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26DAY丨Si Wuming scene

I think it's the cute way Si Wu looks like a curious baby eating here and there in the exhibition hall.

Good looking, but my ex-husband is just a rotten cabbage

The heroine missed her in her previous life, will she repay her kindness in this life? I hope both of them have good outcomes in this life! ! ! Male protagonist, stop testing, close your eyes and rush

Two stars! Can enter. Not decisive enough in killing

26DAY丨Si Wuming scene

Chapter 1, when he first appeared, he was wearing a bloody hospital gown and chasing the player, saying "Don't run, people"

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Can you collect all the beauties? Is there a book club?

Ah, Swallowing Starry Sky said something unpleasant. In fact, there is no need to care about anyone in the original universe except Mountain Guest and Luo Feng. They are all pendants anyway.

No other tricks, highly recommended. If you want to eat big rice, you can try it.

Another potential new book, with a great world view, and the cheats are not too outrageous, making it very immersive. Recommended

The scumbag father is such an idiot, waiting for Mingyue to strike back at my aunt

There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating

I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.

I was brought here by Madoka

Doesn't this have anything to do with Puella Magi Madoka Magica?

There are indeed many bugs in the author's book. I don't recommend reading it directly and read the original work. It has no focus. I suggest you read the fan fiction directly and then describe it in detail based on the original work. Now I feel that it is really written. Gu Yue's elements are not as good as those of a single-element soul master. That's so funny. In his true form, the Silver Dragon King, people understand the law. I remember her soul skills such as elemental tides are to increase the elemental power. Gu Yue's character in this book is as silly and sweet as Na'er I don't recommend writing about battles. Let's write about romance.

Too illogical and incorrect outlook

Xu Jiazhen beats her daughter (because her daughter ate the roast chicken given by the protagonist), but the protagonist is unable to stop it or is unwilling to stop it. Later, Xu Jiazhen wants to use his own dog to compensate the protagonist for the roast chicken, and he seems unable to stop it. I am really impressed by the protagonist's ability or force to have a relationship with Xu Jiazhen.

very nice

The writing is really interesting and good.

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This book is relatively okay, quite nice.

Do you want to continue to trick the protagonist? Or cheating? 🤔

Every morning I wake up and read four thousand words. Who understands my family? 😭😭

Okay, it's pretty good, unlike those. After reading the introduction, I thought it was pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, or the protagonist is obviously invincible, but in the end, the protagonist does not know his own strength. In many novels, the protagonist is invincible, but does not know his own strength, and then the cute baby runs out to stir up the storm.

26DAY丨Si Wuming scene

I have the same opinion as everyone else. I feel that every scene is a famous scene and very impressive. When he first appeared, he said that people should not run away, that he is a pure-blood race, while pinching Qian Mian's neck, hahahaha, Ah Wu is so cute🤥🤥. It's also very profound that everyone in the back is good friends, Ah Wu is so cute! Especially after telling Li Huahe that he was his first friend, it was very funny to turn around and tell Zhou Er'er that he was his first friend in front of Huahe😯😯. Hua He: Am I not your first friend? Ah Wuming has too many scenes, and his appearance is the pinnacle! Ah Wu Wudi! Awu rush rush!

Guys, this is my first time trying to write. I am a bad novel writer. I wanted to write one myself after reading a lot of fan fiction. I may not be as good as everyone else in terms of understanding. There will be some unreasonable settings. I didn't write well at the beginning, but I will try my best to write better in the future. Thank you all. If there are any unreasonable things, please feel free to criticize them. Thank you for your tolerance.

I've read Chapter 83, but it's not interesting or exciting.

