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I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?

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GPT-6 Luna

I'd like to read something similar to *The Legend of the Dragon King: Misty Clouds Defying Fate*. It's the author's first time writing a story that's over 80,000 words, and now they want to work hard toward 400,000, aiming for that kind of length. They're bored at home after just finishing their first semester of college, and their writing style...

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751 The Immortal of Hogwarts Ever Resentful351k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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A Harry Potter fanfic with a coherent plot and no obvious surprises. It's suitable for those who love watching Harry Potter! The first one is my novel, I beg you readers to take a look at it. If you feel something is obviously toxic, you can comment directly and I will make corrections as soon as possible. Thank you! ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧
752 A System Also Deserves to Bid! I Have Countless of Them! Wave to the Top of the MountainEastern Fantasy93k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I just signed a contract, and I hope my book friends can give me some advice [Sending Hearts]
753 Hiding in Hogwarts as a Professor Just Boil Water1.4M WordsCompleted 34.8kReads9.6Score4kShelves
754 Time and Space Monument Black Hair Breaks the RainUrban130k WordsOngoing 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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The book I have written now has about 100,000 words. Please help me read it and give me your opinions.
755 Harry Potter: This Ravenclaw Is Too Genius Ruichen 34994.3M WordsOngoing 26.3kReads9.4Score2.6kShelves
756 Chinese Education at Hogwarts The Paper Kite Flies in June2.7M WordsOngoing 38.7kReads9.1Score4.2kShelves
757 A Staggered Parallel Line Always Thinking About DreamingUrban349k WordsCompleted 138Reads8.2Score—Shelves
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Written by myself, mutual review + 30 minutes - 1 hour of reading + bookshelf + reminder for updates, come if you want, absolutely honest, 24 hours online, when you finish your book, tell me about your book, I will definitely reply within 24 hours, just a lot more
758 The Demon King Sacrificed Himself to the Three Realms in Order to Pursue His Wife Department of JusticeAncient Romance124k WordsOngoing 20Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Asking someone who is destined to pass by to take a look [blowing kiss]
759 Please Check the Heartbeat Signal No TimeUrban80k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is my own, and the ones that follow are my favorites. You can check them out վ'ᴗ' ի
760 Hogwarts: I Am the Only One Who Is a Cultivator Tomato Fish1.1M WordsCompleted 15.8kReads9.0Score1.8kShelves
761 No One Will Watch! Xue Jiaqiang of Jade Emperor TempleEastern Fantasy48k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Save the children! Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh uh-huh.
762 The Villain Always Wants to Attack Me [Quick Travel] DisasterModern Romance472k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Can someone come and take a look? It's so boring and lonely to code alone. It can be any comment, just let me know that someone can read it [crying][crying][crying][crying]
763 Seven Chapters of Love Coffin: Who Will Die While Laughing? Ink Becomes Lighter30k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Leave a review for this book, it's a good book [Blowing a Kiss]
764 The Cannon Fodder of the Record of the World Has a Highlight Moment Ink Becomes LighterAncient Romance497k WordsCompleted 3Reads7.2Score—Shelves
765 Sign in Netherworld: the Man Behind the Scenes Weiyou Asked the WoodcutterEastern Fantasy1.3M WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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New book recommendations, welcome to taste! [Ask for attention][Ask for attention]
766 X Adventure Record Call Me RabbitMystery208k WordsCompleted 10Reads6.4Score—Shelves
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Please review. I just signed a contract and it only has 60,000 words. It is not a cool article. The supporting characters are not just decorations, each has its own arc.
