I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?

251 五 Five-Dimensional Manifold Silicon KnowledgeSci-Fi & Apocalypse1.2M WordsOngoing 6Reads—Score—Shelves

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No one has read it. I wrote it after two years of research [face covering]

252 深 Deep Sea Evolution: from Shark to the Father of Sharks! Sky KuixuiSports526k WordsOngoing 197Reads7.1Score—Shelves

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Is anyone looking at mine?

253 新 New World Immigrants LanxiSci-Fi & Apocalypse195k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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It hasn't been long since I signed the contract, let's take a look around [eat melon] [send heartfelt wishes]

254 全 The Whole Network Was Shocked. This Guy Went Crazy by Stealing Attributes. Specialized in Remote CallingSports356k WordsCompleted 19Reads—Score—Shelves

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Cool. It's fun to use your brain. The first one is my new book

255 战 Warhammer: Edgewalker Agares' Spider Web1.1M WordsOngoing 1.5kReads6.1Score142Shelves

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The newcomer's new book will be over 900,000 words long. If you are a fan of "Warhammer: Rogue Trader", please give it a try. The third volume has been completed and the fourth volume has started. Congratulations to the Bridegroom·Volume 3 The heroes bid farewell. Several more difficult problems appeared and were listed one after another. The eternal battle has been urgently blocked. How to defeat it is nothing more than a few cold and heat attacks. The grand expedition was like clouds and smoke, and we gathered firewood to spend the long night in order to stay warm. But remember, don't be timid. The journey was rugged and covered with frost and snow, but the strong wind remained the same and refused to rest. The divine miracles of the God-Emperor's power are fulfilled time and time again. How to distinguish between loyal and traitorous people? After the Lion King Khan disappears, who can move mountains? One foot trembles, and everyone stumbles.

256 搞 Funny One Piece: Me and Shanks and Other Tough Guys I Am a Scorpio Butterfly131k WordsOngoing 10Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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My 81,000 words, today is the first day of the verification period, the funny and refreshing articles are very good

258 修 Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Yuling Sect Under the SwordEastern Fantasy123k WordsCompleted 175Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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A new book, no system, no heroine, and a bit of a trailblazer at the end. The protagonist basically works his way up step by step. His qualifications are above average, and he doesn't have particularly big opportunities.

259 执 The Origin of the Ring Sweet JujubeEastern Fantasy874k WordsOngoing 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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I recommend it to both old and new readers. Currently, both books are being updated normally.

260 修 Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Rebirth of the Ancestor Who Transformed into a God. Houttuynia CordataEastern Fantasy108k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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Fantasy cultivating immortality, humorous with jokes, meticulous writing, welcome to review (mutual reviews by authors + reminder for updates + bookshelf [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend] [I also strongly recommend]

262 水 Water Moon Dream Fairy Holy Emperor Snow LotusMystery167k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I am a new writer, but I am a bookworm for many years. I have read countless novels, so as a Pisces, I plan to write a novel about cultivating immortals in my mind. If any kind-hearted people can read it and comment on it, you can also leave comments if you recommend the novel. I have not read a novel that is not a classic [laughter]

264 独 The Lone Walker Taming the Beast Changhua Story HallEastern Fantasy1.5M WordsOngoing 2kReads6.2Score149Shelves

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New author, please give me a thumbs up

265 魂 The Divine Path Through Which the Soul Travels Through Eternity Boundless Mist and RainEastern Fantasy583k WordsOngoing 10Reads8.8Score—Shelves

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This book has just reached 200,000 words, so it's time to start reading!

266 吾 I Take the Sword as My Way Wooden BoatEastern Fantasy204k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Then I'll give it a thumbs up. I'm a complete newcomer. I wrote it myself. The writing style may be average. If you are bored, you can come and read it [face covering] [face covering]

267 涅 Nirvana Evolves and Finally Becomes a God The King of Complaints Is HereEastern Fantasy292k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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This is my first time writing a novel, let's call it a hegemony novel! Can anyone help me with reference [face covering]

268 仗 Relying on the Favor of My Brother, I Can Work Hard The Cat with a Glowing Tail97k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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Is anyone looking at me?

