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It's beautiful, the protagonist's timeline is very interesting
I like your non-combatant books.
It's very comfortable. I read a Dou 4 fanfic a few days ago, and it almost made me sick to death.
The latest two are really disgusting. Xue Beng is here to kill you, and you are looking for someone to kill you. Even if you are not here to kill yourself, you are looking for someone to cripple yourself, and then bring you to him to torture yourself. The protagonist is so generous. Others come to kill you, but you want to run away when they find out that you can't beat them. Then you really let them run away. Should I come to kill the protagonist, but find that you can't beat him? I don't say anything, just run away, and he will let me go. He only allows me to kill you, but you are not allowed to kill him. You are still afraid of Xue Ye and the Tiandou Empire. Well, let's not say that Xue Beng came to kill him. He doesn't know his identity, and you don't want to break up with him. But he came to kill two of your own people. Why don't you kill them if you have the strength? So disgusting? And is he, the prince, more noble than you? You are the Holy Son of the Spirit Hall, and your father is the Titled Douluo Ninth Soul Ring 100,000 Years Old. Your two grandfathers are also enshrined in the Spirit Hall. What will happen even if the seven great enshriners kill Xue Beng? Why don't you go to school? I won't say anything else. After all, I can't break up with him now. But you don't even dare to kill two losers. What can you do? If someone comes to kill you, just give them a warning and then lose your identity. It's better to have no identity at all. Apart from being a disgusting person, I don't know what you said and you still appear to be very smart. If you don't kill Xue Beng or those two people who came to kill you, you still look very smart. If you look very smart, I tell you, you are a disgusting person.
Not bad, but too little! ! ! The protagonist hasn't leveled up in a long time.
The first two hundred chapters were fine. From the second chapter onwards, it was as if someone else had written it. It looked like a running account. The dialogues between the characters were all clichés, and the plots were all clichés, just like when I was writing essays in elementary school.
It's interesting. It seems to be the best work among Dou Er fans so far.
One word is cool, comfortable from beginning to end. If you don't pay attention to a little detail, it will look very beautiful.
This book is so retarded. An invader possesses the system to decimate a native population. Anyone who talks about the original martial soul must be a pure-blood idiot.
The writing is noob and the plot is noob and the protagonist is brainless.
Very good subject matter, and the writing style and plot are as good as ever
The protagonist does not treat other people as human beings, but treats others as intellectuals. It can also be said that the author treats the characters as intellectuals. However, if you can accept the sense of intelligence, the writing is still okay.
There is a big loophole in the age of the fifth wife that the protagonist marries. Let's not talk about why he fell in love with the protagonist. Let's just say that there is a problem with age, unless he is a widow. His wife's mother is 80 years old, even if the daughter was born at 35, then the protagonist's wife is 45 years old and is about 5 years younger than the protagonist. ? ? What is the family background of the protagonist's wife? Even if she is down and out, what does she like about the protagonist? Also, in the book, the protagonist is always called an old man. I am convinced. Brother, this is an extraordinary world, not an ordinary historical dynasty. How can a third-rate warrior live to be a hundred years old?
I really like the exploding beauty of Cthulhu bugs.
Chapter 87 starts to disgust people! Boring
It's too late to give five stars, I'm getting more and more hydrated😥
Quite alive
It's just that the protagonist is a bit too timid and doesn't have much confidence. After arriving in Douluo Continent, let's talk about the story between the protagonist and Tang San, how he made Tang San so slippery that he now lacks confidence. It's more reasonable. The master has gone to Douluo Continent, how about awakening a Blue Silver Grass to become twin martial souls, absorbing a Lone Bamboo to pole vault, and then go to Shrek Academy without running 20 kilometers with weight every day to get rid of the meniscus? Occasionally, I miss Tang San again and say that if I had this pole vaulting soul skill to dodge, I would not be beaten to death by Bibi Dong, and Dong'er would not die later. The wave comes down and consumes traffic fiercely! 🤣
I've watched too much Naruto and I'm still a fan of Japan. The dialogue is very immature and it creates a bond.
This plug-in ability is so loud that it is actually just a piece of cake.
