becoming bitter spouses had been caused by his own stubbornness. Since Heaven had given him a chance to begin again, he was willing to compromise and spend the rest of his life properly with Nan Mi. Yet when he took the initiative to seek Nan Mi out, Nan Mi apologized to him in a polite, distant tone, saying that his previous life had been too absurd and promising that in this life he would never pursue or love him again.
Nan Mi gave the gifts meant for him to other people. He drew portraits for everyone except him.
Nan Mi truly stopped pursuing and loving him. The one who became incapable of letting go was Zhuang Chao.
“I think of no one far away, yet my heart aches without end.”
A lingering, deeply moving love story. A melodramatic and bittersweet novel, but both leads are virgins and each other’s first love. There is no secondary consort, and neither lead will marry one or ever have any intention of doing so. Both body and heart belong only to each other. They became bitter spouses in their previous lives because their experiences and intentions differed. The general emotional progression is probably pain, bitterness, then sweetness, w.
Theme: Cherish what is before you.
Spread the flowers, a particularly amazing article on cultivating immortality! Looking at the comment section, I feel that the serialization period is quite difficult. It is good but not popular. Although I have only read the ending, I still want to praise it wildly. First of all, the character Nian Miao is really spiritual. First of all, his women's clothing. Unlike many articles where the women's clothing is just cute and xp, his women's clothing is really that kind. . It's hard to describe the feeling of a man dressing up as a woman. Just, for example, it reminds me of Cheng Dieyi from Farewell My Concubine. Maybe it's because of the long-standing gender differences in power and status. I've always felt that there's something very special about men dressing up as women. Girls can gain power and strength by dressing up as men since childhood, such as Hua Mulan and Zhu Yingtai. But boys' dressing up in women's clothing is a process of being deprived, falling from a high position in society to a more involuntary position. Therefore, the male protagonist who dresses as a woman will feel fragile and humble, changing from a person with power to a person praying for mercy. In fact, many women's clothing stories are not reflected in it, but this one does. He was young, and from his life experience to his name, he felt as fragile as duckweed. He also longed for power, but at that time, his talent of ice and fire spiritual roots meant that he had no chance to use power to change his destiny. From the moment he was forced to be raised as a girl, his fate was not in his hands. He had nothing, everything was given to him, and everything could be taken away. His name also has a sense of resignation. Who among all living beings in the world is not small and humble? His life change was given by his senior brother, which later integrated well with his view of love. Without his senior brother, he would have had no choice but to die. This is not only his paranoid love, I think it is also a portrayal of his life destiny and a part of his personality. So I think this character is really spiritual. If it were just a protagonist who loves to die or live, and can't live without love, I would read it as a bloody novel for fun, but his "life or death" is the embodiment of his personality and destiny, which makes this story not only a love that goes hand in hand with life and death, but also a sense of struggle in a humble life. He has nothing, his life is worth nothing, his value is given by his senior brother, so he cannot give up love. But what is interesting is that, conversely, using life to threaten is a power that only the loved one has. He is born like duckweed, and his power comes from being loved. It is very interesting.
And then further, this character doesn't even stop at being loved. He becomes stronger as soon as her husband dies (hhhhh). On the surface, this kind of insensitive beauty is already very fragrant. First of all, he saved his senior brother twice. The first time he was swayed by the fake senior brother, but the second time he directly cut off his love. He made more and more progress, which was very satisfying. She is not a white flower who can only cry and moan when she leaves her partner. Instead, she is super dark. She is especially good at emotional deception, which makes her very happy. I have seen enough of this little white flower who cannot do anything except love and only relies on a pure and flawless heart. Moreover, his power is well integrated with his original character. In the previous paragraph, I analyzed that his power actually comes entirely from being loved and from his senior brother. But he is not passive. From the beginning, he has been super good at grabbing love by crying and making trouble. He is good at being loved and turning external power into his own, so the final integration of the Water Godhead is perfect. His power comes from emotions, and he also controls emotions. He is the most fragile and insignificant, and his emotions are also weak and dependent on external power (just like the water god is originally the weakest). But the weakest of all living beings can burst out with the power to break through fate. They are small, a drop in the ocean, but the most powerful gods lose to the love of mortals. I've always liked tension like this. (What's even more amazing is that he doesn't just focus on falling in love and then having sex out of nowhere, but he actually grasps the power of emotion.)
