The Immortal Path Is Half Sunshine, Half Rain

Here are some random thoughts: I didn't expect that I would actually write it here. This book actually started quite suddenly, and I wrote it as soon as my mind flashed. Then no one read it, so I just fished for three days and posted the Internet for two days. I updated it when I remembered. I thought I would stop writing if I couldn't write it here, but a group of lovely angel girls suddenly came to me and gave me the motivation to continue writing QAQ I will read all your comments carefully and look forward to your messages every time I open the software. Thank you very much for your willingness to accompany me >v< This is my first time writing a novel. I actually feel like I haven't written a lot of details in the beginning. I feel like I'm in a hurry and it's time to get to the next chapter. I'll try to be more detailed later! (A long review of 100 words is in progress...)

The relationship between Xiaoyu and Qingqing is so cute (ᕑᗢᓫ∗)˒. I originally planned to listen to the novel for a while and fall asleep, but it's almost 3 o'clock and I still haven't fallen asleep yet. ('-ωก̀), Except for the repetition of sentences and semantics in the middle, it is really an incredibly cute novel. Hahahahaha, it's so beautiful, it makes men menstruate and women go crazy when they see it. It is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of vegetative pictures. She was so beautiful that the five-guarantee family in the village missed and loved the widow. She was so handsome that tears flowed from the corners of her mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. It was God who was my rose and illuminated the dark life. I ran and jumped on the balcony of the 20th floor to dance the tango. I realized that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I couldn't stop crying. From then on, the world no longer lacked water. ♡.ﾟ♡.. ♡゜ ﾟ♡゜ ♡ ♡*ﾟ♡ ♡. ♡ ♡. . ♡゜ ♡; ﾟ♡゜ /)_/)N (˶ᵒ̴̶̷̤ꈊ˂̶̤̀˵) ✧ /u ﾉ しーJ

It's very good to me xp. The emotional line is not very obvious but the plot is very good. I hope the foreshadowing can be filled in later. I just like this kind of story that has both emotions and plot. Keep working hard, the boss will always follow you! ( ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ ) ✧A little personal note: Can you give me the cover? I want to make a video for the two little ones (>▽<) It has been tied. Overall, it is great, and the details are well described. Then I also saw other readers' comments on the love line in the discussion area. Here I would like to share my own views (please forgive my sentence errors) The boss said that Xiao Xie is special to Xiao Yu. I think there must be affection between the sects as they get along day after day. I understand that love grows over time~, but the two little ones are a bit slow, so give them a little more time (◍ ´꒳` ◍) The plot is very good, and the foreshadowing made me even sleep thinking about what their relationship is! It's so brain-burning ₍•Д•), but I've roughly guessed it, so I won't spoil it here. Let you guess it yourself. Boss~Goddess~Author~Coco~Chef~🥺🤗 I would like to ask if you have ever considered booking a picture for Xiao Xie, (Looking at the cover, it should be Xiao Yu), it's okay if you don't. I will work hard to learn advanced editing to make videos for my two little friends(￣￣)

The plot line is great and exciting! The foreshadowing and foreshadowing are very good, and the foreshadowing is recycled very naturally. But the emotional line of the protagonist is a bit mediocre. It feels like the two protagonists only think that the other person is their special person. Tingyu should think that Xie is his best friend or something. Xie feels a little moved but he doesn't know it. The other person died before he could recognize his feelings. There is a feeling that the love goes deep and deep () I really like the high-spiritedness of the teenage years, the laughter and play among teenagers and the longing for the future! It seems like I am back in high school hahaha. Although my teenage years have come to an end, I am no longer a teenager. But life is like this, Xiaoting will miss it, and nostalgia is human nature. But the past is past, and people have to move forward. I like this kind of freedom and ease. In fact, after dozens of chapters, I was very curious about Xiao Ting's appearance. Xiao Xie's appearance was mentioned several times in the article, but there was very little about Xiao Ting. I only vaguely knew that it was the gentle and jade type, and I weakly asked whether it was Mei Gong Shuai Shou. ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ It is understandable that the plot line is great, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot development! Keep writing!

Boss, I like you! It feels like I haven't seen such a delicate plot in a long time... The goddess's writing style is completely amazing, and the long-lasting emotions are very good!!! I feel like my whole body has been purified. Boss, I will keep watching 😢

What I feel is that the writing style is not wordy or flashy, but gentle and a little warm. I like [Blowing Kisses] in general. Teacher Jianyi would like to describe more of the supporting characters talking and discussing things to add a sense of life. I want to ask the teacher who was moved first? There are also confessions [full] [full] that I hope to be together later. The unclear pull between the young lovers is the best to watch 😄 So delicious, so delicious, so delicious! Shockingly delicious!!! 😢😢 Falling in love with the unfinished story again

I love this book so much! The author simply caught me and the updates are very timely! I like! Super well written! The plot is flawless and smooth! Although the protagonist doesn't have many emotional lines? But overall it's very smooth! There is nothing to complain or doubt! I originally wanted to write the rating later, but I couldn't help but write it in advance. I haven't read this kind of writing in a long time! I really like group portraits, I really like cultivating immortals, and I really like the setting of Qingyu! Stop talking! Cocoa beans, I love you, I will wait for your updates every day! But you should also pay attention to your health! Love you and all the readers who support this book! When reading this book, we are the people who understand each other best! Not necessarily after passing it! In the end, this book is really good, but this is my personal feeling. If you don't like it, don't criticize me! Everyone is different, just be okay with each other. Finally, Qingyu 99, those who love each other will be happy forever!

This is simply overwhelming, understand? My wife's writing style is so contagious. The characters are vivid, the plot is novel, and the details are well buried. I am completely impressed by the author's conception. The characters written by the teacher are particularly three-dimensional and have distinct personalities. I especially like the teacher's writing style. He does not deliberately pile up rhetoric and can always set up the atmosphere and the emotions of the characters with just a few strokes. The plot foreshadowing is linked one by one. I am blown away by it. Uh, anyway, Qingyu 99 Madam, you must pay attention to rest. It's hard to write words 💕 💕 💕

The writing is very delicate, which is considered a breath of fresh air in Tomato. I think the characters are also very cute. I feel that it was a little adapted to the "one step away from happiness" in the early stage, but the young couple will definitely be happy. The rest of the follow-up review😊ah ah ah ah This book is mainly written based on Ting Yu's growth line. From ignorantly entering the immortal road, meeting Xie Tianqing, making friends, and then resurrecting from the dead, he learned his identity. Ting Yu has always been a very gentle person. The author's writing style is long and delicate. The revelation of his life experience in recent chapters really shocked me. Qingyu 99, Cocoa Bean is happy every day. Will add follow-up comments later. Also, I am Qingyu's only daughter, thank you!

It's so beautiful, but the more you look at it, the more you look at it. I accidentally tied it. I'm really looking forward to Xiaoyu's failure. The stupid couple wants 99! The arrogant cat🐱 and the cute puppy🐶 are so cute together😊😋