My Senior Brother is Too Stable

This novel is well written and the subject matter is very novel. The protagonist talks about being steady but does a lot of unsteady things. First: I feel that the protagonist's junior sister is a huge factor of instability. Because of the protagonist's upbringing, the junior sister more or less knows the protagonist's routines and personality. I personally think that teaching the junior sister does not meet the meaning of stability. After all, no one can guarantee that his junior sister will not become his enemy. Second: When the protagonist went to collect herbs, why didn't he change his appearance after leaving the team? After all, he is outside the sect and out of the scope of his uncle's immortal knowledge. With the character of the protagonist, disguise should be considered basic, right? Then I won't provoke Youqin later. Third: The protagonist's Poseidon statue should have been destroyed from the beginning, right? After all, if you want to be stable, you should nip all risks in the bud. The above are some of my personal feelings after reading dozens of chapters of this book.

The plot is not exaggerated and steady, unlike other novels that are overly exaggerated. The later the author gets, the more difficult it becomes to compile, so the question is, will this novel be about eunuchs?[Emot=default,51/]

Li Changshou was reborn in this ancient world. In fact, he only wanted to live in peace and stability for a long time, and to have a place where he could settle down in this troubled world. Therefore, he has always considered his own safety as the first priority. In Lan Ling'e's eyes, her senior brother was too calm. At first glance, before she fell into coma, she realized that this senior brother was the heroic senior brother in her imagination. And when she was about to wake up, she found that her senior brother was extremely calm and spoke in an unhurried manner. In Lan Ling'e's eyes, even the name of the senior brother is so simple and long-lived. Such a senior brother who is in line with what she has in mind is probably what this young junior sister who has just started to think about this future senior brother. Li Changshou was just a small qi-training monk, but he seemed to have more things to worry about than his master. He seemed to think more than his master, and he was so cautious. Although the strength is not improved much, there is a lot to worry about. It is precisely because of this behavior that perhaps the little junior sister that Master Li Changshou had just taken back gave her senior brother the feeling that the senior brother is very calm, and has always had such a "very appropriate" understanding. [A brief talk about writing style] The content of this novel is very realistic, without the exaggerated faults of some novels. The growth and development of the protagonist are developed step by step, rather than the kind of rapid development that seems to be a failure. In addition, the character of the protagonist of this book is also very good, not the kind of character that revolves around women. The author has a good grasp of the rhythm and conception of the book, which also makes the book more interesting to attract readers. Moreover, the author's writing style is excellent and he is very literary.

I have been reading online novels for seven or eight years, and I have read a little bit of each genre. I have to say that this one is quite comfortable to read. Come on, author.

I don't know if some people have read too many trashy white articles or have been hired to troll people. But the writing of this book is indeed reasonable. After all, people who truly stand at a high place are both cautious and capable. Don't you know that the higher you stand, the worse you will fall? Don't you understand this truth? [Emot=default,42/] People who do things without thinking.

To be honest, although this book has a lot of flaws, you can still read it. However, there are a few shortcomings that I really can't hold back and want to talk about. 1 Is the prehistoric era really that big? This is prehistoric! Any mountain is bigger than the earth. The size of several continents can be described as endless! However, after reading more than two hundred chapters, this truth is not reflected much. On the contrary, I often feel that the map is actually not that big. Especially between the four seas in the southeast, northwest and northwest, it seems that the Dragon Palaces are all next to each other. If you go out to support, you can really go as soon as you say so. It seemed like we were there in just two steps. 2 Is the prehistoric period really dangerous? The protagonist has always felt that Honghuang is dangerous, so he has always been very stubborn. But I kept saying it was dangerous, but I never saw any real danger. The reader can understand that the protagonist is very stubborn and therefore avoids danger. Logic can be self-consistent. However, as an author, you cannot avoid all "dangers"! Instead of writing about the protagonist, you can write about other supporting roles! If there is no emphasis on depicting the danger, the protagonist's thoughts will be like having a paranoia of being raped. 3 Are the dragons really strong? The Dragon Clan is very strong, the Western Sect wants to take them in, and Heaven wants them too. But are they really strong? At the beginning, I wrote about a bunch of golden immortals. Later, there was no emphasis on describing how powerful the Dragon Clan was. Although the Dragon Clan has always been called strong, the Dragon Clan has been beaten hard in various ways and crushed in terms of IQ and combat prowess. He doesn't look powerful at all. However, the characteristic of being very rich has been described a lot. Is this meant to portray a group of rich, stupid people? Is it really necessary to conquer such a force? 4 Sometimes pranks go too far. After all, it is a flood! But there is no prehistoric atmosphere at all. Reading between the lines seems to be writing a great story. Especially the phrase that always appears after the spoof Just kidding! Very dramatic. A certain amount of pranks is interesting, but excessive pranks can easily cause counter-effects. In addition, the protagonist wants to be low-key and obedient, but he always does something unconventional. For example, when the sixteen low-level god positions were distributed to the Dragon Clan, they drafted and turned around. Is this really interesting? Don't those big guys look like fools for playing this way? Moreover, this kind of unconventional thing is too contradictory to the image that the protagonist has always maintained. 5 So far, there has been no villain with real intelligence. I really don't want to say more about this. The protagonist's opponents have appeared so far. The IQ of the protagonist is suppressed by the nine-year compulsory education. This is probably a common problem in time-travel novels. If I time-travel, I will crush you with my IQ, no matter how many years you have lived, you are an old monster. It's not that I'm smart, it's that you're too stupid. That's it. I thought that Mosquito would be a mini-boss that would constantly confront the protagonist, but I didn't expect that he was conquered without doing anything serious. I really like it. He also keeps describing how smart mosquitoes are and complaining about how stupid Western religions are. I really don't think this mosquito is very powerful. All in all, I still hope that the author can carefully portray a more awesome villain. 6 There is no prehistoric atmosphere This is my subjective understanding. Not a complaint Prehistoric! That should be a majestic and vast mythical world! But so far, I always feel like I'm watching a mortal's journey to immortality. It depends on the protagonist's methods, basic formations, and continuous closed-loop formations. Then came the poison. Such a bunch of fancy tricks, full of deja vu feeling like a mortal cultivating immortality! There is no atmosphere at all, no prehistoric atmosphere at all. This is not to say that he is reasonable or unreasonable, it is purely a matter of perception. And the birdcage for overcoming the tribulation! This magic weapon based on the principle of lightning protection is really powerful and very low. 7 Driving too often Driving everywhere! Especially after driving the car, the author coughed twice and pulled the front of the car back abruptly, which was too dramatic. 8 Bosses, don't be surprised all the time When the protagonist does something, the bosses find it interesting and are surprised. Please, gentlemen! I have lived for tens of thousands of years, and I am always shocked every day! It's very unattractive! I know that the author wants to highlight the protagonist's unique qualities. However, a novel is not supported by the protagonist alone. Frequently lowering the B-level of the supporting characters is lowering the B-level of the entire book.