All in all, it's a really good story. I really like Miaomiao! When I read the copy and clicked on it, I thought it was similar to Three Lives Three Worlds, but I didn't expect it to be a story that was far more meaningful than expected. The protagonist's emotions are strong and exaggerated, but very reasonable, and the strategic layout is also in place.
If you want to ask a small question, I don't know if it will be helpful. I saw a long comment earlier that mentioned that the emotional line is not touching. I'm a fun-loving person and generally feel indifferent, so I'm not sure, but I was definitely indifferent to the part where he cut off the love thread, and I didn't feel like I was being stabbed. I don't know why, but I feel like everything that needs to be written is pretty good, and I can't find any faults. Maybe it's because you've been laying the groundwork for too long and you know what's going on? Or is the screen moving a little too fast? Before he could realize why he was so sad, he had already finished chopping. I think the other details are quite spot on. Unlike the synopsis, the emotionally intense scenes with the antagonists are very exciting! But on the other hand, I felt that the details I saw were piled up into a big high-level story about the Twelve True Gods and several Baili family members. The details of the human fireworks were not very detailed, and in the end, the colorful world of cultivation was not very realistic. I don't know if this is a detail that Da Da wants. After all, the upgrade line is basically taken over in one go, and their friends are basically big guys, so strictly speaking it's not a problem. But it does lack the sense of all living beings, for a novel whose ending is the victory of human love over an evil god who has no love.
I've always wanted to wait until it's finished to write a long review, but I haven't started writing because I'm too lazy. I saw someone else had written it before, and I got another idea. Since I mentioned the disadvantages earlier, let me talk about the advantages. On the contrary, what I like most is feelings. Sincere love can touch people's hearts the most. The relationship between the two people also showed three stages through three marriage snatchings. The first time was when both parties had the awareness of love, but neither dared to show it; the second time was when the relationship reached its peak, breaking through all the forbearance, and it was also a climax. The pull and emotional changes between the two people at this stage were simply wonderful. The senior brother was afraid, evasive, and deprived of love, and because the relationship was too deep, love grew. The final burst of emotion broke through his own worries and forbearance, and reached the great harmony of life. It was really amazing. And Miaomiao is the painful struggle after bravely showing love but being rejected, playing tricks with a little luck and being exposed, falling into complete despair, and the last night conversation with the senior brother, which is the rationality after the heart is broken. When he said to the senior brother, "I will never accompany you again," I was very sad and sad, which made me burst into tears. Under this extreme despair, pain and forbearance, the emotions that break out between the two parties will be sweeter and more intense, so the three-year play is understandable (nonsense). This is one of my favorite places, and another favorite is the letter home. The third marriage robbery, which is when Miao Miao upgrades her solo for revenge, can be said to be Miao Miao's personal growth, or it can be said to be another sublimation of the relationship between the two people. Although the senior brother himself did not appear at this stage, Miao Miao's thoughts are everywhere. Miaomiao walked on the unfinished path of her senior brother and came to the place where her senior brother had been before. A sense of destiny across time and space suddenly came over her. Missing at this stage is like a slowly flowing river, not intense but drowning people unconsciously. Letters from home make the river suddenly burst into a flood, which is more intense and unforgettable than the second stage. It is the moment to openly show love. The senior brother explained his feelings, from the beginning of a little sympathy for each other, to the family affection of mutual support, and finally