Chaos Tai Chi in Swallowed Star

Yes, this time-travel is very novel. The time-travel of martial arts master Zhang Sanfeng has established the three views, IQ, EQ, handling style and the overall direction of opportunities. The character portrayal is also good. There are dangers, but they belong to his own nature. It is normal for the martial arts master to have hundreds of snacks. Overall, it's a good fanfic. It's much better than System, Stallion, and so on. A score of 8.9 Is definitely okay.

Finished reading. I want to break through the limitations set by the original book, but I also want to apply it, which makes me confused. It will collapse in the end and forcefully finish the book. I haven't read the original book thoroughly, so I want to innovate and write new stories, but my writing power is not enough. A whole big embarrassment. There are bright spots and big flaws. Can see.

The author is so far-fetched in order to create a conflict. A high-level beast will travel hundreds of kilometers away to human territory to find food for its children. It's incredible. Moreover, this bird still has subordinates. He is not at home to protect the children and goes to find food by himself. What are the subordinates used for?

There is a heroine who I don't want to watch

I just want to know how Zhang Sanfeng knew about Luo Feng's plot?

666Good idea

The Lord of Chaos City couldn't kill two immortals, and he was speechless.

I couldn't stand half of it. They were all copied directly from Devouring Starry Sky. Why should I watch the same thing if you don't watch the original version? One star, bad review.

Think about your own character and don't tarnish the character of others.

Very nice to look at.