Old One

I have a pretty good relationship with the heroine, but I just wrote it to death and it's heartbreaking. Then the treasure obtained from the heroine opened the golden finger. The first thing I thought about was not to avenge the heroine, but to think about not being weaker than others in this life? ? ? What are you still thinking about? (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻

I won't go into detail in the book, but why is the inconsistency caused? If a person can perform six operations so quickly, why didn't he run away earlier? Also, three minutes is really a long time. The writing is so-so. Just flipping the text over and over again, inexplicably rigid, is there any benefit? Can't run? Interjections are also standard (no big problems are the same), and there are also completely loose and wild words. You will definitely not find any problems in what you write, but I think it's not good for you to speculate more? I've written so many books, shouldn't I? The original idea was not new, and it was still so bad.

There aren't many recommendation votes, so I'll give you a small reward. Come on! Like

It's brainless, it subverts one's wits, it's a poisonous start, the subject matter is okay, it's forced to subdue one's wits, the writing is so bad!

Immortality is written very neatly. There is a sense of crisis. I have read several novels of the same type as Seed of Immortality before. They all started working hard to become stronger after their families were destroyed. Immortality seeds are not bad. The protagonist even helped when he went to his mother's sect. Especially when his mother calls out the protagonist. A batch of cattle batches. But I have to apologize to the author for something. Immortality has written more than 1,000 chapters. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I used pirated copies to read them. Support piracy. Sorry Economic conditions are less restrictive now. This new book. I will support it to more than 500 chapters. If this book was written in the early stage, I would have the same feeling as Immortality. If it doesn't collapse later. I will support it unanimously. ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ Make a small suggestion. Can you make the realm of this new book simpler? When I looked at the later stages of Immortal Seed, I was a little confused about its realm. Can you put in a little effort here (ﾉಥBenefitಥ)

First, the fiancée is written off from the beginning. . . . . Very sad Secondly, his father has a self-made boss. He doesn't know if he should go to his father for something, why not go to Chaofan himself as if he has no brains? Third, it seems to have a Western background and an Eastern name, a mixture of East and West, nondescript, and a tiger-like cat. Fourth, the protagonist has been hallucinating or hallucinating. Did you just get discharged from the hospital or something? Mental problems? , Just like the IQ is not enough

I've never sprayed it, right? It's all about this book

There are more than 200,000 energy points in the previous chapter, only more than 20,000 in the next chapter, more than 10,000 bones in the front, and only more than 20,000 bones of the three ancient beasts in the back.

Plug-ins are mindless improvements. If there are restrictions, then they are no longer called plug-ins.

Physical transformation is a fool. As a time traveler, you don't know how to plan your own route? It's a waste of time to practice martial arts. Don't read this book with your brain in mind. It's just a fun word. .