A Passerby Who Died Early? the Number One in Alchemy Is so Crazy That He Kills

Teacher! Look at this! Here! ! ! Oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Slaps belly)oi ! Oi ! Oi ! (Punches belly) Ahem, the novel is very good.

It's very beautiful, my wife is beautiful, and the writing is very good. Zhaoming Changning, returning to the scorching sun "Ye Wuhen, give you the Taoist name 'Zhaoming'——" The golden talisman turned into the image of the sun and the moon and sunk into his eyebrows, "I hope you will shine like the sun and the moon, clear and dustless." "Ling Shuanghua, gave you the Taoist name 'Chang Ning'——" The symbol depicts a scene of a long river flowing into the sea, "May you be as long as the river and as peaceful as the sky." "Cang Wuya, give you the Taoist title 'Guihe'——" Amid the sound of cranes chirping in the sky, the frost fades away, "I hope your crane will return to the clouds and your past will be gone." The last golden talisman turned into a prairie fire in front of Feng Zhuo. "Feng Zhuo, give me the Taoist name 'Zhuoyang'——" Yun Xiaozi's eyes flashed with joy, "I hope you will shine like the blazing sun and shine like the red sun."

The writing is very good [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Zhuo Zhuo kills decisively, and does not fear the protagonist just because he is cannon fodder. He still maintains his usual high-spiritedness, and even regards his confrontation with the protagonist of the original text as his own battle with fate, and does not lose himself in hatred. I like it so much [shy][shy] I must keep going [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The plot is very good. It is also a rare anti-system article. If the protagonist is very happy in this life, he will not suffer any loss. The emotional scenes were very stable and smooth. It's a pity that although it is a story about two men and two strong men, there is less description of the attack and force. Basically, the protagonist is fighting. Even though he is attacking, the focus is still on the protagonist. Several times I wondered if Gong was still there and why I hadn't seen him take action. . Moreover, the protagonist is a third-level alchemy sword cultivator and is assisted by a strange fire beast spirit plant. Gong is just a pure sword cultivator. This does not even describe Gong's combat effectiveness. I feel that Gong is a bit of a vase. Only when he occasionally mentions his level of cultivation and swordsmanship can he realize that he is strong. In short, the overall feeling of readers so far is that the protagonist is a bit weak compared to the attacker who has much stronger attacks. . .

I am a controlled plus protagonist controller, and this book really won my heart. [Admiration] I really like this book. It is very big and lively. Zhuo Zhuo's character design is also very good, and the candies given out with my little senior brother are also very sweet [cool]

Nice. (Although this sentence is only two short words, it reveals a hint of coldness and casual calmness, which complements my bohemian figure. The polite and distant period at the end appropriately shows my noble and elegant temperament. T You are as bright as a jade tree. You are as beautiful as the wind. You are unique. You are as gentle as a jade. My mood is chaotic. You are beautiful in the prosperous age. You are handsome and do evil. You have textbook-level beauty. Your face has been kissed by an angel. You are really a jade tree. You are in the wind. You are handsome and graceful. Her face is as clear-cut as a crown jade tree facing the wind, showing an angular and cold handsomeness; the deep black eyes are full of charming color; the thick eyebrows and the beautiful lip shape all express nobility and elegance)

It's a very good novel, written in a very interesting way, and very cute. But I don't know what's wrong with the people who read novels in this world. Some people are inexplicably making irresponsible remarks about the protagonist. They also say that Zhuo Zhuo has a low IQ and is still stupid even after being reborn. I haven't seen how high your IQ is. He just knows a little about the plot. He's just an outsider, and he's just talking to others. Those who are judgmental, read the author's books and don't respect the characters written by them. If you think this is not good, you can do it. If you can't do it, don't comment on others. If you don't like it, just leave the upper left corner of the novel. No one forces you to read it. You have to use your noble brains to criticize others [awkward laugh] I highly recommend this novel. It's so good. The big brother's transformed little wolf is also very cute. I just feel like the Xuanqiong Continent is really going to be cut through a sieve. In the end, Guiyang Zhuhe 99 [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

