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The second life has always emphasized the five spiritual roots of the protagonist, and everyone is either a pity or a cynic. I'm just confused. How much better are the four spiritual roots than the five spiritual roots? Those who don't know a hundred arts don't have as many cultivation resources as the protagonist. How come the author writes that the protagonist has such five spiritual roots that he can just give up cultivating immortality? Anyone with a little bit of logic knows that the Qi refining period is a stage where you can make progress by spending resources. Wulinggen just spends more Comparing the three and four spiritual roots, can they build the foundation? Foundation building pills are provided to geniuses with dual spiritual roots and above. Those with three or four spiritual roots who do not know how to earn resources through various arts will sooner or later be overtaken by cultivators with five spiritual roots and hundreds of arts. There is no hope of building a foundation anyway. I really can't stand the emphasis in the article on the protagonist's trashy five spiritual roots.
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This protagonist is a loser, a direct descendant of the Temple of War, and Yali is the wife he trained, but she was returned to Yun Ming. This is just like in real life, they are about to get married, a man steals his wife, and he has to say in a low voice that he stole it well, long live you, you are the best, this kind of protagonist can't even eat a**
I like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow
Now that I have read more than 300 chapters, I prefer to read the original characters that describe fairy tale characters and are influenced by fairy tale characters, and I don't like to read Lin Wan anymore. To be honest, I had skipped Lin Wan's previous Soul Fighting Competition and Killing City. The item exchange in the fairy tale world has not been written yet. And aren't there too few card-drawing characters? Tiandou has Princess Snow White, Princess Rapunzel, Cinderella, the little match girl and Merida, who are also from Tiandou, Wuhun Hall only has Prince Charming, Xingluo has Frog Prince and Pinocchio, the soul beast Fang Jiuselu, Ursula, and the Snow Queen. Draw more characters
Shocked, old man
Family members, congratulations to me for checking in and updating for thirty days. You are more diligent than me clocking in at work. I am very suitable to be a cow and horse, so can you give me one, God?
It should look good. Let's take a look and hope to win.
I found it was too heavy and have already corrected it.
I just discovered that a section of content was heavy, so I quickly changed it. I apologize to everyone. Please go back and read it again. I will definitely not make this mistake next time. I am very sorry.
Generally speaking, it's okay but I don't see much.
The rhythm feels so strange. Fast and slow...
Are you not supervising anymore? When will it be updated again?
It feels pretty good. When will it be updated again?
It's so cool in the later stages! Although the combat power may be a bit broken
Stop writing and start writing romance novels instead.
Not bad! ! The old man in the whole family is so vicious! ! As a result, the heroine grew up in the countryside.
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One chapter a day is too little. Although it is intellectually stimulating, it is a refreshing article that can be accepted even if it is not outrageous. Your update speed has almost discouraged many of us. We are all working very intensely and read novels to relieve stress. You also put pressure on us and we have no motivation to spend money.
I originally wanted to give it one star, but after thinking about it, I gave it two stars, because one star might be a sinking stone. I couldn't stand it at 1/10 of the first chapter of the opening chapter. In the public, Lin Cai'er used some secret method to take away the male protagonist's soul, and other people were just staring at it? How could such an unreasonable place be written? Didn't you graduate from elementary school? 😐
Is it reasonable for the protagonist to always fight at level 3-4?
It's updated once a day, and I'm convinced. There are still so few words😐
💩💩💩 This is so disgusting, please change the protagonist to Zhang Jiale.
There are no more updates. Why do you ask for leave every day?
Letting Ditian be a soul ring is not as good as Tianmeng Ice Silkworm. What you want is the year. Ditian is only over 800,000 years old at most, Tianmeng Ice Silkworm is also a million years old, and Tianmeng Ice Silkworm can give you a million years early. Di Tian, you may not be able to fuse it.
Come on author, I will always support you
The sea, you are all water
The sea, why are you all water? The sea, why are you all water?
The front part is very interesting, but the back step is too big, and it loses the original intention at the beginning, but it is okay. The main thing that makes me speechless is the emotional line. The male protagonist feels that he has no ideas of his own. Whoever comes second will take the lead. Even if you say, I am so awesome, I want to start a harem, I feel that he is a responsible person.
