Book Transmigration: My Cultivation Journey Begins by Finding a Mortal-Style Protagonist

The writing is very popular with me, but I am relatively controlled. I hope that the protagonist Shou will not be too trapped by emotions. In fact, I personally prefer a 50-50 relationship and story line. But after reading this novel, I really like the plot of the protagonist Shou. Blessed are the career fans of the protagonist Shou [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] ][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] Actually, when I follow up on reviews, I look at how many hours I've read [laughs]

It's good-looking, both the writing and the plot are online. Although it is tagged with two men, the protagonist is not too addicted to love, but strives to improve himself to pursue the pursuit of love. It is rare to see this kind of two-men cultivating immortality novels that are not limited to love and love. [Sending Hearts]

Very refreshing and clean writing, with the conciseness of a male channel and the sensationalism of a female channel. It is very suitable for this kind of CP-oriented upgrading flow. I look forward to how Gong regains his sense of presence after he leaves. I also look forward to chasing his wife. I don't insist on the crematorium, but I hope that the pursuit of his wife must be longer. Lin Wu will chase his wife as long as he chases the husband.

It's very interesting, but it's a bit boring without another male protagonist in the middle. But the plot is very interesting. It really fits the style of double male protagonists that I want to watch. In terms of emotions, I don't have high requirements. The reunion of this kind of young couple after a long separation is better than the newlyweds. I look forward to the plot of the reunion in the future and whether they will chase their wives in the crematorium hahahahaha

I have read Chapter 98 of Volume 2 so far. I am writing this review in the hope that the author can read it and refer to it. I quite like the setting of this book, and it's quite easy to deal with. There are just some problems (from my personal point of view, I think the shortcomings) The first is that it is too heavy and long, and the previous chapters of "The Immortal World" are too detailed and have a long-winded feeling (my feeling when I read it, I just skimmed many plots quickly). Of course, I also read the introduction, and it was said to be a slow burn. It's okay to slow down, but I hope it's some more interesting plots. I think the part about winning the young master is okay (I have a little hobby, I like to do CP. Of course, this is before the protagonist meets another protagonist). As long as I'm not forced to get involved in inexplicable troubles, I like it very much... The second is the character of the protagonist... It's too frustrating, and there are too many classic plots... I personally hate the protagonist who has strength but doesn't show it (commonly known as low-key) and then gets entangled in all kinds of troubles, and scolds him without fighting back or taking action. He doesn't care about anything (I really want to be angry, because I really hate this kind of plot). Then when someone else makes a move, he passively fights back, but nothing will happen to the person who makes the move... I hate what the protagonist said very much. Sooner or later, he will encounter him and can't afford to offend him. Well, he can afford to offend you. He thinks you are easy to bully, but in fact you are really easy to bully (nothing to do...) And because the trophy bug owes that person a promise, my thoughts of abandoning the book reached its peak... But I endured it, because I really like this setting and characters... I also have no idea how to be a referee in Chapter 98. I hope that the protagonist will bear in mind that excessive humility will bring a lot of trouble to himself and apply it in action. Don't take the so-called low-key as a benchmark... These are the two things that made me uncomfortable while reading the book, and I hope that the protagonist will not suffer due to the decline in strength caused by the spirit-binding technique (but the latest chapter is already in the world of cultivating immortals, so it is a bit late to talk about this now). I hope the author of this book will write better and better. The four stars are temporary and will be changed after the book is written (of course, even if I abandon the book later, the rating will not be lowered) Power generation for love has been sent, cheers for the author👏 I'm out of ideas, I'll change my book review... I really like this book, but the traffic is not good and the author can't stand it anymore [face covering] I hope I can improve the rating and increase the traffic, and I also hope the author can finish the book [I'm about to cry] Third edition, I changed it back to four stars. To be honest, I kind of wanted to change it to three stars, but I saw that my initial review would not lower the rating, so I forgot about it. This book attracted me simply because of its subject matter. When I read the first part, I thought it was okay, at least I have hope. Although I stocked up on it because it was too little and too slow (although I forgot to stock it up later), the plot of the Immortal Realm is really... Not very interesting to me, and I don't like the main character being defeated. So I haven't looked at it, planning to wait for them to recognize each other. As a result... I really have no choice. I really don't like the amnesia plot, and besides, I've been waiting... Just waiting for them to recognize each other, waiting for them to get along after recognizing each other, and waiting for them to continue to grow stronger. As a result, when I saw the plot behind it... I forgot about it, it turned out that the two of them lost their memory together (one because of a bet and the other was injured), their cultivation was not done yet, and they started over again... With expectations, there is a gap. I ran to read the previous content of the second part. The person who entrusted me... I was exhausted again. What a sense of perspective. I was even tricked into signing the deed of betrayal (although it was torn off later)... And the one who was said to be "not so hopeless kid brother" was my highlight... There was a reason to arrange a bully for the protagonist, and then do it again, because I felt that he was eating and drinking for free. I saw a comment written by the author in the second volume, saying that he would not feel aggrieved until he established the foundation. He would be a fool in one mouthful, and be scolded for mowing the grass... Isn't this still aggrieved? (Maybe it's because the plot after the protagonist regains consciousness is not frustrating... I don't understand, and I don't want to watch it.) If I want to not be frustrated, in fact, it would be better to arrange a family that is not good to the protagonist, but will not bully him. Lu Yi, a true successor, was entrusted to help take care of him and gave him so many spiritual stones. He was played like this. He really committed crimes against the odds and was not afraid of being punished. Even if he took the spirit stone and did bad things to others, he actually dared to have someone sign a contract to sell himself as a domestic slave. He really had no fear of being liquidated and committed crimes against the odds. I jumped again to read the chapter about Zhao's compensation... Forget it... It's the same as what I said in my first review..."It seems that the protagonist is easy to bully, but in fact the protagonist is really easy to bully." It didn't meet expectations. Would you say it was poorly written... That's not true. I simply don't like to read some plots, which has spread throughout the book. (Don't overthink this when you read the author's comments. It's just not for your taste.)