turned into love. Because he knew that he would die and was afraid that his fate would be implicated, he did not dare to respond to his love. He made the same escape choice as most people, and because he could not suppress his emotions, they finally stayed together. After getting together, the senior brother has been looking for a way to break the deadlock, and his understanding of Miaomiao has also changed. In the past, he always felt that Miaomiao was weak and needed his own protection. But after they got together, he no longer regarded Miaomiao as a weak protected person, but as a lover walking side by side with him. Lovers are equal. He can protect Miaomiao, and Miaomiao can also protect him. He is the person who knows Miaomiao best and knows that Miaomiao is not a weak person, so he decided to face life and death with his lover, leading Miaomiao to see the mountains and build weapons. In fact, these are all paving the way for Miaomiao to go solo in the future. I really like the senior brother's idea, because in the past, when I read novels, they always ended up being attacked when something happened. But the senior brother will trust his lover, choose to fight side by side with his lover, and entrust his destiny to his lover. I really like the words "If there is still a future, I just want to spend it with you", full of love and sincerity. And Miaomiao did not live up to his senior brother's trust and completed his mission (I can't help but say that Miaomiao's solo journey is really cool and handsome. I would like to write about Miaomiao's growth stage again if I have the opportunity). Miaomiao has been looking for clues about his senior brother, exploring areas that he has never understood from other people's mouths and memories. Letters from home fulfilled his desire. He saw a complete and real senior brother and the sincere love of his lover. , As well as the previous difficulties and thoughts, had a huge impact on him, and the love grew back. He finally hugged the phantom of his senior brother and said it hurt. It hurt, it hurt, it hurt when his love grew, it also hurt when missing him, he felt sorry for his senior brother, he felt pain for himself, all kinds of pain. But the letter home is the pinnacle of senior brother's emotions, not Miao Miao. The pinnacle of Miao Miao's emotions in my heart is at the end, the conversation between him and Wu Yi. Wuyi asked him if he used skills to make his senior brother love him to death. Miao Miao said no, he would use skills on everyone, but not his senior brother, because everyone's feelings in the world can be fake, only he and his senior brother can't. Let me fiercely kdl here, it feels like a sincere liar. Who is Miaomiao? He is the true god who controls emotions. He can play with everyone's emotions, and can fabricate false emotions at will to deceive outsiders. When he was still a mortal, when his senior brother rejected him, he could obviously use his skills to make his senior brother look back on him, but he never thought about it, because this is the only person he loves. He would rather his senior brother not love him than false love. A liar who deceives the whole world and deceives the boss is so persistent in his lover's true feelings. Who knows the sincerity of this kind of liar? It's so sweet.
I didn't expect to talk about so much in one breath. In fact, apart from the emotions, the plot is also great. The last volume exploded all the foreshadowing in the previous chapters. It feels very satisfying and is very suitable for a second playthrough. I also like the character Nian Miao so much. He is so vivid. I can't think of another similar character at all, but I am so tired that I can't write anymore... Anyway, I just want to encourage my wife. She has great potential. I hope I can see greater progress in the next book! Come on come on
I hope it won't be too strange to change. When I read the article, I read it based on the appearance of Shou's character. After reading it, I didn't feel that Shou was a girl. If I changed it, well, I wouldn't like it very much. After three years, it would be strange to change the core. I feel like I've been deceived. ••
It's just fun for a young couple 😍, prodigal son, don't change it, I have to re-update it (I've re-uploaded it twice), don't delete it 🙏, don't delete it 🙏, and you accepted it at the beginning so that you won't be able to accept it later.
