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The author writes too much nonsense, which makes me a little tired
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Good night, good night, good night, good night, good night
Okay, I really like it. [Write 10 more words. . ]
Author, I beg you not to stop updating. I can replenish your monthly membership just for you.
The author's settings are correct
The author writes very carefully and is not graded, but the writing style is a bit retro.
Check in 17
It rained a few days ago, but today the sun came out. It was really warm under the sun (｡･ω･｡), but it got a little cold again at night. Immortals are the best!
First of all, there are problems on the highway, and you encounter people while driving. Then, the resource box in the plot does not express the relatively large quantity. The car at the beginning only has five liters of oil. How can this resource supply so many people? Then the protagonist's hook is too big and unlimited fuel can be taken out and traded. You can upgrade your vehicle by exchanging fuel for items, and the next day there is a big group and thermal weapons. It's so stupid.
unbelievable
Changle here is comparable to a little fairy. Who said it was written by Tian Chong?
Milk tea 🧋 event
Milk tea at No. 88! I'm here, hoping to win~~~ I want this ticket🎫
The author looks here
When you write this, do you want to inherit the Poseidon and Ice God? , Two gods in one. Two gods merge into one, which one is stronger, water or ice? Which one is stronger, water or ice, or else we should have two gods in one, King Poseidon?
Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, support you.
I don't understand why you all like this? Don't you know there's a clone watching?
The protagonist killed someone for the first time and was so frightened that he almost peed. Does the author want me to praise the protagonist for his pure nature? I can only express my support with two stars
3.21
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Check in on day 17
On the 17th day of check-in, I went, and I was actually the first to check-in today! I also asked why QQ Reading didn't remind me that the chapter had been updated. I thought it had been ranked several times, but I didn't expect that it was still the first one!
Day 17
3.21 This month is coming to an end~ I will sleep hard on weekends
After reading a little bit, it's a bit hard to hold on. The first point is that the dean knew the protagonist's background, but still asked impatiently. Then, after the protagonist said a word to Ouyang Zixin, he released his murderous intention towards him. This is really hard to hold on to.
What's going on? Why did Electrolux disappear?
Good reading, dear, is it eight-thirty?
Doppelgänger description
The description of the clone in the article is not like swallowing the clone, but like giving birth to a pet. It can be written from the perspective of the clone, but cannot be described from the perspective of the human being. It is written in four different ways.
It's such a big pile, the author might as well find a class
He changes the setting everywhere, magically changes the characters' personalities, and also likes to antagonize readers, and the preface and follow-up are inconsistent.
There are a lot of typos, and the names are also very confusing. When will the author fix it? It will affect the perception a bit.
The author's setting is quite novel, but I have to remind you that I have read this kind of book. It usually looks good in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, the combat power will easily collapse. Do you understand? Moreover, you have written down the history of the Order of Lust and Suitable for Fertility. You must be careful not to add any weird settings in the later stage, which will cause the combat power to collapse. Appropriate ones can suppress the protagonist's combat power. Do you understand? Otherwise, I really won't be able to read it in the later stages, and I really won't be able to read it in the middle and late stages. I've only written less than ten chapters of this book now, and I still have time to give you a heads up. Thank you, the author, and don't stop updating.
The water quality is very good. The reviews of various treasures are too long. Most of the functions are repetitive. Do you dare to water it a little more?
Just a dozen, there are exactly ten Chinese characters.
Why aren't there any comments?
I think the ending of this book can be that Ximen lets go, because in normal books the male and female protagonists end up together, but this book doesn't seem to specify who the male and female protagonists are! ? So we can get rid of this ending and let Xiao Yu and Pei Zhino finally live together well, isn't it good? ! In the end, Ximen also found Xiao Yu, but he let him go in the end. Isn't it good? ! !
A rare masterpiece. If the author could refine his language more, he would definitely be a strong contender for the Contradiction Award. This book can be read as a Confucian classic. The level of literature is much higher than many people imagine.
Could the heroine be Qian Renxue?
If the review fails, don't write it again and re-write something else.
If the review fails, don't write it again and re-write something else.
The whole text is smooth, there is no mess, and there are no water marks😣😣😣
It's very similar to the author's previous fairy tale, let's check out the follow-up!
Update, why not update?
The roaring dog is so awesome that he swallowed 100,000 heavenly soldiers and generals in one bite.
Let's give it full stars first, even though it seems a bit awkward.
