I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家,第1次写满8万字,能不能有个人来评价下
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- 801 The Secret She Saw 她看见的秘密 Reborn in 1987, Chi Wan wants nothing more than to live an ordinary life. But the day the girl next door, missing for eighteen years, “came home,” she knew there was no way life could stay ordinary. The woman remembers who saved her when she fell into the river at five. She remembers what kind of filling her mother used in the dumplings, and how the old tofu seller at the alley entrance brought her hot soy milk in winter. Her answers are flawless, without a single inconsistency. Everyone says, “ 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Chronicles of Emperor Guangwen of Han, Liu Xie 汉光文帝刘协本纪
[No transmigration] + [No golden finger] + [Pure political intrigue] + [A grand historical vision] In the third year of Chuping, Chang’an runs red with blood. Twelve-year-old Liu Xie has only just escaped Dong Zhuo’s control, but now he is trapped between the court and the warlords. Everyone thinks this young emperor is just another puppet for others to manipulate. But they are wrong. As the wheel of history turns, Liu Xie decides he will no longer be a piece to be moved at will. He will be th
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- 803 Secret War in the Dust 尘埃秘战 Leave a comment or two! Your comments are what keep me writing. Even just a quick note about what you liked or didn’t like would mean a lot. 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Starting with Tree Rings: The Work Is Righteous to a Sinister Degree 从年轮开始作品正的发邪
Qin Jun, a gifted musician, never imagined that “Tree Rings,” the song he had poured his heart into, would stir up such a storm. When a masked streamer publicly claimed that his friend Li Na was the original singer, he came forward to explain the truth about the song's “dual original singers,” only to be cyberbullied by the two of them working together. With no other choice, he produced the copyright certificate and reclaimed all rights with the words, “Since things have come to this, ‘Tree Ring
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Defying Fate on the Immortal Path: Master of Reincarnation 仙途逆世:轮回主宰
Lin Yu was once a criminal psychology prodigy on Earth with extraordinary intelligence, able to outthink and eliminate others in complex situations and escape unscathed. One day, he transmigrates into the body of a sickly, bullied boy with the same name from the Lin family in Qingyan Town. In this world, where cultivating immortality reigns supreme, mortals are no better than ants. The cultivation path runs from the mortal realm to the Saint realm, with each realm divided into ten stages, and ea
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Ten Realms: I Was Ordinary 十界:我本平庸
(We are all ordinary people. Some say they don’t understand what I’m writing! The truth is, I simply want to tell the story of an ordinary person who keeps growing, improving, and learning. He feels lost and helpless, never knowing what to do. His life is full of stumbles, but through repeated setbacks and lessons, he slowly grows! Some people are born in Rome, while he is stuck in the mud. In Rome, it’s easy to cross the finish line. But there’s something all the more inspiring about perseverin
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The Troubadour Knights 吟游骑士团
[No golden finger + slow burn + heavily modified Western fantasy + unusual combat + comedy + a touch of dark, serious themes] On his thirtieth birthday, Lin Bei gets fired. By chance, he transmigrates into the world of his favorite game. Just as he's getting ready to make his mark, he suddenly realizes that time in this world doesn't seem to work quite the same way. A beautiful knight captain who has turned traitor, and a young thief searching for the truth. A ruthless commander, and a succubus
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After I Ran Away, the Heiress of the Capital Went Insane! 当我逃走后,京圈大小姐疯了!
After I Ran Away, the Heiress of the Capital’s Elite Circle Went Crazy!
