The Immortal Lord Arrives on a Phantom Bolt

Actually, it's okay. This book is not that bad. The only bad thing is that the pacing is a bit problematic. The pacing at the end is too fast, while the pacing at the beginning is very smooth. At the end, everything is crammed in at once, which makes people feel a little indigestion. I hope there will be extra chapters. My wife previously wrote that there will be daily extra chapters and senior sister's extra chapters, but after such a long time, does she still write them? [Changed] I read three books about my wife in a row, and personally I think the most perfect one is the two-dimensional marriage book. It is perfect in terms of character design, plot rhythm, etc. The ending of the two-dimensional love story is too tight to me, and it feels a bit unfinished. I can only say that the break is not particularly appropriate, and I would say the same for this one, too. Moreover, there are still many places that have not been explained in this book, such as what happened to them after they came back, how Tang V explained to the world and restored Tang's innocence, what exactly they did after the two worlds were separated to prevent other latitudes from invading, and what will happen to this world in the future... It would be a bit uncomfortable if I didn't write a picture 😭

Finished spreading flowers! Although the completion level may be a bit disappointing, the overall concept is really great, and the cybernetic cultivation at the beginning is really touching! Come on, crocodile, don't be discouraged and create more good stories!

It's a bit unfinished... And I don't know what the role of Lou Feibai is for at all... It has no effect at all in advancing the plot... It seems that it was just written to sell Lily CP. Jiu Jiang and Maru Lin also look like soy sauce throughout the whole process... The characters are not standing up.

Madam, this book really collapsed at the end. I can see that you wanted to finish it right away. You lost sight of details and went through the plot very quickly. Maybe when you find that you can't finish it to the way you want it to be, you actually want to give up and stop writing, but in the end you still try your best to finish it. It's very good, the setting is really new, I couldn't stop watching it. If you can, remove some settings and write a similar story, you can do it!

In fact, this article is quite good. Maybe when I clicked on it, I didn't expect or realize that it was a rather ambitious article. I know that the teacher felt that it did not meet his expectations, but from my perspective, I got a sweet cookie with full characters, good writing, and no major flaws. Well... Maybe it's not what the teacher wanted, but at least it won't be a bad novel! The college entrance examination was about to take place and I was a little anxious. Instead of watching videos, I would rather watch a cookie to relax my mind. Then I remembered this novel that I had read at the beginning but had not finished because it was serialized. Mr. Crocodile, at least this article does bring a moment of joy to a reader who is always diving. Thank you for spending so much time and experience creating them! In the next ten days, I will really concentrate on it. After the college entrance examination, I will catch up on the teacher's current series of articles! No matter what, there will always be readers who will like you! I've finished reading this article, and I'm so happy!

Move Weibo private message 19 here It's so amazing?? I've just leveled up my skin and unforgettable, and I've finished the Phantom Den. I'm so shocked that I really can't help but praise it? I got into it from the old 2D. I initially thought I liked the old 2D because of the 2D theme. Then I read that you opened the book Phantom and I also went to follow it. The cyber feeling at the beginning was really shocking. I know how to write well and shape the story. I realized then, ah, it turns out that I like this author's writing style, not because of the 2D theme. But I'm very sorry that the update was cut off in the middle and late chapters. I didn't follow Mr. Crocodile to follow the update. Today I tied up with Skin Unforgettable and it was really not satisfying. I remembered that there is another book called Genden. I found it and read it again. It was so shocking. I feel that all the readers have been cheated. I didn't expect that this was a game. This idea is really wonderful. I feel that I am also in the game. I am an NPC. I am in the same perspective as the protagonist, not a God's perspective. Read to the end? I deny myself and deny this article? Bad? I can't deny my own work. I like every article. Please try more new genres and look forward to new attempts? (Please also write more about the 2D series? I really like Bai Yueguang, my first love). Omg the widower is also a very special genius. I can't even be sure whether I read it first, the widower or the old 2D (because I changed my jj number midway and some data was lost.

Very nice!!!!! Although it is relatively thin, it is really very beautiful!!!

But the setting of this book really surprised me!!! It's really great. You just have to try something like this to break the rules and make it fun to watch!!

It has been on the bookshelf for a long time, and I finally finished reading it today. I really like the character design of Shou. In this JJ where the taste is everywhere, it is difficult to find such a refreshing and handsome Shou.

Snoring Crocodile Tail, Kua Kua Crocodile completes the whole book. The two worlds are a bit messy and tight, but basically everything is explained clearly. The plot line is completed, and the emotional line is also completed. So Kua Kua is a very responsible Crocodile Crocodile.