
Feitian
by Yue Qianchou
About This Novel
The world is cold and cold under the sky, and the demons and monsters are no match for the enemy! Slender and tender, beautiful as jade, but the sword energy between heaven and earth is like a rainbow! The vast starry sky, the seven emotions and six desires, greed, anger and ignorance, the Tathagata Buddha, your power is boundless! All living beings, their sincere wishes are met with a sea of blood! Ghosts are crying and gods are howling, the sea of blood is boundless, I dare to ask where is the way! Since there is no way out, let it go through the sea of suffering and blood, turn its bones into a boat, and soar into the sky!
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It was fine at the beginning, but later on the protagonist simply did whatever he wanted! If you see a woman, rape her! Regardless of friendship! He is a scumbag, with a perverted heart. He simply does not regard the maid as a human being. In the later stage, he is basically a scumbag to the extreme. For the sake of power, his wife even wants to kill him. He is a great flatterer! In the finale, it can be seen that none of his former brothers want to be with him. He will do anything for power. I feel that the author has a personality defect. Why did he write such a person? There is also the fact that the protagonist's cultivation talent is poor.
To be honest, the writing of this book is really lacking, and there are far fewer typos than other authors. However, there are indeed some things that are not well portrayed. It is true that Pig's Knuckle's character flaws are too big and will be repaid with hatred. Some things will be over when they are over, so there is no need to hold on to them. Some little people have offended you, but they obviously no longer pose a threat afterwards, so there is no need to kill them. The plot setting and relationship combing are also somewhat lacking. Why did he almost fall out with Bai Laosan for the sake of the country? If there is an enlightenment like Bai Laosan, a friend who is both a teacher and a friend, what do I want him to do?
It's almost the end. To be honest, I have never seen such a disgusting novel since I read it online. Both the protagonist and Yang Qing beside him are extremely disgusting. All three views were ruined, especially the scene between Yang and Su later, which was really disgusting. I endured my impulsiveness until the end, and I regretted it. It was a novel with no standpoint at all. The characters were despicable and resorted to all possible means. Women were like tools. This kind of novel was really not written by humans. It can be seen that the author himself has no position to speak of. You can describe cruel reality in fantasy novels, but as the protagonist himself, you cannot be complicit in reality. Otherwise, what is the point of the novel? If the protagonist can't even speak of justice, what's the point of this novel. Finally, I would use four words to comment: extremely disgusting.
No follow-up? I want to see the rebuilt heaven, after Zhan Ruyi's reincarnation, did Yan Xiu find the reincarnated Luo Zhen, the future of Bajie and Mu Ling'er, and what happened to Miao Yi and Yun Zhiqiu's children
Don't blame me, I'm already autistic.
The front looks good, but the back looks autistic to me. What the hell is this? Author, do you have the nerve to say this is a fairy tale? I am also convinced. No wonder I am afraid of bumping into Chen Dongergen and the others, which will ruin my outlook. Friends who want to see it, I won't stop you, but let me warn you, don't take it seriously! Don't be serious! Don't be serious! (Say important things three times) Just take a look. Some chapters are broken. You can read them elsewhere. I read them on the website and then come back to pick them up. Not much to say, I am still autistic and uncomfortable. I don't think I will be able to recover in time. [Emot=default,06/]
This is my sign-in building! I can only sign in alone.
This is my sign-in building! I can only sign in alone.
Why do you feel so confused that you can't stand it anymore? Even sex has to be arranged by Yun Zhiqiu. Does this mean that you are married to a mother? The author wants to be romantic, but he didn't know that the bride with pig horns is her mother. How do we feel about this feeling? Have you ever thought about the readers' feelings?
I originally thought that it would take a lot of effort for Lao Yue to conquer the Shadow Guards, but in the end, Yan Beihong was dispatched to infiltrate the Shadow Guards and instigate rebellion against the Shadow Guards. Finally, he led the shadow guards to assist Bajie in annihilating the demon monk Nan Bo. Then Yan Beihong led the remaining shadow guard forces to develop again and became Miao Yi's law enforcement team. Lao Yue was so panicked.
The title tells you who Xiaonan is
Taojun
I really like your writing about Taojun. But if I don't like your book, why should I start a harem? Is it because the protagonist lacks love? I really don't want to give it a single star.
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It was fine at the beginning, but later on the protagonist simply did whatever he wanted! If you see a woman, rape her! Regardless of friendship! He is a scumbag, with a perverted heart. He simply does not regard the maid as a human being. In the later stage, he is basically a scumbag to the extreme. For the sake of power, his wife even wants to kill him. He is a great flatterer! In the finale, it can be seen that none of his former brothers want to be with him. He will do anything for power. I feel that the author has a personality defect. Why did he write such a person? There is also the fact that the protagonist's cultivation talent is poor.
To be honest, the writing of this book is really lacking, and there are far fewer typos than other authors. However, there are indeed some things that are not well portrayed. It is true that Pig's Knuckle's character flaws are too big and will be repaid with hatred. Some things will be over when they are over, so there is no need to hold on to them. Some little people have offended you, but they obviously no longer pose a threat afterwards, so there is no need to kill them. The plot setting and relationship combing are also somewhat lacking. Why did he almost fall out with Bai Laosan for the sake of the country? If there is an enlightenment like Bai Laosan, a friend who is both a teacher and a friend, what do I want him to do?