Middle and lower ‖ It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away

Book Review No. 8️⃣3️⃣ . In the review of the book you put next door... I saw someone mentioned that the book was not as good as this one, so I searched for it. Turns out I've seen it before. I can only say that I am very disappointed. I was originally thinking that there might be some hidden gem that I have not read before, but it turned out to be this one. Tsk. . In terms of absolute quality, this book is better than the one you read elsewhere, but the author's evaluation of it is that it is a book that I dare to write. Because what they wrote is too linear. People's line is that no one is qualified to forgive on behalf of the suffering person. Therefore, all things are created to nourish people. It means the hand rises, the hand falls, the hand rises, the hand falls, the hand rises, the hand falls. . The author's route is not the same as other people's routes, but there are many roads, and it seems that the author of others is not the road he wrote, but in order to cross the line, he can only write that way. Because this involves the issue of the elephant in the room. Everyone knows who was there in that era, and everyone knows that there are hidden dangers in that elephant. But I couldn't write about it, it was a topic that I couldn't even touch. Therefore, the author did not go into more in-depth writing and just limited the story to the creation of all things to nourish people. But even if you don't consider these, just look at the literary quality. The route that the author chose in the book is also very close to the mark, that is, the writing is very difficult, leaving room for imagination, and the plot redundancy is very high. Similarly, because of the extremely high difficulty, the track is very niche, or it is very new, after all, no one has written it. Therefore, it is high risk and high reward, so even if the quality of its writing is at a slightly inferior level, its huge highlights in other aspects make up for this, so the author gave it a mid-to-high rating. The author's evaluation is that it is too brave. . And what about this book? Although the writing style of this book can be said to be above average, it is only as good as it is good. There is no sense of surprise. It can only be said to be good. It is difficult to say whether it can even reach excellence. Comparing the writing style with that of The Immortal Lying Down, there is an obvious huge gap. This book lacks too much experience and too much precipitation in terms of writing. The book in which the immortal lies is not to the author's satisfaction. This book has all the problems that that book had, or even more. . The highlight of this book is only limited to the writing style, but there are too many problems other than that. In the author's opinion, this book is similar to stereotyped writing, and the writing is extremely formulaic. Not to mention the core, there is almost nothing that belongs to me. What's even more of a joke is that the author rarely writes about Xue Xingbaoli's scenes in order to pass the mark. Then the author's little ingenuity comes in. The author uses a lot of Shi Niaopi jokes to fill this kind of plot. The author is not saying that Shi Niao Pi is not good, but the author wrote a joke about Shi Niao Pi in a scene that should be serious and solemn. So is there a lack of respect that should be there? For example, in the village where a family was affected by malaria, the author was formulaically sensationalizing, while at the same time writing about the skin of a stone, sinking into a stone, drowning in a stone, and so on. What does it mean? Even if the author thinks this is humorous, has the author forgotten that he was formulaic and sensational just a second ago? So can the author think that the author's writing is so formulaic that he doesn't even know what he is writing? The author just had a sudden inspiration, so he just added the Shi Niao skin joke he thought of directly into the plot regardless of the occasion? . It can only be said that the author has a kind of dazzling and formulaic aesthetic sense. What a public servant. . In terms of core, there is no core in formulaic writing. As for the plot, it seems boring because of the formula. In terms of character creation, it is also heavily stereotyped because of the formula. In terms of plot logic, it is also because of the formula that we can clearly see the very deliberate development of the plot, including but not limited to, a combat unit with 3,000 regular personnel and several times more reserve personnel. Among them, the only guidance unit, which can even be said to be the most flexible and elite unit, is equipped with drivers who can fight at critical moments. Why do you write this? Formulaic opposition, formulaic slap in the face, formulaic little cream Chao Mo. Another example is the intern who keeps talking nonsense there, even in emergencies. For another example, in order to reproduce a famous painting, the protagonist went out to investigate while holding a cigarette, but the smoke was gone and the protagonist did not find out. For another example, the boss in the cafeteria said in front of everyone in the cafeteria not to fall in love with these people. There is no tomorrow for them. After the war, they can find someone with sound hands and feet. Some things can be said but not said, and some things can be said but not done. It's not that there's anything wrong with what a plus-size person says, but it should be said in private. How can he survive if he says it in front of so many people? For another example, the range of the protagonist's golden finger is very strange. If you look at the three people at the beginning from the perspective of pushing the blame, it can be said to be a very good plot design. What is the result? Why does he know butterfly? The protagonist's golden finger can highlight people without any field of view, but then he doesn't highlight the butterfly? Hey, why don't you take a step back and say that you didn't mark it or show your name? In this plot, Goldfinger is directly acting as the governor, and Meimei is invisible. Why? Because the author just wants to recreate famous scenes. I haven't even figured it out yet. If that person's psychological quality is so good and he shows it to me generously, won't he then ask to look at your shoes? Why did he just acquiesce that he was exposed instead of being deceived? . There are far more problems than these, but I am too lazy to write more. I can only say that there are too many problems in this book. In the final analysis, it is because the author's writing is too formulaic and the author has almost nothing of his own. Rather than being a hell joke, Shi Niao Pi's bad jokes are more like the author's own. . In fact, the formula for writing a book is not a problem. The problem is that the author did not write it well. There are many 8+1 books in old bottles and new ones, and there are also many books that have written something. For example, I forgot about the book about dancing. Classic urban cake prosperous harem. But that book was really well written. That book is really, once I read it, it feels old, but even though it is old, it looks like this book is really good. . And what about this book? At first glance, this book seems to be carved in the same mold as Xuan Gou. Hyun Gou is the formulaic devil's advocate. This book is formulaic writing. To be honest, this book can be rated 9️⃣0️⃣. I can only say that formulas also have their advantages. In everything, old people come and new people come. There are always new people coming and old people leaving. Although formulaic things may seem boring to those who have seen them a lot, they may be interesting and fresh to newcomers and those who have seen them less. It can't be because of the writing style. Regardless of the physical book, even the writing style of this book in the online article can only be described as impressive.

