I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?

801 英 Hero Lord, Summon the Martial King Galen at the Beginning Xianjia XiaofanEastern Fantasy216k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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Xiao Mengxin, thank you all for coming to check. If you have any shortcomings, please tell me and I will correct them.

802 乱 Reliance on Heaven in Troubled Times: I, Yin Qiming, Level the World Bohai Officials204k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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My father and brother betrayed the country and offered sacrifice to the city, and the sect was destroyed and died tragically! The childhood sweetheart hates being poor and loves being rich, so he turns around and clings to a traitor in search of glory! Yin Qiming was burdened with three blood feuds: patricide, treason, and emotional trauma. In the desperate situation of the dungeon, he awakened the Nine-Yang Magic and was reborn against the will of heaven! My brother-in-law was imprisoned for life, and his money-loving ex-girlfriend was slapped in the face in public! He crawled back from hell to the world, recruited peerless Taoist companions, recruited the world's advisers, and conquered the heroes of the troubled times! Zhu Yuanzhang separatist power in the south of the Yangtze River, and Queen Qi's vicious plot to alienate people? The invincible Yin Qiming has since embarked on the road of becoming a god in troubled times where two heroes compete for hegemony and dominate the world!

803 我 I Was a Powerful Official in Soochow I Am the Laziest in Wu'anHistorical220k WordsCompleted 36Reads—Score—Shelves

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I signed a contract for this book, which has just 80,000 words.

804 我 My Emotions Can Become Gods Angry NavoMystery59k WordsOngoing 22Reads—Score—Shelves

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The first book was written by me. Can you guys give me some advice? I beg you to comment [crying][crying][crying]

805 吞 Devouring All Things, I Rely on Feedback to Reach the Top of the Heavens Crossing Cangming at NightEastern Fantasy264k WordsOngoing 110Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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It's not easy, I always respond to requests.

806 疯 Crazy Flirting! Mr. Xiangrui, He Can't Control It Fusheng Always Smiles190k WordsOngoing 6Reads—Score—Shelves

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Hundreds of thousands of words are deserted. Is it really poorly written? [Crying]

807 重 What Are You Doing After Being Reborn? Make Money and Cultivate Immortality! Peak CapitalUrban88k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Not even 80,000, but already 10,000 readers

808 觉 Awakening: World Editor Wandering Without ReturningUrban100k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Does anyone like to watch stories where the protagonist gradually grows up?

810 时 Time Rift: Alien Mission Formless Shadow71k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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This is the first time I write a book by myself. No matter how much my family and friends disapprove of me, I will continue to write it.

811 魔 Magical Girl, What's Wrong with Me Getting Some Traffic? Xuan HaoUrban206k WordsOngoing 681Reads5.8Score107Shelves

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Recommended, please comment

812 谋 The Counselor System Is Loading Lose the World with a SmileHistorical145k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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I wrote this book myself, and I just signed a contract for about 80,000 words.

813 混 Chaos Guardian Feng WuEastern Fantasy371k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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In the past, when I saw other people writing novels, I always felt that their writing was a mess. At that level, my own writing was better than that. Later, when I actually wrote a novel, I realized that writing a novel is not that simple. After racking my brains, I always felt that the writing was not satisfactory. Anyway, I finally started writing. Nowadays, I have set my sights lower, my mentality is calm, and I am not so picky. I find that I can still write good novels. I recommend this book. I think the plot at the beginning is in line with expectations. I haven't read the rest yet, so I recommend it to everyone. I hope you all like it too.

814 系 System, You Want Me to Use This Body to Conquer a Thousand Pieces of Gold? The Wisdom of JiangdongUrban154k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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This book was written by a friend of mine who also has a pen name, so I got to know him [laughing] I can support him. He asked me to give him a sentence and give him a rating. Anything is fine [laughing] (Recommended by Peanut Slave)

815 辛 After Ten Years of Hard Work, the Emperor Wants to Kill Me Gao Bailiu123k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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[Double Male Protagonists] + [Blackened Crazy Batch] + [Plot Pulling] + [Advance Reversal]. Suitable for readers who like complex plots and group plots

