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It's very interesting to read the content on Douyin. If you can update it to 500,000 words, I will read it again. To be honest, the content is very abstract.
I didn't know you were twins before. You two were so in love with each other that you still chased after you when you found out. After you came back to your heart, you still let the two choose between you. It's really uncomfortable.
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Jiang Xian went to the countryside as an educated youth. Because of his beauty, many young men in the village rushed to confess their love.
This aroused the jealousy of the village beauty Liu Yingying, and when she saw that the boy she had a crush on also confessed to Jiang Xian, her jealousy turned directly into murderous evil fire, making her dare to take risks. She asked Jiang Xian out in front of everyone and pushed her into the lake... But Jiang Xian's fate was not meant to be cut off. Lu Bin happened to be passing by and lifted Jiang Xian, who couldn't swim, out of the water like a chicken. Later, Lu Bin rescued Jiang Xian, who was drowning and unconscious. Jiang Xian woke up and was willing to marry him. The two took the time to write a letter of introduction and went to the town to take photos and obtain certificates before going to the Lu family to meet the elders. A series of smooth operations allowed Jiang Xian, an orphan without a father or mother, to have a family! This made Liu Yingying's anxiety about killing people turn into anger, and she came to the educated youth spot again to find trouble... And was severely punished by Jiang Xian. It seems that beauty is the original sin in the eyes of ordinary people. Jiang Xian lived a pitiful life in the educated youth area. She was often robbed of food, or slept on a quilt that was maliciously watered... Originally Jiang Xian could only endure it, but now she quits, and her changed personality surprised everyone. The hope of the Lu family with Jiang Xian is here, I'm really looking forward to it...
I hope the author keeps writing at this pace
Not many people read it. I hope the author will continue to write it. Most of my fellow mortals have seen it before, so it's rare to find anything new.
The more I watch the character of Madonna, the more annoying I get. I write a bunch of recipes with too many words, and I regret wasting my time after reading them😎
Come on, it looks very good so far! ! !
I finished reading it in one go. So far so good. At least no novel has survived more than 4 billion years. Except for those that swallow the stars, those that last a long time. It stands to reason that after more than 4 billion years, many things will be decayed by time, and you can't keep them even if you want to collect them. But at least within 10,000 years, many things can still be preserved. There should be more than these things at home, right? And there is a very critical question, that is, did he travel from modern times to more than 4 billion years ago? Logically speaking, the environment of that era was not suitable for humans at all. At the very least, his physical strength should be very terrifying. You must know that at the beginning, the earth had no oxygen and no food. At the very least, he should not need to eat, he could survive with pure energy. Otherwise, it won't survive at all. It depends on the author. At least this is pretty good so far. Come on, author!
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I pressed the author against the wall, my eyes full of amusement, and the folding fan in my hand gently lifted her (his) chin. The moon was dark and the wind was high, and the moonlight was hazy and sultry. I leaned close to the author's ear, caressing the author's slender waist with my dishonest hands, and the hoarse voice made people's hearts beat like a deer. I whispered: "Update"
It seems that Luo Feng's talent is not very high in the early stage, and you don't need to be afraid of Luo Feng in the early stage. You have a system and you are still afraid of Luo Feng. At that time in Nolan Mountain, even if you blew up the earth, no one would know about it. The danger must be nipped in the cradle. Otherwise, why do you think the solar system would Reshape three times. At that time, even Mountain Guest didn't know that he also had a disciple Luo Feng, and Mountain Guest was in a completely free-range state. It wasn't until Luo Feng inherited the Star Tower that Mountain Guest began to pay attention to Luo Feng. Luo Feng before the Genius War was nothing, so he still had to be afraid.
Li Xian is the protagonist of this book, so just read it. If you don't read it, you'll feel a little green on your head.
Third statement!