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The Lin Tombs Beneath Heaven 天下林墓
(Reborn: I Stand Against the Strange Before the Myriad Worlds) (Light ensemble cast) The Boundless Realm has emerged once more, reigniting a war spanning the Myriad Worlds. As the heavens descend into chaos, all our old companions have perished... "How am I supposed to find you...?" Lin Xiao stood amid the chaos, eyes vacant as he murmured to himself. "I'm back, but where have you gone? Why am I forgetting you...?" Kong Feng whispered through her tears. Our old companions have all returned, but
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- 810 Douluo Dalu: The Wind Whisperer 斗罗之风语者 Mondstadt's wind still sings its ballads of freedom, but after an “accidental teleportation” while drunk, Wendy tumbled into an unfamiliar world. No Vision, no Knights of Favonius, just dandelions flying everywhere and his ever-faithful Skyward Harp. While others fought bloody battles to advance their cultivation, he gently plucked the strings and turned the wind element into the softest shield. While people painstakingly honed their skills, he blew dandelion seeds into the air and used the wind 42Reads—Score—Shelves
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For You, I Activated a Reversal of Time 为你,我开启了逆时重启
Trapped in a reverse time loop, she must save the boy who is about to jump from a building. Su Xiao is caught in a backward time loop. Time keeps rewinding, while danger draws closer with every passing moment. She searches alone for the truth behind the loop, determined to prevent a tragedy. Then Zhao Xiaolei gets drawn into it, and together they do everything they can to save Lin Xiaoman, the boy about
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Her Tower 她的楼
Her Building
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- 813 On the Day We Were to Get Our Marriage License, My Fiancée Ran Off with Her First Love 领证当天,未婚妻跟白月光跑了 On the Day We Got Our Marriage License, My Fiancée Ran Off with Her First Love 1kReads—Score—Shelves
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I Transmigrated to an Eerie World, Only to Become Human Rations 穿越诡异世界,却成了人类口粮
[Extremely oppressive] [Not a power fantasy] [Dark] [Slow burn] I’m not crazy! Those memories are affecting me! “Shuoshuo, who… are you talking to?” Hu Shuo looked toward the door. “Dad! What took you so long? Mom’s been here for ages.” He picked up the chicken leg in his hand and offered it to Yang Man. “Mom! You have some too.” Hu Zhijun stared at his son, whose mouth was covered in blood, and spoke in a trembling voice. “Son, your mother is sick. I’m the only one who came to see you today.” “
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I Am a Sword Dao Legend: From the Start, I Instantly Slay the Chosen 我,剑道神话,开局秒杀天骄
[No System, a fantasy comeback story: a good-for-nothing rises, and a divine sword awakens!] [Invincible protagonist + swordsmanship + revenge + decisive action + no saintly do-gooder] On the Cliff of Reflection, a rusty sword holds secrets dating back to time immemorial. Ten years as a “good-for-nothing,” then one day he erupts! His innate sword constitution awakens, and a divine sword recognizes him as its master. His family was bullied and his parents disappeared, all because of the Zhao fami
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- 816 Slaying Immortals Against the Dao: The Blood Oath of Green Bamboo 逆道屠仙:青竹血誓 In Peach Blossom Village on the Spirit Fantasy Continent, Qin Yu and Liu Shiyin grew up together, enjoying a peaceful life. But the Blood Fiend Demon Sect slaughtered the entire village to seize the power of the wild Great Dao and Liu Shiyin's pure spiritual root. At the critical moment, disciples of the righteous Lingyun Sect, concerned for their own safety, ignored Qin Yu and the villagers' pleas for help. Liu Shiyin died a tragic death. Witnessing his beloved's death and the righteousness fac —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 817 Slay the Gods: My Cheat Doesn't Play Fair 斩神:我的外挂不讲武德 [Slay the Gods fanfiction + abstract System draws + hilarious insanity + no angst] After transmigrating into the world of Slay the Gods, Jiang Bufan discovers that his System is a little unhinged. System: In the prehistoric world, you have obtained a Qi Refining technique. Slay the [Ancient Blood Demon] currently sucking blood essence. Good luck! “Huh? System, you’ve got the wrong place, right? This is Slay the Gods! What prehistoric world? Besides, how could a newbie like me beat an Ancient Blo 197Reads—Score—Shelves
- 818 My Rich Young Lady of the Capital 我的京圈大小姐 My Heiress from Beijing’s Elite Circle 314Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Legend of Yu Luo in the Wasteland 羽落天荒传
I was a second-tier lawyer in a second-tier city in southern China. Multiply that across the whole country and I’d be a fourth-tier lawyer. Compared with those who were eighteenth-tier or worse, I’d still done pretty well for myself. Years ago, I played an online game called The World: Great Wilderness. Now the game world has appeared before me, inviting me to return. My first instinct was to refuse. Just because they ask me to play doesn’t mean I will. I had to give it a try. And then, bam, onc
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Ailao Mountain Forbidden Zone: Tracing the Mysterious 哀牢山禁区:诡秘寻踪
My mysterious third granduncle, whom I hadn't seen in eighteen years, left me an inheritance of thirty billion yuan on his deathbed. There was just one condition: I had to enter Ailao Mountain alone, a place known as the "Forbidden Zone for the Living." Everyone says no one ever comes back from there, but my missing parents are in there, too! Is the thirty billion bait, or a ticket in? What secrets lie deep within Ailao Mountain?
