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Yang Jian's martial soul is at least full of innate soul power and can be as high as possible. You look down on Yang Jian so much.
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The main theme of this article is a unique female heroine × a loyal dog protecting the male protagonist. The female protagonist acts freely and freely, does what she wants, and never deliberately caters to others; the male protagonist always guards silently and devotes everything to protect her. The road to immortality is thrilling at every step, and the bond between the two is getting deeper and deeper. All the foreshadowings have been laid, and there is no bloodshed, no rivalry, and no forced wisdom. If you like this story, please click to collect it. Your support is my biggest motivation to keep updating.
Highly recommended
It's so beautiful. It's not a female competition team. I hope it can be improved.
To be honest, when I saw the protagonist, his life was quite messy at the beginning. Since then, with this kind of countdown, he has reached the peak of his life.
"Urgent Fu"
I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll the scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste food and forget to make noises. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the early release of the new chapter, just like the early chrysanthemums looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come.
Okay, it's worth a look. Everyone is welcome to appreciate it.
Can the author please answer this?
The author's writing is really good. I voted for it twice.
Updates are so slow. Can the author evolve?
It's really funny. I just like this kind of writing that can automatically make people forget to use their brains, instead of making people throw away their brains.
What is the name of the protagonist? It's really troublesome to watch. What's black is dyed white, dyed black, black is dyed ink, white is dyed ink, ink is dyed black. I feel dizzy when I look at it.
When writing a fanfic, write it carefully and don't add your own opinions to complain in the article. I know the virtues of the characters in it, so I don't need you to explain too much. Are they here to read the story or to complain about you? This is a failure
General scientific research routes are restricted everywhere
Technology research and development has different levels of national attention. It's an assembly line, it's boring, and scientific researchers can't stand it. It either promotes national progress, industry, weapons, or the real economy. It's nothing. I'm reborn as a miscreant.
What time does the author update? How many updates can be made in a day?
With the blood of the three-eyed golden beast, Emperor Lao cannot die crying.
The novel is very good, please keep updating it.
After reading a few chapters, I feel like your golden finger is not quite right. Bind a genius, and then the protagonist gets 5% of his cultivation level, and the genius side gets 5% less, which is actually an actual commission, and the binder cannot be higher than the protagonist.
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Immortal emperors and Taoist ancestors, please accept my bow, kneel down and beg for support, and beg for monthly votes~!
Authors, hurry up and become a member for free!
Campus funny stories with multiple female protagonists
In fact, I didn't read this subject at first, simply because I had been following Doki Doki's books before, so I definitely had to read Doki Doki's new work. It read well for the senses. It was quite interesting when I first read it, because I have always preferred reading harem-type novels, so after hearing that this book has four female protagonists, I was looking forward to it. And there is Hokkaido White Lovers. Is this biscuit really delicious? Have you ever eaten any? Say it.
One of the rare books that is free from routine and thoughtful.
For now, there's nothing wrong with it. I hope it won't be bad in the future.
This is a relatively real and down-to-earth urban entrepreneurship system article. It is suitable for readers who like urban entrepreneurship, real industries, systematic counterattacks, team development, and hard-core cool articles about steady and steady progress. I hope you will support this book! Thank you everyone🙏🙏🙏
Can those who say this book of mine be a female channel please shut up? ! !
Now that it's on the shelves, I feel comfortable being hacked. Do you think I want it? If it weren't for the fact that when I read a book on QQ, I had to choose one of the male or female characters, I really wouldn't want to choose. Liu Mei, Wang Lin, Liu Li, including the villains and female supporting characters. Everyone has their own personality traits and inner dialogue. No matter the protagonist or the supporting character, no one is perfect, and no enemy is absolutely evil. Before I started this book, I wanted to make a group portrait. Do you understand a group portrait? . . I also don't understand why the book opening mechanism must be classified into male or female videos. As a result, a lot of people criticized me as a female channel when I chose a male channel. If you say that this is a female channel, just based on the things about the protagonist, I will be criticized even more. It's annoying to death. I won't write it anymore.
good
It's only chapter 19 now. Compared to the fandom, the first part is quite exciting. The setting of plug-ins is pretty good and the arrangement of soul skills is also good. It makes people want to read on. I just don't know what will happen next. If it can be maintained, it is definitely possible at 8:00 or so. But if AI is used later, it may go up and down. Let's not say so much. For now, I am very much looking forward to it.
