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How to say it? I feel that the look and feel is pretty good, but the character of this sister is too unlikable. As for the protagonist, everything is good, but the fighting power is too weak and the speech is too soft. Although mature, I still feel that she does not look like a man. I will give it a 3 points.
I would like to give you a suggestion: don't put your words of thanks in the text, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable for the reader.
"The Pride of the Moon Gives Me" written by Nan Nan is really beautiful!
Jun'er's brightness and liveliness, Li Xingzhi's affection and forbearance, the pull between the two of them was so touching, the more I looked at it, the more I became addicted to it. It's true that he doesn't say anything, even if he likes it, and he doesn't say anything he does. However, I was very moved by the foreshadowing of the island palace I saw earlier. Finally, I look forward to every update I follow. I actively follow updates every day. I would like to thank Nannan for creating such a vivid character for them, allowing me to meet this grand preference that belongs exclusively to Jiao Yue and him. Finally, for bringing such a great story, I will continue to follow it and look forward to more exciting content in the future! 😣😣😣😘😘😘
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The details are too poor, but overall it's pretty good.
When I saw Dong Xuan, I was going to snatch Snowflake Goddess Dragon. Do you think the script is valuable? The author is just being obscene.
I don't understand. Those useless mortal mothers and daughters of the Mo family obviously don't know you and have nothing to do with you, yet you just went to take them in and give them immortality. . . As a result, you left out all the beautiful female supporting characters in the back? For example, Fan Zuozhi and Zhuo Youshi, you also described them in detail in words as they accompanied others. Zhuo Youshi's innocence was so embarrassing that others censored it. . . The protagonist went to Chaos Xinghai for the first time, and he had to disguise himself and wear a fake name. It was called hiding his identity, but in fact he didn't care about what you were hiding. So was it necessary to disguise himself? Every time he appears, he deals with women in disguise. It's too outrageous to write like this. . . . . . Also, Zi Ling's real name is Wang Ning, and Zi Ling's mother's name is Zhou Yuan. You actually named Zi Ling's mother Wang Ningmei. I'm speechless.
Another idea to attract traffic, a bunch of replies
It's disgusting, there's no logic at all, I'm almost 40 years old, I don't have a golden finger, I'm practicing at the fourth level of Qi and I still say I have time, I'm purely sick
Come on! ! ! ! !
Why did I just see it when it's so beautiful! ! ! ! !
Disembodied martial souls are rubbish. Like those agility attack type soul masters, you will be instantly defeated if you get close to them. Even a Titled Douluo like you can't defeat Level 70 Zhu Zhuqing.
There are fewer and fewer soul beasts, so why do I have to kill them when I practice? I am not a Holy Mother, so I feel that there is no need to kill them after defeating them. It is not a grudge. It just has no brains, neither the male protagonist nor the author.
Check in on the seventeenth day 3.21
It's another day at work on the weekend.
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Dad, I really like the fanfic you wrote about Douluo Tang San and the original heroine. When will you update it?
It's so confusing. It talks about commodity prices, school benefits, how I met my wife in my previous life, my parents' quarrels, and financial management and stock prices. I can only say that I have read more than ten chapters, as if I have read more than a dozen other people's books, and it contains everything.
It's okay. I think it's the same whether there is a protagonist or not. Writing a protagonist is not as interesting as writing a dead protagonist.
Against humanity
If you like dark texts against humanity, you can read it. I guess this book will be taken off the shelves soon.
I am the author at eight in the morning. If you don't want to write, then stop writing. Don't fool people by copying and pasting. I won't tell you clearly whether Thunder Fire will drop the level or not. The protagonist's reserves of a galaxy can be drained by Fire Academy. If you don't wake up, go back to bed and lie down and continue to sleep.
Very good, but updates are too slow
Your changes are inconsistent and not smooth. You have to finish what you want to change first, otherwise how will new readers see it? I ask
If you did it for Lin Dong's wife and didn't arrange it for her, you're really treating her like a Japanese.
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I am very disgusted with the protagonist's character. Chun Jiahao likes to show off and talk big. I even see the shadow of Gangzi fooling the mistress in him. In addition, the protagonist is still too naive, and he is determined to kill and not be the king of elimination. This protagonist is simply disgusting to watch.
I like it. I have read many Tadaan articles. This one is my favorite. The desert turns into an oasis. It is very meaningful and full of positive energy.
Regarding update issues
The young author may have to apologize to all the adoptive fathers, because the work was not signed, so it may be updated every two or three days. The young author wants to open a new book to see if he can sign a contract. Signing a contract now is very important for the young author. The author's mother has advanced lung cancer, and a small amount of it has metastasized to her head. With the addition of cerebral infarction, the young author cannot go out to work. He can only take care of his mother at home and do some part-time work at home. Therefore, it is very important for the young author to be able to sign a contract for his work. The young author will write a new book. This book will still be updated, but it may be updated every two or three days. Well, the pace may also speed up a bit. Try to end it between 700,000 words and 500,000 words. The author can guarantee that the book will be written to the end as much as possible. Although it may not be perfect, I will try my best to present you with a relatively complete book. Of course, this is the second time the young author has written this book, so it may not be particularly good.
From the perspective of this book, the protagonist is indeed an extremely selfish person. From the perspective of plot and logic, the plot in the early stages of the plot is really bad, and the logic is difficult to understand. The protagonist obviously wants to develop, but he insists on taking the "invincible road". He is arrogant and arrogant to the outside world, which makes the protagonist The description of Jiao's character is pretty good (other people's characters have collapsed a lot). He is selfish, arrogant, and crazy. It was also the madness that gave me the motivation to continue watching. The madness of doing whatever it takes to become stronger, and the madness of facing the enemy, can be considered vividly reflected. But it's still not suitable for the general public. If people who can't accept it really can't stand this kind of protagonist, I personally only like the chapter of the Soul Master Competition, and I don't like the protagonist very much. I can only say that it is acceptable. I hope the author can revise the protagonist's outlook on life later, at least to make it more normal.
