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I've got both cool points and B-squares, so keep writing.

Isn't it too cool? It's like a cracked version of Douluo

I heard it's pretty good so far, but there's no female lead. Maybe it's because I personally don't like stories with male protagonists without CP, but only with novels with female protagonists without CP. Haha, I heard this is the end. I'm going to look for the next one again😊😊😊

There was a problem earlier. Shouldn't the protagonist be more careful if he knew it was reality? Leaving one behind will definitely become a hidden danger, and allowing yourself to be bitten will only make the protagonist look stupid. Not to mention that you have to be even more careful if you only have two lives.

What do you think? Upvote
Protagonist, let me see if you can kill Tang Hao and the others.

28DAY丨The type of next copy
The next dungeon can be a camp battle, where everyone fights together. Both sides are a combination of monsters and players, allowing Ah Wu to have a great time earning monster coins.

It doesn't matter if there is no heroine. As long as you don't make mistakes and write Tang-dynasty plots to make readers feel the emotional heartstrings, then that's okay. The pleasure that the plot promotes can cover sexual desire.

The writing is so bad. In the original work, Mo Fan only has a 2.5X increase in Rose Flame, and his magic seems to be only mid-level and level 2. He can get high marks. What are you writing? A 6x increase is even more rubbish than a 2.4X increase. It's not as strong as the original.

Author, will the protagonist join forces with the soul beast in the future? Then destroy the world of gods

The more I watch it, the more boring it becomes. The protagonist has a low IQ and no emotional intelligence. The plot is dull and boring, and the characters are poorly created, including but not limited to the protagonist's Qingmei and the protagonist's mother. The refreshed skills are also very poisonous and useless, and the conditions are not very easy to satisfy, which is boring.

What are you writing about? You won't have to start your life over again later! Then you are so disgusting. I hope you won't do this, otherwise you will be really rubbish! Drive high and go low.

28DAY丨What type will the next copy be?
Make a wish copy of ancient Chinese mythology. Or a copy of the mountain and sea beasts. Each of the mountains and sea beasts has its own side. Si Wu can directly defeat them and become the overlord.

Just so-so! There is some flavor in food, but it is a pity to throw it away

I feel like I've seen it before
Similar to Spider King Are you writing facing each other? ?

I didn't watch much
Why do you want to mix Chinese and English? It is very easy for someone with an education level who would read a novel like yours to read some simple English vocabulary. If you insist on adding English to the protagonist's words, don't you think this will attract people?

poor
Poor, weak willpower, unable to control body shape, no hard power, useless!

28DAY丨About the next copy type
I guess the next type of dungeon might be a circus, a zoo, or something like that, because it feels like the first two are theater performances, one is a museum visit, and the next one might be related to entertainment public facilities.

No, I really think the writing is okay! Even though I'm not from Sichuan, I read it with gusto. The main author has good control over the details, and the portrayal of some villains is not so brainless. It's pretty good among period novels.

Isn't there anyone who writes old dramas? The new drama has such a bad reputation that I haven't even watched it!

slowly slowly
According to the way it is written, there are no more than 8 million words that cannot be completed.

Details are still details. Without details, it is just a running account, and there is too little characterization.

The writing is good, the writing is natural and smooth, the plot setting is also logical, and it feels good to read.

It's okay, as long as you can become a god before the age of 24. Tang San also became a god at the age of 24.

It's not too much to include AI expansion in the article, but you forgot all about this setting after just writing a few chapters, right? In the beginning, it was a ten-million-level school district house, but later it turned into a cheap rental house when Mu Ningxue saw it. Moreover, your points are unreasonable. 1,500 Slaves are equivalent to one emperor. The points obtained by the math are not good enough to be directly slashed, and the combat power has already begun to be suppressed in the early stage.

They are all running accounts, nothing interesting to see.

Highly recommended!
Can you rate it yourself? That is of course a five point recommendation. 😘😘😘😘

Hurry up, there are too few updates, not enough to watch! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very good. One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, ninety.

Just write it in the first person. In Chapter 5, your big corruption case ended hastily and there is no logic. Corruption at the bottom? The top management didn't get the big deal, but if there was such corruption below, they would have died dozens of times. If there were honest officials, the level of corruption would not last long, not to mention the period when the Ming Dynasty was about to fall.

The author is a talented person, AI can never replace human abstraction

28DAY丨What type will the next copy be
Make a wish that the next dungeon will be a zombie dungeon, so baby Si Wu will have a great time killing and killing, and he can earn more monster coins.

It's pretty good, at least I felt pretty good after watching it

It can only be said that it is not bad. The Ice Emperor should not be given to Huo Yuhao. It is best not to have a too deep friendship between the protagonist and Huo Yuhao. There is no way that Huo Yuhao's character can be helped by the *** soul still pressing on Tang San's hands.