767 Being Bullied at School, I Became a Magical Girl BaixiaohuaModern Romance307k WordsCompleted 19Reads—Score—Shelves
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There is no problem with the package
768 The Doctor's Concubine Surprised the Tang Dynasty: Doctors Step by Step in the Splendid Palace Yu RongAncient Romance314k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Thinking][thinking]
769 There Are No Green Mountains Anywhere in This Place Weiyou Asked the WoodcutterUrban264k WordsCompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
770 Evil Spirits Invading? Send It to Yun Chang While It's Still Hot! Evil Little StrategistUrban87k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Try it again, no bitterness, no deep hatred, easy blood, high martial arts abilities
771 I Turned Out to Be the Weird BOOS in the Thriller Copy Caught a FishMystery126k WordsCompleted 219Reads—Score—Shelves
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I wrote it myself, no one reads it [crying]
772 Dressed as a Parrot, I Became the Group's Pet After Escaping from Prison The Fish Won't Eat MeowModern Romance119k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I have just finished writing more than 90,000 words, please give me a review, even negative reviews are fine. I am writing a time travel novel which is relatively slow to get started with. It is recommended to start reading from Chapter 55. The follow-up will be more interesting, but it is just average for the time being. There will be fantasy and other things in the follow-up and sweet CP.
773 Lily of the Gloria! Crocodile StudentModern Romance40k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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The new book recommendation is fun and exciting. I hope to meet readers who understand her.
774 Xinyu Business District Weiyou Asked the Woodcutter45k WordsCompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
775 Meteor Domain Ong LinUrban450k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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First book at 20 years old
776 Let Me Embrace You Through a Dream LL LambModern Romance80k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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80,000 Word book
777 Cultivation! I Can't Die Anyway! Original Coke with Ice18k WordsCompleted —Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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It's so funny, the cold-hearted senior sister was actually taken down by a cup of milk tea
778 The Soul Travels Through Eternity, I Rely on Modern Thinking to Rebuild the Country Liu YishisanHistorical479k WordsOngoing 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is written by me, and the fourth one is also a short story written by me. The two middle ones are my favorites. They are listed in no particular order. You are welcome to give me guidance and you will definitely reply if you comment on each other.
779 Mechanical Strange Stories Seven Cold Return StarUrban272k WordsOngoing 7Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I beg you guys, please save the child [crying]
780 The Earth Is Out of Control, I Built a Paradise to Avoid Disasters and Famines Left La LaSci-Fi & Apocalypse313k WordsOngoing 17Reads—Score—Shelves
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Group Portraits of the End of the World, please review
781 After Dawn Happy Land Earth Earth EarthEastern Fantasy381k WordsOngoing 605Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Let's talk about it, thank you
782 With the Farm Space, I Have No Spiritual Roots and Enter the World of Cultivation Mountains and Seas14k WordsCompleted 3Reads8.6Score—Shelves
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Newbie, please give me some advice!
783 Algorithms Are Also Laws, and AI Will Accompany Me on My Path to Immortality. Bodhidharma PatriarchEastern Fantasy113k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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I recommend a new book that introduces AI to help cultivate immortality. The subject matter is good and the content is novel. You are welcome to read it.
784 Rebirth of the Ming Dynasty as a Tyrant Painting LingyanHistorical3.3M WordsCompleted 19.4kReads9.0Score1.5kShelves
785 Strategy for Me? You'd Better Be Killed by Me! The Unruly Young KingFantastical Romance287k WordsOngoing 110Reads—Score—Shelves
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It's written very carefully. It's a very interesting book. It's a novel combination of magic and cyber world.
