Taking on Missions, Starting with Swallowed Star

Luo Feng had studied so long in advance and had reached the planetary level. How could he be crushed by a golden-horned behemoth at the second level of the planetary level? It's just the author adding random scenes to highlight the power of the golden-horned giant beast. It's really poisonous! Wasted my time, I really want to slap the author

In short, many of the opportunities that the protagonist got were stolen from the original protagonist's apprentice Luo Feng. There were hints, but he felt that the skills were not good. In the later period, the sense of existence was extremely meager and kept weakening. The talent of the protagonist is hard to describe. Even if there are hints, I can't understand it. The so-called genius is compared with other novels. ... Tsk, when he spent hundreds of years and failed to become a genius of the original universe, and was only a genius for hundreds of millions of years, he later felt that he was not as good as the original protagonist Luo Feng. He did not have the perseverance in his mood, and after reading so many books, he also had problems with his IQ, and he felt that his mind was immature... I read the book in vain...

Is it just me who feels the writing is a bit awkward? It feels quite outrageous, but I don't know what it feels like that I can't put my finger on, it always feels weird.

Personally I think it's very good

Nice

It was okay in the early stage, I made up the plot myself, but in the later stage, it was completely about snatching Luo Feng's fate and looking surprised. It was a mess.

Hello, author, why don't you continue to update?

Spending too much time describing other characters,

This is the only fanfic I can read so far.

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