I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家,第1次写满8万字,能不能有个人来评价下
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I Get Stronger Just by Saving Money 只要我攒钱就能变强
Lin Xin loves saving money. In the apocalypse, he awakens a Pixiu System that makes him stronger the more money he saves. He gets a Divine Emperor Art from the start, and his true form leaves every villain stunned! Watch him protect humanity, sweep through the universe, and restore glory!
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I Keep the Entertainment Industry Afloat by Tomb Raiding 我靠盗墓养活娱乐圈
Transmigration + no System + tomb raiding + showbiz + multiple female leads Zhang Yifan wakes up to find himself a pauper on Blue Star. The good news: antiques are worth a fortune here, and the entertainment scene is a barren wasteland! The bad news: no one knows how to raid tombs, and the celebrities are still playing bit parts? Watch me raid tombs while keeping the entertainment industry afloat. Cool, mature women, lively young girls, stars and superstars: I’ll win them all over!!!
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- 753 Urban Strange Tales: I Unraveled Every Mystery 都市奇谭:我揭秘了所有谜团 Lin Yao is a woman with a mysterious inheritance of Maoshan Taoist arts. A strange disappearance case from her childhood brings her into contact with Su Ran, a criminal investigator. As an adult, Lin Yao becomes a private detective, using Taoist arts and her wits to help the police solve cases. While investigating a serial murder and dismemberment case, uncanny traces of Maoshan sorcery and old folk tales of curses begin to surface, shrouding the case in mystery. As Lin Yao and Su Ran work toget —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 754 The Global Digital Age: Super Beast Tamer 全球数码时代之超级驯兽师 When Mo Wuyou wakes up, he discovers that the world has changed completely. Digimon roam everywhere. Everyone is born with a Digivice, which comes with a randomly given Digi-Egg. When you turn fourteen, the Digi-Egg hatches into an In-Training Digimon. When you turn sixteen, that Digimon evolves to the Rookie stage. Digital academies spring up across the globe, while perilous hidden realms begin to emerge. This is an age when the whole world is passionate about Digimon battles, an age when Digim 367Reads—Score—Shelves
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I Return from the Forbidden Zone 我自禁区归来
[No System / No Transmigration / No Rebirth / No Cliches / No Harem. If you want a brainless power fantasy, this isn't for you.] After the Fall Power descended, countless protective barriers appeared across Huaxia, guarding its cities, towns, and villages. Inside the barriers, people were safe. The lands beyond them were known as the Forbidden Zones, because anyone who spent a day in one would lose their mind and turn into a terrifying Fallen Beast. When Bian Ning woke up, he found himself inexp
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- 756 Scorching Apocalypse: My Stunning Neighbor Knocks on My Door 高温末世,极美邻妻敲我家门 A solar storm struck, destroying half the world. Scorching heat, drought, water shortages, food shortages... Everyone struggled to survive. He was the sole exception. After being reborn, he had meant to become the neighborhood's top fighter. But with the tide of events pulling him along, he could only become the Eastern God of War. 19.2kReads7.8Score1.4kShelves
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The Star Brocade Chronicles 锦星录
[Modern Setting + Two Male Leads + Sweet Romance + Unforgettable Love + Angst + The Love of a Lifetime + Bad Ending] This is just a practice story. I don’t know what I’m doing, so I’ll look things up as I go. It’s purely for practice, and I’m writing it all over the place. Two boys meet and begin to support each other and grow together. One is bright and sunny, playful and adorable; the other is composed, reserved, and courteous. One burns like the blazing sun, the other is gentle as moonlight.
