Artillery Arc

Visual inspection of the grass jelly that I started with. If nothing unexpected happens to the author, it should be a big hit. Hurry up and update 100 pictures a day.

I am Pan Hong. As everyone knows, my 66 ran away! Poor 66, he hadn't finished eating the dragon fruit, and he hadn't done cardiopulmonary resuscitation a few times, so why did he lose it like this? Recently, a kind-hearted netizen told me that 66 can be found here, so I came here Dear netizens, has anyone seen 66?

You have been a eunuch for many years and have changed many vests. I hope you don't want to be a eunuch in this book. At least copy the history books and write about the Battle of Berlin.

The early writing is quite good, but it gets worse as it goes on, especially after the protagonist becomes the commander of the group army. The main problem is that the protagonist's sense of existence is getting lower and lower, but this book is not a group portrait. Like the protagonist's chief of staff, the only image I have of him is a bald head, and everyone else is just a tool, and there is no memory point. The author has also been trying to find ways to increase the protagonist's presence, such as having a group army commander personally go to the front line to conduct reconnaissance, but the effect is very poor. In the final analysis, the protagonist's plug-in is just to increase the field of vision. If the protagonist is a special operations officer, it is quite useful. Just like the protagonist before the division commander, this plug-in has a strong sense of presence, and the protagonist's sense of presence It is also very strong, but as the level gets higher and higher, the plug-in can do less and less. After the protagonist reaches a high position, he can do less and less. The author's plot puts all the focus on fighting various large-scale battles. These battles are fought by the soldiers below. As a commander, he can do nothing except play chess in the office, and his sense of presence is too low. The most important thing is that writing the plot of a major battle is very unfriendly to readers. The reader is not the protagonist's adviser, and the reader does not have a map. Many times, after reading for a long time, he can only see a bunch of place names. To summarize the plot, which army did what to the enemy at which place name, and then a certain general was captured, and the protagonist's army won, and The only thing the protagonist can do in these plots is to play chess at the headquarters or fly to the front line to scout for targets. The sense of presence in the plot is too low. Although the protagonist has been repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist is important, this is important to Ant and not to the readers. In a word, many plots have nothing to do with the protagonist. I can't judge the professionalism of this book as a military novel, because I'm not a professional, but as a novel, especially an online novel, this book is not good-looking. The protagonist's presence decreases as he goes to the back, and the plot is all about pushing maps. Because readers don't have maps in their hands, there is no sense of immersion at all. Maybe it should be okay for military fans, but the reading experience for ordinary people is too bad. The last problem is typos. There are a lot of typos that the author doesn't correct at all.

I don't believe you are a new author. What about your other books? Please reply to me. They are not enough to read. I want to read your other books. Please reply me with their titles.

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's depiction of human hearts is meticulous, especially when describing the gourd boy to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks that Wu Song killed Qiao Feng is right? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, how could Yang Guo's hand be chopped off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang wouldn't have gone to Siguoya and Linghu Chong to become the king of the mountain. Personally, I think the treatment of Song Jiang's character is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Dun and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes smooth and smooth, refreshing the readers. Finally, the storyline of this book is intricate, fascinating, and full of ups and downs, making you immersed in the story. For example, why did Duan Yu save the Haier brothers regardless of the danger to his own mother? Did Teletubbies implement a revenge plan against He-Man? Who caused the belly of Mr. Cang, the wife of Roaring Sky Dog? These questions have attracted the attention of readers. It is worth mentioning that the final fight plot between Zhu Bajie and Donald Duck is both unexpected and reasonable, and the open ending makes readers have endless yearning and reverie for the love song duet between Taishang Laojun and Marilyn Monroe. In particular, the atmosphere of vicissitudes of life when Big Big Wolf misses Zhou Zhiruo in the Akina Mountains immediately highlights Ren Wo Xing's delicate inner world when he steals Huba, the sacred object of the Uchiha clan. In the book, the stand-up comedy session between Comrade Sha Ruijin and Chu Liuxiang and the ingenious idea of ​​Mr. Bean visiting the thatched cottage and asking Charlotte to go together to save grandpa are also highlights!

A magnificent book, a fascinating and ups and downs war work. It describes the cruelty and compassion of the war more than 80 years ago! What I like best is the last part: especially the sad departure of Leonard! Without this damn British guy, the Japanese would have been disabled long ago! But the author is trying to beautify the Yankees. In fact, the Yankees didn't do anything good at the time! Although the two atomic bombs were a bit well done, they were indeed as written in the article. This allowed the Japanese devils to escape many fates that should have been punished. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the author's next book, and hope to beat up the Japanese devils in the next book!

Brother, please update one more chapter. Just one chapter is enough. Please. I won't run away anymore. Brother, I'm really itchy. Please, I'm obedient. I won't make trouble again. Please update me one chapter. I'm so itchy now. That's good, I feel like there are ants crawling in my body now (Fragrant, it's so itchy, brother, please give me an update, the last time, I don't swear, it's really the last time)

Authors who call others dead, bad reviews

Why can't I see the setting sun on the stormy waves?