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It's a bit ridiculous. Who knew that Di Tian and the others existed in Dou Yi's timeline? It seems that Dou Yi doesn't even have the concept of ferocious beasts. It's inexplicable. Besides, Xiao Wu and the others don't seem to know that there are people like Di Tian. Otherwise, why didn't Di Tian and the others come out when the Azure Bull Python was sacrificed in the original work?

Good looking. Love to watch. More updates. I don't know what I want to say.

Every time I read the novel, I can't understand something. If you want to suppress your fighting power, no matter how powerful your martial soul is, it's useless. Others have become gods, so why are you still adding levels?

I hope my name is still Yu Jingcheng and not changed. Also, my favorite in Douluo is Xiaoxiao. I hope I can travel through the world and travel through parallel time and space.

Chapter 9 I can't hold it any longer, it's too rough

It was written by an idiot, a pure idiot. Some treasures are artifacts in the hands of others, but they are just shit in the hands of the protagonist. ,

As a person who completely hates shit Lake, I give it one star. I couldn't help but be disgusted when I looked at it for half of it.

If the writing style of Nibai Buddha is ancient and greasy, this one is even less greasy in recent times. Some descriptions are eye-catching, but most of the character descriptions are formulaic and disgusting. He says lightly at every turn and smiles coldly with the corner of his mouth slightly raised. If he doesn't know how to write, he doesn't need to write so many facial expressions. It is blunt and disgusting, full of dragon king feeling, and the words are poor and awkward, which makes people feel uncomfortable just looking at it.

I think Zi Yan was more beautiful when she was a child. When she grows up, she feels very awkward. I can't say ugly. She just feels ordinary and awkward.

The logic and thinking are very smooth, and the IQ is really online.

Yin Tianzi
The author, the real Yin Tianzi is Dongyue Taishan Tianqi Rensheng Emperor! The most commonly used and standard full name of Emperor Fengdu is Beiyin Fengdu Xuanqing Emperor

It's so beautiful, I stayed up late to read it

I feel that the sudden love scenes in this book are a bit embarrassing. The male protagonist fell in love at the age of 19, but I still like to watch him fight for his career.

There are a lot of words about women's love and only three or four chapters will be deducted two stars. Members can get one star for free.

Thoughts after viewing
After reading it all, I have a few thoughts after reading it. It is quite good. Although it is a mindless white text without an outline, the content and paragraphs of the story are quite smooth and can be read. The immersion is good. There will be no situation where I want to skip a chapter after seeing a certain part, or quit and change another book. If this book is written well, grasps the rhythm, designs some interesting plots, and also fills in the emotional line, it will be quite good.

Bai Xiang is such a big loser. I'm about to be charged and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. He's searching for gold everywhere. Are you a dragon? Take a look and the protagonist has changed his name. Alas.

It's from the dy video next door, and I came here specifically to scold you.
The little girls all showed up, and as a result, even the emperor who became an emperor didn't have a timeline to become an emperor, so forget it, and the naming was acceptable. But who taught you that after a descendant becomes an emperor and obtains the mark of Tianxin, the previous emperor will fall from the throne. Did you watch "Shu Tian" for this setting?

Grade 3 and 4, are you kidding me? Were you not kidding when you said Tang San's first year in ring 488? Gangzi's own theory is also in 423. Do you think he said Tang San 488 didn't he slap himself in the face?

Not enough at all
With such Braille words, does the author want to be locked up in a secret room?

My little bean
Look at the plot in the catalogue, there are more than 500 chapters, only the Eight-Star Fighter King

Too late
The hydrology is too serious, the various meal arrangements at the base are of little use, and there are too few descriptions of the fights.

There are too many poisonous points, and it is easy for people to abandon the book at the beginning.

It's really good, but it's too little and the time is stuck. It's just right.

If you like watching mortals flow, you can watch it
I have read it before, and now I have read it and commented on it. This novel is very interesting, detailed and well-organized. It can compete with "The Immortal Picking Order", "The Legend of Wood Immortal", and "The Female Cultivator of Our Generation Should Be Self-Strengthening". I hope the author will continue to publish works.

Blind jb scribbling. You have to make it up yourself. Normally, fan fiction has the same module, and I can't understand how to cover it all.

Do you have any recommendations for some books about Peerless Tang Sect? I haven't read any books yet, so I've only read 5 chapters of this book. I personally think the protagonist is stupid.