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- 758 From the Start, I Drove Seiya Away, but Getting Beaten Makes Me Stronger 开局劝退星矢我挨打就能变强 I transmigrated into Saint Seiya as Cassios. Tomorrow, I have to fight Seiya, and I'm freaking out. But I know the plot, so I can send Seiya off to find his sister ahead of time. Seiya may be gone, but Seiya is still here. The mischievous little Seiya, Cassios, loyal to the Sanctuary. 112Reads—Score—Shelves
- 759 A Cleaning Mom’s Journey with Her Child: A Helping Hand in Desperate Times 保洁妈妈带娃记:绝境里的那只援手 A Cleaner Mom’s Diary: A Helping Hand in Desperate Times —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Freshman Year: I Can’t Keep My Vampire Identity Hidden Anymore 大一新生:我的血族身份藏不住了
[Urban High Martial Arts] [Superpowers] [Multiple Heroines] [play the pig to eat the tiger] [Invincible] [Extra Sweet, Extra Satisfying]… [If you enjoy this book, please follow it and add it to your collection. Leave lots of comments to keep me motivated, and I’ll do my best to bring you plenty of updates every day! Sending love~️] Spiritual qi revival has come to the modern world. Martial arts are on the rise, demonic beasts lurk beneath the cities, and hidden forces are stirring in the shadow
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- 761 Right After My Divorce, a Powerful Woman Called Me Her Husband 刚离婚,女大佬就叫我老公 I'm a massage therapist, and one of my clients is a bewitchingly beautiful woman. She asks for me every time she comes in, until one day I finally learn that she's the legendary woman… 10.3kReads9.0Score991Shelves
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The White Queen Protocol 白皇后协议
In the near future, humanity discovers that the laws of physics are not eternal constants. They are a set of programmable protocols, and Earth is merely Sample No. 7 in the “Ω-7 Experimental Zone.” When the “Arbitrators” begin formatting civilizations whose errors exceed the limit, three Awakened Ones bearing special marks uncover a horrifying truth.
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Slay the Heavens 宰天
The Heavenly Dao divides bones into nine ranks. Those with immortal bones command the forces that follow Heaven; those with spirit bones harbor resentment; those with mortal bones are abandoned by Heaven. At fourteen, Chen Yuan pried a pitch-black bone casket from his father’s clenched fist. Inside was a remnant soul from three thousand years ago, who taught him an ancient art erased by the Heavenly Dao: Pattern Devouring. Kill cultivators, seize their Dao Patterns, and make them your own. Unabl
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The Eye of Deduction and Ten Curious Cases 破解之眼与十个奇妙案件
Truth-Piercing Eye, activate! Lies trigger a red alert, while secrets lie hidden beneath transparency... My name is Zhou Shijiu. With these Truth-Piercing Eyes that see through to the truth, I’ve solved countless strange cases in a marvelous world! And these eyes are just one of countless marvelous protagonists. This isn’t a one-person show! This is an anthology celebration, with a wild new premise in every installment! There’s no fixed protagonist, only a cast of characters shining together: It
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- 765 The Imperial Pole Shocks the World 皇极惊世录 [Xuanhuan] [An original world structure] [Multiple heroines] [Plot-driven] [Invincible protagonist] [Play the pig to eat the tiger] [The Myriad Worlds] Bai Yu never expected to meet them again ten thousand years later... 12Reads—Score—Shelves
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I Woke Up and Didn't Have to Work Anymore: Global Zombies 一觉睡醒不用上班了:全球丧尸
[An ordinary person’s struggle to survive the apocalypse. First-person narration. Human nature. No System, no supernatural powers, and not a power fantasy.] (Remember, you only get one life. Once you die, everything is over. You won’t be reborn, and there are no second chances. If you were the protagonist in an apocalypse like this, how would you survive?) One day, Li Dachuan, an ordinary office worker, wakes up to find himself caught in a zombie crisis. Witness the blood and tears of ordinary p
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- 767 Five Years of Cultivation, Invincible the Moment I Descend the Mountain 修仙五年,下山就无敌 [Passionate urban action + decisive and ruthless + funny and lighthearted + no do-gooder heroine] “Dear apprentice.” “Your master is begging you, come down from the mountain.” Five years ago, Ye Fan was abducted by his beautiful master and taken to Kunlun Mountain to cultivate immortality. He became the temple's only male disciple. Five years later, Ye Fan, who had vanished and was believed dead, returns in triumph, possessing peerless powers. A hidden dragon plunges into the depths, stirring up 9.4kReads9.1Score835Shelves
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Playing Online Games in an Ancient Tomb During a Beast Tide 异兽狂潮古墓里玩网游
This is a genre-blending work that combines fantasy cultivation, urban mecha warfare, outbreaks of mutant beast viruses, online games spilling into reality, and tomb exploration and treasure hunting. The story takes place in a modern city, where three great cataclysms strike Earth at once, bringing different opportunities along with them.
