My Junior Brother, the Black Lotus

The setting is good, I like it. It's just that many of the author's adjectives are very "mysterious", which makes the whole book feel depressing and ghostly. But after using it too much, I feel that the writing is a bit lacking, unable to describe the feeling, unable to analyze the psychology of the time.

I have only read Chapter 44. I like the character design very much, and the ghost feeling of 1 is also well created, but there are really many repetitive sentences, and the feeling of déjà vu is always there. There are also a lot of short sentences that seem a bit weak, but changing to an audiobook makes the existence of repeated sentences more obvious. I read other comments saying that there will be improvements in the future, so I'll give it a try...

I think this book is very good, and I immediately tied it. The identity of the protagonist in the book is confusing, and his junior brother is very fond of him. I think the reason why few people read it may be because this is a serialized book, and many people like to read the finished book. Like me, I plan to read more books. I'll watch it when it's almost over [Thinking]

The plot is not procrastinating and the characters are distinct, making people want to keep watching. This is the only novel among the many novels I have read that allowed me to patiently read it word for word. It must be given five stars. The author put his heart into it, and I personally feel that the writing is very good. I highly recommend it.

I like this book very much. It gives me a feeling of making tea with spring water. The clear eyes of the senior brother and the strong desire of the junior brother. Whenever the two of them get along, I will savor it several times. Especially in the early stage, the seemingly indifferent relationship between the two of them is actually full of emotions. There are many articles about this kind of setting, but this one is really close to my heart. I really like it... The author understands that feeling... I hope they have a good ending and I support the author to continue his creation. [Love]

I haven't finished it yet, but it's so delicious, I'm rolling on the bed Actually, I clicked in after reading the introduction, because I thought it was very delicious, and it was actually very delicious. But after watching part of it, I felt: In fact, it is not impossible to slow down the love scene. Brother Ruan is really handsome when he kills everyone! I am a local dog, I am very low, and I love watching! Summary: Very very very very delicious The young couple is also very sweet🤓 Very awesome Klaas Thoughts after viewing: The whole class is noisy Me: Tsk The whole class tore their underwear in an instant.

I'm here as soon as the new article is published. [Shy] To be honest, I gave up on it for a while. Compared with the early pull, the part where the senior brother went down the mountain seemed a bit ordinary. I don't mean it was bland, but it felt like a familiar routine. I once wondered if the author was going to go into an assembly line plot [angry] and left. Due to the heat problem in the past two days, I opened it again, and the dank smell came back [Adoration] [Adoration] and the later logic suddenly came to me, and it was full of holes. It is a very interesting book. You are good to everyone, but in fact, the senior brother who cannot see his own feelings and the possessive little junior brother who is only good to you are still very easy to fight, and everyone comes to see it. [Salute][Salute][Salute] The author writes quickly ✍🏻I'm waiting for dinner [Please update]

It's really beautiful. The whole story is beautiful and handsome. It made me think that I was on the wrong side [shy][shy][shy][shy]. Moreover, the plot written by the author is not procrastinating. It ends when it needs to be finished. The plot will not be dragged out for the sake of popularity. Each picture has a new plot. This makes people feel comfortable watching it. Even after reading it, I still feel a little confused. Not finished, the only bad thing I feel is that the author's writing style is a bit monotonous, with many adjectives appearing repeatedly. Sometimes there is actually no need to focus too much on describing the appearance. After all, we all know that the protagonist is very good-looking, which makes people feel uncomfortable. Other than that, there is no problem. Overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and it seems very addictive!

It looks good, but there are some repetitive parts. I hope they can be replaced. The characters of the two are very delicious, but there are a lot of foreshadowings and it feels like the Riddler is everywhere. I really want to know the follow-up soon, urgent😋😋😋

This novel can clearly show the author's growth. In fact, the novel felt too dull at the beginning, and the pictures were very fragmented and described in such a way that you could not get into the situation. I was originally not interested in reading it, but I really like this kind of subject matter, and the more I read, the more surprised I became. The author's writing style is becoming more and more smooth and natural, and the description of Yin Jue's male ghost is very full. Yue Li's portrayal is not fragmented, and everything is perfectly rounded.