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[23DAY丨Please design a death game, including game content and rules]
[Game of Death: Midnight Mirror House] Game content: Participants enter a fully mirror-enclosed room. After midnight, all mirrors in the room will give birth to "mirror people". The mirror people will imitate every move of the participants. The game lasts for 24 hours. In the end, only real humans can survive. Game rules 1. The mirror person cannot act independently and completely replicates your movements, language and expressions. It has no independent consciousness, but it will awaken its self-awareness 10 minutes before the end of the 24-hour time limit and start hunting real people. 2. There is only one flaw in the room: the pupils of the real person will shrink under strong light, while the pupils of the mirrored person will never change. This is the only way to distinguish the true from the false. 3. It is forbidden to destroy the mirror. The shattering of the mirror will directly trigger the erasure of all members. 4. It is forbidden to close your eyes for more than 3 minutes. Closing your eyes for more than 3 minutes will be judged as "self-abandonment" and will be directly eliminated. 5. Before the game ends, you must find the only one of yourself in all the mirrors and complete self-identification. If you identify yourself incorrectly, you will be replaced by the mirror person.
This book can only be said to be average, but it should be based on my creation of the sequence, but the author's writing is not good. After more than 20 chapters, I have no desire to read it, and there are many poisonous points. According to the author's setting, as long as a certain emotion reaches the extreme, it can become extraordinary. People who can become extraordinary like this are everywhere, but there are not few. As for the three people I have written about so far, I don't know what extreme emotions they have, and there is nothing special about them. They can only be said to be too ordinary. , It's not that it's been that kind of emotion since childhood, but it's just the emotion of a certain period of time. Then according to this setting, wouldn't everyone be able to become it? After all, everyone may be able to reach the extreme emotion in a certain period of time, so is this so-called transcendence too cheap? There is also the latest chapter. According to the previous setting, the protagonist has lived for thousands of years and has seen too many things. Suddenly, the son of an old friend appears, and the son of the old friend looks almost exactly like the old friend. Can this be said to be reincarnation? But according to the previous setting of the earth, there is no possibility of reincarnation. As far as it is written so far, it is not worthy of four stars, but I will still give you four stars. After all, if you dare to write something, it is already a bonus.
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23DAY丨Death Game
Abyss of Fear - Human Fear Can Kill This is an abyss called fear. Players who are in it will have their inner fear magnified infinitely. From the moment the player steps into the abyss, they will be chased by monsters. Monsters are transformed from the player's imagination, and people's imagination is rich and terrifying, and the player's fear will also become their power. Rule: don't be afraid Stop imagining, stop fearing, and the monster will gradually lose power and eventually disappear. When the player dies, the monsters they imagined and feared will also disappear. Kill all fear monsters and the player passes the level In this abyss of fear, can people overcome fear? When you overcome fear, will you choose to kill monsters or players?
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OK, a very good book. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch.
Generally don't give low scores
There was only one sentence. I thought the Sequence Fruit was a foreshadowing for him, but I didn't expect it to be written off for The King of Fighters. Why would its eighth-level ability be something like lifting? Does it have anything to do with his sequence? Does it make sense to write about death for the sake of writing about death? Isn't it possible to complete it from other aspects? To portray a character so well and yet die so hastily? Is it worthy of the readers or worthy of the book? You should have some regrets when writing a book, but you are different from Shuai Ziwen. You are cheating. A lot of ordinary people died, but you don't actually feel anything. I didn't feel much when you described the deaths in other teams before, but I just felt it was a pity. But the one you spent so much writing on, suddenly died, is it just to set off the meaning? Or is it just to describe the difference between ordinary and rare professions? You have laid some foreshadowing before, but do you think this foreshadowing is reasonable? You want to talk about auxiliary, type, with this function, some people think it is okay, but he is the king of boxers in the ordinary, that is, a fighting profession. After you advance to the fighting profession, is it not for fighting, but to lift others? What about the auxiliary profession? I really don't understand. 90% Of the book reviews I write will not give low scores, but I have to give this one because it is so disgusting.
23DAY丨Please design a death game, including game content and rules.