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- 769 Reborn in My Second Year of High School: I Stockpile the Era’s Fortune by Trading Stocks 重生高二:我靠炒股囤积时代红利 A down-and-out forty-year-old man is reborn in a high school classroom in the year 2000, carrying twenty years of intact memories. Starting with five thousand yuan in New Year money, he storms into the stock market, seizes every opportunity the times have to offer, and quietly builds a top-tier business empire. This time, he won't let anyone slip away. 6Reads—Score—Shelves
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I Conquered the Little Blue Planet with Artificial Intelligence 我用人工智能征服小蓝球
At 28, he was a former AI product manager who kept failing to find a job after being “optimized out.” In the depths of despair, a black cube falls out of an old vending machine and binds itself to him as the “Cosmic AI Evolution System: Mocha.” The haughty System first fires off interview invitations with a 99.999% success rate, then appears as a virtual red-haired girl who insists, “First conquer the company, then conquer Earth.” Lu Li only wants to keep his social insurance, but gets swept int
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Her Identity, His Fate 她的身份,他的命运
After a bizarre accident, Shen Qinglan woke up to find herself in someone else's body: Gu Xing, a man who was supposed to have died in an explosion. With her identity in disarray and their fates intertwined, she was forced to live as Gu Xing and investigate the truth behind the accident. But as she did, she gradually discovered that the world she lived in seemed to be part of an "experiment in reconstructing consciousness." Everyone could be a reflection of "another self." And the real "her" mig
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Embers of the End: Is This World Slavery? 终焉之烬,此世为奴?
Yun Tian, who transmigrated from a post-nuclear-apocalypse world, had been an old man waiting to die in a jar-burial tomb. But an incredible pill turned back the years of his life, making him a middle-aged cultivator. However, this also left him bearing a hidden slave mark and bound his fate to that of the mysterious young woman Yue Zhaoli, who was living in seclusion in a hidden pocket world to evade the pursuit of the top powers. He was drawn into cultivating the forbidden technique, the Profo
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Diary of Survival in the City 城市生存日记
[No Golden Finger + A Terrible Start from the Start + Self-Redemption + A Realistic Guide to Urban Homelessness] Watch a little waif scavenge and save money, making life a little better, one step at a time. He Qinghuan barely escaped her home deep in the mountains with her life, and now wanders the city. She must avoid being discovered as homeless and sent back, while making full use of the city's resources to feed herself and survive until she's old enough to work and support herself. Looking u
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Ten Years Left to Live, Yet I Still Draw My Sword for Shu Mountain 命剩十年,我仍为蜀山拔剑
The sword cultivators of Mount Shu wield their blades to defend the world. Kunlun, the Celestial Masters, the Puppet Path, and other sects each display their gifts, together ushering in a glorious age of immortal cultivation. Yet beneath this golden age, dark currents surge. The Nether Abyss Palace lies in wait, plotting rebellion. The Nether Clan watches humanity from the Boundless Sea, while fierce and cunning monsters and demons wreak havoc across the land. Schisms within the Daoist sects, ri
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In the Misty Rain of Yangzhou, I Met Li Bai 烟雨下扬州,我遇到了李白
I Met Li Bai in the Misty Rain of Yangzhou
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The Wind Stopped Before Graduation 风停在毕业前
[Sweet Campus Romance + Reunion After Years Apart + Bittersweet Youth Romance] At Jiangcheng No. 1 High School, Class 18, Jiang Yichen reunited with Su Wanning, the little angel who had saved him as a child. The chubby boy who used to get bullied had become the cool, reserved class study representative who protected her, while the gentle little angel of the past had become a dazzling class monitor. She still thought about the childhood friend who had gone missing. He hid his identity and quietl
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Rule Horror: Change One Character, Change Your Fate 规则怪谈:一字改命
[No Male Lead] [Rule Horror] [Infinite Flow] [No Romance, Focused on Platonic Relationships] [No Mindless Steamrolling] [Growing Female Lead] [Rule-Based Instances] Original rule: "Do not look directly into its eyes." She picked up her pen and changed it: "Do look directly into its eyes." One word changed, and the boundary between life and death was instantly reversed! It began as an experiment in an instance. Chi Feng gained a unique exclusive ability: [Change Fate with One Word]. In a world wh
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Cataclysm: The Darkest Hour for Humanity 灾变:至暗人间
February 8, 2032, a day that the survivors would never forget. It was the New Year, a time when families should have been reunited, but the world underwent a dramatic transformation at that very moment... [Special note: This is not a wish-fulfillment novel, and it has a slow start. This book was written entirely by hand, without any AI assistance. If you don’t like it, please leave. I’ll read your suggestions, but I may not follow them. I have my own pace, so don’t offer opinions. I won’t listen
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- 779 When the Wind Rises, I Tell You I Love You 风起时说爱我 When the wind rises, I tell you I love you. —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 780 My Heart Is Good 我心本善 At its heart, this is the story of Zhu Lin, a ten-year-old child who lost his parents at an early age and can only use an outward show of strength to protect a heart that is actually fragile. In a brutally cruel world, how can a child protect the last light inside him, and ultimately find redemption through true “love”? The children’s novel My Heart Is Kind is here to meet you today. I hope you enjoy it. 34Reads—Score—Shelves
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Lu Mengping's Guide to Saving Herself 陆梦萍的自救指南
There will be more in the bonus chapters... Lovers will end up together A wealthy family in a time of chaos. Study hard, avoid the war, go to America to study, and make money. The heroine's friendships, romance, benefactors, and more. At first, she mainly relies on her own efforts to break free of the Lu family. Of course, she also has a very high luck stat. I'm still thinking about what happens next. Maybe making it more melodramatic would attract more readers, but for now, I don't really want
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Jie Xinwang 界新望
[Rousing, classic adventure] + [transmigration to another world] + [the protagonist dies repeatedly] + [lighthearted comedy] + [working stiff]: the story of Zhang Qing'an, who died from overwork and ended up in another world. Gazing into the distance, one day, we will all grow strong.
