[Kamisama Kiss] The Underworld

We can reincarnate and resurrect the heroine haha

The author's writing style is really good. Thumbs up for the description of the artistic conception (??ω??)?

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Damn, please update the article soon!

Qianjiang, it's very beautiful, why don't you update it QAQ

No wonder I have heard of Feng Cave somewhere. . . But holy shit, I really cried to death

Please allow me to talk a little bit first! The reason why I came to hook up with A Qian was A Qian's "Flowers in the Mirror, Moon in the Water". The writing and plot are very good, as well as the description of Izaya's character and the heroine's character are very well grasped. The structure and writing of the article make people feel very smooth and comfortable. Just because of these, I couldn't help but want to hook up with Aqian, and then I acted decisively. It doesn't matter if "Flowers in the Mirror, Moon in the Water" is slower. No matter how slow it is, I will keep waiting, because it is rare to find an article that is so satisfying to taste, so I hope A Qian will never give up because of the lack of readers! [Kneel down] And I found that the quality of A Qian's writing is very high. Compared with most of Jinjiang's writing, it is simply crushed - not only the writing style, but also the attitude of writing, which I really appreciate about A Qian. My purpose in writing is to entertain myself. Although I cannot say that I am not serious about writing, I can never be as serious as A Qian. It can be seen that Aqian is really thinking carefully about the words and sentences and what to use. It is not an exaggeration to say that he is considering every word, so I admire Aqian very, very much =w= For a lazy person like me, it is simply too difficult to do this. Many people are slower, but their work is not meticulous. I like Ah Qian's slow work and meticulous work. Let's talk about your feelings about "Netherworld". On April Fool's Day, I stayed in my dormitory and used my friend's mobile phone to browse Jinjiang and poked Aqian's column, and I actually saw an article about "Vitality"! I was so scared that my hands shook and I read it several times before I was sure I saw it correctly! I know the popularity of "Yuanqi", and there are very few fans who write about "Yuanqi". I was really excited when I saw it~ What's more, it's A Qian's article, so the quality is guaranteed. "Koi Chao" in the copywriting is also a song that I have played countless times. Seeing this also made me want to read more. It's a very breathtaking opening, and Aqian's description of the feelings and scenes is very accurate, which makes me both envious and jealous. The dark, suffocating, and lonely environment in which King Evil is in contrasts sharply with the light brought by Jingye's appearance in the second half. This has successfully raised Jingye's warm and gentle image to another level. I don't know if Aqian thought so much when writing this paragraph, but in my opinion, this beginning is very touching, and the narrative from Jingye's perspective cuts into the main theme of the entire story. And the last sentence "the crime of killing gods" immediately attracted me to read on. Therefore, Aqian is also very good at grasping the fragmentation aspect. The second chapter is about the first encounter with the boy Bawei. There is no need to doubt the writing style, but comparing the second chapter with the first chapter, it seems much weaker. Specifically reflected in the following points: The shaping of Ba Wei. From a reader's point of view, when I saw the words "Little Wild Fox", I didn't think of Ba Weijun at all (PS: The protagonist column is not visible in the claw machine, so I clicked on the first chapter and preconceivedly thought that the male protagonist was the evil Luo King [hold the forehead]). When it was suddenly revealed that Xiao Yehu was Ba Wei, my heart went "wtf". Hey, it's not malicious, it's just a surprise, you can ignore it. I think that when Ba Wei appears on the stage, some descriptions of Ba Wei's appearance can be appropriately added? Otherwise, it would be difficult for me to connect him with the male idol Ba Wei just by looking at the dialogue [sad face]. In addition, I don't know if it's my misunderstanding, but I always feel that compared to Ba Weiyi, the Evil Luo King has a stronger sense of presence and CP? [Scratching his head] Maybe it's because of the lack of psychological description of Ba Wei? King Evil's fear of darkness is described in detail at the front, which makes it easier for people to see it~ Chapter 3 is still the scene between Ba Wei and Jing Ye. It's much better than Chapter 2, but it's a pity that Ba Weijun's portrayal is still the same. The relationship between the two seems not deep enough in a romance novel (but A Qian said that the official match was not to be separated, so it can be ignored). I haven't always understood Jingye's feelings for Ba Wei and Ba Wei's feelings for Jingye. Maybe it's because they have too little interaction, at most they are just lovers above AUO? [Scratch your head] But judging from the next chapter, Jingye likes Ba Wei? The appearance of King Evil Luo in the final chapter made me feel that the story had reached its climax, but the climax should obviously be in the third chapter. Maybe my brain circuit is really weird. The ending of Jingye's story and the malicious ridicule of King Evil Luo, as well as the disappearance of Jingye at the end, may seem plain but left a deep impression on people, especially the disappearance of Jingye. King Evil Luo broke free from the boundless darkness, touched and touched the warmth, but it only took one story to fall into darkness again, which made me feel distressed and melancholy for a moment. But this kind of ending is the best. Only with gains and losses can people understand that warmth is hard-won. Summary: As for the middle part, due to the length issue, many things are not limited and cannot be expanded upon. It is normal that it is difficult to cover everything. Aqian has done her best to the greatest extent. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the portrayal of Ba Weijun. Although I spent two whole chapters writing about him, I always feel that his sense of existence is not as strong as that of Evil Luo Wang. So I strongly request Aqian to replace Ba Wei in the protagonist column with Evil Luo WangHeyJust kidding← ← =w= I still like this article very much. Ah Qian's writing makes me feel happy as always~ Finally, let me be artistic! ——I insist on doing some things just because I have such an obsession in my heart. This is true for Jing Ye, and so is Ba Wei. ——Although in the end, they were not together. Although in the end, Jingye didn't even leave any memory to Ba Wei. But King Eluo, who remembered this story and accepted Jingye's gentleness, will not forget it. ——So, Jingye, you have lived this life in vain. ——Did you hear that? King Evil Luo said, he will never forget you. ——So, please play the flute music as always and smile gently. Yi Ling Written at 21:05 pm on April 5, 2015

I finished reading this on April Fool's Day, and I felt very mixed. Since it was inconvenient to type on my mobile phone, I switched to a computer to type in my comments. Suddenly I wanted to type out a long review. Qian, how can you bear it? 0 0

The original singers of Koi Copy are Yin Lin and Yun Qi. The song is a cover, please respect the original