The moment I saw the title of the book, I thought it was The Rainbow Dragon of Gauchadri 🤗 I clicked on the introduction and found out it wasn't 😵
My back pain has been severe these past two days. Updates will be unstable during this period. Updates will be normal once my back heals~
This book is too bad. Stop writing it. There will be no grades.
Generally speaking, it's okay, but the modern thinking towards women is not good. It's the woman's initiative to accept a girl, and then the waitress helps you to accept the harem. You have no consciousness at all to accept the girl, and you don't describe the characteristics of women in anime. The girl is blushing and shy at all times🤐🤐🤐
It's beautiful. Please update it soon. It's so beautiful. It's much more beautiful than those stupid and stupid ones.
What the hell does this have to be written,, Erbi
The overall language has a low number of words. I suspect it was written by AI.
It's just a lump. No need to look further, it's just a lump.
Unless Korea is a mechanical deity, there is absolutely no possibility of unifying the Warring States Period. No matter which period, to be precise, the three Jin countries have no chance. Unless Wei Wenhou is still there when the Three Kingdoms are separated from the Jin Dynasty, he can unify the three Jin Dynasties again and replace the Jin Dynasty with the Wei Dynasty. However, it is too difficult. Then the whole world is really the enemy. Then During the founding of Wei State, the all-star team of Wei State united wholeheartedly and extended their lifespan. Only if Wei Wenhou lived as long as Ying Ji did he have a chance. Zhao State had no chance either. He could only fight some during the reign of King Wuling of Zhao. He could not absolutely suppress any country. Moreover, they did not have abundant products and their logistics could not keep up, so there was no chance.
I didn't expect that what I said about the green-faced beast could actually be applied to Lao Liu. He's exhausted. . .
Not bad, just a little short, come on
This book's depiction of Ming Dynasty society in the late Ming Dynasty is the most sophisticated among the Ming Dynasty novels I have read. The writing style is also very good, and the task description is very vivid and impressive.
not bad
But in just twenty chapters, five women have appeared, and three of them have to be eaten. Is it possible to write this kind of book without opening the body hook?
Do you want to open two books at the same time? Make a cross
It's the last day of PK. Thank you very much for your hard work. I'll read Chapter 40 on May 25 if you can. Thank you very much~
I'll give it four stars first, but I'm afraid I'll ask for Zhu Zhuqing. Don't ask for it. Every time I watch Douluo Fans, I always accept this piece of trash. It looks weird.
Average writing level
It's like a kid's anecdote. There's nothing new. The storyline is ordinary. The characters' IQs are all at the junior high school level. I've read more than 100 chapters and it's really not good. I'll give it 2 stars.
Cool! On the endless track, Ah Wu went crazy! !
Congratulations on the ending. Although there are a lot of typos, and after saying that there is no personal assessment, there is still one more assessment, and the scepter is not used, but the overall structure is good, I like this kind of light CP, the main plot, there is basically no emotion, but I feel that the author has thought about this CP, and the text describes some of the interactions between the two. Although it is not ambiguous enough, it gives me a sense of CP, and the extras give me some sugar.
Chapter 54 gave me a big poop. The author suggests that you change the protagonist to a female to ensure that the book rises to a higher level.
Go to the Star Dou to hunt for souls. One is a disciple of Bibi Dong, and the other is a grandson. There is no one behind to protect the way. It's not funny. They only care about Wai Wai.