It's really, really good-looking. The characters are very delicately drawn. The relationship between Zhuo Zhuo and his little senior brother is also well-developed. Their relatives and friends each have their own personalities. Of course, the career line has not fallen behind, and everyone is constantly working hard and making progress. I declare that I am a loyal fan of this book [blowing kiss] After reading it, I'm going to review it. This book didn't make any sense to me. It was completely dancing on my XP [laughing]. However, there are a few things I can say: 1. If you don't like the deputy CP, you can rush here. No more than one hand appears in the full text, including two sets of parents, and another pair that is reprinted at the very end of the full text, but the length is very short, so there is no need to worry. 2. If you like looking at group portraits, this book is okay. The people who appear in the article have their own characters and are the protagonists of their own lives. Everyone has flesh and blood, and you can see their growth and changes. But! After all, this is not a special group portrait article, so it can't have too high requirements. If you don't like reading it, just quit. Don't look for presence in the comments to disturb people's mood. The author's writing style is very unobtrusive, feel free to read it [Like] 3. This book is purely sweet and non-abusive throughout. Those who like to read cookies are in luck [laughing]. However, there is a little bit of abuse in the opening chapter about Zhuo Zhuo's previous life, but don't worry, it's only there. The sweetness ∞ follows [Adoration] 4. The emotional line of this book is relatively slow, and it is a long-term flow type. It is a natural process for two people to be together. But for people who like love at first sight and home-invasion-robbery love, the emotional line may be very slow. But believe me, after we got together, we were so sweet. Before we got together, we were very clingy, but we didn't have the affinity and double cultivation. Before we got together, they were just being lazy and uncomfortable [laughing] 5. The protagonist of this book can be said to be a bamboo horse + a development system. Don't miss it if your family likes this genre. Although they only lived together when they were teenagers, their years have been infinite, so it's okay to say they are sweethearts😄 6. The characters of the two protagonists are also very good. Zhuo Zhuo is like a little arrogant, not easily knocked down, tough and sometimes a bit naughty little Phoenix. According to the little senior brother, he is a slanderous but gentle and reliable little dragon, and then secretly takes the playful little Phoenix away when everyone is not paying attention (of course, it may be the little Phoenix's suggestion [shy]) 7. The author is super gentle. Maybe you will have a chance to catch a warm and soft baby of the author after commenting [laughing] All in all, I highly recommend you to read it. The author's writing style is very good and is constantly improving. It's good to read. [Shy] If you don't like it or are not interested, please click the upper left corner to exit. Don't be offensive. Thank you for watching [Sending Hearts]

It is very suitable for friends who like to read upgrading stories. It is very good-looking. The protagonist also has a variety of good resources to take and his talents are also very good. Then the emotional line between the two characters is not abrupt. It feels like there is a natural feeling of getting along. It is very good. Only when we get along slowly will we have feelings. I think the author wrote it really well. This emotional line makes me not uncomfortable at all. I think they get along very interestingly. Then every character is quite interesting, like the second senior sister, she has a very lovable personality and is a very cute person, and then there is Shou's mother who is also a very cute character, and then there is the master who is also a very good person. And this killing method is also very decisive. Once the annoying person has the intention to kill, he has the ability to kill him directly without any detours. It is really refreshing. Then, Shou is also very smart. He killed one of Su's Taoist monks just by relying on this. He thought that maybe this Su could also kill him and dared to kill him. It was really good and good. It's okay, but after about 240 chapters, I lost the desire to continue reading. I lost the motivation to continue reading, but it is still very good. There are no big surprises. If you like to watch the upgrade and monster killing flow, you can check it out.

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was heard and the tears will not stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

Very, very good-looking. At first, when Feng Zhuo met his little senior brother, I thought he was aloof and aloof, but it turned out that he was not. It's hard to describe here, but it's a bit funny. And our Feng Zhuozhuo is very cute! Say important things three times: Baby, you are so cute! ! ! Baby, you are so cute! ! ! Baby, you are so cute! ! !

[Note] [Note] This article has two male protagonists and is about cultivating immortality. [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] is very interesting. The protagonist is extremely talented and works very hard. God's way pave the way. There is no plot in the article: no matter how hard you kill, the villain cannot be killed, and God's way will hinder you to save the villain. The novel is still being serialized, and the current timeline is: Zhuo Zhuo (the protagonist Feng Zhuo) and his junior brother Cang Wuya (the future Taoist companion of Zhuo Zhuo) are both sixteen-year-old high-spirited young men. The junior senior brother is also a genius like Zhuo Zhuo, so they compete against each other [shy][shy]. The junior senior brother is a sword cultivator, and Zhuo Zhuo is a magic cultivator (and alchemy cultivator). They are both very talented. Summary: Highly recommended reading. Although you have to endure the villain Su Ruanruan's jumping around in the early stage, she dies quickly, so don't worry. Since the novel is still being serialized, I am looking forward to the next story. [Shy][shy] So, author, please update quickly [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Send a heart][Send a heart]

At the moment, I like it more. The love line is relatively long. The main focus is on emotional growth. The writing is okay. The author is more specific in shaping the world. I have seen many stories about two male protagonists who are majoring in fairy tales. The backgrounds are very simple. They mainly prefer the protagonists to fall in love directly. This is not the case. I have wanted to read this kind of article for a long time, and finally found it. I will add comments later. [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart] Current evaluation: Recommended for readers who are interested in Shou's growth and change (because the previous chapter mainly talks about Shou's growth, and there is not much description of Shou. The author has made it clear that he will fall in love after adulthood. Before adulthood, there is only mutual appreciation and ambiguity. I have read more than 60 chapters, and the protagonist is still 13 years old, and some are waiting) [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart]