786 Three Sword Sect: I Am Senior Brother Renjianfeng Mountains and Seas15k WordsCompleted —Reads8.5Score—Shelves
787 I Will Be a Tyrant in Ming Dynasty Painting LingyanHistorical2.5M WordsCompleted 6.1kReads8.9Score357Shelves
788 Breaking the Situation: Another Possibility for Shu Han Dye SomeoneHistorical386k WordsCompleted 11Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I wrote both books. "Broken Game: Another Possibility of Shu Han": An in-depth deduction to construct a strategic break in the cracks of history. When the posthumous title of "Dedicate yourself to death and die" became a footnote to the tragic end of the Shu Han regime, and when the banner of "Reviving the Han Dynasty" sadly fell in the autumn wind of the original five feet, Three Kingdoms enthusiasts never stopped sighing at this regime. The emergence of "Breaking the Game: Another Possibility of the Shu Han" is like a sharp blade, taking 219 AD as the anchor point, tearing open the inherent cracks in the historical narrative, and leading readers to explore the strategic opportunities of the Shu Han under the cover of fate. Different from the fatalistic interpretation of the "innate deficiencies" of the Shu Han in traditional history books, the author of this book abandons the empty talk of "hindsight" and uses rigorous historical data as the basis to restore the complex situation before the loss of Jingzhou. Focusing on the three key clues of Guan Yu's Northern Expedition, Liu Feng Mengda's defense of Shangyong, and Liu Bei's main deployment, the potential variables of Shu Han's military dispatch, diplomatic game, and internal coordination are analyzed layer by layer. It is not a simple assumption "if Guan Yu does not go to the Northern Expedition", but an in-depth discussion of feasible strategic fine-tuning such as "adjustment of the rhythm of the Northern Expedition" and "closer linkage between the east and west lines", so that "another possibility" can break away from fantasy and be supported by historical logic. The book's questioning of the nature of "breaking the situation" is particularly moving: the Shu Han's dilemma is not only geographically "trapped in Bashu", but also the limitation of strategic vision. The analysis of Liu Bei's group's "emphasis on friendship and neglect of the overall situation" and "emphasis on military achievements and neglect of overall planning" goes beyond the praise and criticism of individual figures and points directly to the shortcomings of the top-level design of the regime. When readers follow the text to deduce the chain reaction of "seizing the opportunity of 219", they will see not only the possibility of rewriting the pattern of the Three Kingdoms, but also a clear understanding of the deep logic of "historical choice". As a historical strategy work with great depth and logic, it has distinctive characteristics and unique market positioning. Although its audience is relatively small, it is a rare masterpiece for readers who are keen on historical deduction and strategic analysis. The story is logically deduced, and everything from strategic goals to implementation paths to possible reactions of opponents has been carefully analyzed and verified. This strong logic gives the story a high degree of credibility and persuasiveness. It is neither a traditional "historical novel" because it incorporates a large number of strategic deductions and assumptions; nor does it fit the entertainment characteristics of "shuangwen" or "fantasy novel". Its positioning is closer to "historical strategy writing". It is a niche but very in-depth genre, which combines the depth of historical writing with the depth of strategic games. Closing the page and looking at the shadowy cypresses of Wuhou Temple, the reader's dialectical thinking about "general trend" and "man-made" will also deepen. This book may not be able to change the ending of history, but it opens a new door for us, giving the story of the tragic Shu Han a more profound and interesting interpretation.
789 From the Three Kingdoms to the World Dye SomeoneHistorical151k WordsCompleted 5Reads—Score—Shelves
790 Legacy of the Herald 2 Fire Moth PluckSci-Fi & Apocalypse192k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Look at mine [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]
791 I Work as a Security Guard in Heaven: I Am the Only One Who Has the Final Say in Becoming a God Show SafetyUrban98k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Everyone can recommend each other.
792 After Agreeing to Fall in Love, Professor Gao Leng's Character Collapsed Online Liu YishisanModern Romance40k WordsCompleted 1Reads8.4Score—Shelves
793 Single Peak Prince Heng YueEastern Fantasy222k WordsOngoing 3Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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When I mentioned 80,000 yuan, my heart was broken and I had no reaction at all.
794 Legacy of the Herald 1 Broken Prism PluckUrban348k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
795 Ascension to the Mortal Realm Xiaohei Is a Pastry ConnoisseurCultivation88k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please read it, readers
796 Yue Huayin Starry Sky Coffee CupAncient Romance471k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newbie is checking in. I wrote both books. "Moon Flower Song" is currently being serialized, and "Nuomi Diary" has been completed. You are welcome to give me your advice [laughing]
797 Hehehehe, I Found a Wife Lecino195k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I wrote it. Please read it and evaluate it.
798 Nuomi Diary Starry Sky Coffee CupModern Romance166k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
799 There's Nothing a Meal Can't Fix Billions of Repair CatsAncient Romance132k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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[Crying][Crying][Crying] Who reads my article on cultivating immortality?
800 I Will Build a House, Why Are You Jealous? Call Me MasterUrban95k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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I feel like this book is going to explode [face covering]