The AI tastes too much in the later stage
After Chapter 200, it starts to look more and more like AI. The flavor of AI is getting stronger and stronger. Moreover, the word count, excessive modifications and vocabulary make the text seem superficial, and then the perspective of the male protagonist is switched to the third person perspective. Now it becomes more and more uncomfortable as I read it. I think there is no way to correct it, but the overall novel is still good, especially the setting is very novel. I could give 4 stars, but I prefer it, so I will give it 5 stars.
A brief taste
At present, it seems that the most poisonous part of this book is the [Road Fool] attribute. This thing is very poisonous when installed on the protagonist. Road madness to the protagonist is like blindfolding a race car driver - no matter how good the car is and how powerful the technology is, if it goes off track, everything will be in vain. It feels like it deprives the protagonist of the most basic trust: you can't even recognize the road clearly, how can you rely on your strength to trust that you won't be stupid at the critical moment and create even more disgusting poisonous spots? In addition to the daily and comedy aspects that can be adjusted, the attribute of [Road Crazy] is really poisonous in other places. Once or twice, it can be said to be a natural lack of direction, which can be corrected through super memory or navigation abilities, but this book treats [Road Crazy] as a permanent debuff. The time of Tianmeng's sacrifice. Looking at the description in the author's reply, the old version of the plot actually split [Electrolux] in two for Huo Yuhao and the protagonist, isn't it... You are using it as a nanny and creating poison spots? There are also Jiubao Titled Douluo, there are a little over 100 million, and... They all have spirits and spirit rings with this configuration, and they can't reach level 99, oh my god ----- Lu Chi has an explanation, but if he doesn't solve it or gets lost again, he will still be pure poison. Chapter 60: Friendship in Taoyuan, is there such an allusion in this world? All members are time-travelers, right? Weird little poisonous points -----
It's far worse than the previous book, Who Still Becomes a Star? I have no desire to read it.
I feel like the protagonist has become a tiangou after meeting Ye Guyi. His fifth spirit ring is only ten thousand years old, but he gave it to Ye Guyi for a hundred thousand years. How do you make people in Shrek think of you? Why don't you arrange a hundred thousand year spirit ring for Beibei?
It's really average, with a lot of bits and pieces of poison.
What's the way to write this? The protagonist died before the first chapter, and the next protagonist is a monster with some memory of the protagonist, without any sense of substitution. You don't like to see
The fanfic is pretty good, but updates are a bit slow.
I have two questions. 1. The protagonist goes out to experience without the second ring, and the first ring of a thousand years will be exposed. How to save his life? 2. Who is the heroine?
I'm speechless. It's written as a watch and a memorial arch. It's such a waste. How can I get involved in anything? This character is not suitable for American comics.
The first martial spirit, Blue Silver Grass - Blue Silver King - Blue Silver Emperor - later evolves the ancient tree of life (chaos, swallowing, universe, creation, destruction, time and space, yin and yang and the five elements). It can transform any origin. The live broadcast system can create rewards, skills, martial arts, magical powers, and learn from martial arts, Xianxia, martial arts, martial arts, magical powers. The second martial spirit, the God of Chaos, controls all laws. His own humanoid martial spirit, the god, the Martial Ancestor. He does not go to the divine world. He is promoted to Douluo Continent. Exclusive exercises: Chaos Infinite Sutra, Three Cultivations of Essence, Qi and Shen, Infinite Fusion of Exercises Advantages System, Chaos God and Demon Body, Can Devour and Fuse Other Systems Zhen Clan Kung Fu: Sun and Moon Promise Sutra, Universe Creation Sutra, Fighting Holy Judgment, Universe Steps, Creation Fist, Sun and Moon Divine Eyes, Promise Sword Technique, God-killing Halberd Technique, Universe Arrow Technique and Sword Technique, Zhoutian Star Jue Power Technique Pure Yang Wuji Sutra Pure Yin Wuji Sutra Xiaoyao Jue Hunyuan Jue Nine Yang Zhen Jing Nine Yin Zhen Sutra Beiming Divine Skill Xiao Wuxiang Changchun Palace Star Jue The exclusive magic weapon Chaos Pearl contains the world of spiritual springs. Drinking the spiritual spring water will help you live longer, cure diseases and nourish your skin. Key natural and earthly treasures. The God-killing Sword or the Chaos Infinite Sword, the Chaos Infinite Cauldron, which can be used to refine elixirs and weapons, can absorb suppressive aura, and can increase the level with the strength of the male protagonist. Chaos Suit The realm is clearly divided and there are 7-10 female protagonists.
A titled Douluo dares to directly massacre the Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear clan, and he thinks that the bear army is just a living thing.
A rare good book, I haven't seen such a good book in a long time