Yes, it's still good-looking, but if you want to read a cool article, don't come in. I don't know what the author is thinking, so let him not label it a cool article. It's obviously not a cool article, but it's still pretty good-looking, and it's not particularly frustrating. It just doesn't deserve to be a cool article. It's very interesting, but I have a question. In which chapter will the battle of geniuses appear? I don't think it has been written about it yet. I really want to see it.

It's good to watch. The love story line between Feng Zhuo and Cang Wuya is very smooth. At the beginning, Cang Wuya's attitude towards Feng Zhuo was indifferent, but now he is caring about Feng Zhuo and doting on him. He will agree to help Feng Zhuo no matter what he does. The two make progress together, and their rankings on the Hidden Dragon List rise little by little. Feng Zhuo also helps him in the life after his rebirth. I took my revenge, and while taking revenge, I also revealed some of the relationships behind it. In this life, I changed the situation in which some of my brothers and sisters died due to the butterfly effect of the so-called "travelers" bound to the system. The writing style felt relatively immature in the early stage, but it has been slowly getting better since then, and the author's writing ability has been improving.

It's so refreshing. This book is amazing. The villains are off the assembly line very quickly. They are dead when they die. The little senior brother and Zhuo Zhuo are also sweet and at ease. 🍅 It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure love book that perfectly matches my aesthetic. The young couple should always be good. Finally, Fengqi Cangwu 99 confesses to the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This is my first time to write a review for a book, because it is so beautiful! Zhuo Zhuo's character is very attractive, he feels like the sun, but sometimes he also has a kind of divinity, like the kind of god who pities all living beings, who knows! It's such a contrast, and it's so powerful! ! I especially like the setting that Feng Yu can swallow other strange fires, and every time he appears, he has the characteristics of other strange fires. It really feels cool! I particularly like this setting, and the Nine-Yin Soul-eating Vine. The baby is really powerful, and he actually made a contract, and has a great personality. He will take revenge on the spot when he has a grudge. There are also many supporting characters who are also very good. I hope we can meet again. I hope that we will all be better when we meet again. Wuya is the kind who looks cold and doesn't care about anything, but in fact, his heart is full of fire without knowing it ~ The love between Wuya's parents really made me cry, and I almost died after watching it😭, in short, it looks good! A book review I wrote, and it was also the first serial I followed~

It's a super nice novel. The main character is decisive in his killing. The interaction with his little brother is also very sweet. The only hope now is that Da Da Da can be updated to the end without being unfinished. I'm really scared by the discontinuation rate 🍅 [face covering]

Absolute five-star praise. It is better looking than most of the two male protagonists who cultivate immortality that I have seen. It does not keep talking about the appearance of the protagonist for one or two chapters. It is not girly, and you can feel the heroism and high-spiritedness in Zhuo Zhuo. He is decisive in his actions and does not leave any trouble behind. He is always determined to take revenge, and his cuteness can also be reflected in his daily descriptions, which is very beautiful! ! ! !

There are very few books that I give five stars, and I usually read books with a rating of nine or above. This book is an unexpected surprise. The emotional line is relatively slow, but everything comes naturally. The main reason is that I feel really good about being slapped in the face. The protagonist has strength and background, and never wrongs myself. I feel that I can not limit the rating in the future, and read more different works. I look forward to the next days of Feng Zhuo and Cang Wuya. At the same time, I am super looking forward to when the two of them will really get together! ! ! ! ! ! Big cheers for the author

Let me give it five stars first, because it is indeed the fantasy novel I have seen so far that suits my taste. The various settings and the plots of fighting for opportunities are well written, and some of the plot settings are also very classic! Moreover, in the early stage (at least as far as the progress I have seen), the protagonist is working hard alone instead of being bound to attack and go on missions together. I like this very much! I can't say much about the emotional scenes. Gong didn't have that many scenes in comparison. The early stage was pretty rough, but suddenly Gong was very concerned about receiving, which was quite confusing to me. I kept praying when I was halfway through the story. The emotional drama must not be like falling in love all of a sudden, blushing, waking up, forgetting love, and being in love. To be honest, when I saw the two of them practicing swordsmanship and staring at each other, I was a little confused... Well, maybe some people will like it. Personally, I still hope that the emotional drama can be written more logically. It is best to realize your feelings after you are an adult)) Overall, it's pretty good. I hope there will be a more satisfying plot in the future and a stronger career line for Long Aotian(?)!