I feel that your revenge was not very smooth. Although you killed everyone who deserved it, you did not let your enemies and the people of Yellow Maple Valley know who you were and what kind of revenge you had. Others are pretty good

A beautiful article about strange rules
This book is at a superior level in the genre of strange rules and stories. The psychological fear is well described, the breathing arrangement is appropriate, and the reading emotional rhythm of curiosity -> fear -> breathing -> tension -> calmness is relaxed and relaxed. The core of the strange story about rules is cleverly hidden, and its full picture is slowly revealed as the protagonist explores. Necessary but minimal settings expand the protagonist's behavioral space to a broad enough but still reasonable level. In order to survive, the price the protagonist pays can be beyond normal people's imagination but still within a reasonable range. The inevitability of the protagonist's behavior is very convincing from the perspective of hindsight. The most important things in the background of outstanding rule ghost stories are 1) rule explanation; 2) rule coupling. The former reaches a very high level through details, hints and reversal of explanations, while the latter reaches a very high level through the arrangement of the appearance and use of supernatural objects. This can effectively constitute the wisdom, decisiveness and courage shown by the protagonist in the bright line under the goal of survival. Otherwise, it will just become an empty piece of writing where the author wants to make readers happy. It is true that some people think that the female element does not meet their expectations. But obviously, the content of this book itself has proved that the in-depth study of these elements is superficial. Any reader can replace the characters in this book with their subjectively desired gender/appearance, but they will also find that doing so will not produce any substantial changes in the plot or reading experience.

very good!
The author also loves interaction! The writing is also very good! Sweet, very convoluted writing! But it works!

I thought that desire is suppressed first, bitter first and then sweet. Who knows, damn, it has been bitter all the time. What is the purpose of bitterness? It is just for the sake of bitterness. People or for what?

Fighting is fun! Knock someone into fog with one punch! Invincible strength!

The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth
What the hell are you writing? The front is so boring, hit this and hit that. Even if they can't fight, the next demon clan and Taoist ancestor will be restless. Suddenly there is Lingbao Tianzun, and he and Daozu are brothers. It's really...

If you don't have a system, you still want to unify the continent. You can rely on your innate fourth-level soul power or the swan martial spirit to self-destruct and travel through time. You don't want to hold on to your thighs, but you still pretend to be in front of a titled Douluo.

Is there any hangup? Is it awesome? Do you need to look at other people's faces to survive?

Uh, I took a look and what did he say? Because what was written later was too disgusting, I didn't remember it, so I looked back and looked at it again. Hey, he said that killing Xue Beng was meaningless except to anger Emperor Xue Ye. I really wanted to laugh. Can't blood kill you? He will not go to war over a dead person, let alone you are the Holy Son of Wuhun Palace. His son is not dead, but there is a serum river. Although Xue Beng is dead, his son is dead, but he still has a daughter. But what if the protagonist dies? Would he really come to kill the protagonist for a useless prince? Is the protagonist's identity just a decoration? It's really disgusting. Let's take a look. The author writes that the protagonist bullies the people, and the protagonist goes up to teach him a lesson. Then he Xue Beng comes to find someone, wanting to kill the protagonist, or cripple him. He brings him in front of him and tortures the protagonist. He just pressures the two people who came to kill him and let them go without being hurt at all. Then he said afterwards that killing Xue Beng is meaningless, except to anger Emperor Xue Ye. What do you think of this plot? How did you get this high score? It's so disgusting, and more importantly, the first part of it is even more disgusting. What the hell is a noble? How many titled Douluo and how many soul engineer legions does he have? He is so afraid of trouble. How many titled Douluo are there in the Tiandou Empire? How many Spirit Halls belonging to the Tiandou royal family are afraid of the nobles? You are so funny. Anyway, I don't know how to put it well. This book you wrote should be taken off the shelf like the other one. He traveled through the Nandian Tyrannosaurus family martial arts The soul is the same as the main character, but he is too simple. Because the time-traveling man disgusted our family, I advise you to either change it or, alas, take it off the shelves. You are not suitable to write this. It is really disgusting. You are afraid of shit in the fantasy world. Even the fantasy floor tiles are in the fantasy world, not the ancient fantasy events. You told me. If the royal family is powerful, then that's it. This royal family has long been rotten to the core. The protagonist is not powerless. If he is powerless, there is nothing he can do. But if you don't have power, you should kill those two who come to kill you if you have strength.

I became even more angry when I saw Chapter 71. The protagonist's wife, the down-and-out Zhang family, introduced the protagonist, who was lonely but still very strong. How could the old man marry his daughter without the consent of the old man? The protagonist lived in extraordinary ancient times, and the protagonist disappeared every second. It was not logical given his age. Now that I look at the introduction, it's even more illogical.












