The Second Male Lead Is a Villain? Your Demon King Sword Spirit Has Arrived

The writing is very good. (Although it is only a short sentence, it reveals a hint of coldness and insouciance. It complements my bohemian figure. The ending is polite and yet alienating, which appropriately shows the noble and elegant temperament of the statement.)

Please come and see it all. How many bad things do I have to do to deserve the retribution I receive? Don't let happiness fall on my palms yet. I feel like a meteorite is about to land on top of my head. No one helps me reach the top, and I can't go up myself. Not only did I not go up, I fell down. Stop, stop, God, have you made a mistake? I said let me go, not let the horse come over. It removes mud without staining. Apply it all over the body and pat until it is completely absorbed. Not only did it not absorb, but I also bought a fake product. Smiling twice, I got the sentence "The one who laughs is gay" I turned pale in anger and got the sentence "Anyone who doesn't smile is also gay." Finally… Anyone who doesn't give my book five stars is gay! (´；ω；｀)

I feel that the plot is quite novel and the introduction is very attractive. The advantages are obvious and the disadvantages are also obvious. First of all, the description is too long and there are too many unnecessary descriptions, which makes the plot feel very slow. Secondly, the description is repetitive. It clearly means the same meaning, but it needs to be expressed in several ways. It seems very long-winded and slows down the progress, and the connection between some words and sentences has obvious language problems. I feel that most Tomato authors have this problem. When I first read this book, I even thought the author was a newbie. But after looking at the homepage, I discovered that he has written several books, but none of them scored above 9. I personally think that the writing style plays a big factor. You may not feel it when you are simply reading the book, but if you listen to the book, you will find that there are many problems that greatly affect the perception. It is recommended that the author read it himself after finishing writing, preferably listening to the book. The above are my personal thoughts, just a suggestion. The setting of this book is more attractive to me. I don't want to abandon the article because of the writing style. I gave it five stars because I don't want others to think that I am making malicious comments.

So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world With meaning 😊 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😮 It made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and became a pond. Jiang Dachao 😈 is so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and the world will never stop. No matter how short of water [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao] [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao] [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao] [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao] [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao] [Lao Fu Ge/Mrs. Chui Bao], how come there are so few people who rate the article? Where have everyone gone? Good to see the explosion!

I saw Da Da's book again. My Feng Ya Da was born to write cold-faced and cute characters. I'll forget it if Yan Yan is so cute. The Red Umbrella Weapon super pokes my

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The writing is superb, and the character design of the Sword Spirit monk is quite rare and very innovative. Personally, I think the character is a tsundere*loyal dog, and I will never be able to escape this setting in my life >ᴗ<. The full text is on the sweet side, so if you like cookies, you can try Meow. Ciyan is probably a tsundere kitten. When she sees Sang Yan begging for praise, she nuzzles him and lets out a sigh of relief to show that she is fierce. In fact, she is just a cute thing! Sang Yan is also a super cute dog. He prioritizes Yanyan in everything and is very calm about everything. But when the male protagonist wants to buy the Yanxie sword, he bares his teeth like crazy to scare him away. He keeps hurting himself just to see Yanyan. Baby, you are simply an angel... The logic of the whole text is relatively clear, there is nothing unreasonable, the writing style is smooth, the wording is not unusual, and it is usually interesting. Recommended viewing for those who like cultivating immortals, favoring each other, and the above characters. Pure love is invincible ^ ^

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I really like the character design of Yanyan (ღ˘⌣˘ღ), but based on my reading experience, the shortcomings of this book are quite obvious. First of all, I feel that the author's writing style is lacking. Things that can be explained clearly in one sentence have to be broken into several sentences. The impression is not very good. Baozi who has extremely high requirements for writing style should be careful. This can also be seen from the ratings of several completed books by the author. Next, is this plot dragging on too slowly? Maybe the author wants to write everything well, which is understandable, but this book gives me the feeling that the plot is too redundant, and unnecessary plots are written again and again. Maybe half of the chapters of the current plot can be written. Isn't the essence of a novel clear and organized? However, this novel is not a fast-moving novel, so a slow pace is fine, as long as it does not consume the reader's patience too much. Now my thought is that it is a waste of reward and a pity to leave. I searched and found that there seems to be no similar characters and plots. I really can't bear to [cry]. Come on, author! The setting of Sword Spirit + Crazy Beauty perfectly hit my xp (can I say this [shy]), I hope this novel will get better and better, author, I will always follow you. I rarely write long reviews, so feel free to point out anything wrong, thank you.

Nice looking one. I hate you, you are so cute. Mitsuki, hurry up and chase your wife hard. Oh, that's not right. Mitsuki seems to be underage now. I don't care. It's really good-looking. It's so beautiful🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women are going crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😊 I run, I jump, I dance tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😮 It makes me realize that God is indeed I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. It's the nemesis of depression😋. It's an alarm clock for vegetative people.😨It's so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good. God is my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful.