
Mortal: Xiao Yan Travels Through Han Li
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If Xiao Yan took Yao Lao's ring and traveled through time to become Han Li...
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Official(54)Scraped 23d ago
The character of Pig's Feet is completely unsuitable for cultivating immortals. A character that is good at fantasy may not be suitable for cultivating immortals. When I saw the scene where the devil invaded the country of Yue, how could this be a novel about cultivating immortals? Is it a martial arts novel at all? It's very speechless to build the foundation and tie up elixirs, build the foundation and fight Yuanying. Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi. Those who can survive with this kind of character probably have the halo of wisdom. Shouldn't they pay attention to eradicating the roots and preventing the future? It's been thirty years, and if I give you three extra seconds, it's just a joke
Han Li's character can survive for a long time anywhere, Xiao Yan's character can't survive even a mortal, novice boss Mo, etc.
Not suitable. Xiao Yan's character is not suitable for the world of immortality.
Xiao Yan is not as cautious as Han Li. He can shout "Don't bully young people." Poor young people are not suitable for the world of immortality. If he were in the setting of mortals cultivating immortals, Xiao Yan would have been shot to death.
First of all, Xiao Yan traveled from the earth to Dou Qi Continent, and then traveled to Mortal Immortal Cultivation Legend. Logically speaking, his vision would not be so wide. After all, even if you are an ordinary high school student, it is impossible that you have not read similar novels about cultivating immortals. It is really eye-catching to be more aboriginal than aboriginal.
Not to mention that I really like the character Han Li, at least it's a sentiment. Of course, so does Xiao Yan. From the very beginning, you used one emotion to kill another emotion. Well.
One word: poison Just a rubbish technique called Doupo, which even martial arts can't compare to. It all relies on the attribute of fighting spirit.
Seeing that Xin Ruyin was there, I couldn't stand it anymore. Nowadays, novels still have this kind of plot of giving away a daughter. A good formation master is a rare talent in the wild. This is how I bid farewell to the man.
Xiao Yan can't even get out of Feiwu Novice Village
I haven't seen it, but it makes sense, from Doupo to a mortal? Is it really appropriate for Dou Po to surpass every level and become a mortal? Those who like mortals may not like this setting.
No wonder not many people can see into it, Fanfiction is not fanfic; I don't know any of the plot, it's like starting from scratch in cultivating immortality It's written in the skin of a mortal, but it's not a fanfic about cultivating immortals. , Strange, strange
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Official(54)Scraped 23d ago
The character of Pig's Feet is completely unsuitable for cultivating immortals. A character that is good at fantasy may not be suitable for cultivating immortals. When I saw the scene where the devil invaded the country of Yue, how could this be a novel about cultivating immortals? Is it a martial arts novel at all? It's very speechless to build the foundation and tie up elixirs, build the foundation and fight Yuanying. Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi. Those who can survive with this kind of character probably have the halo of wisdom. Shouldn't they pay attention to eradicating the roots and preventing the future? It's been thirty years, and if I give you three extra seconds, it's just a joke
Han Li's character can survive for a long time anywhere, Xiao Yan's character can't survive even a mortal, novice boss Mo, etc.
Not suitable. Xiao Yan's character is not suitable for the world of immortality.
Xiao Yan is not as cautious as Han Li. He can shout "Don't bully young people." Poor young people are not suitable for the world of immortality. If he were in the setting of mortals cultivating immortals, Xiao Yan would have been shot to death.
First of all, Xiao Yan traveled from the earth to Dou Qi Continent, and then traveled to Mortal Immortal Cultivation Legend. Logically speaking, his vision would not be so wide. After all, even if you are an ordinary high school student, it is impossible that you have not read similar novels about cultivating immortals. It is really eye-catching to be more aboriginal than aboriginal.
Not to mention that I really like the character Han Li, at least it's a sentiment. Of course, so does Xiao Yan. From the very beginning, you used one emotion to kill another emotion. Well.
One word: poison Just a rubbish technique called Doupo, which even martial arts can't compare to. It all relies on the attribute of fighting spirit.
Seeing that Xin Ruyin was there, I couldn't stand it anymore. Nowadays, novels still have this kind of plot of giving away a daughter. A good formation master is a rare talent in the wild. This is how I bid farewell to the man.
Xiao Yan can't even get out of Feiwu Novice Village
I haven't seen it, but it makes sense, from Doupo to a mortal? Is it really appropriate for Dou Po to surpass every level and become a mortal? Those who like mortals may not like this setting.
No wonder not many people can see into it, Fanfiction is not fanfic; I don't know any of the plot, it's like starting from scratch in cultivating immortality It's written in the skin of a mortal, but it's not a fanfic about cultivating immortals. , Strange, strange