Not bad, not bad. I read another Douluo fanfic. You must read it carefully. 😘
Too watery
The sea, you are all water, one chapter is summarized in just one sentence
The first part was good, but the second part was about torturing my conscience. I really couldn't stand it anymore, and I didn't consider the possible consequences at all. Although readers know that the male protagonist will win, they still feel that the plot is too abrupt and the method adopted is too unnatural.
Dear author, how many chapters does this article have?
This book of yours won't be the prequel to the second-hand Douluo book, right?
Very nice, keep up the good work! Logical and well-written
When it's busy, eating and resting irregularly
It's so poisonous that people who look at it turn green, it's just so toxic
It's okay. It's a good subject matter. If I think it's okay, I'll write it as a group portrait. The protagonist will come out from time to time. Update soon!
A fight with a person or monster whose name is not even mentioned in the original work can easily last two or three chapters. Your qualifications for two spiritual roots have been suppressed by you like four spiritual roots. If the Qi training period is not good, what kind of mortal body training techniques do you want to practice? After you have established your foundation, wouldn't it be a good idea to learn the body-training techniques of immortals?
Not a cool article
So far, there is no cheat, and the plot is progressing very slowly. The heroine is pretentious, loves to cause trouble, and is a virgin from time to time. She is suspicious but does not have the corresponding IQ. Apart from her identity as a female, she has almost no redeeming qualities. A bunch of males around her often forcefully suppress her intelligence. The author's writing style is not bad, and the inner activities of the scenes are described in detail. However, the plot design is often unreasonable, and it feels like all kinds of stupid behaviors are deliberately done to promote a certain plot. It's really like a bunch of pets vying for favor, without the rationality of a "human" person. All in all, it looks frustrating. The only two characters I like: The first one is the fox Bato, who I feel is the smartest, reliable, and cute male among them. Occasionally a little temper is acceptable; Alex's writing is so incredible, but it still causes all kinds of troubles to the heroine for a long time, and the results of arranging things are becoming more and more chaotic. Another lovable character is the female with a bird, named Sha. She is the one who should get the script as the heroine.
The world view and power system are good, and the battle scenes are also very interesting. But there is a problem. A lone wolf is really a lone wolf. He keeps upgrading himself and does not interact with others. After reading Chapter 60, he feels a bit bored. I don't have any expectations for the plot that follows. When the protagonist becomes stronger, he can't just kill people. Why don't we have an audience, teammates? Enemy? The novel is a story, but in the end, it just kept writing about killing and killing, and it became a personal travel biography. It was very boring. Let's take a look again. I wonder if I can write more scenes with multiple people in the future.
So fun
Zai Zai is so cute These two people, these two families and their friends and relatives are very interesting. Big, fast, more explosive, more immediate updates Please 🙏
There's nothing wrong with it except that it's too short
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unbelievable
You can sue any dynasty, but it is impossible for Zhu Yuanzhang, because he has a family and is very hypocritical. He has no ability and relies solely on luck. His son can kill innocent people indiscriminately, but others can't. And then he still claims to be for the people every day, but in his dynasty, the people are the most miserable, and the officials are the most miserable. Only his family is happy.
The protagonist was so well written in the early stage. All kinds of great victories that were impossible to happen in wars appeared. The protagonist's army was so strong, it improved so fast, and the characters in it were overrated.
What kind of garbage, 60,000 years old is a ferocious beast? Isn't that 100,000 years a mythical beast?
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I saw my favorite sister Ma Xiaotao who is playing with fire and came here. Look how fragrant this sister is😣
Keep up the good work, keep up the new book, keep up the good work, keep up the good work, keep up the good work, keep up the good work.
Very nice, lots of updates, thank you author
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Just kidding, people also want pure seraphs to offer sacrifices, so who do you think you are?
Isn't it that this protagonist takes himself too seriously? They grab a lot of the four-winged ones, but you, a little soldier who can't even mend a hair, sacrifice them. You sacrifice a twist, and they are all from the same continent. How can you build a chat group with a bad face?