Book Transmigration: My Cultivation Journey Begins by Finding a Mortal-Style Protagonist

I really love how well it's written, but I'm a bit of a control freak, so I hope the protagonist (the bottom) isn't too troubled by his emotions. Personally, I prefer a more balanced approach to both the romance and the main storyline, but after reading this novel, I especially love the protagonist's storyline. Fans of the protagonist's career are in for a treat! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Actually, I leave a follow-up comment to see how many hours I've spent reading 😄

It's a great read, with excellent writing and a compelling plot. Although it's tagged as a dual-male story, the protagonists don't get overly obsessed with romance. Instead, they focus on improving themselves to keep up with the male lead. It's rare to see a dual-male cultivation novel that doesn't confine itself to romance. 💕

The writing style is very clean and crisp, possessing the conciseness of male-oriented fiction and the emotional intensity of female-oriented fiction, making it perfect for this kind of CP-oriented, level-up story. I'm looking forward to seeing how he regains his presence after the male lead leaves, and also looking forward to his pursuit of his wife.

It's really good! It gets a little boring a bit without another male lead, but the plot is fantastic. It perfectly matches the kind of male-centric story I've been looking for. I don't have high expectations for the romance; this kind of long-awaited reunion between a young couple is so sweet! I'm really looking forward to seeing if the reunion plot will feature a dramatic "chasing-back-to-the-wife" moment, haha!

I'm currently on Book 2, Chapter 98, and I'm writing this review in the hopes that the author will see it and consider it. I quite like the book's premise and find it very engaging. However, there are some issues (from my personal perspective, what I consider to be shortcomings). Firstly, it's too long.

Good job, persimmons. I don't understand how a book review can be repeated twice. The plot quality is above average for Tomato Book, and some parts even gave me some inspiration. The characters aren't just labels standing on pedestals, the plot twists are handled well, and the language is simple. If you're tired of mindless bedtime stories, this is a good choice.

It's incredibly detailed, isn't it? So many small details are handled exceptionally well; I love it! It even explains the reasons behind each party's actions, which is a real help to my little brain. It has a very masculine style, a very authentic flavor—a masculine style within a masculine style, and a masculine style within a masculine style.

This is a cultivation novel about a mortal's journey from an ordinary person to a master of innate cultivation, and finally to immortality. It's a story of opportunity and adventure, with a tight plot. The only downside is that the data is a bit low-quality. Keep up the good work, author! I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.

I liked the writing style after reading the beginning; it wasn't exaggerated or pretentious, and it fit the ancient setting without being filled with modern vocabulary. One thing I didn't understand was whether the gray mist at their first meeting affected the male lead (the uke)? Was that why he blushed and his heart raced during intimate moments with the seme?

I really like this writing style. The male lead is a real guy, without that feeling of a naive, innocent female lead. Although his unwavering devotion to Xiao Lu feels a bit like being love-struck, his loyalty is also a plus. The protagonist is highly proactive, doesn't follow the crowd, and acts with goals and methods.