269 逃 The Prince Who Ran Away from Marriage: Thirty-Six Strategies Can't Avoid the Princess Muchuan and Zhou YingHistorical163k WordsOngoing 5Reads—Score—Shelves

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Created by a novice, the rivalry between the prince and the princess is super interesting. In addition to being funny, the plot and suspense line becomes more exciting as it goes on.

270 双 Twin Hairpins Yeya PearModern Romance434k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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One is a modern girl who lives in a slum with low self-esteem and is bullied on campus, and the other is a noble and pampered daughter of a prince. What will happen when their souls are swapped in time and space? This is a novel that a newcomer has just published. Comments are welcome!

271 【 Time Travelstart from 1839 Love to Eat Chili Fried Pork NoodlesHistorical390k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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No one is watching, I can't hold on anymore [cover face][cover face][cover face]

272 血 Bloody Demon Hunter Cuttlefish White and BlueUrban191k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I'm here again asking for viewing and recommendations. Finally, there is an author who is related to us, and we even recommend his books!

273 重 Rebirth of Stars: Notes of the Mist IgnorantModern Romance123k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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The male soul wears female clothes, the heroine was a boy in her previous life

274 苟 After Surviving for Ten Years, the System Came to Recognize the Master. Lonely ImmortalEastern Fantasy726k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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It's 80,000 words and I still haven't recommended it. Please give me a review! [Working on draft]

276 修 Cultivation Arena: My Skills Will Hit Critically Idle BookwormEastern Fantasy241k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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New books are recommended! Everyone is welcome to send notes, reminders and comments. It comes with two books that I'm also following! They all look great, love watching them! !

278 星 Star Spirit Fantasy Record Silent That YearEastern Fantasy111k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I've been updating for a while, but I feel like I don't have enough time, experience, or writing skills. Now I'm trying again, and it's like a dream come true.