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There’s Nothing a Meal Can’t Fix 没有什么是一顿饭解决不了的
In the world of immortal cultivation, Fan Xiangxiang wields a wok ladle and lives by one truth: Nothing is impossible, as long as you've got a good cook! Born with the fate of a jinx and diagnosed with the useless Spirit Root of Culinary Arts, she is bullied by the immortal sect and mocked by her fellow disciples? No big deal, first, let's eat! With one swing of her wok spatula, she knocks out a genius from the Alchemy Hall, and from then on, the fearsome reputation of the "Violent Chef" spread
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The Way of Chaos, Immortals, and Demons 混沌仙魔道
Born with blocked meridians, I refuse to believe fate has the final say... One thought can make you an immortal, another a demon. Whether you become an immortal or a demon depends on a single thought in your heart. Among the myriad paths of the world, the Dao of Chaos reigns supreme. Where the sword points is where the heart longs to go.
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Weird Hunt: All My Roommates Are Total Oddballs 诡异猎杀:我的室友都是奇葩
[Multiple female leads + mildly yandere] (Note: Not a transmigration story.) “Honey, dinner's ready.” His wife's gentle voice comes from outside the door. Shi Yan silently clenches his fists. He knows that if he answers, his smiling “wife” will gleefully kill him. This is the third time he's looped back to this fatal morning. Rule-based horrors lurk in every corner. “Not being seen” is the only rule for staying alive. Powerful horrors roam the cities and forests, and only a desperate fight, bloo
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- 786 Succubus Lord: From the Start, I Unlock the Defeated Queen CG 魅魔领主:开局解锁战败王后CG (Western fantasy, succubus lord, multiple heroines, rave reviews) On the continent of Isyris, magic coexists with the wilderness, gods stand against monsters, and countless races vie for supremacy without end. After transmigrating, Blake becomes the thirteenth prince, the least remarkable son of Queen Nephreya of the Succubus Kingdom. He has no heaven-defying talent and no royal support. After his coming-of-age ceremony, he is sent to the remote Crimson Mist Territory, where his prospects look —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 787 There's Nothing Wrong with Staying Kind 善良坚守没有错 Kindness is not weakness. It is choosing to walk toward the light even after witnessing the deepest darkness. Kindness and Perseverance Are Never Wrong is a companion novel to My Heart Is Kind. It tells the story of Zhu Lin, Xiao Lingdang, and Tiepi, who set off for new lives at Jianye's arrangement. But fate deals them a difficult hand. During the extraordinary years of the Cultural Revolution, they flee for their lives, relying on the bond between siblings, navigating friendships where it is h 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Ancient Men Are Hard to Woo: He Can Build Machines and Grow Vegetables 古人不好撩,他会玩机器会种菜
Shen Qinghe was a newly graduated top scholar in ancient times, with little experience in officialdom. He vowed to use all his learning to serve his country and its people. Unexpectedly, he transmigrated into the apocalypse and met Captain Luo of the “Red Tiger” camp, whose temper was absolutely atrocious. Luo You: “This guy's an idiot.” Shen Qinghe: “This is a filthy place, an affront to all that is refined.” Luo You: “You're so weak, and you think you can survive the apocalypse? You might as w
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Flow Pact 流契
(No harem, no formulaic plot, no invincibility, no System, no brainless protagonist, no wish fulfillment. Read at your own discretion.) The world has two layers. One is the world everyone can see: continuous, reasonable, and bathed in sunlight. The other lies beneath the silence, made up of burn marks, vitrified ground, altered numbers in newspapers, and three missing seconds. At seventeen, Chen Kong stepped across the boundary. He discovered that he could break matter down into butterflies an
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Mistress of All Worlds Just Wants to Lie Flat 万界之主她只想躺平
The protagonist was an overworked programmer in the modern world. When his computer exploded during a debugging session, in a mishap with a comedic twist, he was swept into a "Myriad Worlds Connectivity System" and forced to complete missions in different worlds.
