Swallowed Star: The Great Nirvana Era

Animation kills people, it's so easy to wash away. Judging from the plot in the original novel, the little aunt in your heart is ruthless and murderous without batting an eyelid. It is not an exaggeration to say that she will do whatever it takes to achieve her goal. I don't know when Bai Yueguang came into the hearts of a lot of people. At the beginning, a lot of people wrote about her as the heroine. I don't know if it was a sperm or a brainwash by capital. Anyway, I personally don't like it. Judging from the original work, Li Yao was more unjust than her. Their family was ruined mainly because of her. Although Li Yao was not a very good person, he was also a strict father! Li Wei let this woman pamper her so much that she lost her respect for the world. It can be said that she was mainly responsible for Li Wei's death. Li Yao also took action directly in revenge, but this woman repeatedly came up with ideas to attack Luo Feng's family, and did not take into account the rules set by Hong and Lei Shen at that time. When Luo Feng first came to No. 9 For one year and three months, he was already a senior executive of the Extreme Martial Arts Gym. Even if Luo Feng was really dead inside at that time, if you touch his family, it would be a slap in Hong's face. If she really succeeds, how will Hong lead the team in the future? It will be difficult to lead the team if people's hearts are broken. So if Luo Feng's family really dies, she will definitely follow closely behind. She is such a stupid woman. What do you like about her? Do you like that she has big breasts and no brains?

In Swallowing the Starry Sky, there is no need to write an emotional scene, because you are not sure what to write, and it will be very embarrassing, which will lead to a decline in the quality of the book. If you look at someone who writes that enchanting one, is your plot okay? Isn't it embarrassing? You can play in Swallowing Starry Sky, but you can't get emotional. You see, the original heroine Xu Xin in Swallowing Starry Sky has no sense of existence at all. After leaving the earth, she can't write emotional scenes, so don't write them.

After reading a lot of Devouring fanfics, the author makes people's eyes light up! Especially if you join the military, how can our great country, China, be inferior to a martial arts school 👍

Just look at the aunt and the enchanting, go to hell with the vultures, the aunt is mine.

The Earth Chapter swallows the essence. If you recall it carefully, you will find that the plot of entering the universe in the original work is obviously not as detailed as the Earth Chapter. There is no need to rush out. If the Earth chapter is well written, it will be easier to become a fan classic. For example, enriching the details based on the original work will make it more vivid and real. For example, Zhang Haobai in "Swallowing the Starry Sky" wrote that during the actual combat assessment of warriors, although the examiner can call for help if he is defeated, it takes time for rescuers to come, and it is often too late, so those who are not strong enough are not protected. There are many more details. Once the details are written, the whole story becomes flesh and blood, making it more vivid and real. It is also a good supplement to the original work, and it does not necessarily require significant innovation in the plot.

What I'm most speechless about is that during the Genius War, the Earth inexplicably produced several more geniuses than in the original work. The point is that these people have nothing to do with the original work, and all of them performed better than City Lord Luo. It's too embarrassing to forcefully implant them, and they all ranked first in the Genius War. It's outrageous. If you have some relationship with the protagonist, you can become a peerless genius. The human race is going to support you. How are you doing wholesale of love here?

To be honest, I can understand that the author wants to describe the sacrificial spirit and tragedy of the army fighting against monsters, but I still feel that it is too stiff. I was quite surprised when I read it.

Can you learn the secret method created by the overlord of the universe without even understanding the laws? Just kidding

Brother, my aunt must accept me to pursue you. Even if Suye comes, I can't stop her.

The author has made too many magic changes, and he has not even understood the basic level of cultivation. The Rampant Demon God can be brought into the original universe, and he is also said to be the True God of the Void, and the True God of the Void can go through reincarnation. It is so funny. Except for the reincarnated life of the original universe, there is no way to enter the original universe. This should belong to the supreme rule. Even a mountain guest has to be reincarnated to enter the original universe. That witch is at the highest level of a god king, can she enter? The original owner's predecessor didn't have that ability.