280 风 The Wind Rises and the Clouds Fly Lu MingkeAncient Romance381k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Three women came to the palace. The fair and delicate-looking girl is named Sima Ai. She is seventeen years old and is Sima Yan's niece. She has a slender figure, wears light and elegant clothes, and speaks and behaves generously. But deep down, I don't think she would be His Majesty's type. For His Majesty, Sima Ai is too dull and it is difficult to whet his appetite. This young and carefree Zhaoyi always likes to come and chat with me. It's a pity that poetry and poetry are not my specialty, and she doesn't know anything about bowing, horseback riding, or shooting, so in the end I can only talk nonsense. But she was really upset about my being demoted. "Men and women accept or accept each other with or without intimacy, which is a courtesy; a sister-in-law who supports her with her hand is a right. After all, the Prince of Yinling's family is also a scholarly family. He doesn't even understand this truth, right?" Looking at her slightly excited expression, I smiled, "It's all just a false name, just like the clouds in the sky, disappearing in the blink of an eye. Concubine Yun, it's good!" The woman who is accompanying His Majesty every night is called Bai Ling'er, and she is a child of Sister Feng's brother's family. Feng Baizhan recommended her through the palace's talent show. Unlike his plain-looking niece, Mei can be said to be a trait inherited from his wife's family. With Feng Baizhan's rich family background, this Bai Ling'er is the most gorgeously dressed and the most enchanting. In addition, she has a charming look and a voice that makes men fall asleep. As expected, His Majesty is fascinated by her. If Sima Ai can only meet and say a few words during the day, when His Majesty comes to Yanqing Palace to chat with me. As soon as it gets dark these days, His Majesty will happily run to hang out with Bai Ling'er until dawn. Your Majesty, you are a playboy at heart after all. The last one is called Wang Chuchu, which is also my least favorite. She is the niece of Wang Xian and Wang Feng'er. The little girl is not very young. Every time she sees me, she puts on a bitter and resentful look. Every time I see Wang Feng'er, Wang Chuchu always follows her. After I finished saluting Wang Feng'er, Wang Chuchu would bow to me slightly with a straight face, which was regarded as her saluting me. One time, before I could go far away, this little girl said to her little aunt, "Aunt, please quickly ask your Majesty to grant me the title of concubine. I don't want to pay tribute to this wild woman!" An Chunhai was a little angry when he heard this. He made a face and shouted that he wanted to argue with me. I quickly stopped him and told him that I understand your filial piety, but there is no need to be angry with such a person. Ordinary life day after day. Wang Ziwei and Xia Zhengwu are also growing taller day by day. In the blink of an eye, they have changed from babies who can only babbling to little brats who pester me and ask questions every day. Especially Wang Ziwei, this girl's personality is a bit like mine, she is carefree, and she also pays attention to the clear distinction between love and hate when dealing with others. Because I heard that Sima Ai came from a Qingliu family and had a lot of knowledge, Wang Ziwei pestered her to teach her how to read and write. Sima Ai had nothing to do, so she couldn't stand Wang Ziwei's nudges, so she tried to teach her how to read and write. After teaching for a short time, Sima Ai was very impressed with her and told me that although Wang Ziwei was young, she was a natural scholar. Whether it was a collection of classics or history, or poems and songs, Sima Ai would often teach them twice. Wang Ziwei would soon understand the principles, and be able to draw inferences from one instance, learn and apply them flexibly, and begin to comment on the people and things around her. For example, when it comes to Xia Zhengwu, her principle is that no one can bully him except me and my mother. Even His Majesty, she shows no mercy. Xia Zhengwu was always a little jealous of His Majesty because he came less frequently. One day, His Majesty became interested and wanted to tease him, but ended up crying. Wang Ziwei angrily rushed to His Majesty, stretched out her hands to protect her younger brother, and would not allow His Majesty to touch him again. When I saw this, I quickly wanted to pull Wang Ziwei away, but His Majesty stopped me. His Majesty asked her with a smile: "Xia Zhengwu is my son, why don't you, little girl, allow me to touch him?" "He is His Majesty's son, but Your Majesty has not educated him very much. It is mentioned in the Three-Character Sutra that it is the fault of a father if he does not raise him. Your Majesty is a person with faults, and you can only touch him after he has corrected himself." His Majesty was scolded by such a little girl in front of him, and it was hard to say anything to her, so he had to say to me: "It's true that you gave birth to this girl. She has exactly the same temperament and temperament!" But thanks to Wang Ziwei, His Majesty will visit me much more frequently in the future than in the past. What surprised me the most was that this girl would actually stand up for Sima Ai. One day, she actually said angrily to His Majesty in front of Sima Ai: "Although Aunt Sima is His Majesty's concubine, Your Majesty rarely goes to see her. She is so young and beautiful. If she hadn't entered the palace to marry His Majesty, how many people would have pursued her outside? Didn't Your Majesty delay Aunt Sima's prime years?" As soon as Wang Ziwei said these words, everyone present felt a little humbled. His Majesty could only pretend to be angry and ask her: "Who taught you these words? I am the emperor, and all the concubines in the palace are my wives. Who do I want to find? Do I need you, a little girl, to tell me who I want to find?" "But your majesty is so unfair!" Wang Ziwei was not afraid at all and looked up at his majesty, "Your majesty, you are the emperor. When it rains, God knows how to favor one person alone." I saw that Wang Ziwei was getting more and more outrageous, so I tried to stop her, but His Majesty seemed to be angry, and then asked her: "Who said that I only favor one person?" "Everyone in the palace knows that His Majesty went to Liufang Pavilion to find Bai Zhaoyi." After listening to Wang Ziwei's words, His Majesty's face gradually darkened. When I saw that this girl's talkativeness had made His Majesty unhappy, I reprimanded her. Unexpectedly, the little girl actually cried and said, "I'm not wrong! Books say that guarding the people's mouth is better than guarding the river. Instead of scaring others, making them afraid to speak, and turning yourself into a blind and deaf person, it is better to listen to other people's opinions." After saying this, she actually turned to His Majesty and asked: "As the emperor, shouldn't your Majesty follow the good?" Her reasoning was so eloquent that His Majesty blushed and was speechless for a moment. Seeing Wang Ziwei crying so hard, His Majesty couldn't bear it after all. He stood up, picked up Wang Ziwei, wiped her tears with a handkerchief, and said: "You are right! I have written it down. I want to be the Holy Son of Heaven respected by all people, so why won't I accept what others say from the bottom of their hearts?" His Majesty turned to Sima Ai beside him and said, "You have done a good job as a teacher. Wang Ziwei is only a few years old, and you have made her understand a lot of truths. I didn't realize your strengths before, but I really saw them today." Ever since Wang Ziwei started crying, Sima Ai, who was rarely favored by His Majesty, found out less than three months later that she was pregnant with a dragon. Bai Ling'er, who had been favored every night in the past, found that His Majesty's visits to her were no longer as frequent as in the past.

