[Headless DRRR] Illusion of Flowers and Moonlight

When I saw the end, I felt like "Ah, it really is"

When I re-read this, I suddenly realized that the knife that Xiaoqian used to commit suicide was given by Izaya, here I go!! Ah Qian, you are too cruel!

QwqWow wow wow wow be

When I saw be, I vomited out blood qwq

It's said to be dark history... Actually it's okay. I remember I quite liked this article when I read it.

After watching it, I actually still don't quite understand the heroine's psychology. I always feel a bit like she wants to be so pessimistic even though there is no such thing; I can live a peaceful life even though I don't do anything about the story, but I refuse. All in all, it seemed a little anxious. However, when the heroine died later, I was so tortured that I felt QAQ

Hey, hey, I'm sorry that it took so long to send Aqian the long review I had agreed on before. Just like Ah Qian said, I will drag Mr. Memory out and beat him up. Ah Qianqian, please don't worry! Then I suddenly remembered the syndrome I saw before, and I was so drunk QWQ. It must be that my brain was filled with all kinds of knowledge, so it automatically formatted it, well, that's it!!! Also, please don't complain about long comments! Forgive me for naming me QWQ Maybe it's because of my experience and reading volume. At present, I can't help Ah Qian as much as Ah Qian, so I will write a review for Ah Qian in my usual style. I hope Ah Qianqian doesn't mind w. I have known Ah Qian for about half a year, and I am very happy to meet Ah Qian! Mwah. Next, let's write a serious review. Please don't mind if something weird comes out occasionally! I remember once reading Ah Qian's article to a classmate who has many years of experience in reading novels. It seemed that the article "[GANGSTA Gangster] Sleeps in the Warmth of Death" came from. There were long paragraphs of various descriptions at the beginning, which made her memory particularly deep. There are also various vocabulary words. Her original words seem to be like this [Her vocabulary accumulation is very rich, and there are many obscure vocabulary words. The writing style and cohesion are excellent, and it does not make people feel too abrupt. As she said, A Qianqian's vocabulary accumulation is definitely not something that happens in a day or two, but is accumulated over many years, so A Qianqian's writing is excellent. As for the degree of character restoration, at least I think Aqian's restoration is quite good. Heck, even though I'm a lazy person and haven't finished reading the original novel yet, don't mind that. The ending is the same as what I said before, although it is BE. But BE is often much better than HE. Where do so many beautiful things come from in this world? This world is a world where black and white, evil and good coexist... Moreover, it is enough for A Qianqian to be very satisfied with the ending. After all, writing such a long article consumes not only simple things like time, but also A Qian's hard work and something that A Qian wants to express. Having said this, I couldn't help but want to kneel down next to Dachu QWQ! Now looking at the word count column, I was so scared that I cried!!! Because it's been a long time, the plots that impress me most now seem to be these two. One of the highlights is the ending. The scene where Izaya's mother is talking to herself and Qianyi under the cherry blossom tree at the school gate really tortured me. And the scene about the girl looking for things in the back also tortured me a lot, "I seem to have never called your name properly, Qianyi..." I felt sad and distressed when Izaya-niang said this. [The familiar yet unfamiliar city in front of me is still prosperous and prosperous, but I can also feel the coolness in the air with every breath I take. In the dense forest of buildings, in addition to the unattainable loneliness and loneliness, there is only a sense of uncertainty about the uncertain future. This sentence reminds me of another sentenceWhere there are people who miss you is where you belong. This is a quote from Naruto, which once made me want to cry inexplicably. And this sentence written by Aqian also made me feel a lot of things. Maybe it is the reason for resonance? Ah, by the way, there is another section which is the long paragraph about Qianyi's parents at the end of Extra 01. Although there are not many words, it made me feel deeply sad. The shortcomings of human nature seem to be exposed... [Well, Qian... Yi... Is a good word. Just reading it can keep a nice smile! Now, Qianyi, are you okay? Orihara Izaya, you bastard... I seem to miss you a little bit...

