
[The King's Avatar] Long-Awaited Reunion
[全职高手]睽违
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 46k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
14Chapters
321Favorites
8.0Score
20Nutrient gifts
3.3kClicks per chapter
53Comments
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Hahahahahahaha! Laughing till my stomach hurts!!! The last sentence is really hilarious, plus Yi An's temperament 233333333 Lao Wang's favorite is obviously Tiny Herb 23333333333 Yi An: I regret it and won't get married!
It's not easy for Lao Wang to fall in love. So Lao Wang can't outrun a crying pretty girl o(*≧▽≦)ツ┏━┓
Ah, it's well written. Are there any wedding extras that I'm looking forward to?
The article is really well written, I like it very much, but I feel very strange, why on earth should it be designated as a full-time fan? There is no glory-related content, and there is no plot that must borrow the character of "Wang Jiexi" to continue... Why not just write an original romance
In high school, there are only girls and boys sitting at the same table. Generally, there are very few boys and girls sitting at the same table. After all, it is the peak area for love. Hahahahahaha
It's been a long time since I've written a long review. Ah Qianqian, please don't dislike me. Although the title of this long review may have nothing to do with the article or literary review, I still want to use this as the title, because every time I fall in love, it makes me smile! The article "Absence" is probably Ah Qian's work of transformation - it may not be accurate to say so. If I really want to say transformation, it should be "Lei Xun". However, Ah Qian and I have actually discussed "Lei Xun" several times. In fact, it still has Ah Qian's own past style, coupled with the influence of the original work of Master, and this article is a work in the middle of transformation. It has just the right description and a streamlined narrative style, which is perfectly integrated. It is definitely a short story! Now that I see that you have completely presented the article "Ji Wei" in front of us, I really have mixed feelings in my heart. In fact, I must have told Ah Qian about it in the middle. If I just read this article, I really wouldn't expect it to be written by Ah Qian. Whether it is description, narrative, plot advancement, or character creation, it doesn't look like Ah Qian's unique pretentious style [Hey you! ], A-Qian also asked me whether this change is good or bad. I said, I can't tell, it depends on A-Qian, how you think about it. Originally, when I was reading the first chapter, I was actually very worried - I read happily all the way down, there was really no obstacle to reading, and the plot was very relaxed, but it lacked the original sense of aftertaste that should have been felt in your article, and instead lost the style that I should have, and became less like myself. Of course it's okay to be happy like this a few times now and then, but as a reader who got into trouble because of A Qian's pretense, I still prefer A Qian's previous style ~ Of course, this is just a personal feeling! Ah Qian, you said that you don't want to give up your writing style, so I'm worried that if you get used to such relaxed writing, you will feel tired and will not be able to return to the writing state of the past. But, you still have to adjust this by yourself!! I believe Aqian can complete the switch!! Enough talking nonsense, let's take a look at this story! To be honest, when I just saw the girl appear on the stage, and then followed the subsequent developments, I finally understood the sentence you mentioned in the copywriting, "I feel like you have been bullying Lao Wang in the article!" That's right, Ruan Mei has been bullying Lao Wang. Lao Wang, you are definitely a dick! [Go away] At first, I thought the girl was rebellious for some reason, but for this simple reason, it was a bit untenable to have such an attitude towards her mother. So when you revealed, Ah Qian, that Teacher Fu was actually Daddy, I really... I fell in love with Ruan Mei all of a sudden! I feel like it's normal for Ruan Mei to be so rebellious! Completely understandable! Yi An, this child, must be a rare girl with a hot temper that A Qian has created, but she is really cute! It's straight-forward and refreshing, which is really to my liking. Let's look at Lao Wang again. In fact, my understanding of him is only the first two books of the original novel, so I really don't have much to say about him - indeed, in the novel, I still prefer the proactive and bold Ruan Mei! But in the last few chapters, Lao Wang righteously rejected Yi An's fake marriage proposal and actually proposed to Ruan Mei. This made me a big fan! Well done, Lao Wang! And Ruan Mei's true love is Captain Yu, which really made Lao Wang a lot jealous. Hahahahahahahahaha I was very happy to watch the whole process hahahahaha. Although the narration of the past has a slightly tragic tone, as a side dish, it does not affect the relaxed tone of the whole text at all. Reading almost every chapter can make people smile knowingly. It is sweet but not greasy, with just the right amount of sugariness, and the ambiguity is just right, making people daydream. Continue to praise A Qian's detailed descriptions. Some places really need to be read a few times to appreciate the beauty. I hope this can be maintained in the next article~ And A Qian's relaxed writing style is actually a pleasure to read. Don't feel pressured by what I said above! After all, the most important thing when writing an article is to be happy! Why should you write if you are unhappy, right? Whatever others say is their business, I will always support A Qianqian~! The story ends here so quickly. In fact, I am still a little bit reluctant to let go. I want to see more of Lao Wang and Yi An's daily life after marriage, because they are also very happy! In short, thank you Aqian for bringing us this little story that makes people feel happy. I believe that in the corners we cannot see, they will hold hands and walk together all the way to the end of the world. Because in their eyes, each other's smiles are alluring smiles. Ah Qi At 22:51 on August 2, 2018
Mr. Huang is dissatisfied!!!! Hahahaha, that last hug made me feel Lao Wang's jealousy 233333333
Do you want to go to Yu Team Σ>-(°ω°)?→
Hahahahahahaha laugh first out of respect Why don't you let Mr. Huang speak!! I'll be suffocated to death! Ps: What is the meaning of the name of the account card (=^▽^=)
Why! What I originally thought was that falling in love with Mr. Huang would be sweet, and if I got married, I would choose Team Yu. Speaking of which, I was really shocked when I saw the fake marriage. My first reaction was to agree, and then I got married for real [Hey] Yi An must have been frightened in the end, things are changing 233333