281 全 Ancestor of the Whole Family: a Tianhu Family Appears at the Beginning of D Attack Lion HeadEastern Fantasy143k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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Listen to everyone's opinions, family cultivation and Hex.

283 渡 Crossing the Fox: Book of Destiny S XiaochunAncient Romance386k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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My new book has passed 100,000 words. Please review it.

284 他 He Was Abandoned Again Wang Qianyu's Colorful Clothes164k WordsCompleted 47Reads—Score—Shelves

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(｢･ω･)｢Come for personal evaluation

285 青 A Record of the Ups and Downs of Officialdom in the Past Twenty Years by Qing Yunzhi YouyangUrban187k WordsCompleted 10Reads—Score—Shelves

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My own debut show, please appreciate it

286 洪 Empress Hongwu Lazy UncleAncient Romance46k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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As I get older, I can no longer do computer typing for a long time, and I don't expect this book to be able to repay the mortgage that I have spent half my life on. It is a book that lifts the curtain of the late Yuan Dynasty from a female perspective (it is not a Gongdouwen). If you find it interesting, please take the trouble to read it. I hope you all can live happily.

288 我 I Kill Decisively in the Land of Twilight Fishing GuaguaEastern Fantasy84k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Can you please read a little bit of the novel I wrote? It's the first time I wrote it and after so long, I still have five views and we are still friends… By the way, you can give me some suggestions, thank you.

289 战 Warhammer, but His Teammates Are Nameless Guests The Cat Girl in the Tavern Reijiu376k WordsOngoing 3.1kReads—Score402Shelves

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This is something I just wrote recently. I am a newbie, please take a look [Blow a kiss]

290 觉 Awakening Memories Reappear, Reaching the Top of the Police Force Is Unmatched Snow Full Moon WhiteMystery213k WordsOngoing 42Reads—Score—Shelves

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I hope everyone will pay more attention [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

291 平 A Mediocre Little Genius Showing Off Super SuperUrban43k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Newcomer, I hope you won't scold me too badly😭

292 洛 Luo Shu's Plan Man in HatCultivation92k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I am new to this book, can you help me find the problem?

293 兽 The Heartthrob of the World of Beasts: the Male God Accompanies Me to Practice to the Full Level Qibao Rice Ning MengAncient Romance230k WordsOngoing 30Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I recommend this novel about a strong woman in the world of beasts. It has a grand world view, a lot of foreshadowing, and many male protagonists' upgrades.

294 侯 Hou Men's Poisonous Phoenix, the Princess Has Come Back to Kill Her Smart FoolAncient Romance595k WordsCompleted 364Reads—Score115Shelves

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Can someone please give me a pat on the back? Even if it's just a little bit, it's better to scare me than to have no one deal with it. The data is so bad that I can't fix it, and I'm growing mushrooms in my spare time.

296 涸 Rutted Fish Jiangtanqing32k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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[Almost crying] In fact, no one is watching at all

297 风 Meeting at the Wind and Cloud: the Biography of Yang Yi Comrade BreederEastern Fantasy8.8M WordsOngoing 236Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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A long harem martial arts novel, do you have any fans?

298 红 Red Cross VIP MuchenMystery269k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I hope you can give me some suggestions for improvement

299 末 After Rebirth at the End of the World, I Woke up and Lay Down in SSS You Don't Know the Branches on the Moon308k WordsCompleted 14Reads8.1Score—Shelves

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Just leave a trace, no need to read the article, I can't stand it myself.

300 醒 Wake Up, Don't Sleep East Is Not Gone YetModern Romance83k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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This is my first time writing, and I wanted to ask everyone how bad it is.