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The author's writing style gives me a strong feeling of a high school composition narrative. For example, "After the protagonist breaks through, he will continue to work hard in the future, improve himself, and enter a new chapter." This feeling is very strong. Secondly, there are generally no poisonous points. The only thing I don't understand is that the family followed Cedar to the north. The plant Wuhun Blue Silver Grass family moved to the bitter cold land in the north to live.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
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I haven't seen such an outrageous introduction in a long time.
nice
Very beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I don't know what the meaning of the first chapter is. In the second chapter, the plot changes completely and the system becomes sign-in.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Test the waters
Testing the waters and caring about whether this book can be written in the long run I hope all authors will read the latest chapter! !
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
I would like to ask if "Maid is So Dangerous" will still be on the shelves?
Author: Why did another book "Maitress Is So Dangerous" be removed from the shelves? Will it still be on the shelves? 👿👿
It's quite nice, and the subject matter is novel. There are just too few words
It's a good read. I've been following this book since chapter 50. I feel very happy and thoughtful after reading it now. It seems to be quite comfortable.
It looks good. Can it be updated frequently? One update a day is simply not enough.
The combat power is about to collapse. Enemies are knocking on the door every day. The magic rain is coming to the Black Corner Territory. In a few days, it will be a few rounds of Dou Zun. In a few days, it will be a ninth level, and it will be a semi-saint.
This is Sabi,
He curled up on the sofa in the company and slept on it for half a year. I wake up with backache every day, and I have to put away the quilt before employees go to work, pretending that I just came to the company early. As a boss, he worked very hard every day to build the company into a monthly revenue of 5 million. I sleep on the office sofa and don't even have a proper bed. The artist he personally made famous lives in a house worth millions, with a scented lamp beside his bed.
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Or don't ask. Since I asked, I can't tell you why. It seems that your head is not suitable for you~
Not bad, but there are some chapters in the middle that have a low number of words. For example, there is no need to spend so many chapters writing about attributes 400~600. You can write them briefly.
Special Forces 2, The Blade of Special Forces, Ode to Joy, Three Years of Our Fight,
At least there are super powers such as Goldfinger, etc. In the comprehensive world, Special Forces 2, Special Forces Blade, Ode to Joy, and at thirty, we are in our prime, returning the world to you, the next stop of happiness. Went Together, Spicy Metamorphosis, Hunting Ground, The Power of Special Police. A slight smile captivates the city. "Across the Ocean to See You". Duan Nao, fell in love with the special forces.
Beautiful Awu
Yay! The items for the tipping event are here! !
Exaggerate! ! Huang Shang only created the "Nine Yin Manual" after reading all the Taoist Canon. Zhujie only used a few pages of comics to create the "Reverse Life Triple" that is even more impressive than the original comic. So how come Niubi is unknown in his previous life?
Chapter 7: Let me change this. How can I kneel down and kowtow casually?
The part where the author wrote about Xuanhuang Yan really made me laugh. If it was so all-powerful, it wouldn't be the last one. And he wrote it as the Fire of Chaos. Don't you think it's funny? And what kind of strange fire is not bred by heaven and earth? You are not Yun, are you?
Keep up the knife, keep up the knife, I still hate that my rating is too high, it's only 8.0, It's really too high
You stuffed Tianmeng inexplicably. What you want is his soul ring, not his person.
Good guy, I call you good guy when I'm riding a horse😋😋😋
Quick update, I really can't sleep at night, too little, too little, I just stood up, why don't you tell me that it's gone?
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
Di Tian, who has the claws of the Dragon God, cannot defeat the Ming Dynasty Er Ming who has no divine power. You can write it.
Can the author send me the name of the delta? I want to play with you
Welcome everyone to comment, thank you, thank you, thank you
Welcome everyone to comment, thank you, thank you, thank you
Shit, the writing is very frustrating, the plot is not smooth at all, and it's even more boring than what Ai wrote.
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Are you still worried about not being able to clear the game? NONONO. Why! Hug our Si Wu's thighs, Si Wu's best friend, as long as you don't act like a monster! I guarantee that you will be satisfied with the level. After all, he is a perfect human being who killed too many monsters and was expelled by you!
It's been deleted a lot and it's no longer coherent. Please give me the original version.
Not a buddy? ? ? You don't even have one chapter a day? ? ?
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1. Abandoning the identity of the people and breaking the rules, Si Wu faced the void directly and defined a new law of survival. 2. Free from the boundaries between human beings and deceit, Si Wu cuts away all illusions and lives out his own edge within the cracks of rules.
The pace is too slow, simply speaking, it is water. Some plots that I thought could be explained clearly in two chapters actually took four or five chapters.
The protagonist made Hong and Lei Shen his disciples, which enhanced their strength and made up for my regrets.
Very perfect and beautiful. ,,,,,,,, Why is it not enough?
Collection of the latest hot topics on the Internet "The Empress Distributes Proposals to Princes", a very new theme
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Are you still crying in the corner of the death game copy? Are you still worried about whether there is today or tomorrow? No one of the four or five cards is worthy of you, and I won't explain it to you.
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Si Wu - the person who killed the most monsters in the game, the person who was expelled for killing too many monsters, the person with the greatest contrast between appearance and strength! If you want to watch the full-level unlimited stream, please open it. People are weird, but they are expelled! If you want to see that the heroine is a dastardly ghost with pink fur and gold eyes, please open the page in Weird, but she was expelled! If you want to see the monster being torn apart by the heroine's hands until he is unable to fight back, please open Weird, but was expelled!
I hope there will be a single heroine Gu Yuena, and a dual heroine Gu Yuena
I hope there will be a single heroine Gu Yuena, and a dual heroine Gu Yuena
It's a good read. It's the first time I've read this kind of article. The plot is not laggy. Each character's plot is well written and described in detail. However, Chao Xi's writing at the end is a bit regretful. It's not the ending I wanted. The first one was from Fang's perspective, the only unsatisfactory character.
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Follow Si Wuhun and have nine meals in three days🤚 There is no doubt about the road through mountains and rivers, and there are no friends to follow Si May Xu Si know my will and give me one billion yuan
Not bad, but is the heroine Ma Xiaotao (just a question, I feel it would be better without a heroine)
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Leng Yan travels through the endless treacherous realm, tearing apart the rotten rules alone, and survives in desperate situations with the power of killing.
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Oh, no update. Why hasn't it been updated for several days? Update
Is this poetry? Is this poetry? Is this poetry?
Open a new map? OK! But why not update it?