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The author's cover is a bit interesting. It's a bit like he coded the cover of other novels and then wrote on it.
How to say it? The author crazily stresses his combat power. The protagonist has no hard power at all. He can only rely on improvisation and cleverness in battle. Moreover, the protagonist does not kill people but only talks about getting high. Moreover, the author arranges the enemies for the protagonist to be very strong, so every time he relies on others to resolve the crisis. This leads to complete ignorance of the protagonist's combat power level.
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I sincerely recommend it, it looks good, cheers for the author
Highly recommend everyone to buy it
This is the first time I wrote a Rainbow Dragon fanfic. After it became popular, many imitations were written about Rainbow Dragon.
The novelty of the subject matter is perfect, but the character creation is a bit emm. How can I say it? The behavior and speech of the characters all appear to be mindless, a bit too white.
It's still humorous, and if you're a fan of the old book, you must support it
The reason for giving it five points is because it is the first time someone writes a Douluo fanfic from this perspective. But the previous chapters were well written, but starting from Chapter 46, it became cliche again. It felt like a mutant horse and had no effect on the development of the plot. It would be better if the plot arrangement could be more reasonable. I hope it can be written well in the future. In the short term, I have no motivation to continue reading.
Hey, hey, are you serious? The protagonist has died many times, right? After dying so many times, are you still getting tricked? The setting of writing the protagonist to death and then losing a level of soul power and being infinitely resurrected is too outrageous. When you are weak, it is abstract enough to fight against two things in a big way. You have died so many times. Didn't you destroy all your goods after self-destruction? And what should you do if your ability is exposed after you have died so many times? If it's not exposed, it means it's smart. If it's exposed, it's extremely poisonous. You might as well force the protagonist to have a halo and the protagonist is lucky, or write the protagonist to be very cautious or have a hidden cheat or something. Are you serious about writing the protagonist as a barbed and reckless man who is not afraid of death?
I don't want to comment, but it looks good, eh
The highest level of illusion in the original universe is not only the virtual universe, but there are still people who look down on illusionists.
I'm writing a fanfic without even reading the original work. The current review is really Akaashi's. What a cat and a dog.
Liu Erlong is level 60 at the age of 25. You are really awesome. If nothing else, I will just say that Feng Xiaotian is innately full of soul power at the age of 25 and is only over 40. Liu Erlong is in his 40s and almost 50 and is only level 72. He is level 60 at the age of 25. With this kind of concept, anyone who can read the third chapter is a god.
As for Wuhun Dahai, you can actually choose to inherit the God of Life.
Not a bad idea indeed
The writing is so outrageous and a bit counter-intuitive. It feels like it was done on purpose.
By the way, the author guessed that the Nidhogg Fruit would also be powerful.
Unfortunately, it belongs to Loki, hahahaha
Left and right brain fight
The protagonist mentioned earlier that he was Yuan Yao and was Zi Ling. Later, when he met her, he disliked Yuan Yao for being popular and not the strong woman he liked.
Aboriginal, literary youth. All I can say is that the trial is a pitfall.
When the protagonist joins the LOL club, doesn't he just want to be popular? The protagonist can buy a skill with the strength of a professional LOL player from the system. Then he plays in the quarterfinals/finals/semifinals/finals, so his popularity is definitely high. Or don't take action in the quarter-finals/quarter-finals/semi-finals, and come to the finals specifically. The protagonist's popularity will definitely explode.
It's on the shelves, just waiting for it to be released in the updated video
Single heroine Gu Yuena? Or is it single or multiple?