It's almost the end. To be honest, I have never seen such a disgusting novel since I read it online. Both the protagonist and Yang Qing beside him are extremely disgusting. All three views were ruined, especially the scene between Yang and Su later, which was really disgusting. I endured my impulsiveness until the end, and I regretted it. It was a novel with no standpoint at all. The characters were despicable and resorted to all possible means. Women were like tools. This kind of novel was really not written by humans. It can be seen that the author himself has no position to speak of. You can describe cruel reality in fantasy novels, but as the protagonist himself, you cannot be complicit in reality. Otherwise, what is the point of the novel? If the protagonist can't even speak of justice, what's the point of this novel. Finally, I would use four words to comment: extremely disgusting.
No follow-up? I want to see the rebuilt heaven, after Zhan Ruyi's reincarnation, did Yan Xiu find the reincarnated Luo Zhen, the future of Bajie and Mu Ling'er, and what happened to Miao Yi and Yun Zhiqiu's children
Don't blame me, I'm already autistic.
The front looks good, but the back looks autistic to me. What the hell is this? Author, do you have the nerve to say this is a fairy tale? I am also convinced. No wonder I am afraid of bumping into Chen Dongergen and the others, which will ruin my outlook. Friends who want to see it, I won't stop you, but let me warn you, don't take it seriously! Don't be serious! Don't be serious! (Say important things three times) Just take a look. Some chapters are broken. You can read them elsewhere. I read them on the website and then come back to pick them up. Not much to say, I am still autistic and uncomfortable. I don't think I will be able to recover in time. [Emot=default,06/]
This is my sign-in building! I can only sign in alone.
This is my sign-in building! I can only sign in alone.
Why do you feel so confused that you can't stand it anymore? Even sex has to be arranged by Yun Zhiqiu. Does this mean that you are married to a mother? The author wants to be romantic, but he didn't know that the bride with pig horns is her mother. How do we feel about this feeling? Have you ever thought about the readers' feelings?
I originally thought that it would take a lot of effort for Lao Yue to conquer the Shadow Guards, but in the end, Yan Beihong was dispatched to infiltrate the Shadow Guards and instigate rebellion against the Shadow Guards. Finally, he led the shadow guards to assist Bajie in annihilating the demon monk Nan Bo. Then Yan Beihong led the remaining shadow guard forces to develop again and became Miao Yi's law enforcement team. Lao Yue was so panicked.
The title tells you who Xiaonan is
Taojun
I really like your writing about Taojun. But if I don't like your book, why should I start a harem? Is it because the protagonist lacks love? I really don't want to give it a single star.
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Whether a story is wonderful or not depends on what it expresses. There are many fairy-xia novels, most of which feature immortals and the narrative method is Xiu. The protagonist walks all the way to the end, leveling up, killing people, leveling up again, and finally killing the final BOSS. This is a very basic writing method, using a lot of words to show the strength of an individual. After reading this kind of novel, it is like a dream, the author uses words to fulfill the reader's dream. What is the expression of Feitian, who is also a fairy novel? Personally, I think that besides immortals, there are more heroes. Chivalry is not chivalry, chivalry is just a martial arts. We often think that cultivating immortals means constantly strengthening oneself and reaching a state of killing gods and Buddhas. Lao Yue explained what cultivation of immortality is from another perspective. It turns out that cultivating immortals is also a world, and there are also disputes. There is love between children and there is also intrigue. There are spells to fight against, and there are swords and guns to see the red. Other writers make readers have beautiful dreams, but Lao Yue takes readers to a place: Look, this scene is the world of immortals, just like the world of mortals. What is a hero? To be invincible, to look down on the world, to be arrogant among the heroes, to be lonely in the world, heroes have wine, heroes have tears, heroes have enemies to kill, heroes have to be accompanied by beauties. These are the heroes we imagine. In fact, heroes are short of breath, and heroes also have their end. Whether it was Guan Yunchang who walked to Maicheng or the King of Chu who defeated Wujiang River. Or the wronged Qiao Feng and the grief-stricken Yang Guo. It is not always smooth sailing for a real hero. Even Lao Bai, who can turn the world upside down with a wave of his hand, is still stuck and unable to control himself. Lao Yue did not write Miao Yi as a protagonist who cultivates immortality with traditional characteristics, but wrote him closer to reality. Maybe he has encounters that our readers cannot imagine, and he has abilities and actions that are stronger than our readers, but he is not perfect, and he also has flaws. He is more like a powerful mortal than a superior cultivator. He also has emotions and flaws. But he is real and can be substituted by readers. Lao Yue did not write the more popular Biography of Lao Bai or Biography of Miao Yi, not because he did not have the ability and that kind of writing style, but because the characters written in this way are more realistic and realistic. Perhaps after reading this novel, we will find it grounded. This novel is not about surprising someone at all, but also writes a certain artistic conception. After all, throughout the entire novel, the main thread running through the story is the grudges and grudges between Lord Qingbai, and the so-called protagonist Miao Yi is just the thread that links the story. This thread does not need to be too beautiful.




I have fallen in love with this work unknowingly. The works he writes are a bit confusing and ethereal, and the emotions he writes are simply breathtaking and can't help but make people's hearts move. Just like in the book, "If the sea dries up, there is still a drop of tear, and that is me, waiting in vain for you for a thousand reincarnations.




Fantasy Directions to all heavens and all realms From the small world to the big universe, to the emperor of the original universe, he ascends to the throne, and there are so many beauties, a typical article about dominating beauties, which is both exciting and suffocating. The protagonist is a bit exaggerated and the story is thick












