The Noble Senior Brother Is Meant to Be Spoiled by the Dragon-Proud Protagonist

This book is also very delicious, as for why I gave it five stars. First, because I am the author, the young couple is very cute. Second, the young couple is very affectionate, but there is a bit of glass shards when pushing the main plot. Third, this book is about a social animal who traveled through time and became Long Aotian, and then took a beautiful daughter-in-law. The daughter-in-law is the son of luck from the plane of heaven. From loving her to resenting her for abandoning him, to seeing her resentment dissipated after a long separation, she meets again after a long separation. Fourth, Tomato has a task for authors to evaluate their own works. It requires one hundred words, so I will evaluate it this way. Fifth, if two young people fall in love, one of them must be unable to escape the national grid. \(▔□▔)/\(▔□▔)/\(▔□▔)/ OS: If there is sudden traffic...

I'm halfway through the process so far, and overall it's pretty good, but the writing is a bit childish, and some sentences are poorly broken up. It's a bit hard to breathe after reading it. The character design and shaping are well done, and the plot rhythm could be a little tighter. Finally, the State Grid turns on the power.

OK, this article is also super invincible and thunderbolt. It's so good. [Lick screen] Men see menstruation, women get nervous after seeing it [KISS] This article stirs up a different kind of emotion in my heart [Love] My soul is greatly shocked [Admiration] My feelings for this article are beyond words [Sending my heart] I want to ask, can the author see himself in the mirror? [Understood] There are too few articles, the author please update [Please update]

It's shocking and delicious, the emotional line is very clear, and the three views are also very positive. I feel very comfortable watching it. The villain is also cleaned up very quickly, without the feeling of procrastination. The group portrait is also very enjoyable. Xiao Sang and Xiao Yin will be together for a lifetime! ! ! The only question is whether the author can write faster. I finally found a good article, and the result is almost equal😭😭😭, and then it's so fun to slap in the face, everyone is so cute! (Except the villain) By the way, the writing style is a little less in-depth, um, yes, but for such a sweet little article, it is very appetizing. However, some sentences are broken a bit strangely, and some sentences may not make sense without subjects, but the flaws are not concealed, it is very delicious😋😋😋😋👍

This book is really beautiful! ! ! The plot is also very good, and there is nothing weird about it for me. The character of the protagonist is also very good, but there are too few. The author should update it quickly! ! !

Not bad, but I feel like the writing still has a lot of room for improvement.

Although I haven't started reading it yet, just by reading the introduction, I know that this book is definitely not ordinary. It is either a fairy or a top-notch one [lick the screen] and just open a separate bookshelf for him [The Master of Sparrow Food] Finally, I beg the author not to stop updating, don't ruin the character, don't let it be unfinished, and tell me if it won't be updated. Don't stop updating for no reason! [Crying] Oh, by the way, please T_T The author must update to more than 200 chapters [crying] I'm thinking about finishing it╯╰[crying][crying][crying]

It's really good to read. Well, it's the pleasant and relaxing atmosphere. The whole book is quite good to read. It should probably be that this book is very good, because I only commented on it after reading the first few chapters.

Super Invincible is very good-looking. It would be better if the author could update 10,000 chapters at a time [please update]

Very beautiful, I like it very much, come on! ! Don't stop updating! ! Don't stop updating! ! !