Update it quickly, update it quickly
"When Meteors Cross the Rooftop: On the Narrative Blank and Emotional Restraint in "The Promise Under the Starlight""
In the world of fan literature, "knife literature" has never been a flattering label. It means tears, it means heartbreak, it means the reader will be burned by those words over and over again after closing the page. However, "The Promise Under the Starlight" tells us with an almost cruel tenderness: The best knife is not the moment it stabs in, but the one you know will eventually fall but can't look away. 1. Triple metaphors of starry sky imagery The author's management of the "star" imagery can almost serve as a model for fan creation. The first level is the concrete stars - the starry sky where six-year-old Lin Nian was waiting on the rooftop, Hui Yuan Ai watched with his company, and finally only one person was left looking up. This is a star in the physical sense, a sick child's last wish for life, and a scientist's gentlest resistance to fate. The second level is the image of the star - the star does not lie, as long as you wait, it will definitely come. This is the core idea of the entire story and the most heartbreaking paradox. Lin Nian has been waiting for the star to appear; Huiyuan has also been waiting for the antidote to APTX4869 and the freedom after the organization's destruction. However, waiting itself is a punishment, and fate never promises that waiting will have results. The third level is the metaphorical stars - Lin Nian is a star, and Huiyuan is also a star. Two children who were sentenced to probation by fate met on the rooftop of the hospital and warmed each other. Readers already know when they turn the first page that stars will eventually fall. This is the inevitable fate of tetralogy of Fallot and the curse that APTX4869 cannot escape. The superposition of three metaphors builds an emotional dome, making every appearance of "starry sky" carry the weight of meaning. 2. The two-way redemption dilemma of character creation The brilliance of Lin Nian's character is that she is not written as a "weak person who needs to be saved" at all. Six-year-old age, congenital heart disease, tetralogy of Fallot - these medical terms are not tools to win tears in the author's writing, but basic settings for shaping characters. Lin Nian would wait for the stars on the rooftop, understand life and death in the way of a six-year-old child, and would say heartbreaking and heart-warming words to Huiyuan, "The stars don't lie." She has her own stubbornness, her own temper, and her own worldview. This allows readers to truly "see" her while feeling sorry for her. Haihara Ai's treatment is more subtle. The author does not make her a "savior", but another "person waiting to be saved". When Haiyuan met Lin Nian on the rooftop, she had just experienced many changes such as becoming smaller, betraying the organization, and losing daily contact with Dr. A Li. The encounter between two "probationers" is not the big sister saving the little girl, but one star meeting another star. This two-way redemption structure makes the emotional core of the story extremely heavy - if two stars are going to fall, who will light whom? 3. Restrained expression of BE aesthetics After reading Chapter 11, Dr. Zhou Ming's appearance laid important foreshadowing for the story. As the attending doctor, Zhou Ming represents reality - a reality that will not change because of Lin Nian's strength and will not be reversed because of Hui Yuan's protection. The essence of BE aesthetics has never been "making people cry", but "making people want to continue watching if they can't cry". The author shows surprising restraint on this point. She did not let Lin Nian shout "I don't want to die" on the hospital bed, but asked her to wait quietly for the stars on the rooftop. She did not let Haiyuan collapse and say "I will definitely save you", but let her silently calculate the time for the next examination. This power of restraint is stronger than any hysteria. The current rhythm control in Chapters 1-11 is quite stable. The encounter on the rooftop established the character relationships and core images, the agreement under the stars set the emotional tone, and the appearance of Dr. Zhou Ming heralded the coming real dilemma. Every detail is preparing for the final BE ending, and every warmth reminds readers: this will eventually be a cruel farewell. Conclusion "The Promise Under the Starlight" is a work that requires courage to read and recommend. It does not escape the possibility of tragedy, but faces the cruelty of fate while preserving the warmth of humanity in the cruelty. If you are ready to get knifed, be sure to read to the end. That star will come, you just may not be able to see it rise with your own eyes.
The first part is okay, but the second part is pure water.