When does the protagonist awaken his martial spirit? It is recommended to awaken the dual martial souls of the Gold and Silver Dragon King. You can fuse your own martial soul with the Dragon Divine Claw. The Golden Dragon King masters strength and stability (mountain), and the Silver Dragon King masters the elements of water, fire, earth, wind, light, darkness, space, the power of creation and destruction. The protagonist can also awaken several magic systems on his own. The original author said that the strongest power of a full-time mage is fusion magic. The three-eyed golden beast has the ultimate attributes of light and fire. There are also spiritual attributes. The protagonist happens to have the light attribute, but it is slow to reach the ultimate attribute from level 30 to level 70. Or you can directly turn the bones of the Ice and Fire Dragon King into the dual martial souls of the Ice and Fire Dragon King, and you can also wait for a pair of flying external soul bones. All the wing magic tools are saved. Relying on one of these three kinds of martial souls to meet the Silver Dragon King, the protagonist has a soul beast backer, and then asks the protagonist to go to Jinlin City in Dongting Lake and ask the Silver Dragon King, as the co-master of the soul beasts, to let all the soul beasts enter Jinlin City, including sea soul beasts. Dongting Lake happens to have a lake, and all the plant soul beasts that cannot move must also be taken away. The Heaven Dou Empire asked the Silver Dragon King to steal the Vast Sea Universe Cover. There is also the right leg bone of the Blue Silver Emperor. Without the soul beast, without the blue silver bloodline, without the Poseidon inheritance, Tang San's growth rate would definitely be much slower than the protagonist. Then all the soul beasts are required to collect resources for the protagonist in Dongting Lake, such as soul seeds, mineral veins, etc. Then he goes to the imperial capital to propose marriage to Mu Ningxue. Mu Ningxue will not object as long as his father agrees. The whole family works for the protagonist and sells resources. The protagonist then relies on the resources to quickly cultivate, and then rebuilds Jinlin City as the protagonist's base, allowing all soul beasts to transform, learn knowledge or awaken magic. When the protagonist reaches a certain level of cultivation, he will inherit the thrones of Poseidon and Shura God, and then cooperate with the Silver Dragon King inside and outside. The protagonist releases the Golden Dragon King in the divine world, and the protagonist plays tricks in it. Relieve the dilemma of soul beasts becoming gods, and then allow all soul beasts to transform into human forms at any time to develop technology. The original Dou Si is an interstellar universe. Then go to the full-time mage to find a way to inherit the Evil Saint King of Hades. Don't let Mo Fan succeed. The protagonist has to get everything and become the strongest.
Supplementary key tags: multiple female protagonists, torturing three and torturing the strong. It's the testing period for a new book, please read it and recommend it. Please read the latest chapter, please!
It's very well written. I have some thoughts about Xiao Wu's plan.
Author, you have laid the groundwork for so many calculations and various plans. If you can't get Xiao Wu in the end, just wait for the seven-star review.
It's a mess, the characters' names have been changed, and the plot keeps jumping around.
Na'er is almost gone, and Fusion can't run away.
Can
I've read Chapter 26 so far and there's nothing sinister about it.
The characters and plot are not that good, especially the characters, which are really lame
I am a newbie. If you have any questions, you can ask them in the comment area and the author will make changes in time.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
The water test has been promoted, and the investment boss will take a look.
This book is highly readable, has stable retention, and will definitely explode if you put it in. Welcome to the big publishers!
Feitian
Is there an undeleted version anywhere? Many of the current versions have been deleted.
The mountain god thought that he was very qualified, but the Buddhists who were looking after Sun Wukong refused to accept him, and there was no one to teach the protagonist the cultivation method, so they accepted him as a disciple and introduced him to Taoism. This era pays attention to the king of heaven and earth, the master, the master, but if you read the original work, you can know whether the person's life is good or not. There is nothing wrong with the person's life. Before becoming a teacher, he was free and easy. After becoming a teacher, he learned a lot of skills. He felt that he had great abilities. First, he went to the Dragon Palace to snatch treasures, and then made a big fuss in the underworld to change the lives of monkeys. A few, Lawless broke the rules of heaven, and later became an official in heaven, but the big bosses all knew that he was the son of calamity. He was given a low-ranking official, and later he was given a false position, but the Monkey King received the immortal robe, and later after causing trouble in the heavenly palace, the Buddha suppressed him to teach him a lesson and teach him how to be humble. People's lives are much better than yours. Those who make a few thousand a month are worried about those who make hundreds of millions a month. In addition to suffering some grievances on the way to seek enlightenment, this is a necessary experience for people's practice. After they succeed, they will directly take the civil service examination and get an official position. You are equivalent to ruining their practice and forcibly ruining other people's practice in