First of all, I would like to say a belated "Congratulations on the completion" to A Qianqian!! The ending of "Through the Looking Glass" that I have been chasing for so long is finally here, and it's not in vain that I have been looking up at the bottom of the pit waiting for A Qianqian to fill it in! But I'm really ashamed that the long review I promised has been delayed for so long. I hope A Qianqian won't take offense. After all, my memory can really be taken out and beaten_(:з)∠)_. Without further ado, this article is the starting point for getting to know A Qian and wanting to hook up with A Qian. To be honest, I was really excited when I suddenly saw your article on the list at that time when I had no interest in any article and couldn't find the article that I liked. Although I admit that I just read it to kill time at first, but in the end, my face was bloody because of your insults. After secretly watching the screen for a long time, I finally made up my mind to leave a comment and hook up! Then I successfully captured A Qian Qian and put it in my backpack! Okay, enough of reminiscing about old times, let's take a look at A Qian's "Flowers in the Mirror, Moon in the Water". 01. Writing style As far as writing is concerned, I feel like I don't have much room to speak_(:з)∠)_As a science student, I think that my writing is inferior to A Qian Qianyi's, and I really can't put forward any opinions. If I have to find fault, I can only say that the description of certain things is a bit too complicated and not concise enough. Moreover, there are obviously a lot of long paragraph descriptions in Aqian's writing, which can easily make readers feel tired from reading. I think it's enough to describe a certain environment at the beginning, and then occasionally insert it according to changes in mood. 02. Plot In fact, for me, writing style is far more important than plot. When I read novels, I seem to pay more attention to Chinese writing. There are few novels with good plot but bad writing that can hook me. Maybe it's because I've been writing for a long time and am very picky about writing, but my requirements for plot have weakened. Obviously, Ah Qian's "Through the Looking Glass" was very to my liking. Compared with the writing, the plot was obviously weakened a lot, so that I later had the idea of ​​"wait for what happened before and let me read it and review it"... Although it is undeniable that I have a bad memory, but relatively speaking, the writing is really more brilliant than the plot. Although there is nothing wrong with this, A Qianqian needs to be reminded that a long novel is not supported by writing, but by plot. The plot must be dominant in order to leave a deep impression on people, and writing is only a supporting tool~ 03. Punctuation Well, as a punctuation monitor, I have complained about it and have been complained about by many people. Don't doubt it, A Qianqian_(:з)∠)_. There is actually nothing wrong with A Qianqian's punctuation. It is just psychological activities. According to A Qian's habit, it is placed in "", but I don't feel comfortable with it because I always put it directly outside. Just look at A Qianqian's habits and preferences, it doesn't really matter~ In addition, I have complained about it. A Qianqian's love for the ellipsis is definitely a matter of true love, you know. 04. Logic _(:з)∠)_Maybe it's because I have almost forgotten the previous story, so when I rushed all the way to the end, I could hardly understand it. Well, even now I am still confused (I haven't even understood the original plot yet). When I saw the ending, I had the thought of "I don't understand it, but I still feel it's awesome." Maybe I need to complete the original work and read it from beginning to end before giving my conclusion. However, when decrypting, Aqianqian can do it in two lines, explaining and reproducing the scene at the same time, which is more conducive to readers' understanding of the plot analysis. 05. Ending It should be said that I was a little reluctant to provide the sadistic story at the end to A Qianqian because I personally like this story very much, haha! However, since that article seemed to have been aborted halfway, it would be better to present it to everyone through A Qianqian's hand. I have never doubted Ah Qian's writing style, but it's still different from what I imagined~ In my article, Lin also wrote down the name of the heroine when he was in a sad mood and met a woman who was looking for things on the street after the heroine died. It's just that in the middle of writing the last name, I suddenly crossed it out and wrote Orihara + the heroine's first name (well, Aqianqian should understand this, right?). Aqianqian wrote that Izaya met the girl who was looking for things after a long time, because Aqian said that she could not imagine Izaya's sadness. Well, if I think about it carefully, I can't imagine it either~ But if A Qianqian really wants to ask me if I am satisfied with your ending, my answer is: I am very satisfied. 06. Characters In terms of the restoration of the characters, A Qianqian is simply beyond my reach!! I will give you a smile on my knees for the rest of my life!! [Kneel down] Izaya's scumbag state is exactly the same as in the original work, but I can't imagine Izaya's forced smile. At most, I can imagine his sarcastic smile. To sum it up, A Qianqian's second novel is a huge improvement compared to the first one~ It's simply awesome!! The writing is smooth but some descriptions seem a bit draggy and could be streamlined. The plot is weakened by the writing, I hope it can be strengthened. There seems to be no loopholes in the logic, but maybe I can find something if I watch it again XD. The story of Qianyi and Izaya is not long, but it is enough to leave a place in my heart. An unromantic first encounter, an unromantic relationship - two opposite extremes stand at opposite ends of the scale. No matter how hostile the relationship is, no matter who is missing, the other will fall into boundless loneliness, right? Sure enough, compared to love, the most beautiful thing is the companionship of the past. For example, in high school, when Qianyi needed Izaya the most, or after Qianyi left, Izaya came to Qianyi and murmured to himself under the cherry blossom tree. Dear Izaya, I think Qianyi must hear it. I'm glad that I got to know my dear Aqian because of this article. Cheers to you. Ah Qi Written on the evening of February 2, 2016

Ah Qian, thank you for your hard workヽ(ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉThe flowers are finished!

Thank you for your hard work!