Boss, don't change it! I think it's very good now, I like it all. The one wearing women's clothes at the back is very good and cute. The relationship between Miaomiao and her senior brother is just a little couple's fun. Wearing women's clothing is also reasonable. When I was young, I always showed my identity as a girl. Moreover, people who say they feel like a woman say this about pretty people, pretty ones, coquettish ones, cute ones, everything looks like a woman, as if looking like a woman is a curse. Some people just think like that, and they can't change it. The cross-dressing Miao Miao is really cute. She plays tricks on her senior brother and so on. As expected, the chef has to take charge of the cp. Boss, your analysis in this chapter is amazing to me again. I also liked the character design of Xiao Hua, but she was very cute and mouthy (I didn't finish the part about Chasing the Wife because I didn't really like watching it). The divorce book was also said to be true, and this confirms that beautiful feelings are easily said to look like women. To put it bluntly, it is not good to have beautiful feelings. What do you mean by this? It's not like there are no strong feelings for men, which is more stereotyped. Anyway, many beautiful feelings are said to look like women. It can be regarded as romance. This kind of rhetoric is disrespectful to everyone. Hey!, So this is not your problem. Some people always think it, and some people always don't think it. So, prodigal son, I beg you... Don't change 🙏 and I love this bite... So cute and cute, handsome and beautiful, you are invincible. When you are beautiful, you have to describe how beautiful it is, and when you are handsome, you can also show it. Don't eat this bite❌Don't say that one of our little lovers looks like a girl, don't define what men and women are casually 😭 In this era, men and women are women There are all kinds of things in Xiong Mo Bian... There are many kinds of thiophene [angry], so just stick to yourself as a prodigal, and I think you don't need to modify anything [touch your head] [spread flowers] It's very beautiful, don't be affected by those comments (it's true that a lot of literature has this kind of setting that we can't change their minds. If you follow them, it's not like this)
Damn, I understand what you mean, but we also think that we all like your descriptions. The descriptions are quite right, and we all accept and like them after reading them. We're afraid that if you just edit out those descriptions, it won't be so exciting. 🐰[Dog head holding a rose]
Boss, please 😭 don't change it. If you change it, you will really lose the characteristics of this article, and there are a thousand Harry Potters in a thousand people's hearts, and everyone's taste must be different. If this article loses its characteristics, then the gain outweighs the loss 😭
I found out that it was only updated here. My sky fell!
The finished article looks so satisfying. I read it in one sitting. It's a great article. I really like the emotional line between Miao and Su. It's very well done.
Alas [bursts into tears] I don't know how to put it, but I really, really like the previous copywriting... There is a blank space, which is the feeling that everything is left unsaid, and it is endless aftertaste. I remember that I was immediately moved by the copywriting and then read the entire book. [Hitting face and laughing] Of course, I respect my wife's opinion, but I still want to say that as a reader, I really, really like the previous version of the copy. Personally I don't think there is any need to change it. It is enough to change the title of the article (of course I personally think the title is also very good)
Siyuan People
After the Cannon Fodder Was Reborn, He Was Forced to Be Bound to Long Aotian
Farewell to You Often
Butterfly Beauty
Does a Kitten Have to Sleep with Its Human?
White Rainbow Pierces the Sun
Everyone Is Hoping We'll Get Divorced
I Still Miss Him So Much
The Three Thousand Miles I Sent You
If I Cannot Become an Immortal
Spread the flowers, a particularly amazing article on cultivating immortality! Looking at the comment section, I feel that the serialization period is quite difficult. It is good but not popular. Although I have only read the ending, I still want to praise it wildly. First of all, the character Nian Miao is really spiritual. First of all, his women's clothing. Unlike many articles where the women's clothing is just cute and xp, his women's clothing is really that kind. . It's hard to describe the feeling of a man dressing up as a woman. Just, for example, it reminds me of Cheng Dieyi from Farewell My Concubine. Maybe it's because of the long-standing gender differences in power and status. I've always felt that there's something very special about men dressing up as women. Girls can gain power and strength by dressing up as men since childhood, such as Hua Mulan and Zhu Yingtai. But boys' dressing up in women's clothing is a process of being deprived, falling from a high position in society to a more involuntary position. Therefore, the male protagonist who dresses as a woman will feel fragile and