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The Madonna Bitch novel is really rubbish, primary school students have nothing to do to write books during the holidays.
The viewing experience is okay, but I like to write stories about traveling to other worlds. Even some of the traveling to other worlds are all supporting roles, which can be brushed off in one stroke. The ending is also very rushed. Oscar Yu Xiaogang and others have not yet written their ending. But despite its flaws, this book is totally worth reading.
You have a lot of discontinued books, and I'm a little hesitant to read them. Let's read them first, and then I'll review them later.
I can only say that there is no most outrageous one, only more outrageous ones. Douluo Fan Zone shocks me every time. Although I haven't read it yet, the introduction has already shocked me.
The writing is too exaggerated. How can tens of thousands of Daluo Jinxian come from? The power of the Demon Clan with the most Daluo Jinxian is only a few thousand at most! You have tens of thousands of Da Luo Jinxian from the human race! There are so many direct formations that Hongjun can touch! The strongest force of the demon clan is only a few thousand Daluo Jinxian and dozens of quasi-sages.
The author should be still young and immature in thinking, so keep working hard
Please tell me if this is a nanny article. It's okay to give it to your own woman.
Good book, worth reading. Now I'm following the author's new books.
The charm of the magical world lies in magic
Rather than political pull, especially the politics of barbarians in Europe, without the great power of one body, everything else is in vain.
This is literature. This is not a mindless YY novel.
I**, even if I give you the beliefs of humans and soul beasts in the Douluo Continent, you won't be able to gather the gods so quickly. It's still the creation god, the sea god, and the angels. It takes a thousand years to accumulate the beliefs of the sea and the Douluo Continent to create a level 1 god. You have to collect the beliefs of all the creatures in the Douluo Planet for at least a thousand years to create a god throne.
Very beautiful! Fufu's writing is super good! ! It's completely different from the style I've seen before. It's very novel.
The protagonist is like a retarded person. Why didn't he just throw the devil away in the Xutian Palace? Why should he still keep it with him?
I don't know how many times I've logged in, but I realized I had subscribed when I saw my own comments.
It's a pity that Yuewen made another subscription money from me. . .
Vision opens up a small world of time and space, and you can also hide things🤮, are you kidding me? He was so awesome that he had to smash the dragon-patterned black gold cauldron with one punch. Digging shit.
I feel sick when I see the level reduction. I was born at level 20 and upgraded to level 6 in four years. Are you kidding me?
The fusion technology probably dissuaded many people.
Not ideal
Gold-level power-up items can enhance other things to gold-level, so why can't the cause and effect of diamond-level affect diamond-level? Although the protagonist's abilities are gold-level, they are still very expressive. Some abilities can even be said to be more than gold, right?
It's too bland, a daily article, without the flavor of One Piece
It's a pity that the heroine is so young and doesn't have CP. Give me one
I was puzzled because the system allows the protagonist to choose martial arts without restrictions, so why not choose the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger? Or maybe broaden your horizons and choose a Dragon God whose martial soul can directly inherit the Dragon God's throne. The protagonist should know how much the Dragon God is in Dou Si, and even if Dou Si's version is not included, the dragon gods in the other three versions are at least God Kings.
Didn't you delete my comment? You are such an amazing author. As soon as I saw the third chapter, I was poisoned and died. This protagonist has no brains at all, and to add to his point, he doesn't choose his family background. As far as Douluo is concerned, what's the use of comprehension, and it's still a simulation. The protagonist in the simulation has no brains, doesn't understand the meaning of beauty and trouble, and pushes Bibi Dong away. She is already in love with the mainland. No matter which direction she is, if she is transformed, she will be perfect. To put it simply, the simulator does not simulate the life of the protagonist, but advances the plot. The author of the super invincible genius, do you like my 7 hearts? It may not affect you, you can delete it again, it's funny.
I don't know if I can break a million words.
Where's Xie Xie?
Boss, where did our King Xie Xie go? He just disappeared.
,,, This book is unfinished, what a pity
I have an appendix. If it's not bad, then it's okay. The main thing is that it's bad.
Can anyone explain why it is not updated now? ? ? ? ? ?
What did you write?
Are you so awesome in a tertiary hospital? Was he sent to a community hospital to feel weak? Being deafened by the director of a community hospital? What about your temper in a tertiary hospital? Do I have to set the system to the community hospital after being prescribed? And then meet your heroine? What settings? Do you have any medical skills to suffer this injustice? It's not like you have no money? Can't open a traditional Chinese medicine clinic?