Sister Bai has it. Forget it, it's not yours. Sister Bai sighed. The 6-cent Party retains the sigh that it is not 6-cent. 6 Mao Party members can stay and screen readers: Green Cat

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26DAY丨 So far, what is Si Wu's famous scene?

In front of all the players, he directly killed the rule monster disguised as an NPC. His expression remained unchanged, which made me so handsome!

Really want to see it

I want to check it out, but I don't have a membership... Sigh😮‍💨, I don't usually use this platform, so signing up for a membership is like useless

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There are too few good fanfics written by Sun and Moon, and too few fanfics written with support.

When writing about Huashan faction fans, you should at least read the original work instead of watching a few episodes of the adapted TV series before starting to write.

Brother's writing is very good, but there are too few updates every day.

I hope it doesn't stop updating, it's quite nice.

I remembered that the book was blocked. That book was about the original castle. He used the secret method, but he was also a clone of the Worm of Time. But for some reason, he went crazy. The original book also had very good results and was always at the top of the monthly vote list.

Very brainless

Little white text, no brain flow 10 silver coins can buy 15 points of blood or 1 point of shield. So what would a normal person choose? And 70 knights only have 1500 blood. The protagonist Kaka buys a shield, and his brain is underdeveloped. There are also 1,000 gold coins that can be used to buy talents. Let me ask you, is it not good to buy 150,000 blood with 1,000 gold coins? Also buy chicken feather talent. What is the concept of 150,000 blood? I think the author has no idea and is stupid. This kind of book is a no-brainer.

Ah ah ah, I am going crazy, what is written? This is

26DAY丨Si Wuming scene

To be honest, I just thought about it for a long time and felt that every time the baby appeared, it was a famous scene. For example, at the beginning, she was wearing a blood-stained hospital gown with a pale face in the dark, scaring people so much that they ran away and she chased them, "People, don't run away." For example, in the movie Don't Look Back, you kill people all over the place, and you can manually make people turn around and continue killing people. For example, burning posters, and later killing the monsters escaping in the posters. For example, the baby chats randomly when adding friends. You are the first friend I add, and you are also the first friend I add. The enthusiastic baby agrees to every request of a good friend. For example, at the beginning of the museum, a bloody hand and head emerged from the door and said sorry. It was all blamed on the previous group of players. When they killed them, the baby was covered in blood, which scared the new friends.

Cool! ! ! ! Be more decisive in killing and stop talking nonsense. I don't eat beef directly

Your mother is a stitch monster. Just write Douluo, why do you want to write Digimon? Even if you write about Digimon, you still have to be Douluo as the main character. Why else write about Digimon world invading Douluo world?

It can be said that before abandoning his wife, others were so kind to him, and then you wrote it like this. A woman who doesn't want to be with him wants to live in the original world, right? A girl seemed to have a best friend relationship with her master as soon as she wrote it down. It seemed like it didn't matter as the story progressed. They were actually emotionally attached to each other, and they looked like they were obviously a couple. However, you just made it look like a couple. Then later on, a girl came out. After being fucked by you, she didn't have any feelings at all at first, but then she became the heroine. She's such a fucking talent.

It can be 👍 I hope it won't be like the other one, where the male protagonist is just a tool and has absolutely no performance in front of others. It feels like a thrilling story in the later stages, just like an adventurer being captured by goblins and taken into a cave.

It looks really good so far. When will it be updated?

This book is very good. The author must keep it updated and don't stop updating it. You must do it, author! ! !

26DAY丨So far, what is Si Wu's famous scene?

The most famous scene is definitely the first appearance, chasing people, trampling them to the ground, and then there is the "haha" voice-activated light. I didn't expect the boss to control the voice-activated lights like this, but it's weird to stamp my feet like me... The latest one is also very shocking. Although she didn't write it in detail, she said that she had knifed the previous batch of players!

Very nice

I like farming articles very much, especially about farming by powerful and wealthy people, because they will promote technology, change people's livelihood, and ultimately benefit the whole people!

Will Qingjiao's book allow you to clear the God King dungeon and explore other worlds, like "Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thousand Worlds System" and "Dou Po: Yibao System"

The author is great, is there a female protagonist? Is there more than one or only one?

Lots of updates, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, love to listen (✪ω✪)

A very good book, very interesting, the author also has great ideas

I saw Chapter 117, Flying Thunder God, Purple Lightning, Senjutsu, Repulsion, Hatake Sword Technique, and ended up fighting Orochimaru for a long time. Magnetic Release was just like a decoration. Don't you know how to control the kunai to fly around? ? ? After writing again and again, the Akatsuki organization and Konoha are both immortal.

Copy Douyin to Kaixin Luxury Bag Collection to recycle it! I will write a lot based on his cases.

The new book is in its testing phase, and I hope you will support me a lot.