the name of your own good. Let's not talk about the original novel, let's just talk about the TV series. Did the Sun Wukong in the TV series suffer any grievances? In other words, he suffered the grievances of Tang Monk on the way to obtain Buddhist scriptures, and he also wore a tight-banding curse. However, he also wore a tight-banding curse because he wanted to kill the Buddhist monks. Just because he was a son of calamity, he had to settle the score. Later, when he was appointed as an official in the Tiangong Palace, he felt that his talent was being humiliated. As long as he could calm down and practice, and treat these as training, he would not have the following problems. Even if he was wronged, it was just that he felt that his ability was too small in the Tiangong. The Queen Mother Pantao did not ask for his grievances, but as long as he can calm down and practice in the Heavenly Palace, his magic power will increase. The pure world view of Journey to the West is to cultivate the mind first, and then the magic power will come from it. He practices so quickly because he has a strong innate foundation. Otherwise, how can other human beings practice the golden elixir method? Regardless of whether it is Daluo orthodox or Taiyi Sanshu's golden elixir method, as long as it is the golden elixir method, why are those people practicing so slowly? It's not because they have a weak foundation. Even if they have good qualifications, they can't practice as fast as he does. Unless he has the kind of heaven-defying qualifications that can lead to enlightenment and reach the sky in one step. What he practices is Taiyi Sanshu's golden elixir method, not Daluo Jindan method, Daluo Tianxian. They are in the same realm as Taiyi Celestial Being, but their names are different. In Buddhism, they are called Dajue Jinxian, and in the Celestial Palace, they are called Taiyi Celestial Immortal or Daluo Celestial Being. Daluo Celestial Being has entered the Three Pure Heavens and Daluo Heaven. Those with orthodox Taoist backgrounds are called Daluo Celestials. Those who have not entered the Three Pure Heavens are called Taiyi Sanshu Taiyi Celestials. He must practice hard in the Celestial Palace. Later when I went to study for Buddhist scriptures, people also went to respectfully invite him, instead of being "asked" to escort him at Wuxing Mountain. After all, it was because his own cultivation was not adequate. There is also the real and fake Monkey King. There is a six-eared macaque who is good at listening. His weapon is the Suixin Iron Soldier. But if you look closely, the Suixin Iron Soldier is exactly the same as the Golden Cudgel. He can also do what Sun Wukong knows. Bodhisattva thinks closely. He will also feel pain when the curse is placed on him, which means that he is Sun Wukong who has not practiced well enough and the Heart Ape has escaped. The curse can also be applied to him. He is originally one person with two sides, and can distinguish between Sun Wukong and the six-eared macaque. Dharma, there is another way to find Patriarch Bodhi. Whichever of the two of them can tell the content of the Dapin Tianxian Jue, which one is the truth, because the Patriarch said that the Dharma is not taught to the six ears, so that means that he, a six-eared macaque, only has the ability. The body has Sun Wukong's magic power, but he does not have the skills practiced by Sun Wukong. When Heart Ape ran out, he was not only the six ears of the six ears that the founder said the law does not pass to the six ears, but also the third person, so he did not know the great immortal skills.
Full marks, love watching. Author, please update. 10 Updates a day😘😘😘
I hope the protagonist will travel earlier in the next book and capture Zhao Yazhi earlier.
What's written on the back? Author, you really wrote it randomly, I can't stand it.
Happy 520 to everyone! My babies are so stuck! !
So many 520! ! Then I wish everyone a happy 520! Grab red envelopes tonight! European point, non-point lottery! ! !
Not to mention anything else, I laughed so much that my stomach hurt. I hope it's not about a stallion.
Update quickly. I can't keep up with the updates.
Why hasn't the author put it on the shelves? The data has received good response
Qian Renxue is your mother, Qian Renxue, Qian Renxue. If she doesn't become the heroine, won't you write?
Is there any big shot to put it in?
Come on, let a big guy put it in, and explode the pods.
So, what is the protagonist's name? After reading five chapters, I didn't even tell you what the protagonist's name is.
Why are you talking about being reborn? I'm getting tired of looking at it.
A relatively good ration article, I don't know why no one has it
This is called life and death
I finally found another book that is about dual cultivation of life and life. It involves cultivating one's mind as well as spiritual practice. I think it can also add some insights into Journey to the West, which can be regarded as closely following the original intention.
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
Don't you have memory? That's hard to evaluate.
Testing the waters!
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23DAY丨Please design a death game, including game content and rules.
Copy "Late Night Convenience Store": Convenience stores can solve your daily life problems, but magical things happen in convenience stores late at night. Explore this convenience store and wish you a pleasant night. Rule 1: After 2 a. M., Convenience stores cannot turn on lights and can only use emergency lights; Rule 2: Don't deal with the cashier in a red dress, as all the goods she takes are bloody; Rule 3: Cans on the third shelf must not be opened. Conditions for passing the level: Survive until 6am without breaking any rules.