The persimmons are great. I don't understand how a book review can stack up to me twice. The quality of the plot is top-notch on a tomato basis, and some of the plots can also give me some small inspirations. The characters are not labeled like poles, and the twists and turns are okay. The language is plain, so you can read it if you are tired of reading mindless bedtime stories. It has a certain logic and does not occupy the CPU. The first volume has the best rhythm, the second volume focuses on Jianghu, and the third volume begins to fully enter the world of immortality. The setting that Goldfinger is related to insects and time is quite interesting. I wonder if and how it will become round in the future, and whether there will be plots and conspiracies about entering the upper world. The warmth and warmth of human relationships is another great advantage. I hope to see a world of immortality other than the law of the jungle. After all, if there is only the law of the jungle, it will be no different from savages. Unity is a major feature that distinguishes humans from animals. But in recent years, it seems that fewer and fewer novels have mentioned it. The characters' emotions are also innovative, balancing the lack of deep feelings caused by falling in love at first sight with the boringness of long-term love. The design of poisonous poison rationalizes the triggering of the relationship between the two, and develops true deep love in the ambiguity. It is full of tension! ! In addition, among the supporting characters, I am most impressed by Liu Cixin. Her personal image is particularly full due to the development of the plot. Her personal plot can effectively promote the plot without being cumbersome. She can also enrich the character image and kill three birds with one stone. Applause👏🏻 She has not yet appeared in the third volume. I am curious whether she can transcend the shackles or is trapped in obsession and panic all day long without knowing it. To be honest, the plot information density of Magic Flame Gate is not high, but fortunately there is an emotional line to adjust it. If more clues can be laid out in this type of preparation in the future, the senses can be more focused. Finally, I wish this book a big hit and become a hit! Original comment attached in the comment area

It's very detailed. It handles many small details very well. I love it so much. It also explains why each party does it. It helps my little brain. It has a male channel style and a very good taste. It is a male channel among female channels and a female channel among male channels.

From ordinary people to innate masters to mortals who cultivate immortality, the development of opportunities and adventures coexists. The plot is compact, but the data is a bit cold. Come on, madam, I am looking forward to the development of the plot in the future.

After reading the beginning, I like this style of writing. It is not exaggerated or pretentious, and it is in line with the ancient background. There is no modern vocabulary throughout the article. What I don't understand is whether the gray fog also affected the male protagonist's feelings when they first met? Therefore, if you are attacked in an intimate behavior, your face will turn red and your heart will beat.

I really like this way of writing. The male protagonist is a real boy, and he doesn't feel like the white-haired female protagonist is trying to be a charlatan. Although I feel a little love-minded when I admit my death to Xiao Lu, on the other hand, I feel very loyal which can be a bonus. The protagonist is very proactive, does not follow the crowd, and has goals and rules for doing things. When you encounter difficulties, you find a way to break through them, and when you think of getting something, you work hard for it. There is no feeling of being driven away by the plot like other novels. The author also controls the rhythm very well. From the countryside to the martial arts to the world of immortality, the book is very smooth. There is no feeling of "fighting ordinary crayfish in the early stage and real mutant overlord sunset shrimp in the later stage".