It's good-looking. The character of the protagonist is well portrayed. He is naughty and lively when facing his elders and family members. It belongs to the career-oriented and growth-oriented genre. He doesn't talk nonsense when facing hostility. The relationship between the two people feels that they hit the point they like. They naturally treat each other well. I have read more than 90 chapters so far. If you don't mind serialization, you can read it. (I have been watching it offline in the cache. Comments I can't keep up. I haven't commented yet. But I'll comment when this rating pops up. Haha) The other two people went down the mountain to experience and they joined forces. Moreover, both the master and the senior brothers and sisters in the sect are very good. They don't suffer much. If someone is bad for them, they will take revenge after weighing the pros and cons. But in some descriptions, it feels a bit pale. Just a little.

Next, I will use the words that are the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most painful, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, and the least nonsense. , The least roundabout, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most energetic, the most excessive Addictive, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most top, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the dryest, the cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the most vigorous, the wildest, the most straightforward, The most rude, the least conceited, the least clichéd, the least formal, the least fussy, the most practical, the least focused, the least given results, the most truth-telling, the least focused on the core, and the least focused on telling you the key points; this book is very good, I enjoyed reading it.

Nice! ! QAQ is really beautiful! ! Because of unwillingness, after rebirth, he blocked everything, prevented everything from happening, and saved the current senior sister and senior brother. As time goes by, he grows older and gradually gets together with the younger senior brother. It's really beautiful! و

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. [Adoration] is really a slap in the face. The key point is the writing. [Blowing Kiss] I didn't write the emotional line that fast. I didn't fall in love out of nowhere. What I want is this feeling of boiling a frog in boiling water.

It looks good, the story is good, and the plot is interesting. As long as you get through the first 60 or so pictures, you can feel comfortable reading it. The previous part is about dealing with enemies in the past life, as well as the emotional adjustment that burns one's own body and death, and building self-confidence. You have to get rid of the little garbage first before you can let go of your worries and practice openly without inner demons. The protagonist has been holding his breath all the time, wanting to change his own destiny and the destiny of his family and teachers, so the protagonist himself cannot completely relax. It's very exciting after dealing with the enemy, and the enemy can be offline very quickly. Super exciting [laughing][laughing][laughing] In fact, if you look at those little pieces of trash as clowns, you won't feel so angry. Instead, you will find them funny, fun, and very funny [laughing][laughing] Seeing these ignorant fools jumping around and being silly and cute [face covering] [face covering] is true. If you don't take it seriously, you will think these little pieces of garbage are funny [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] My thoughts are clear, and my cultivation is advancing by leaps and bounds [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] The story behind is interesting. It's a pity that the serialization has not tied it yet. I will wait until it is finished and read it before I can comment again [laughing][laughing][laughing]

This book is the first one that I was asked to review. Generally speaking, I think the author's world view is very grand and the emotional line is good. However, the early progress is too slow and the later progress is too fast, which is a bit unsatisfactory. But the plot is good, and each character has his own soul. I think the cutest part is the author's musings. It's rare to see such a lively author. Nowadays, the environment is so bad that there are really fewer and fewer such lively authors. I hope the author can always maintain such an optimistic attitude.

Cang Wu Ya [Love] Feng Zhuo Childhood sweethearts, a long-lasting love is so fun [laughing] The little secret interaction between the little senior brother and Zhuo Zhuo is really good, every time I see it, I have an aunt's smile on my face [please savor it] 📖After Zhuo Zhuo's rebirth, he has really been getting stronger with his own efforts, but there is also Heavenly Dao secretly helping his son [laughing] The writing is very good, the various upgrades and fights are written in detail, and the feelings come together naturally. Most of the writing is about upgrading and training. Yes, the emotional interaction is mixed in, and there is very little written about it. After all, it is a matter of course. The shortcoming is that the later writing feels too hasty, and it suddenly reaches the finale to fight the boss. The subsequent events after the ascension to immortality are not written out, which is a pity [eating melon]

It's a story about two men's cultivation of immortality, and it starts from childhood. The protagonist is reborn, because there is a time traveler, and then the protagonist is killed, and then the protagonist is reborn, then takes back everything, and falls in love by the way, hahaha. Anyway, I think it is a very good book. The chapters are a bit long, more than 500 pictures. If you like to read this kind of long chapters, I suggest you read it, because it is really beautiful, okay [admiration] (I have tried my best to describe it, but it feels a bit watery, but I am uneducated, so I can go all over the world with just one sentence [face covering])

The writing is very nice. I really like the characters of Zhuo Zhuo and the little senior brother, and Zhuo Zhuo's mother. She is a great heroine. (I've been following it for a long time, but I always forgot to write a book review [face covering])