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- 821 The Echoes of Order on the Everfrost Plains: The Society of Erudition 永冻冰原的规则回响之博识学会 The Echoing Rules of the Permafrost: The Society of Erudition —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 822 My Wife Wants to Be with Her Lover, So of Course I Wish Them Well. 妻子要和小三在一起,我当然是祝福了。 My wife wants to be with her affair partner, so of course I wish them well. 636Reads—Score—Shelves
- 823 Me, Reborn After the Apocalypse 重生到末日之后的我 [Alternate Setting + Supernatural Powers + No System + Slow Burn] On the day of the apocalypse, Lin Xiao got the truck-reincarnation package deal and arrived in a post-apocalyptic world. Here, people with all kinds of abilities were known as Marked Ones. The strongest among them were powerful enough to stand against entire civilizations. “In just three years, that man nearly wiped out every high-level Marked One in the entire Federation.” “And you…” “I’m like him?” “No. You’re even more special 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Xianran 仙苒
[Slow-burn ordinary mortal cultivation] + [No System, weak golden finger, relying entirely on hard work and cunning] + [Twelve secret realms] Xiao Ran is an utterly ordinary village boy, drawn into the path of immortal cultivation by an old feud. The road to immortality is exceptionally arduous. Just because I don't pick a fight with anyone doesn't mean no one will pick one with me. With a mixed spiritual root, he can only make up for its shortcomings through other means, cultivating the secret
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Deer Ants 鹿角连
[To all the many authors struggling in solitude: Some stories will never exist unless you write them.] [The mecha and giant-monster concepts were inspired by Pacific Rim.] [No System] [No transmigration] [A sweet story in the style of Harry Potter] [Entirely fictional] [No real-world references] [Biography-style] [Slow-paced] [Not a wish-fulfillment novel] The Antler Company (CHY), part of the Empire's Strategic Stability and Strike Corps, is a name that has surfaced time and again in the Empire
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After Being Reborn, I'm Determined to Become a Powerful Woman 重生回来后,这女大佬我当定了
[Reborn + face-slapping + ghost-catching + alchemy + strong female lead + pocket dimension] In her previous life, Zhou Qianning was criticized and slandered endlessly because she wasn't very bright and stuttered. Her closest and most trusted friend had also been secretly sabotaging her for years, before finally pushing her off a waterfall to drown. When she opened her eyes again, she had returned to the very moment she drowned. Best friend, huh? The first thing she did after waking up was beat t
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Was I the Lucky One in the Devil's Hands All Along? 原来我才是恶魔手里的幸运儿?
After a breakup, math student Zhuge Xiaoming wakes up drunk and tumbles into a demonic roulette game where the stakes are money, years of life, and even souls! With outrageously good luck, he wins $620,000 and turns his life around, only to get caught up in the mystery of a life-and-death contract left behind by God, his parents’ affair and a murder case from 20 years ago. He is also hounded by a demon and its Four Heavenly Kings, including a bizarre cross-dresser and a mysterious undercover age
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The Pendulum of Time 时间摆钟
Soft science fiction, an ensemble, multi-perspective episodic novel. Not a wish-fulfillment story. Time is a pendulum that swings eternally, and in every era, someone tries to move its hands. When the light of Beta Orionis suddenly goes out, six young people are unexpectedly drawn into a contest spanning time and space. The mysterious metal fragments they touch are remnants of a “time anchor,” an ancient device that holds the worldlines together. Guided by a clockmaker, they discover that ever
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The Great Dao Prodigy Lao Returns to the Apocalyptic Earth 大道天骄老回末日地球
[Picks up after Chapter 20] As the story goes on, the protagonist becomes less and less human. His true self abandons its humanity to the clone, retaining only its divinity. [Rebel Against Your Master] + [Partly Satisfying, Partly Bittersweet] + [A Touch of Ensemble Cast] + [Decisive and Ruthless] + [Mythic Cultivation] + [Primordial Legends] + [Vast Worldbuilding] “Master, why have you never taught me the Grave Art?” The world contains twenty-one laws, dwelling within the Moon Eyes and the Chao
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- 830 A Love Story in Suzhou 苏州的爱情故事 A Love Story in Suzhou 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Dreams of the Dao 梦修道缘
"An ant crawling out of a heap of corpses will trample the Myriad Worlds!" Ye Qi was born in purgatory and struggled up from the abyss of death. The cold universe, where the strong prey on the weak, became his crucible. Starting from a microscopic universe as tiny as a speck of dust, he tore through dimensions, burned the starry rivers to ash, and climbed to the summit step by step over the corpses of gods and demons. In the end, he transcended existence itself, becoming the "Ultimate Great Univ
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High Seas Survival: I Start with a Ghost Ship 全民大航海,我开局一条幽灵船
