After Becoming a Good-for-Nothing, I Got a Happy Ending with the Sword Cultivator Savior

Well written. The characters are vivid and the writing is smooth But in my opinion there are 3 things to pay attention to 1. There are too many names in this article, and it's easy to get confused. 2. The pace is slow and I like watching fast-paced movies. Shen's feelings were discovered earlier, but Gu still thinks they are good brothers. 3. This is an upgrade stream. Shen Gu is often injured. Those who cannot accept that the protagonist is not invincible can quit. That's all for now, more will be added later. Yes, I also asked the consultant if he was wearing clothes or wearing souls. Finally, I would like to praise the author for writing rich content. Although some plots are a bit cliche (), the overall world view is not bad. As a newbie, it is already very good. Keep up the good work!

I finished reading it late at night and was so excited that I couldn't sleep, so I came to give my serious feedback. What impresses me most about this work is that it perfectly balances "refreshment" and "realism". The plot advances all the way and is dense with excitement, but it does not make people feel suspended at all, because all the power increases and relationship changes have solid logical and emotional foreshadowing. The protagonist's "strength" does not come out of thin air. He obtains it with wisdom, perseverance, and even occasional vulnerability, which makes every victory particularly hearty. The supporting characters are all flesh and blood, they are not just simple tools. Their choices and fate also affect people's hearts. I can feel that the author put a lot of effort and thought into building this world and characters. This is not a simple recreational read, this is a wonderful story with a solid core. You really wrote it superbly!

It's so beautiful [admiration] Men are menstruating when boys see it, and girls get crazy when they see it. This is the nemesis of depression, and the alarm clock for vegetative people. I am so busy that tears flow out of the corners of my mouth, flooding into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. Who is my rose? It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I ran hard, I jumped hard, and I danced the tango from the balcony on the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world is no longer short of water.

No way, my God! Although the rating is low, it's really pretty! This is when I finished reading more than two hundred chapters without even realizing it! I would never have read so many chapters before! Ah Xuan and A Han are happy! Emotions are flowing like a steady stream, and they are simply bursting into flames! I added it to the bookshelf without reading it at first, but then I saw it and realized I couldn't stop! I hope you can continue to update well and live up to the expectations of readers. At the same time, you should also take good care of your body and stay healthy. As the saying goes, the body is the capital of revolution after all. Come on! I believe you will be better and more powerful, and attract more readers with your own abilities!

Not bad, not bad, and the world view is very well conceived, but if you like a fast pace, be careful, the emotional line will not appear until more than 100 chapters, there are too many characters, it is easy to get confused, but I think the plot is good, good, good, good

This book can be said to be eye-catching. I had a serious charlatanism in my girlhood and this novel perfectly satisfied my charlatanism. This is simply good news for people who like to read fairy tales. This is a group portrait of two male protagonists, Wen Shuang, who is a cultivator of immortals.

It's so good. I've been reading this book since I saw it. Today it's even equal. It's so good. It's exactly what I imagined cultivating an immortal to be! The young couple is also very sweet, and everyone is growing up well. It's only fitting that the author is a complete confidant [please update]

This book is really good. I would like to call it Nan Bowan in the world of two men cultivating immortals. There are too many foreshadowings. I am happy to read this kind of book. But I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's just over 100 chapters, but it's really good.

It's very beautiful, the content and plot are compact, but there should be no suddenness in it. If the reader is immersed in it, his emotions will be suddenly divided when he sees these two words (personal suggestion). Overall, it is very beautiful. I can help you when I see Tiandao for the first time. There are two Tiandao. I like reading this kind of article.

It's beautiful, five-star review, the writing is smooth and smooth, and it's very comfortable to read. The plot is mainly about strengthening strength and dealing with powerful enemies. The two male protagonists get along slowly and get closer to each other. There is no very deliberate plot. I like this kind of relationship. The relationship heats up normally, rather than industrial saccharine. If you like reading about cultivating immortals, don't miss this good article!