It's so good at pulling. It's full of all kinds of pulling. It's endless. The more you look at it, the more angry you get. This golden finger is of no use to the protagonist. It slipped away.
Just from reading the introduction, you can tell that it's a staff-making plot.
If you like brainless sweets with some yellow, you can choose to watch it. If you don't like it, you don't need to watch it.
I don't know why, but after reading this book, I just felt that something was missing. Every short story was obviously good, but something was missing, and the finale was also very rushed. The story of "Guan Yu Qing Hua" is so-so from beginning to end, even a little incomprehensible, the link is not linkable, it is very stiff, and it is a bit tacked on. The story of the small world is rich in content, but the content of the story is so-so, as if it ends just after the beginning, like one blow after another. Of course, some small worlds are good, but they are only a few, and most of them are too blunt. The male protagonist in each world gives me the feeling that he is just looking for a wife and having sex. Each one insists on adding the matter of having sex in the middle, and there is no delicate emotional description. Each story is sweet, but they are not connected with the following stories. The end of the story still shows the scene of the male and female protagonists meeting and bumping into each other for the first time. There is not even a scene of how they are moved in the small world and knowing that they like each other, and there is no desire to seduce the readers to read it a second time. It is dispensable. It gives me the feeling that after watching the beginning, you can go directly to the end, because it doesn't matter whether you watch the middle or not. You can connect them directly. No one will care about the same process. It is to complete the same purpose of the male and female protagonists being together. There is content but not much😔😔😔😔😔😔
The two identities should have been revealed from the beginning
Zi Yan bought the token to protect the Xiao family, but he never thought that the two were related, okay? People in the novel have no brains.
He just licks dogs, he licks when he sees a woman, he likes second-hand things, he has no brains, he also likes to dance, he doesn't listen to readers' opinions, and the Iron Curtain's muzzle is not loose at all.
Write more, write more 😋😋😋😋, come and open your eyes with Gorgeous Hunter and Dual Hilt Tang's Infinite Warrior
Not updated yet? Write more and boys and girls will like to read it
One of the best descriptions of large-scale wars, bar none
Due to personal hobbies and having read countless types of war historical novels, Lao Bai is the master who writes the best large-scale war battle scenes I have ever seen! I won't comment on the plot or conceptual framework (that's a radish, everyone has their own preferences). Just talking about the description of big scenes, I haven't come across anyone better than Lao Bai. In fact, Xu Nanming is more mature and delicate, but it's a pity that the update was discontinued. Alas...
The things the heroine says most of the time are so stupid that I am speechless and unable to complain.
It's really smelly, long, and disgusting.
It's so anti-human!
Even if the protagonist is stupid, he doesn't have the ability to think politically!
The protagonist can do what Chen Laoliu did, steal the eye stone and put it in the demon tribe, wait for the Nazca Monster Bird Legion to come out and fight the demons, wait for the demon tribe to be crippled, come out to pick up the soul, and sell the body. If you repeat it a few times, the protagonist can return to the peak, and pick up at least tens of thousands of remnant souls once. The reward for the number one in the country can be given by Xinxia for nothing, and the protagonist can sell it to the second place at a high price. The protagonist of the Altar of the Void can work with Mo Fan.
A good book, it looks pretty good.
Excuse me, this pig's foot doesn't need to hunt for soul rings, so why go to the soul master school? I still go to Shrek and want to be trained like a dog, but I still don't know how to write without Shrek.
Excellent Ai revision article, better than the kind that is all about environment description
Give the author some encouragement.
This star is to encourage the author. There's only so much. Otherwise your conscience will hurt.
Has the author not been released yet?
Very good-looking, very good-looking.
I really want to read the extra chapter about Nan Mo and the little princess Nuo Nuo. It can be completed in a big way!
It's really a dog-licking holy lady's pig's feet. Everyone becomes a god. What a fool. In a world where there is only birth and no death, it is ideal for this fool to lick the trotters of dogs and pigs. Moreover, people have desires, will be selfish, and will fight and fight for resources. After all, resources in the world are limited.
He licks dogs and pigs' feet, and he still hasn't seen a woman. It's a girl and she's so strong.
Directly ten times more enlightened? Would it be invincible to have five times the physical strength, five times the understanding plus the previous life?
I opened the author's homepage and took a look. It's weird to read this. I have written so many books and none of them have been completed. This one is probably the same.
Kunyu, go to Manwen, go to Youyi, what the hell are these place names?