humble, changing from a person with power to a person praying for mercy. In fact, many women's clothing stories are not reflected in it, but this one does. He was young, and from his life experience to his name, he felt as fragile as duckweed. He also longed for power, but at that time, his talent of ice and fire spiritual roots meant that he had no chance to use power to change his destiny. From the moment he was forced to be raised as a girl, his fate was not in his hands. He had nothing, everything was given to him, and everything could be taken away. His name also has a sense of resignation. Who among all living beings in the world is not small and humble? His life change was given by his senior brother, which later integrated well with his view of love. Without his senior brother, he would have had no choice but to die. This is not only his paranoid love, I think it is also a portrayal of his life destiny and a part of his personality. So I think this character is really spiritual. If it were just a protagonist who loves to die or live, and can't live without love, I would read it as a bloody novel for fun, but his "life or death" is the embodiment of his personality and destiny, which makes this story not only a love that goes hand in hand with life and death, but also a sense of struggle in a humble life. He has nothing, his life is worth nothing, his value is given by his senior brother, so he cannot give up love. But what is interesting is that, conversely, using life to threaten is a power that only the loved one has. He is born like duckweed, and his power comes from being loved. It is very interesting. And then further, this character doesn't even stop at being loved. He becomes stronger as soon as her husband dies (hhhhh). On the surface, this kind of insensitive beauty is already very fragrant. First of all, he saved his senior brother twice. The first time he was swayed by the fake senior brother, but the second time he directly cut off his love. He made more and more progress, which was very satisfying. She is not a white flower who can only cry and moan when she leaves her partner. Instead, she is super dark. She is especially good at emotional deception, which makes her very happy. I have seen enough of this little white flower who cannot do anything except love and only relies on a pure and flawless heart. Moreover, his power is well integrated with his original character. In the previous paragraph, I analyzed that his power actually comes entirely from being loved and from his senior brother. But he is not passive. From the beginning, he has been super good at grabbing love by crying and making trouble. He is good at being loved and turning external power into his own, so the final integration of the Water Godhead is perfect. His power comes from emotions, and he also controls emotions. He is the most fragile and insignificant, and his emotions are also weak and dependent on external power (just like the water god is originally the weakest). But the weakest of all living beings can burst out with the power to break through fate. They are small, a drop in the ocean, but the most powerful gods lose to the love of mortals. I've always liked tension like this. (What's even more amazing is that he doesn't just focus on falling in love and then having sex out of nowhere, but he actually grasps the power of emotion.) All in all, it's a really good story. I really like Miaomiao! When I read the copy and clicked on it, I thought it was similar to Three Lives Three Worlds, but I didn't expect it to be a story that was far more meaningful than expected. The protagonist's emotions are strong and exaggerated, but very reasonable, and the strategic layout is also in place. If you want to ask a small question, I don't know if it will be helpful. I saw a long comment earlier that mentioned that the emotional line is not touching. I'm a fun-loving person and generally feel indifferent, so I'm not sure, but I was definitely indifferent to the part where he cut off the love thread, and I didn't feel like I was being stabbed. I don't know why, but I feel like everything that needs to be written is pretty good, and I can't find any faults. Maybe it's because you've been laying the groundwork for too long and you know what's going on? Or is the screen moving a little too fast? Before he could realize why he was so sad, he had already finished chopping. I think the other details are quite spot on. Unlike the synopsis, the emotionally intense scenes with the antagonists are very exciting! But on the other hand, I felt that the details I saw were piled up into a big high-level story about the Twelve True Gods and several Baili family members. The details of the human fireworks were not very detailed, and in the end, the colorful world of cultivation was not very realistic. I don't know if this is a detail that Da Da wants. After all, the upgrade line is basically taken over in one go, and their friends are basically big guys, so strictly speaking it's not a problem. But it does lack the sense of all living beings, for a novel whose ending is the victory of human love over an evil god who has no love.