Silent Hospital Pass conditions: Survive three nights in the hospital Hospital guidelines: 1. Keep quiet: Lights-out time is from 10pm to 6pm the next day. During the lights-out period, wandering in the corridors and making loud noises are prohibited. 2. Don't trust the "doctors" in white coats during lights-out. The medicines in their hands are not meant to cure illnesses. 3. When the lights in the corridor start to flicker, close your eyes immediately until the lights stabilize. 4. For your health, please wait for the medical staff to make rounds during the day.
First of all, Thunder God Vine is not suitable for this version (you can't get any version bonus), not to mention that the background birthplace of Longmen has nothing to do with the main plot, it is just for the sake of the childhood sweetheart Nan Qiuqiu. Also, are Earth Dragon Gate and Tian Dragon Gate even remotely related in the original work? How did they change from rivals to falling in love and killing each other here? The summary is like the work of a moment of enthusiasm (picking up soul bones like cabbage)
It's not bad, but it gets harder and harder to write as you go to the end. Either Goldfinger upgrades too quickly and is pushed all the way, or new and increasingly powerful villains keep appearing, and it's like a matryoshka doll all the way.
23DAY丨Design a death game
Copy background: Nuclear leakage has caused great changes in the world's ecological environment, a global ecological crisis, and constant natural disasters everywhere. Game content: This copy is a pure survival game. Please survive in the hands of natural disasters and companions. Number of copies: 50,000 Dungeon map: an abandoned old city (about 8,000 square kilometers) Rules: There is no time limit. You can pass the level if the remaining players are less than 100. Please note that natural disasters will become more frequent later on. Please pay attention to the copy time.
Please read, please read
Please keep reading, it's a trial period, read the latest chapter every day, thank you all
The author writes very well, he is more calm and rational, I really like this kind of writing
Eunuch
It's a eunuch, it's a eunuch, it's a eunuch, say important things three times
You are really good at handling things. I'll give you five stars for now.
If I can maintain this quality, I will pursue it to the end
There is no human skin left in Yang Jian. How funny.
It's difficult to give birth. What's the update speed? It's better to save the monthly ticket.
If you are so impatient, don't engage in literary creation. The most taboo thing about art is impatience.
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I like this book, I hope you will support it more
Has the author read the original work? When writing fan fiction, you must at least understand the original work.
The author's writing is quite good. It would be even better if he optimized the classic AI sentence patterns.
It's a good fanfic. It's neither overrated nor too exaggerated. I personally feel that it's quite comfortable to read.
It's long-winded, slow to advance, really tiring to read, and some parts are unreasonable.
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Hehehehe😁I posted it to make you jealous, aren't you envious? Are you jealous?
Is this gone? ? ? It looks pretty good
Hurry up, play back to the dormitory every night and risk being caught just to read your novel
Does it feel different from other canopy novels? Stay tuned and see~
This is my third time reading, it's such a good book. Whoever writes this model is the first!
If the setting is good, it depends on how it is written.
My evaluation is that it is a novel that is quite tiring to read.
I have read half of it now, and I bought the whole book directly, so I had to endure it and finish it. This book still continues Uemoto's style. At first, I thought it was a domestic version of Green Pig with harem elements, but I was disappointed. As a female author, Crab Jam's description of the character's emotions is very delicate, but the plot framework and plot advancement are relatively ordinary. Yan Huan gave me the same feeling as Fisher gave me, that they were all led by the plot. This kind of malevolence. There is a slight m-feel in the male channel when the main character is passive. I don't rule out that there are people who are good at it, but I really feel frustrated watching it. I prefer to see the distortion between the characters, but the distortion that centers on the male protagonist and the male protagonist is unable to grasp the overall situation will only make readers tired... Judging from everyone's comments, the writing of the second chapter is relatively poor. I feel the same way at the moment. I hope it will be better in the future. --------------------------- I finally finished reading it. Crab Jam's description of the characters and expression of emotions are quite beautiful, but there is still the same problem. There are still many problems with the plot framework and logic. The best feeling after reading it is definitely the fifth volume, followed by the extras, and the worst feeling is the second volume and the final volume. This kind of twist I was quite tired of reading the book with the male protagonist. Every time I read a part, I felt like I had to change my taste to regain my sanity. As a result, I read it intermittently for three months before finishing it. In short, the whole book was pretty good, but in the beginning I came here to read the light novel, but what did it do to me? This is not the case in our light novels () Okay, let's wait for Crab Jam's next book (｡••｡) By the way, Meow-chan is not a district, Meow-men!