I admire Third Young Master. This book is not the type of Douluo Against the Tang Dynasty that follows the popular trend in the market today. If you don't like reading it, don't get involved! I know that the current trend in the Douluo fandom is, without exception, anti-Tang, and it is also the kind of anti-Tang that is abstract and devilish. I know that Tang San's character completely collapsed in Dou Er. This is a fact, but I also know that Dou Er is a memory of my youth. The protagonist of this book will Oppose Tang San, but it won't be as serious as other demons and anti-Tang comics. No matter how much you criticize San Shao, you have to admit that he is the number one person in the Internet literary circle. You have to admit that he even gave a lecture at Peking University. You have to admit that his Douluo accounted for a considerable part. In human youth, what I write is not the kind of Douluo fanfic that I have repeatedly stated. I will not write the kind of pure abuse of the original author, because I still remember the days when I bought the physical Douluo books one by one and read them. I also know that following the trend and writing anti-Tang Dynasty fanfics can be promoted. You can make money by being popular and writing well. I know even more that the kind of fan fiction I write now has no audience at all, no one will read it at all, and it is completely impossible to make a tiny bit of money. Even if I code a million words, I won't make even a penny! But I will still keep writing! So for those who have only read one or two chapters and found something wrong (because it is not the kind that persecutes the original owner, then it is naturally wrong), and those who only want to comment without thinking, then don't get involved! You are a person who only reads anti-Tang literature. When you find that the atmosphere of this book is not like that, just leave in a smooth manner. If you don't want to read it, I won't beg you to read it, okay? To put it bluntly, only I can read this book.
Mark Mark, poisonous thing, mindless
Now that things are like this, Ziyue should also enter Li Xian's harem.
Author, don't be fooled by the reputation of Ochi. Ochi can currently stack up to infinite boxes, and even a conservative estimate can reach high-level multiplicity. Among the ones I have played so far, except for Aola Star, even the Purcell cannot stabilize Ochi.
Working around, being threatened, and not having any climax, being able to write a novel so steadily is a talent
This is the end of my novel. Except for a little bit of shit at 4/5, it is really good.
The writing is very bad in many places. It starts at almost the eighth level of alchemy and ends at the eighth level😰 and the cultivation level is also rubbish. Later, he recovered his bloodline and prepared to recruit people from the Yan Clan, and when he faced the Yan Clan, he believed them without investigating. They were already dozens of years old. Just believe what others say. What if the Yan Clan is trying to wipe out your lineage? Or if it is said that a few elders teamed up with outsiders to wipe out your lineage, I can only say that you, the leader of the clan, are too useless. It's okay to kill a few criminal elders, haha, there is no clan member behind them, the protagonist still forgives, it's really other people **** you smile at others, haha, this kind of nerves, ordinary people can't keep up🙃The back part is really like a stallion, as long as a woman is sent over, she will accept anyone who comes😐😐The back part is really disgusting, there is really no need to watch it
The writing is mature. Have ideas. Fresh and refined, anti-routine
The people in the village are all blind. Changes in your house or fence cannot be seen. Did you really use your brain when writing the data?
Not interesting, not attractive.
This is the first novel I've read, and I've confirmed it to be quite funny.
Just one heroine is enough, and there are at least five updates every day
The protagonist is too smart
I came here through KS. When I was fighting Tang San in the first few chapters, the protagonist's IQ was still good. After the fight was over and I signed the contract with Gu Yuena, the protagonist's IQ was inexplicably like that of an inexperienced idiot🤐. It was developing in the direction of lowering my intelligence. The drop was inexplicable. It didn't look like he had come from the world of immortal cultivation. He came out of the world😐, and after beating Tang San before, he started to suppress his combat power😐, and the pressure was even more inexplicable🤐. Tang San's Xuantian Kung Fu can be practiced before awakening the martial spirit, but when it comes to the protagonist's own Immortal Cultivation Technique, he can't practice it😐, and it even says that practicing this technique will be slower🤐. Why doesn't Tang San's book have these restrictions🤐? It's so overwhelming🤐Does the author think that the martial arts world's martial arts skills are stronger than those in the world of cultivating immortals? Or is it that the protagonist, a cultivator who has lived for who knows how long, has no previous cultivation experience? I personally like the theme of cultivating immortals and douluo, but you can't treat people as fools🤐. The protagonist's IQ and character are written as if they can slide up and down. They are not high at the beginning, but then they go down all the way😕. But when you first write the introduction of the protagonist, it is not that NB, and you don't know how much it is if you are not alive. I have been cultivating immortals for a long time, I am not so speechless🤐, the front is NB and the back is almost the same as SB🤐. There is no problem with the plot and character design of the original work. After all, this is what the fans read. You can also write the protagonist as you want, but you can at least follow some logic, right? The front is so NB and the back is almost SB😐
Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly!