That year, I was 9 years old and she was 11 years old. I told her that I would marry her in the future, and she naughtily replied: "Okay"! That year, I was 12 years old and she was 14 years old. She was a head taller than me. I raised my head and told her that I liked her. She listened blankly and said nothing, then turned her head and stopped looking at me. At that time, I was 18 years old and she was 20 years old. I had been working outside for a year, and she was still attending a key university. I could no longer say that I liked her, because I felt that I was not worthy of her at all. I kept what I wanted to say to her to myself, and I would tell her everything when I was worthy of her. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. I was more concerned about whether she was a wife and a mother. My career was gradually getting on the right track and I was no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Dongguan, in a dimly lit room, just the two of us. After a long silence, she spoke: "Eight hundred, seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will charge you five hundred." I tried my best not to tremble anymore and said, "Come with me." Her eyes glazed over for a moment, then flickered, and then she said like a fire extinguished, "I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first." She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being held by two policemen, with a look of horror and distress on her face. The TV did not even cover her face, letting her dangle in front of me, letting her bump, bump, and shatter in my heart! The last time I saw her, she came to see me. She was on the roof of the building, and I looked up at her from downstairs. I just looked at her like this for a long time, and then he left without leaving a word. The next time I heard from her was a year later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I can't accept it. Anyway, I feel very depressed. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her, I don't know how ugly that smile was, and she smiled at me as innocently as she did when she was seven years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. The tears couldn't help but fall down. She said in a deep breath: "I... I want a like."

I think a lot of people who are trolling below are just trying to set the pace, and they should be malicious. Personally, I think this book is very well written, and the plot setting is great in every aspect.

Premise First of all, I am commenting on this book purely from the perspective of a reader, without any other purpose; second, my review is limited to the first 44 chapters, and I plan to read it tomorrow. If there are any good or bad points, I will share them with you in the comment area again; third, this review is not about the right or wrong of the myths and legends, but just a complaint about the shortcomings of the first 44 chapters of the book. Text I was attracted by this witty writing style from the beginning. I enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. It took me nearly two hours to read ten chapters plus the commentary in this chapter. But, does the author have to be so obscene? Chapter 44 hasn't clearly explained the protagonist's realm? If it's not how the protagonist develops, does it have anything to do with us readers? Hiding it from your peers is called hiding; hiding it from your peers is called routine; hiding it from heaven and earth is called ability; hiding it from us readers is called disgusting and frustrating to watch. It's like, I'm playing a game of LOL. I obviously have the ability to c and wave, but I keep replenishing troops under the tower. I am pinned down by the opponent who is a loser and motionless under the tower. The feeling of frustration is really... Indescribable. After Chapter 10, I seldom clicked on this chapter to talk about it. The more I read, the more frustrated I became... Internet articles can indeed survive well by relying on a lighthearted and funny style, but your writing style is getting more and more frustrating, and the lighthearted and funny format is gradually fading away. It seems that you are going to show off in the future, but is this speed too slow? So in the end, not only the basic cool points like "realm and combat power" are left, can we readers feel happy? Indeed, the obscene development routine is new and the idea is good, just like LOL being forced under the tower to replenish troops, but that is what happens in the protagonist and the world he lives in. Don't add this sense of frustration and oppression to us readers. No one in the world he lives in knows his realm, but you have to let readers know about it. Especially the lighthearted and funny style, when it is crushed by your whole book format and has no sense of existence, you have to leave some fun. I have read Chapter 44, but I haven't read the rest yet. As for these 44 chapters, they are not at all exciting, but rather depressing. To be honest, the first ten chapters are indispensable for this book to achieve this score, as it has left too many readers behind. But at the same time, it's also thanks to your constant skirting around that some men have the desire to continue watching it. Although there are no sensitive words and no over-the-top plot, this is not the right approach. Also, the depressive style in the early stage was too annoying. The protagonist was too cautious and cautious, which gradually became incompatible with the title of the book. The word "steady" rarely means cautious from that perspective. Internet articles are more or less enjoyable for us readers (dumbs). Due to the title and outline of the book, we don't expect him to show off his power. We have to let the readers know when and what state he reached, and when and by what means he improved his state? In this way, the author can not only retain the original sleazy style of the book and maintain the author's original intention of writing the book, but also provide readers with a sense of refreshment and retain more readers. It can also increase the number of words and increase the exposure of the book. Killing two birds with one stone can bring many birds with one stone, so why not.

Yes, it was the first book that made me insist on ordering it. The content and plot rhythm were well controlled, and the characters' personalities, images, etc. Were vividly written.