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The following is just my personal opinion, no need to take it seriously if there are any differences: Apart from anything else, it is strange to add poisonous snakes to strange fires. Strange fires are obviously very explosive. Soul beasts with high explosive characteristics such as flames, bursts, explosions, etc. Can better display their strengths. Adding a poisonous snake can control and cause damage, but the damage is relatively low. In a duel at the same level, the damage may be objective. After all, the quality of the martial spirit is not low, but when it comes to high-level ones, it is useless and cannot be surpassed. Although the first soul skill is useless in the later stage, it can be challenged in the early stage, such as hitting a second ring with one ring or restraining a third ring. However, if the burst is insufficient (poisonous) and the control cannot restrain high-level soul masters, this means that this soul skill can almost only be used against soul masters of the same level. High-explosion soul skills are different. First of all, the alien fire martial soul is of a high level, and it also has a flame bursting soul ring. If it is against a third-ring soul master, as long as it is not a high-defense type, it is basically useless. I didn't dare to pick it up. If you rub it, you will be injured, and if you touch it, you will die. The author is purely based on my thinking when I was a child. I thought that the more attributes, the more awesome, and the poison attribute is a very awesome thing. But in fact, poison is a very useless thing. Those who are stronger than you will not be poisoned to death (simply speaking, it is the poison skill itself, not counting the poison you prepared). Those who are much weaker than you can be poisoned to death, but it is meaningless to the protagonist, because the protagonists of the novel fight against high-level villains. From a practical point of view, poison is also inferior. In nature, the poisonous snakes that we think are very powerful are actually very small in size. They mostly eat small animals such as mice and birds, and their size limits their combat effectiveness (maybe poison is a waste of energy, so generally poisonous snakes are not large). Pythons are different. There are no toxins but only numerical values. Most people can always exchange them for one when they encounter venomous snakes. When they encounter large pythons, they can send them directly. Therefore, the numerical value is more important, and poison can only be used as a backup method.
Can the author update a few more pictures a day? This is beyond sight.
Welcome to find fault!
Come on, come on, feel free to find faults, I spent a billion hours writing it, there are absolutely no loopholes! ! Welcome to provide follow-up plot suggestions, and we will make reasonable arrangements! ! See you on August 1st! !
If you have any comments, please feel free to give them. Thank you readers and teachers for your guidance.
Why do you feel that Goldfinger in You is so similar to Qin Feng in The Villain Doesn't Have Too Much Conscience
I took a look. Na'er's bloodline was replaced by the Golden Dragon King, and if Gu Yue had a complete Silver Dragon King bloodline, she could split the Dragon God's throne in half and incorporate it into Na'er and Gu Yue. Change the gold and silver dragon kings from devouring each other to become the dragon god to fusion skills to become the dragon god. In this way, the soul beast can become a god, and Na'er can survive.
What is the battery capacity of air conditioner remote control?
Is it really necessary to learn how to make talismans? It's better to just buy it. Anyway, it's a consumable for external use. It saves time and cost.
Although I haven't watched it yet, the results are still being updated. Come and take a look at the high and low points.
It's pretty good. Let's see what happens later.
Didn't Ke Miao realize that he was missing? Don't help
Sir, who is the male protagonist? Looking at the introduction, he is the brother of the original male protagonist, is he He Yunzhou?
Bad writing with illogical logic can make all the poisonous points of mortals fall into pieces.
It would be better to write about Qian Renxue than Qian Daoliu. Qian Daoliu is the evil soul master's most stern father😴😴😴
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This book is so special because there are so many legal loopholes that you can just throw it away and read it as a fictional novel. Much better than those novels that seem to be written in accordance with laws and regulations, but have one or two loopholes from time to time! You don't have to look around and find out which expressions and rhetoric are problematic, and you can't help but want to correct them. This may deviate too far from the actual law, but it will be easier for people to accept...