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There are too many poisonous points to complain about, so I'll give you a one-star review.
March 21, the seventeenth day of points activity check-in
Strongly recommend
The sun has not failed us, and we must not let it down - "Border Town" by Shen Congwen
It's too poisonous. Mark it so you can't stand it.
It's really good. At least I caught up to chapter 239 in one day (still listening).
I was hooked as soon as I saw it, it was so exciting.
Good News: Stitches Even better news: It's all sewn on
But I love watching it so much. It's poisonous, poisonous, poisonous.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
As for the author, please come out and tell me that since the thunder element is high-level, what the hell is the thunder element nebula? Does the protagonist have two thunder elements?
Has that Yuyao gone? I'll delete the book if I don't want to quit.
You are still counting on the later stage🙄 No wonder so many books are not read, and the readers have been driven away by the earlier ones, and you still hope that someone will continue reading. In the first chapter, if you write that the protagonist has given up hope on the Silver Dragon King, let her live as a vase, or prepare to kill her, and you will slowly lay out your plans, so that you will not be unable to retain people.
This author is also awesome, and Western professions have come to control Tao soldiers. You are not trying to please both sides. If you want to write a halo mage and rely on dnd, don't you think there are enough western arms for you to write? We still have to write a Western profession to control Tao soldiers, why don't Eastern professions have aura-like abilities? It would be better for you to cobble together a battle formation or range talisman than to write an aura mage. There is also a genealogy of civilization. Good guy does not belong to the genealogy of Eastern civilization. Did you not understand what the genealogy of civilization means, or you subconsciously wrote about your inner yearning?
You have just been working hard as soon as you left society, and you are writing this kind of thing to pollute the environment online. Is it possible that one of so many books you have written is not unfinished? The first chapter is written like a bitch. Why have you never talked to a woman in real life? The main character in the book looks like a lunatic. In order to keep that trash, he even wrote a life-saving grace. How do you expect that love brain to become normal? It's been cut in half again and I still have hope🙄
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Be very restrained before going abroad! Start flying after going abroad! Harem cool article!
Love to watch
After reading the book reviews, there are too many monsters, and I only deserve to read those novels🐔🐯
Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking
I feel like it's suitable for people who don't have much to do. It's not too superficial, but it's a bit annoying and uncomfortable to watch. You have to often look back at the foreshadowing in previous chapters to understand the cause and effect. Characters often don't have names when they appear, and you don't know who is appearing. Although the plot is very slow, if you have nothing to do and stay at home to watch it for more than ten hours, you will find that it is actually quite interesting. The world view is attractive enough and makes you want to know more. Also, when the male and female protagonists were in the small town, I actually couldn't feel Ning Yao's heartbeat at all... But the female protagonist was still very special and attractive compared to other pendant female protagonists in novels. When chasing, just use animation to transition the plot in Lizhu Cave and then connect it to the novel, it will be much better.
I feel it's more interesting than the other one, keep it up (can you add some divine seals, the throne is so handsome😘)
Let me tell you what I think of the author's settings.
To be honest, the author's operation can't reverse the crisis of the Eldar! Even if the old Dragon King is allowed to live in the Spirit Clan, it will only delay the timeline of the demise of some Spirit Clan! As a result, the soul clan went to destroy other ancient clans first. If the old Dragon King didn't live in the Spirit Clan, he wouldn't even be able to delay the time, and it would still be the same as the original work! The Soul Clan can destroy the Spirit Clan, which doesn't even have the Seven-Star Fighting Saint, in less than a minute! Too late to support! And the battle of genocide is not a one-person battle. The overall high-end combat power of the Soul Clan is 1 Peak Dou Sage, 1 Early Nine-Star Dou Sage, 3 or more Eight-Star Dou Sage, and more than 4 Seven-star Dou Sage. There is no need to count those below seven stars. It is only a lot more than the Spirit Clan + Dragon Clan. The combined combat power of the Spirit Clan and the Dragon Clan is 1 Peak Fighting Saint, and then... There is no more! Not a single seven-star. The result of the war was that the Spirit Clan and the Dragon Clan were defeated! Only the old Dragon King can escape, and everyone else must die (the Soul Clan has a blockade formation that cannot be broken by the Seven-Star Fighting Saint and below)! The only two solutions to prevent the Spirit Race from going offline early are: 1. Break them into pieces and scatter them across the Dou Qi Continent. 2. "Dispose" the ancient jade silkily and it can fall into the hands of any clan. As long as the soul clan knows that the ancient jade is no longer in the hands of the spirit clan. Let's talk about the golden finger selection issue! 1 Fenjue is actually a must-select! Because there is no 100% guarantee that you will be able to get the True Burning Jue that has not been tampered with in certain contents from Yao Lao, who was heartbroken after being betrayed by his apprentice, or from Xiao Yan, who has a tough personality! Huang Rong is not the only one who can play the trick of fake Nine Yin Scriptures! 234 Are all optional. It doesn't matter which one you choose! If you want to be sure, choose Yuan Qi (you can reach Dou Emperor with everyone first) or Old Dragon Emperor (with multiple top fighters, the fault tolerance rate will increase). If you are confident and radical, choose Dou Zun. The peak fighting saints and fighting emperors of Fen Jue + Alien Fire are both the most powerful at their level! After cultivating to the peak of Dou Sheng, let the soul clan open Dou Emperor Cave, and the protagonist will not be short of source energy! As long as you hide the Xiao family's ancient jade + practice Burning Technique + successfully collect part of the strange fire = you will definitely win!