816 针 Needles Devoured the Souls of Virtue and Embroidery, the Backbone of the Southern Tang Dynasty Jinxi's Father's SalaryAncient Romance191k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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📌Book Recommendation | "The Needle Devours the Backbone of the Southern Tang Dynasty and Destroys Their Souls" A ruthless romance in the late Southern Tang Dynasty! The embroiderer used blood as thread, and the bronze needle pierced the shady curtain of troubled times - when escaping from the culvert, the hair of the three masters and apprentices (Liu's black silk, Zhou Heng's white hair, and Abao's fetal hair) was entangled in the tail of the needle; the bronze needle was hidden at the bottom of the indigo pond, and the prophecy of national subjugation was locked at the end of the needle; in the waste silk room, Zhou Heng used blood to "repair" moldy millet cakes into the Big Dipper; Even the apprentice's ribs are engraved with star maps, and the blood scabs are unfinished stitches... The path is embroidered in the light of the sword, and the soul fire is hidden in the blood thread. The embroiderer of the Southern Tang Dynasty used needles as weapons to fight against the swords, and sewed three lives into one thread to earn a living! The unpopular Southern Tang Dynasty perspective + embroidery tactics, each chapter will make people's palms tremble, and the series is a hot pursuit!

817 天 Tianhen: I Will Reverse the Fate of Death Very HandsomeUrban181k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Please support the new book, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.

818 破 Bankrupt Lord: Start with a Liquidation Report Written by Yu Feng WeiguoEastern Fantasy119k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Just take a look, it seems okay

819 浮 Ukiyoro Poetry and Prose Collection Snow and Rain Fall Outside the BuildingUrban101k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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A collection of poems and essays written by me who was unfairly expelled from school and lived in a rental house for seven years. Readers are welcome to find the good medicine in my words

821 阴 The Strange House of Yin and Yang Just Call It Han MoMystery50k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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If you don't have 80,000 yuan, this movie is okay.

822 原 Genshin Impact and Mingchao? the Two Cities Under My Control Chengyang, You Know499k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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This setting is also invincible.

824 洁 Clean God Is Invincible Clean God Is InvincibleEastern Fantasy387k WordsCompleted 19Reads—Score—Shelves

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When I became a second-level writer for the first time, I felt very happy

825 疯 Crazy! Emperor Jianwen Returned from Hell At the Foot of Linli MountainHistorical260k WordsCompleted 14Reads—Score—Shelves

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I also asked if anyone was there [laughing] I was shouting at the top of my lungs.

826 我 My Stock Trading System Is Connected to Reality Five Cars FiveEastern Fantasy1.2M WordsCompleted 17Reads—Score—Shelves

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[Request for Review] "My Stock Trading System Connects to Reality" Creativity: Traveling through the world of immortality, using the stock trading system to synchronize the earth's financial market. Please let me know if the rhythm and excitement are in place. The main theme is to listen to advice.

827 摆 Ferry Place Zhang JingqianEastern Fantasy182k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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There was no fire, not even a spark.

828 剑 Sword End Knock on FattyUrban362k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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Newcomers don't know what to do. . .

831 在 During Those Years When I Was Catching Ghosts in Kunming Huo YanMystery1.0M WordsCompleted 140Reads—Score—Shelves

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Urban superpowers, folklore supernatural novels, no one will say a word after reading it! ! !

832 神 Mysterious Revival, My Memory Buries Evil Ghosts Keep SilentMystery733k WordsOngoing 1.5kReads5.8Score124Shelves

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Strong recommendation, strong recommendation! This book is really beautifully written! If you are not convinced, come and argue! The suspense is mind-blowing and super immersive! The writing skills are profound, and it's not a novice at all. I really recommend this book, it's so beautiful! Great potential!

833 执 Those Who Hold the Ink Mo Lan Yan Yi295k WordsOngoing 6Reads8.1Score—Shelves

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Newcomer, I have 200,000 words, can anyone tell me what my problem is? Feel free to speak boldly, and I won't be a blind person.

