Swallowed Star: The Great Nirvana Era

There are more than 600 chapters in total, more than 600 chapters about fighting world beasts, and 200 chapters about just leaving the earth and knowing how to play. It's okay to be passionate at the beginning, but it becomes more and more embarrassing as you read later. The author probably wanted to write the kind of scene that makes people feel immersed and passionate after watching it, but it was too passionate, and the repeated sentences were repeated over and over again, which made it embarrassing. An ordinary punch weighs 58,000 kg, but the sixth level of the Nine-Level Thunder Sword has a force of 89,000 kg. It makes me sick. Can you please stop insulting the original work?

The plot is good, but you need to make the writing more vivid to make it popular. It's not about holding a woman in a fight, but how much you miss her.

Too many original settings have been changed, the settings have been changed, not to mention the logic...

Let me tell you a story.Gur gurgurgurgurIt's gone

? If you delete a few key characters from the original protagonist and then add a cheat to slightly change it, aren't you just copying it? Moreover, the description of the protagonist's character and temperament is too contradictory and completely inconsistent with the military rank of a general, the fourth speaker, and the ceiling's combat power. However, the protagonist gives me the impression of an ordinary boy.

There are two places in the first 100 chapters alone, First, I talked about the protagonist being an orphan, and then I remembered the good times with my parents in my previous life. In the second place, it was set that the Blood Blade Corridor opens every three days, and the next period takes another seven days... The author really couldn't remember the setting, so he wrote it down in a small notebook. Can you read it twice while writing? There is also a plot, which is nothing amazing. The most awesome one is that it clearly states that you should pay attention to your family after rebirth. However, from the beginning of the martial arts assessment to the planet level, the protagonist has never been seen returning home.

I just want to know how the rating mechanism of Qimao is rated. How can such a bad novel be rated 9.2?

It looked okay at first, but then it got worse and worse. Typos were everywhere and it gave me a headache! The struggle article is not like the struggle article, and the invincible article is not like the invincible article! Even the author didn't know the unit/currency of the money spent when buying a slave! A short essay on Cun Cun's AI

When fighting against cosmic geniuses and entering the tower, don't increase your strength in order to speed up your growth. The more you fight, the stronger your strength will be.

Licking dog garbage