
[Class 3-E] Winter Is Coming
[三年E班]凛冬将至
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 13k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
4Chapters
137Favorites
7.5Score
2kClicks per chapter
4Comments
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Now, long time no see. Sir author, I am Li Qi. I accidentally discovered that the comment I wrote for you today was actually my first one in Jinjiang Literature City. I came here to do some archaeology. Your writing style is very beautiful. In fact, you may consider writing short and medium-sized sweet articles~★[I once again send my blessings on a warm winter day, and I hope that you can raise your mouth, smile, and step forward towards the sun no matter when.
May the sunshine in winter accompany you every day, and give my blessings to everyone who needs love and a reason to live. After winter, everyone will usher in a new life, and by then, no one will regret their time in the world.
This is super great! The title, copywriting, and text are all great! I still remember that when A Qianqian came over and suddenly asked me if I remembered any other articles written by A Qian, I was really stunned. I had no idea what you were going to do until you told me that you were going to do something big hahahahahaha. Judging from the results, it was really successful! And I was already amazed when I saw this copy, now let's fulfill the promise I made at that time! "A Hundred Years Old", "Light Years", "Backlight", "Deep Sea", "Invalid Years", "Light and Shadow", "Born Like Summer Flowers", "Warm Sun", "Rihe", "Pray for Spring", you are so great for being able to turn so many of Ah Kuang's texts into copywriting. Ah Qianqian, I praise you! I already expressed my love for the title of the novel when I learned about it. Now after reading this article, I feel that the title of the novel is really great and fits it very well. Whether it's Guang's disease or the ending, it really feels like winter is coming. I regard the ending as HE (akimbo). The emotional line is indeed more obscure as A Qianqian said, but it can still be felt. For example, when Ye said that he should work harder to make Grandpa Guang retire here as soon as possible, I felt it the most obvious! And this kind of dual perspective of the male and female protagonists that refers to the different paths is also great! If I say that the most unforgettable character in this episode is definitely Koro-sensei, I don't dare to go back and look at the last roll call for fear of crying... [I won't tell you that I saw the roll call in Chapter 3 where Koro-sensei was about to die and I was really tortured to the point of QAQ] This is really super super super awesome! I commend you in real name, A Qianqian! Wink!
Even though winter is coming, I also pray for spring - "Winter is Coming" to A Qian I read "Winter Is Coming" on the way to work in the morning, but I have been busy at work, and I only have time to write a review on the bus after get off work. I haven't written for a long time, and I am still very rusty, so I can't call it a serious long review. If there are any strange things, just think of it as the nonsense of a newly minted social creature! Although I made the cover myself, when I offered to help with the copywriting, Aqian refused me outright and told me that the copywriting was also a surprise. I actually didn't take it seriously at the time, but when I saw the article in the morning, I felt that my "not taking it seriously" was really sorry for the thoughtful A Qianqian! You extracted the titles of many articles I have written and cleverly integrated them into the copy. I couldn't help but sigh: How on earth did you do that? It's too strong!! Whether you came up with the idea or actually used these words, you are awesome, Qian! It must have taken a lot of thought!! I am so touched when I think of this! From summer flowers to the deep sea, from the warm sun to the sun, from light years to light and shadow and backlight, those texts that I had almost forgotten jumped out of my memories and stood before my eyes. Thank you very much to A Qian and A Yan Mozi who helped me recall and sort it out!! You really hid it from me so well!! The rambling thoughts are over here, let's read this article next. Although Ah Qian has always said that after watching Xia Hua, he will not be a prostitute at all, the proposal of a prostitute to be a student has been postponed, and this year I finally saw the finished product. As a result... What are you being modest about, you bastard!! It's obviously great, right? I was shocked when I saw it, why can you write so touchingly, Ah Qian? Oh wow, your detailed descriptions are really amazing, the kind of praise that I can't even dream of!! The beginning of the story happened many years later, when Guang and Ye reunited unexpectedly after fulfilling their own wishes. Then the memories of Ye involved the past three years of Class E. Coupled with the switching of dual perspectives, the structure of the whole story was more complete. The process of revealing the secrets was also unraveling, which was very comfortable to watch. Finally, when they return to the classroom filled with everyone's memories, it seems that nothing has changed, and it seems that nothing is different - they can finally transcend so many years and see the real them standing opposite themselves. As for this ending, as someone who loves BE's character so much, I really thought it would be better to let Hikaru leave like this at first. At least at the last moment, she had fulfilled all her wishes - but before the conception was reached, I overturned it myself. Sure enough, it was still HE. They spanned so many years. It would be too cruel to separate cruelly like this. Plus, it was my birthday, so I decided to make up HE! There are also hidden emotional lines in the article, which can actually be seen through Karma's various small actions and behaviors. For example, he is particularly concerned about Guang's body and wants to know what disease she has. Also, from the photos and text, we can guess that the traveler is Xiaoguang. He must be someone who knows Xiaoguang very well! So I still tasted the sweetness of these hidden candies and had a great time nibbling on them. I don't expect more sweet and greasy plots. After all, according to their characters, being sticky and greasy makes people feel that the character is broken! So, that's it for the sugar, just right! In fact, what I want to admire the most is this idea about connecting the physical condition of light with experimental research. It is really surprising and reasonable! Ah Qian, your ability to set up plots is really great! Just like A Qian said, the structure of "Winter Is Coming" refers to Netherworld, and the dual-line description of the male and female protagonists refers to Special Path. The advantages of all aspects are brought together, and the final conclusion is very powerful, and the white space is appropriately left. I can responsibly say that among the short stories of about 10,000 words written by Aqian, this one is the most highly finished and perfect one! So, here, I must seriously and solemnly thank Aqian. After more than a month of hard work, you have presented this beautiful story and this perfect chapter in front of me. Thank you for your hard work. I really like it. Finally, thank you Aqian for staying with me all these years and never leaving me! I hope that in the next few years, I can still walk happily with Aqian~ Ah Qi 2019.1.26