Fanxin Asked

The old author sets sail with a new book and a piece of food and grass. This book tells the story of the protagonist, who is in a spiritual world that is heading toward the end of the Dharma. He awakens to the wisdom of his first two lives, and relies on his nearly 600 years of experience and knowledge in cultivating immortality as a Jindan master in his first life. He gradually rises from the ordinary world to become an immortal. Note: There is no golden finger in this book. If I had to count, it would be the vision, experience and xinxing of the 600 years of immortality in the first life. (First life: A formation master with perfect golden elixir in the world of cultivation died because his life span was about to expire and he failed to force a breakthrough. Second life: Ordinary students on Earth died while exploring in the wild) Advantages: The writing is smooth and well-written, with basically no poisonous points. The character of the protagonist is very well created. He is single-minded, decisive in killing, has an online IQ, knows how to make plans and gather forces to obtain resources, and makes decisions before taking action. Disadvantages: The story is too smooth and too slow. There is basically no big climax so far. The description of the fighting needs to be strengthened. Keywords: mortal flow, array master, decisive killing, online IQ, layout management, behind-the-scenes flow. Overall rating 8.6