The print edition has been signed with a publisher. [Seafaring] [Survival] [Disasters] [Shipbuilding] [Talents] [Cthulhu] [One Female Lead] Everyone transmigrates, and Yang Yi, as a player, is forced to join a game where everyone must survive at sea. Some lucky players get special ships. Like the Iron Will, armed to the teeth. Like the Gale, which rides the wind and waves so fast it's never in sight. Like the Head-On, with its massive ram, charging fearlessly ahead. But Yang Yi's ship is called
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My Readers Span Three Thousand Worlds 我的读者遍布三千世界
[Reborn] [System] [Wish fulfillment] [Face-slapping] [Secret identity] [Everyday life] [No romance] Li Wenshu, a top author in the online fiction world, died suddenly after writing all night. The System sold everything it had to send her back to when she was sixteen. It was an era when neither entertainment nor the internet was very developed. Faced with the three thousand worlds of books in the System’s storage space, Li Wenshu rubbed her chin and sighed, “Dying suddenly was worth it!” A suspe
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Refining the Dust of Immortality 炼仙尘
Tags: [Defying fate | Passionate martial arts | Cycles of destiny | Confidantes] Body cultivation? Slaying immortals? Falling into the mortal world... Born with an ordinary body, he still dares to defy heaven and change his fate! The young Lin Yi is reborn in another world with a mysterious jade pendant, only to find his meridians utterly destroyed and his lifespan nearly exhausted. With no road ahead, he has only one choice: take a path no one has ever walked before, using his body as a furnace
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- 835 They Called Me a Jinx, So I'll Curse Them All to Death 他们说我是灾星,那就克死他们 Reborn noble daughter + rival suitors competing for their moonlight + taming men + master manipulator + control of the whole game + face-slapping and crushing scumbags She had been the most exalted legitimate daughter of the Duke’s mansion. But after her elder brother’s “accidental” death when she was a child, Concubine Liu, her father’s favorite, framed her as a bringer of misfortune, casting her into the mire. Her mother was placed under house arrest, her father treated her like a plague, and 6Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Dawn of the Apostles 使徒之黎明
The cries carved into the scroll come from the land of the Yellow Springs. Beneath the nebula, figures race as they meet one another's gaze across the river of time. Gods are humanity's vision of itself, and madness is coveting the legends.
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The Demon Venerable of the Cultivation World Can't Use Magic! 修仙界的魔尊她不会用魔法啊!
[Powerful Female Lead] [All Male Leads Are Pure] [Everyone Is Smitten with Her] [Magic World] [Over-the-Top Drama] [Feel-Good Power Fantasy] Wen Guyun, the Demon Venerable whose name made the Six Realms tremble, was struck by demonic backlash during the war between immortals and demons, only to have her heart pierced by a single sword strike from the Sword Venerable. She thought her soul would be scattered forever. But when she opened her eyes, she had transmigrated into a world of magic, where
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Grayscale Separation 灰度折离
Right and wrong, black and white, aren't so absolute. The human heart is like mist, and fate like ink, drifting and blending in the play of light and shadow. Mist soaked in ink, ink tinged with white, until the boundaries blur. All that remains are unspeakable creases and an ambiguous aftertaste.
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Soul Reaper: The Hunt 弑魂追猎
[Sword and Sorcery]+ [Revenge]+ [Magic, Fantasy, and Xuanhuan]+ [Demons] Lin Feng lost both his parents to monsters as a child. Eighteen years later, armed with outstanding swordsmanship, he uses a forbidden technique to tear a dragon apart with his bare hands and successfully takes his revenge. But he is tainted by demonic energy and gradually becomes a demon, uncovering an even greater conspiracy... He embarks on a winding journey of fantasy, magic, and adventure, encountering all manner of st
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The Invincible Sun Wukong Who Wreaked Havoc in Heaven 大闹天宫无敌孙悟空
This is the love story of Sun Wukong and Qian Huaxue. Guanyin schemed to make Sun Wukong kill Qian Huaxue. When Sun Wukong finally saw the truth, he wreaked havoc in Heaven! The Tathagata crushed him beneath Five Finger Mountain! But Five Finger Mountain couldn’t hold him down! He hoisted the entire mountain onto his shoulders! Challenge my wild arrogance! Fight my defiant pride!
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From Blind Cat to Rat King: Poison Arrows to Pierce the World 从瞎猫到鼠王:用毒箭射穿全世界
[League of Legends]#EsportsPowerFantasy #HilariousLivestream #ProPlayerComeback #TeammatesThrowEachOtherUnderTheBus #SweetRomanceBetweenEquals A League of Legends livestream and competitive esports story, with a single heroine and sweet romance woven naturally into the plot. It’ll have you laughing till you pound the table, then cheering with excitement! What sparks will fly when the “sewer-rat king” hits the pro scene? Watch Xia Mao, the king of trash talk, turn his bizarre Twitch gameplay from
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The Legend of Kuitian 魁天记
A passionate young man, dreaming of becoming an immortal who soars through the world, never knew his pride would ruin him. His clan vanished, his estate was seized, and from then on he was reduced to scraping by. Then a soft whisper sounded by his ear: the path of cause and effect, unfolding beneath his feet...
