Douluo: Succubus Light Beast, Something is Wrong with the Heroines

Post a picture to support it, otherwise some people won't know what Lucemon looks like.

Author, come on, don't be a eunuch. By the way, the author would like to give an opinion. If you search for some heroines who have emotional relationships in the original works, I hope you should pay attention to patching them, such as the relationship between Bi Ziji and Di Tian in Dou Er. I hope that patching will not be too mental and Niutou.

How to say it? Let me list a few questions. 1: Positioning is too complicated. Your book combines both Douluo and Digimon, but the protagonist only mentions a few words about the progress of Douluo's training system in the whole book. There is a long chapter on how to raise Digi-Eggs (this is Douluo, so if you don't talk about whether there is any mystery to this martial spirit light beast or how it evolved later, you can talk about how many little pets the protagonist has raised and how awesome they are). 2: There is not a single memory point in the whole article (my only memory point is that the fragrance of my junior brother is the smell of the sun) (I can remember this not because of how clever he used it or how beautiful the sentences were, but because he repeated it too many times) Let me give you an example: (Dark Night Lord) The protagonist's martial spirit is called Dark Night Lord Moth. Why am I so impressed by him? 1-He can form a martial soul fusion skill with the martial soul of the heroine, Tang Wutong. 2-The dark night corresponds to light, the monarch corresponds to the goddess, and the moth corresponds to the butterfly. The protagonist's martial spirit in the original work of Die, the Goddess of Light, must have been deeply impressive. How about the martial spirit that is opposite to his name and can form martial soul fusion skills? 3: The combat power is severely reduced and all members are reduced to intelligence. If I remember correctly, the two digital eggs picked up by the protagonist have only experienced one evolution until the chapter you updated. I guess the destructive power has not reached the level of splitting a mountain. They only emitted light once and were seen by Ah Yin. They are considered to be miracles. Can they reach the attack level of a Titled Douluo? 4: What does it mean that you can understand the rules by yourself by staying with the protagonist? What does it mean for the protagonist to impose a divine test on himself? First of all, you should understand the rules on your own. If I remember correctly, Digimon tells the story of saving the world. Does the author understand what the rules are? You want to say that the protagonists from other fantasy worlds are the protagonists of this book, and they can understand the rules on their own. Then I have nothing to say. You take a script about saving the world and say you can understand the rules? There is also the point that the protagonist has given himself a divine test. I have usually seen this kind of plot. Only when the future protagonist gives a test to the current protagonist can he be called a self-test. You, a level 70 person who has to calculate the winning rate in a fight with a titled Douluo, have already said this? Why are you Lan Xuanyu next door? You have the bloodline of the God of Creation. I would say Digimon is the bloodline of an extraterrestrial demon at best, but it is a spirit beast from another world at worst. Before Douluo reaches its final evolution, it can only be regarded as a top-level beast spirit and not a god-level spirit, right? 5: Author, you are not suitable for writing this kind of traditional novel at all. You are suitable for writing that kind of pornographic novel. Succubi are also divided into levels. Most succubi in fanfics are low-level and low-level. What does that mean? Give a rough description (the protagonist is handsome, speaks well, has good body proportions, good potential, and good cultivation). When others see her at first sight, they are attracted by her temperament and it is difficult to feel disgusted with her. This is the normal range. Generally speaking, excellent people have a natural attraction to the opposite sex. I've only seen this kind of succubus like you in fanfics on informal software. As long as a person of the opposite sex directly sticks to you when he sees you at first sight, and is eager to tell you directly that I really want you to satisfy me (this kind of protagonist has also been written in other articles, but they have also experienced a relationship experience at least, so this situation will occur) (In other books, the protagonist is either a heroic hero who saves the beauty, or has been living together for a year and a half, or has defeated him, and then the other person starts to observe him, and unknowingly the relationship gradually starts to get familiar after meeting him a few times) The most disgusting thing is that six gods came down to test the goddess of life and the goddess of kindness at the same time. After chatting for a while, he picked you up and kissed and hugged you (people don't say they live for tens of thousands of years, but they can live for thousands of years. This is still the situation where one day in the divine world is one year in the lower world. They have been observing the lower world for tens of thousands of years. There is no man who they have not seen before, and everyone in the divine world is a person with extraordinary talents. They must have seen it, unless there is something about you that attracts them, no However, it is impossible to do this kind of intimate behavior from the beginning) (I later found out that being close to the protagonist can understand and improve the law on its own. It was only after they kissed and hugged each other that they discovered this matter. It was not that they started kissing and hugging each other after discovering this matter.) (I rely on my normal reading, and the person who can directly kiss and hug you is either a biochemical mother, or you are loaded with drugs and the other person is addicted) There are still a lot of shortcomings, but I don't want to waste time on this book. I can only say that I support the author. I guess it is obvious that he is a novice in writing books. He doesn't clearly distinguish the priorities of Douluo Digimon, so I will give it a 3 points to comfort him.

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star rating! Come on!

Come on, big brother who wrote Liu Bei's book

Why are the three opening cards missing? Why was it blocked?

There's nothing particularly big about the poison. The only drawback is that it's too raw. Shen Yu Xiaogang almost made me laugh to death.

Come on update! ! ! ! Celestial Beast, Witchmon, Bertasmon, and Lilithmon all have to be collected, right? Hehe, I'm getting some cool and domineering Digimon to be my little brother! War God Greymon, Omegamon! !

What should I do if I haven't seen the digital anime mentioned in it? 🤔After reading the first few chapters, I feel pretty good😶

This book is about to collapse because of the addition of elements that do not belong to this fanfic. I thought you added a martial spirit, but who knew you added a small plane. With all due respect, you probably can't write that balance at your current level. Later. . Well, I guess there is no later stage. In the end, the male protagonist is really effeminate. The pig's feet that are neither male nor female are the most disgusting. It's too girly.