834 初 First Return Mo YimaMystery442k WordsOngoing 27Reads—Score—Shelves

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"It looks like we have arrived at the beach of the city." Yi seemed not to care about the kick, even though his waist felt a little painful. "Aren't you going to explain it?" Huaiyin was a little urgent now. To be honest, she had a feeling now... "I'm not schizophrenic." Yisi smiled and shook his head, "I did it on purpose, so that we can come out." "How do you say this?" Huaiji, who was lying like a dead dog, raised his hand and asked, and then lowered it weakly. "Did you notice it?" "Are you saying that it's a fish tank?" "Hmm... So it's really a fish tank." Huaiyin was obviously not satisfied that he might just be a fish rotting and smelly in the tank. "How did you come up with it?" "Well... I said it was a bet and you might scold me, but when I tell you the reason, you might think I'm making up a reason based on the answer." "OK, I understand." Huaiyin looked at the other person's eyes for a while and stopped asking. "What on earth does she understand? These two are just sitting here playing riddles." Huai Ji was obviously dissatisfied with the results of this "traveling around", "My feet are hurting to death, is there any justice..." Before she could finish her words, He Xi threw a handful of sand at her: "Can you stop talking, it makes my head hurt." "I don't care about that. How do you know you can succeed by letting that thing occupy your body? What is that thing? How are you sure that we can succeed." As soon as a series of questions were sent out, Yihong kept moving again, "Fuck you, you won't predict that the dream will happen again and find the perfect timeline after envisioning 100,000,000 endings, right?" Huaiji next to him just stood up excitedly and wanted to say something, but He Xi covered him up. He could only whine in despair, obviously regretting that his genius ideas had not spread. And Yi seemed speechless. "Do you think he is Doctor Strange?" "Stop, stop, why are you getting more and more biased?" He originally wanted to create a mysterious atmosphere, "all right, all right" "That's me too." "The one before?" "No." "You are still so unknown..." "What are you thinking." Yisi sighed, his reputation in this life was ruined. "That's another paranoid version of me." "Parallel time and space?" "So... Right?" Yi Xi continued, "Do you remember the hole you fell into?" "Guixu?" "What kind of turtle whiskers?" Huai Ji came to life and asked. The two ignored him, "Guixu used my memory to recreate a similar environment, and used my personality to make a copy of me to simulate." "Cloning?" "Is it more terrifying? The same life trajectory is much more severe than simply controlling the appearance." "But he doesn't look like you, I mean in many ways." "Well... Do you think you will still end up with that ending if you face the same multiple-choice question again?" Huaiyin was stunned, lowered his head and thought for a long time, and then slowly spoke, with a bit of emotion in his tone: "Well... In this way, to be able to become who I am now, every choice is crucial, it is simply a miracle." She paused, and then added, "But it seems that the exact same choice is more logical. After all, it is a brand new you. You are not making a choice again after experiencing a change and learning from the past." "I believe you already have the answer." "He was right in reporting his family status at the beginning?" "Maybe." "The water in this world is really despicable." "Really? Aren't you among all living beings a drop of water that dissolves in the sea?" "Oke Oke, I don't want to discuss these philosophical issues. What do we need to do now?" "Why, you don't believe me?" Yi raised his hand as if indulgently and turned his head towards the Etu Yongyuan knife that Yihong was holding, as if he was looking at his own face in the light of the knife. "Have you taken enough photos?" Huaiyin said. "Quite handsome." Yi Xi said absently, "You still don't believe I'm the person you are?" "It's still hard for me to believe that I have a criminal record. After all, at the last moment of escaping, who can guarantee that I won't be stabbed when I let my guard down?" As he spoke, Yi Hong restrained Yi Si. "Okay, no need to joke." "It's important to be on guard against others." "But... You should pretend to be more realistic." Yisi's words at this moment made Yihong confused. "What..." Before Yihong could finish his question, Huaiyin suddenly moved. She clenched her fist and punched Yihong mercilessly on the back of the head. The force was so fast and hard that Yihong fell straight onto the beach without even a grunt, and fainted instantly. Yisi looked at this scene, raised his eyebrows, and joked: "Why don't you imitate the martial arts drama, knock him out with a knife, and punch him directly, which looks rough." "Then why don't you throw props from your sleeves to hit him, and do all those fancy things?" Huaiyin withdrew her fist, but her expression was still not that good. "Is he dead?" "It doesn't matter if he's dead. It's not him. What are you afraid of?" Yi seemed to hear the words and smiled, his eyes full of approval: "How do you know he is fake? I have a God's perspective, so I can see it clearly. I have been worried about how to convey this news to you quietly. If I say it directly, he will definitely bite me back, which will make you distrust me even more. And even if you secretly flirt with me, you will still be suspected." "Oc. "Are you serious?" "Okay, he has a hat from the rain." Yi Xi looked around, "I don't see it either." "That thing is not an entity that can be seen with the naked eye. You don't need to go into it. You just need to know that it is the key to distinguishing it from the real one." Huaiyin explained simply, not wanting to waste too much time on this issue. "Where is Yihong himself?" "She must have been washed into the water and hasn't come out yet. Do the math, the time should be up." Huaiyin pretended to look at his watch. "How do you know that he will be okay?" "Oh, do you think why I pinch so accurately? Can't I keep a water-drop clock in my heart and keep track of the time?" Huaiyin blinked and joked deliberately. "Who asked you this? Don't interrupt!" Yi seemed helpless. "You're just kidding. You've been tense. Relax." Huaiyin smiled and said in a more serious tone, "He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "Who asked this?" "It's a joke. I see you are a bit tense. He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "The sun?" "Song Shijiu." "Then he is okay?" "You have to know that when a person is about to die, his words are also good. This should be Song Shijiu's bravest time. The first time he was brave was so heroic." "Brave?" "The flood is coming, and she will use her own wreckage to prevent the world from being submerged." As soon as Huaiyin finished speaking, a soft light suddenly lit up on the beach, and Yihong's figure slowly emerged in the light, standing firmly in front of everyone. Yi Shi looked at the sudden appearance of Zhen Yihong, and reviewed the series of messages he had just received, and couldn't help but gasped: "Here, did our identity as a prophet just jump to the wrong side? There is too much information, I can't digest it." "Oh, your mental logo was disconnected just now." Huaiyin turned to He Xi, reconnected to Yi Shi's mental logo, and said helplessly, "No wonder it was so difficult to communicate with you just now, saying that we haven't been on the same channel for a long time." "666, I was offline just now." Yi seemed to suddenly realize. "In order to make up for the communication barrier just now, I will give you a chance to name this operation." Huaiyin looked at him and said with a smile. Yisi lowered his head and thought for a moment, then raised his eyes to look at the surging clouds and waves in the distance. A trace of determination flashed in his eyes, and he slowly said: "Well... Let's call him Storm Catcher."