The spoof is quite good, but the protagonist feels that the presence of the protagonist is relatively low.
28DAY丨Guess
What type will the next copy be? The end of the world! Apocalyptic battle royale and the like, I like this! But I don't know if it's good to write. The current two dungeons have relatively small map areas. If it's the end of the world, I don't know if it will be too abrupt. But no matter what type of dungeon the immortal writes, I believe it must be the most suitable at the moment! I love Xianxian, I love everything written by Xianxian! This is real! To be honest, I'm quite shocked myself. I don't know how long this will last, but for now, I like all the articles written by Xianxian! Even if something happens that I don't like in the future, there must be something wrong with me! Maybe I was a bad learner, maybe I have always been bad, but it was exposed at that time. In short, Xianxian is the best! The stories written by Xianxian are also the best!
It's a bit exaggerated. It took so many top-notch resources to reach the crappiest king's body?
It's important to catch up on new books during the pk! Xiaoyu begs everyone not to post articles and follow more updates! If you find it easy, you can leave more comments, I love you! 🤥🤥
28DAY丨Next copy
I don't know, battle royale? The wedding dress paper type? Or campus? Or the workplace?
Leopard, hurry up and do more😎Why do you already have a way to die at this point😎🤘
28DAY丨Next copy type
Blindly guessing (actually I want to watch) the battle royale dungeon. When the player is chased by a monster and runs away with his head covered, only Si Wu goes upstream and rushes towards the monster. At this moment, the female goose is the most beautiful cub.
It's not that exaggerated after taking medicine and eating something.
28DAY丨What type will the next copy be?
I think it's an urban marketplace type dungeon: old commercial street/late night convenience store/antique bazaar type dungeon; campus rules ghost story dungeon, old folk village dungeon, etc.
28DAY丨Next copy type
I think the next dungeon type should be folk horror, or one with a school setting. Xianxian's previous habit felt that he should choose a school background, but maybe this time he will do something different?
I haven't encountered Qing Lin yet, this is also a potential stock for Dou Sheng.
If it doesn't look good, I'll leave. I may write better later, but only if I can't stand it.
28DAY丨Copy Type
What type will the next dungeon be - country mysteries, campus ghost stories, hospital horrors, dark fairy tales, horror apartments, cruise ships, zombie massacre dungeons, role-playing dungeons... It's all possible (thinking jpg)
Author, are you really going to put on a show of fake death? The protagonists are twins who have the blood of the Black King and are Dragon Gods. Their teachers are Makino, the leader of the Noumenon Sect, and Tianfeng Leng Yaozhu, the deputy master of the Leng family of the Spirit Transferring Pagoda. Makino has an inexplicable relationship with the current god, With this kind of relationship, if Shrek wanted to touch him, he would have to ask the forging union headed by Shen Tao whether they would agree, let alone those forces who wanted to befriend Shen Tao. So is it really necessary to fake death to escape? This is not in line with this person's identity and background.
Does the author have a female protagonist? If so, who is it?
Yes, I love reading it, but there are too few updates.
Is this a eunuch? This is only a few chapters.
This is my first time writing a Douluo fanfic. I hope you can support me.
I've been really busy recently
Just wait and see, rest assured that this book will be finished well.
Very good, definitely keep it up and never stop updating.
After Chapter 200, the combat power began to collapse rapidly, the plot went downhill, and I didn't even know what to write.
What rubbish, what mess?
I thought about it and wrote it out, but I got confused after reading a few chapters. How can gods directly project into the lower world? How come demigods fight back and forth with the remnant soul of the God King. Not to mention the destruction of cultivation, the God King also has the strength in the middle stage in the later stage. What about the cultivation of the God King brought by Laoshizi after his rebirth? There is no logic at all in writing the book. It is all nonsense and imagination. It is disgusting.
The mortal body is treated as the holy body. It is too exaggerated to spend millions of kilograms of energy and various treasures in the Taoist palace realm.