I've always wanted to wait until it's finished to write a long review, but I haven't started writing because I'm too lazy. I saw someone else had written it before, and I got another idea. Since I mentioned the disadvantages earlier, let me talk about the advantages. On the contrary, what I like most is feelings. Sincere love can touch people's hearts the most. The relationship between the two people also showed three stages through three marriage snatchings. The first time was when both parties had the awareness of love, but neither dared to show it; the second time was when the relationship reached its peak, breaking through all the forbearance, and it was also a climax. The pull and emotional changes between the two people at this stage were simply wonderful. The senior brother was afraid, evasive, and deprived of love, and because the relationship was too deep, love grew. The final burst of emotion broke through his own worries and forbearance, and reached the great harmony of life. It was really amazing. And Miaomiao is the painful struggle after bravely showing love but being rejected, playing tricks with a little luck and being exposed, falling into complete despair, and the last night conversation with the senior brother, which is the rationality after the heart is broken. When he said to the senior brother, "I will never accompany you again," I was very sad and sad, which made me burst into tears. Under this extreme despair, pain and forbearance, the emotions that break out between the two parties will be sweeter and more intense, so the three-year play is understandable (nonsense). This is one of my favorite places, and another favorite is the letter home. The third marriage robbery, which is when Miao Miao upgrades her solo for revenge, can be said to be Miao Miao's personal growth, or it can be said to be another sublimation of the relationship between the two people. Although the senior brother himself did not appear at this stage, Miao Miao's thoughts are everywhere. Miaomiao walked on the unfinished path of her senior brother and came to the place where her senior brother had been before. A sense of destiny across time and space suddenly came over her. Missing at this stage is like a slowly flowing river, not intense but drowning people unconsciously. Letters from home make the river suddenly burst into a flood, which is more intense and unforgettable than the second stage. It is the moment to openly show love. The senior brother explained his feelings, from the beginning of a little sympathy for each other, to the family affection of mutual support, and finally turned into love. Because he knew that he would die and was afraid that his fate would be implicated, he did not dare to respond to his love. He made the same escape choice as most people, and because he could not suppress his emotions, they finally stayed together. After getting together, the senior brother has been looking for a way to break the deadlock, and his understanding of Miaomiao has also changed. In the past, he always felt that Miaomiao was weak and needed his own protection. But after they got together, he no longer regarded Miaomiao as a weak protected person, but as a lover walking side by side with him. Lovers are equal. He can protect Miaomiao, and Miaomiao can also protect him. He is the person who knows Miaomiao best and knows that Miaomiao is not a weak person, so he decided to face life and death with his lover, leading Miaomiao to see the mountains and build weapons. In fact, these are all paving the way for Miaomiao to go solo in the future. I really like the senior brother's idea, because in the past, when I read novels, they always ended up being attacked when something happened. But the senior brother will trust his lover, choose to fight side by side with his lover, and entrust his destiny to his lover. I really like the words "If there is still a future, I just want to spend it with you", full of love and sincerity. And Miaomiao did not live up to his senior brother's trust and completed his mission (I can't help but say that Miaomiao's solo journey is really cool and handsome. I would like to write about Miaomiao's growth stage again if I have the opportunity). Miaomiao has been looking for clues about his senior brother, exploring areas that he has never understood from other people's mouths and memories. Letters from home fulfilled his desire. He saw a complete and real senior brother and the sincere love of his lover. , As well as the previous difficulties and thoughts, had a huge impact on him, and the love grew back. He finally hugged the phantom of his senior brother and said it hurt. It hurt, it hurt, it hurt when his love grew, it also hurt when missing him, he felt sorry for his senior brother, he felt pain for himself, all kinds of pain. But the letter home is the pinnacle of senior brother's emotions, not Miao Miao. The pinnacle of Miao Miao's emotions in my heart is at the end, the conversation between him and Wu Yi. Wuyi asked him if he used skills to make his senior brother love him to death. Miao Miao said no, he would use skills on everyone, but not his senior brother, because everyone's feelings in the world can be fake, only he and his senior brother can't. Let me fiercely kdl here, it feels like a sincere liar. Who is Miaomiao? He is the true god who controls emotions. He can play with everyone's emotions, and can fabricate false emotions at will to deceive outsiders. When he was still a mortal, when his senior brother rejected him, he could obviously use his skills to make his senior brother look back on him, but he never thought about it, because this is the only person he loves. He would rather his senior brother not love him than false love. A liar who deceives the whole world and deceives the boss is so persistent in his lover's true feelings. Who knows the sincerity of this kind of liar? It's so sweet. I didn't expect to talk about so much in one breath. In fact, apart from the emotions, the plot is also great. The last volume exploded all the foreshadowing in the previous chapters. It feels very satisfying and is very suitable for a second playthrough. I also like the character Nian Miao so much. He is so vivid. I can't think of another similar character at all, but I am so tired that I can't write anymore... Anyway, I just want to encourage my wife. She has great potential. I hope I can see greater progress in the next book! Come on come on
I hope it won't be too strange to change. When I read the article, I read it based on the appearance of Shou's character. After reading it, I didn't feel that Shou was a girl. If I changed it, well, I wouldn't like it very much. After three years, it would be strange to change the core. I feel like I've been deceived. ••
It's just fun for a young couple 😍, prodigal son, don't change it, I have to re-update it (I've re-uploaded it twice), don't delete it 🙏, don't delete it 🙏, and you accepted it at the beginning so that you won't be able to accept it later.