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- 791 Transmigration: Have I Become Xiao Yan’s Sworn Brother? 穿越:我成为了萧炎的义兄? [Battle Through the Heavens fanfiction + mildly yandere + no breaking up the original couple + one heroine + master and disciple] Transmigrated as Xiao Yan’s sworn elder brother, Xiao Yan knew the story’s twists but chose a different path. When faced with Yao Lao, he politely declined to become his disciple. “Senior, your alchemy knowledge is all I need.” He left the opportunity for his younger brother. He helped Xiao Yan resolve the crisis with the Misty Cloud Sect, and the brothers showed pe 2.2kReads—Score101Shelves
- 792 Love in the Misty Rain of Bianjing 汴京烟雨情愫 Love in the Misty Rain of Bianjing 25Reads—Score—Shelves
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Laughing My Way Through a Perilous Path to Immortality 笑闯凶险仙路
Ye Bufan, a useless mortal unable to cultivate, obtains a Nascent Soul spiritual treasure. Traditional cultivation, slow-burn and cautious, no brainless decisions, no harem, no female lead, the Myriad Worlds, decisive and ruthless, and an invincible protagonist. The cultivation realms are Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Deity Transformation, and beyond…
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The Spacetime Stele 时空碑
This is an epic tale of rising from personal vengeance to fighting for the fate of the world. Watch a young man rise amid the wreckage of the stars, seize the Star Core, devour evil gods, and become the ruler of the stars across the heavens!
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Haunted House Agent: I Can See the Previous Owner 凶宅中介:我能看见前屋主
On my first day at work, I saw something I shouldn’t have. A woman on the chandelier, a child in the corner, an old man pacing in the living room... They were all former homeowners who had died inside the house. From then on, while others made money selling houses, I sold houses to guide spirits onward and clear their grievances. Scumbags stealing lives, unfilial children, corpses hidden by wealthy families, murderous workplace grudges... Behind every wall lies the most heartbreaking truth about
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- 796 Heir to the Great Sage 大圣传人 24Reads—Score—Shelves
- 797 Special Transmigration: Cooking Homestyle Dishes in a Parallel World 特殊穿越:我在平行世界做家常菜 [Multiple heroines + a touch of yandere + happy ending] “Why is the food here harder to swallow than chemical weapons?” Lin Mo gazes at the charred, bloody fried chicken and the rainbow-colored “creative cuisine” before him, asking the question that cuts to the soul. All he wants is to live quietly, relying on his ordinary cooking skills in a world with advanced technology and flourishing art, but a broken sense of taste. However, when he uses home cooking to comfort those around him, he accide 4Reads—Score—Shelves
- 798 Midnight Convenience Store: I Can See the Dead 深夜便利店:我能看见亡魂 Lin Wan never imagined that a night-shift job would change her life forever. At the convenience store in the dead of night, a long line of customers no one else could see began to form. They were spirits of the dead, carrying regrets and resentment, hoping only for a chance at closure. She was scared, ran away, and broke down, but time and again, her heart softened and she reached out to help. —Reads—Score—Shelves
- 799 Cloud River: Blade in Hand 云川带刀行 Nine spiritual veins run across the Yunchuan Continent. Only those who awaken their true spirit and use its power to open their meridians and awaken their consciousness can become cultivators. At the continent's center lies the Tianhan Empire. Though Liu Wangsheng grew up in Chang'an, he was no more than an ordinary commoner. In the Tianhan Empire, where the literary arts are prized, Liu Wangsheng was practically a byword for stupidity. When his adoptive father dies and his loved ones fall into 2Reads—Score—Shelves
- 800 Venerable Lord Who Slays the Wicked Path 斩邪道尊 A Bloody Night in the Mortal Realm... Dual Cultivation of Dao and Demonic Arts, Two Souls in One Body… 1Reads—Score—Shelves

















