835 梦 Dream of Cultivating Taoism Recall Ten NineEastern Fantasy124k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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The author has gone crazy after being taken over by the protagonist! ! ! !

836 离 On the Day I Left My Job, I Changed the County Seat by Copying Entries. Shen MotongUrban272k WordsOngoing 17Reads—Score—Shelves

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Help your children taste and appreciate it, I really don't know how good my own writing is.

837 奇 Strange Continent A Sea of ​​MiseryUrban174k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Hey guys, can you please support this, my first time writing, and give you a good review, I love you [blowing kisses]

838 浮 Reborn from Ashes Xiang FengwuAncient Romance126k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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The immortal respects life and the evil lotus blooms. The ants of the past are now threatening their lives. The day Yun Zhi crawled out of the Ice Lotus Pond, she knew that all the human and fairy worlds were her chessboard. Xuansha eats the sky, and the black lotus reshapes the foundation of the Tao; walking alone in the dark night, vowing to kill the traitors in the previous life. Trickery? She once took charge of the Immortal Realm. Betray? She has been through reincarnation. Let's see how the cold-faced Immortal Lord fights his way back to the Nine Heavens in this mortal chaos!

839 异 The Zerg Invaded and I Became a Super Soldier Orange SkySci-Fi & Apocalypse159k WordsCompleted 19Reads—Score—Shelves

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Can you watch this, everyone?

840 凡 The Legend of Mortal Martial Arts A Moment of LeisureEastern Fantasy276k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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It's just 200,000 [almost crying]

841 穿 After Passing Through the Book, I Rescued My Abusive Heroine Pillow Pillow Pillow Pillow PillowAncient Romance178k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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Let's take a look at the new book

842 诛 Killing Foreign Gods Starts with Detoxifying Cold Poison Mickey MouseEastern Fantasy226k WordsCompleted 8Reads—Score—Shelves

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New writers request [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

844 我 I Have a Painting That Can Copy Everything and Kill All the Gods FishermanUrban97k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Look, look, look, look

845 战 Warhammer: I Am Huangpizi Commemorative Coin Chicago Typist520k WordsOngoing 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Self-recommended, Warhammer novels, Microsoft, Five Gods co-selected

847 喰 Ghoul Eater Immortal Colorful CreationEastern Fantasy84k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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[Making faces][thinking][making faces][thinking][almost crying][giving heart][almost crying][thinking][cool][laughing][making faces][thinking][almost crying][thinking][almost crying][licking the screen][spit][vomiting][shocked][throwing][shocked][almost crying][shocked][almost crying][giving heart][almost crying][giving heart][laughing and crying][giving heart ][cool][shocked][spit][shocked][spit][angry][almost crying][angry][cool][send heart][spit][send heart][cover face][laugh awkwardly][make faces][laugh] [Cool][Making faces][Thinking][Aggrieved][Awkward smile][Cover your face][Awkward laugh][Almost crying][Cool][Awkward smile][Awkward smile][Aggrieved][Hover your face][Thinking][Almost crying]

848 程 The Legend of Mr. Cheng's Ten Best Friends Dinghai Red GoodsEastern Fantasy88k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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Sir, please use it slowly

849 七 The Sorrow of Seven Desires Cats in Tianlu CityEastern Fantasy166k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves

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The first book I wrote, Eastern Fantasy Cthulhu, is a new genre that I have created. It is generally based on fantasy. Please read it. If you have any suggestions, I will revise it immediately. It currently has 60,000 words.

850 ： : Red Cross Hospital Cross NightMystery89k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves

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New writer, who can support me? 😭😭😭 Currently I have written fourteen chapters and will continue to update.