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Cultivation, Starting with Saving Chapter Thirty-Six 修仙,从拯救第三十六章开始
The gods demand updates. If I don't write, the heavens will fall. Faced with an apocalypse, this group of gods and great scholars, all of whom have only recently come into being, are giving it everything they've got. "Why does it have to be me? That hack of an author even replaced me as the female lead with Fan Yin. If I transmigrate to demand updates, won't I have even less of a chance?" Fu Wuyou sobbed pitifully, but so far, she was the only one without a teammate. Fan Yin: "Because you're the
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Wife, I'll Never Be a Coward Again! 娘子,我再也不怂了!
[Alternate History] + [Advanced Martial Arts and Political Intrigue] + [Lighthearted Power Fantasy] A 21st-century military academy student does a good deed and accidentally transmigrates into Chen Hongye, a cowardly young scholar who was tossed aside by bandits and left for dead. The Emperor is depraved and tyrannical, and the people are in misery. Every mountain has eight bandit dens, and I was rescued by the Bandit King. Am I really going to become his man in this life? Ruling the roost in th
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There Was Once a Qingyun Temple: The Fallen Heroes' Journey Home 从前有座青云观:英魂归途
In the year 1931 of the Chen calendar, the nation of Xiaori secretly sent yin-yang masters and monks into Longguo society. Disguised as merchants and Buddhist pilgrims, they moved stealthily across the land. They surveyed the ley lines and spiritual energy, quietly severing the fortune of the dragon veins. They also offered ten thousand yin-yang masters and ordinary people in blood sacrifice, staking their own nation’s fortune to win the war. They sought to sever souls and bring down the nation,
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Sis, What Are You Doing? I’m Really Not a Siscon 妹妹你干嘛,哥哥我真不是妹控
[No rebirth] + [No System] + [One heroine] + [Everyday romance] + [Sweet story] (One tag was removed) Once again, let me make this perfectly clear: the male and female leads are not related by blood! A car accident shattered a once-happy family. The girl lost both her parents, spent every day confined to a wheelchair, and never smiled again. Faced with life's hardships, the boy chose to face them head-on and overcome every challenge. As life began to settle down, a smile slowly returned to the g
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Happy Foundation: Don’t Be Greedy, I’m Really Not an Inspector 欢乐基金会:别贪,我真不是纪检
[Original Foundation setting] + [Official site expert] + [Top-tier mind games] + [A little comedy] + [Jaw-dropping twists] P.S. The author knows their stuff. This is a great read, and I guarantee it's the Foundation story most faithful to the official site that you've ever read. Synopsis: At three in the morning, researcher Ji Qiren, a corporate drone, tears into his deputy supervisor and instantly becomes a legend. Then he's kicked straight into corruption-ridden Site-CN-20 to work undercover
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XCOM3: Requiem from Deep Space XCOM3:来自深空的安魂曲
An XCOM fanfic. Any similarities are purely coincidental. After the New Liberation War against the Elders ended, Earth finally found peace. With the United Government established under XCOM's leadership, resistance factions like the Reapers, Skirmishers, and Templars were gradually integrated into the new order. The story seemed to end there, but no one expected the Muton regime's surrender to mark not the beginning of lasting peace, but a thirty-year truce... The Commander will continue leading
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My Stock Trading System Is Connected to the Real World 我的炒股系统连接着现实
Hua Wuchen transmigrated into the cultivation world and awakened a “Stock Trading System.” Other people's Systems gave them cultivation techniques. His could connect to Earth's financial markets in real time. Even more absurdly, the price of spirit stones in the cultivation world moved in perfect sync with lithium futures on Earth. While the entire cultivation world celebrated the discovery of a new spirit vein, Hua Wuchen looked at the System's chart showing lithium prices in free fall and sile
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- 850 Save the World: The Goddess Gave Me a New World 救世,女神给我一个新世界 After transmigrating to an era when cultivation has fallen into decline, I obtain a small world and become a divinely chosen savior. Spiritual energy is scarce, and cultivation is slow? I refine oil into gold, create a mech-based fighting style, and slaughter my way through the enemy! Spirit stones are scarce, so I have to make every one count? I build mech factories in my small world and churn out troops like crazy! The Heavenly Dao is incomplete, making it impossible to become a god? I combine —Reads—Score—Shelves

















































