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It feels like the protagonist looks like an NPC, just an additional character from the original work
The summer wind is gentle, the camellia summer is very long
It's imaginative and has ideas, but it's too casual and has no depth. The writing is also lacking at all. It's either a quick summary or a rush to tell the plot. There's no foreshadowing or polishing. It's very blunt, and many places are copied from others.
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Overall, it can be seen that there are certain advantages
Very well written short story 👍
This article is well written, with distinct characters of the male and female protagonists, a compact plot, and a beautiful ending. I particularly like the heroine's art of speaking. The only drawback is that there are a lot of typos, and the last chapter feels a bit hasty.
It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Not attractive
author
Will you start writing martial arts novels and fantasy novels in the future?
Brothers and sisters, please support me.
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Not bad, well written👌, good looking👀, updated soon
Don't you think the names of Gojo's version of the clone and Fushiguro's version of the clone are almost related?
After reading Chapter 43, I feel so confused and have a headache.
In the Ming Dynasty, the bachelor's degree was from the fifth rank instead of the fifth rank. You are really convinced.
The author's writing is so perverted and vulgar😃
I can't stand it any longer. This is indeed a boss. It's indeed quite similar to the Red Dragon. None of the demons who have traveled through time have this feeling.
Not bad, good-looking, love to watch, happy to watch, willing to watch
666, the silence is deafening, invincible, child
author
Will you start novels with multiple female protagonists in the future?
Interesting entertainment article, rare novel subject
Traditional cultivation of immortality, genius flow, non-qi training to build the foundation, food and grass writing to pass the time is no problem.
They have a background. What do you have? Are you a fool? You are the protagonist and you have a system?
Author, you haven't updated for so long. Have you become an official in the palace?
Author, I beg you, just write some feelings about the queen and others. Also, 34 and 35, I think it's a bit pornographic and it has always been like this. But if it's a woman, just give it to a woman. I feel that I can't stand it after watching it for a long time.
It looks good. Come back and take a look. The rules are yes.
author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
After reading the introduction, the protagonist's surname is actually Dai? They all killed your mother, and they want to kill you too. It doesn't matter if your surname doesn't take your mother's name. Why don't you just pick one and your surname is Dai?
Also called Li Qing? Shouldn't we stop using people's names as soon as we change form?
Long-term collection of spiritual objects, spiritual treasures, skills and secrets
Dear book friends with quick thinking, please write down your ingenious ideas and describe their functions and effects in detail. The author will select the best ones and write them into the work.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Some shortcomings of the novel as a whole (personal opinion)
The first point, civil governance, has basically taken up half of the country in more than 300 chapters. Regarding local governance, government framework, and operating system, the novel basically has no description. Troops can conquer a city, but it is impossible to manage a city with troops, especially if you also rely on commercial income to support the troops. The second point is that the heroine and the local officials have all begun to give up, and the heroine has just begun to appear. In this situation, other forces will definitely assassinate you at all costs. Don't say that you are a warlord, that is, the emperor has no heir. Look at how many people dare to support you. The previous emperors are examples. If you hope to be prosperous, how many people will join you. The simplest and most direct way is to marry. If you refuse, what do you want to do? Look down on others and refuse others' support? Especially when the protagonist is weak, he can't refuse at all, and he doesn't dare to refuse. The third point, Wei Guangzheng, is not what it used to be. People nowadays have been severely beaten by society. They all know that saints will not live long in the doomsday. If you are not more ruthless, evil, or poisonous than your opponent, you will lose. The first chapter of many doomsday articles is to kill the Holy Mother first! Another small flaw is that the governor of Huguang voted too quickly, and the emperor's consciousness was too high. No normal person would vote like this. First of all, there is no harm. How can he convince the people below that his prestige is so high? Second, interests are for the sake of the overall situation. He will not consider his own family. Everyone will consider his own family. Even France will only kneel down when enemy troops arrive. Overall, it is more of a war novel than a struggle for hegemony. The advantages of the novel are very prominent, and so are the shortcomings. If only half of the shortcomings are compensated, I think it can be ranked among the top historical novels.
The Eternal Divine Book of the Ultimate Demon
I don't know how many times I have read it, the eternal divine book of the ultimate devil
Not bad! , You will know how far you can go
What kind of rubbish is this? I saved more than 20 chapters, but these 20 chapters ended up being used in a competition? There are also a few repetitive chapters, treating the readers like dogs. I used to drag out one chapter a day, but now I don't want to write a few repetitive chapters just to deal with the readers. It takes almost a month to have more than 20 chapters. Are we here to see your mental state when writing those supporting characters? You, a fan fiction writer, write the original work Or, can we not know what their characters are like? If you want to write about character changes, you can explain them in one or two sentences. You have to write about the psychological changes of a character. Write 2-3 chapters of psychological description. Do you think it is very hard for you to code? In my opinion, if this book continues like this, it will be at most 6.0
Faster, faster, faster, faster... Faster...!
The protagonists of several books written by this guy are idiots. Most of them mess around with others and are hunted down later. Do you need some brains? , Like second-hand goods
28DAY丨What do you want to see in the next copy
I hope that the next dungeon will be a horror in an abandoned hospital or a battle royale type dungeon. I want to see Si Wu kill everyone.
Quick update, why is the author so slow to update?
It looks good, keep updating, keep up the good work!
Tag it! The Five Poisons Sect in Kindergarten!
28DAY丨Next copy type
Does it feel like the next copy type will be an amusement park? Now that theaters and museums have appeared, let's create a replica of an amusement park~
Damn, I'm here, the author. You have to say this very well. It sounds really good. (I would like to ask, do you have this one? Yu Ji (the heroine). I didn't see the heroine in the dozens of pictures I looked at😘If there is, it's okay. If not, forget it.
Did the author dream about which sentence he wrote?
The chess master and Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty were brothers, and Emperor Wen wanted to depose the chess master and establish Emperor Wu😅 I would never dare to dream so wildly Invincible😅😅😅
Not bad, this book is really worth it
The author kills the fox, spider, waste generation, single heroine Xueer?
The planning is better, keep up the good work
It's so bad that there's nothing to say, don't watch it
28DAY丨What type is the next copy
What type of copy is next? Have no idea. I blindly guessed a library, amusement park, school doctor's office (school), food street, commercial building, zoo, botanical garden, factory, maze... (Write a few more in case you get lucky)
What is Douluo Four talking about? I haven't watched it yet.
Come on, author, work hard! Good, you can read it