Boss, don't change it! I think it's very good now, I like it all. The one wearing women's clothes at the back is very good and cute. The relationship between Miaomiao and her senior brother is just a little couple's fun. Wearing women's clothing is also reasonable. When I was young, I always showed my identity as a girl. Moreover, people who say they feel like a woman say this about pretty people, pretty ones, coquettish ones, cute ones, everything looks like a woman, as if looking like a woman is a curse. Some people just think like that, and they can't change it. The cross-dressing Miao Miao is really cute. She plays tricks on her senior brother and so on. As expected, the chef has to take charge of the cp. Boss, your analysis in this chapter is amazing to me again. I also liked the character design of Xiao Hua, but she was very cute and mouthy (I didn't finish the part about Chasing the Wife because I didn't really like watching it). The divorce book was also said to be true, and this confirms that beautiful feelings are easily said to look like women. To put it bluntly, it is not good to have beautiful feelings. What do you mean by this? It's not like there are no strong feelings for men, which is more stereotyped. Anyway, many beautiful feelings are said to look like women. It can be regarded as romance. This kind of rhetoric is disrespectful to everyone. Hey!, So this is not your problem. Some people always think it, and some people always don't think it. So, prodigal son, I beg you... Don't change 🙏 and I love this bite... So cute and cute, handsome and beautiful, you are invincible. When you are beautiful, you have to describe how beautiful it is, and when you are handsome, you can also show it. Don't eat this bite❌Don't say that one of our little lovers looks like a girl, don't define what men and women are casually 😭 In this era, men and women are women There are all kinds of things in Xiong Mo Bian... There are many kinds of thiophene [angry], so just stick to yourself as a prodigal, and I think you don't need to modify anything [touch your head] [spread flowers] It's very beautiful, don't be affected by those comments (it's true that a lot of literature has this kind of setting that we can't change their minds. If you follow them, it's not like this)
Damn, I understand what you mean, but we also think that we all like your descriptions. The descriptions are quite right, and we all accept and like them after reading them. We're afraid that if you just edit out those descriptions, it won't be so exciting. 🐰[Dog head holding a rose]
Boss, please 😭 don't change it. If you change it, you will really lose the characteristics of this article, and there are a thousand Harry Potters in a thousand people's hearts, and everyone's taste must be different. If this article loses its characteristics, then the gain outweighs the loss 😭
I found out that it was only updated here. My sky fell!
The finished article looks so satisfying. I read it in one sitting. It's a great article. I really like the emotional line between Miao and Su. It's very well done.
Alas [bursts into tears] I don't know how to put it, but I really, really like the previous copywriting... There is a blank space, which is the feeling that everything is left unsaid, and it is endless aftertaste. I remember that I was immediately moved by the copywriting and then read the entire book. [Hitting face and laughing] Of course, I respect my wife's opinion, but I still want to say that as a reader, I really, really like the previous version of the copy. Personally I don't think there is any need to change it. It is enough to change the title of the article (of course I personally think the title is also very good)