There are so many flaws that I don't know what to say. The Shura God has the strength to fight the Saint, and the Little Doctor Fairy uses a Nether Poison Fire directly from a 6-star fighting spirit to a semi-saint. Isn't this disgusting? It's like the Nether Poison Fire has absorbed the poisonous mist for thousands of years and accumulated a huge amount of toxins, but the Nether Poison Fire you wrote can't even poison the Dou Huang. There is also Qinglin, a high-level Douzong with green snakes and three flowers who controls Douzong. Even Qinglin, who is in the original Douzun realm, only has a slight influence. You directly control Douzun, or you control 3. There are more than 800 Douzun and more than 3,000 Douzong. It is even more funny, not to mention whether there are so many pythons in Jiuyou. , Bi Snake and Three Flower Pupils have their limits, but with you, they become unlimited, directly controlling the entire Netherworld Python Clan. Several years have passed, and Qinglin is still like a 3-year-old child, with a younger master and a younger master. He throws himself into his arms every day, covering his eyes when he hugs the little medical fairy. Who are you disgusting here?
A masterpiece from a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic, but the characters are bigger than the game, and it contains a lot of Shura Field elements.
Six Six Six, what kind of waste dinner is the third level of Contra in five years? In the original work, the rat can be one level in one year. It is a pure waste protagonist.
You might as well just write interstellar novels.
This doesn't mean anything. It feels like a robot to me. Give this novel a title and then start the plot directly. Douluo novels written about this kind of mechanical civilization are quite boring. As soon as they arrived, they invaded directly, and then they cleared this and that. I'm so speechless, at least I can retain some of my anime popularity. It gives the impression that if you don't obey, you will all be cleaned out. You must know that you are the intruder!
Are there Ling Luochen and Zhang Lexuan? . Author
I updated five chapters before, now I have two chapters.
Listen to authority. Mainly because you have to use the gold coins or something to buy it. To be honest, I don't want to read it.
The author will update it soon, it's not enough to read
If it's not enough, please update two more chapters. Urgent to update. Urgent to update.
A warm and pure love book, it can perfectly make up for my regret in reading the original work, but some of the characters are a bit OOC, and many of them look less like the owner of a huge power in daily life, and more like a well-off and wealthy family, but overall this book is quite good😚
I don't need to look at anything else. I saw ghosts in the catalog. A director can make such an opening. It's happened in this life. One ghost and one witch. It's a pure scam movie. You can see if these two directors have any other famous works in this life. It's not even as good as Dapeng. Dapeng was scolded for making Pancake Man. What's the use of having made many good movies so far. The box office just can't go up. They are all trying to pay off the debt for Pancake Man.
The first round of PK has begun! Don't hoard literature to nourish literature! Only by following up can you write for a long time!
Everyone remember to follow the updates every day! Only in this way can I pass the PK and the article can be written longer! Don't hoard and maintain articles! If the pk fails, it will be completed in advance! ! ! !
It's great. Duels are more than just playing cards. You can feel the emotions of the characters.
It feels okay
I just watched some, it's okay, it's quite novel.
So the main character is a Ninja Turtle? Why did you endure it for so many years? You are his nephew. In other words, you are the grandson of Tendo-ryu. You're so scared. You still have to endure hardships, you deserve it! If you like cuckolding and have masochistic tendencies, that's okay, that's okay.
It's quite strange. It's full of the author's personal settings. It's a system novel in the skin of the pirate Death God, and the Dead Sea content settings have been changed in a mess. Traveling back more than a hundred years before the plot begins, I graduated as a vice-captain in one year, and then relied on the system to become a top combat power in three days. There are no chapter names after that. How dare you collect money for this? It's a free novel, okay?
It's very good, the plot is compact, I read it in one sitting. The two of them interacted a little bit, they just kept following the plot. It would be nice to have more emotional interaction later on.
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It's getting closer and closer to the end, I feel so reluctant to leave it.
I have to revise my paper again tomorrow. This is the third time. Woohoo.
Beautiful, so happy
Come on, shiitake mushrooms. I'll give it back after reading it.
This book is considered one of the better-looking among mortal fanfics, and I recommend it.
The writing is smooth and the plot does not have too many logical flaws.
The writing is smooth, and the plot does not have too many logical flaws, but the rhythm is relatively flat and there are few conflict points. Let's see how it develops in the future. Worth a look.
seventeen
Watching flowers in spring, listening to rain in summer, sweeping leaves in autumn, and watching snow in winter, make every ordinary day a romantic poem.
Does the author understand the value of physical sanctification?
There are too many bugs. At this level, Lord Wa comes out to do tasks by herself, and she has a snake body with human legs on the inside.
If Tiandou is transformed into a palace, Qianrenxue of Tiandou will have enough faith to quickly become a god.
Very nice. Very rare long night moon text.
In other words, the protagonist will die when he is forty-five years old.
I hate you for not updating! ! ! I hate you so much
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