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Yao Yuanfu and the others dared to attack the 80,000 Khitan people with only 5,000 cavalry.
It's pretty good. If you have nothing to do, you can take a look.
I've only read more than ten chapters and there are two poisonous points.
First of all, what Ning Tian said, I am willing to admit defeat. From today on, my people, my Seven Treasures Glazed Pagoda, and even the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect behind me will be at your disposal. The above is the original text. I wonder if a three-ring can directly represent the sect and lose the sect to others? Not to mention Ning Tian, a young sect leader, even a sect leader like her mother wouldn't dare. Do you really think that the titled Douluo in the sect is just a decoration? The titled Douluo in the sect who protected the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect had been wiped out long ago. During the fight, Ning Fengzhi had great respect for Jian Gu and the two. There was no major matter in the sect that was not discussed together. Secondly, the fusion degree of the protagonist's martial soul fusion skill became higher and evolved, but the power is still the soul king. In the original work, the fusion degree is not high and the power is still the soul king when it has not yet evolved. This evolution has become lonely😐
Is there anyone who was attacked by the devil against a female disciple?
Where is the Xiaolong woman? She's not dead, right? Can't the author write more?
Author, are you yin or not? <Br>I still want to be a member
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
Dressed as the female supporting character in the control group of 70, if she is no longer the original owner, she should fight against the blood-sucking family! Looking forward to the follow-up!
I just read it a little bit, and the style of this book feels a bit like a one-person fanfic I read "Under One Person, Have You Ever Acted, Just the Godhead Mask". After reading more than 10 chapters, I thought that the author was playing trumpet.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
I've listened to hundreds of them, the writing is poor and the plot is dragging, it's pure shit
Too little, too little. I will start reading when you reach 800,000 words. I have read all your books, but I don't like the systematic writing. The systematic writing seems to be very simple in conception and a bit novice. I just like this kind of article about crushing low-intelligence Douluo and cultivating the younger generation without any cheats.
The protagonist patted the Soul Emperor on the shoulder, "You and I hit it off immediately, but you want to leave. My old friend asked me to give you a gift." Immortal killing move. Farewell to friends! ! ! !
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
It's a lot of poison. When you meet a girl, she goes into heat and becomes flooded with water, just like AI. And if you want to accept Xiao Yu, you also have to be peeked at by Xiao Yan while taking a bath. Is that a god who likes being fucked? The protagonist is not happy at all. He is in heat with a girl every day and suddenly shuts down and breaks through five or six stars, or upgrades and then goes into heat again. It's just a running account🤐
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
I feel like the writing is pretty good, and it's very interesting to watch. I'm looking forward to the plot.
What an abstract novel, the characters are so OOC
The timeline can be written wrong. The protagonist is 6 years old, Tang San is 6 years old, and Zhu Zhuqing is 5 and a half years old. He can run around and start killing Zhu Zhuqing before he even awakens his martial spirit.
Recommended, everyone can take a look, it's very good! ! ! !
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As long as it's not the highest dimension, Zhe Tian can only be in the top 1,000 because of water in his head.
I can't get to the third level of Qi training. Find a class.
I jumped straight to the God Realm with nine consecutive jumps
Encourage the author to write more well-founded and funny plots, or abstract
I feel that the work is very good and has profound meaning.
A well-chosen idea wasted. If there is little water in the soup, you can't avoid the officialdom affairs of the Red Mansion, so you have to write in a decent way. Not to mention anything else, when you get to Jinyiwei, you have to have followers and followers around you. You are already an official. How can you do everything alone? Wouldn't that official's work be in vain? It is true that the protagonist's golden finger must be operated personally to be effective, but it does not mean that the protagonist does not have a follower beside him, let alone the previous ones, madam and young lady, there must be someone by their side. Wherever Jin Yiwei goes on errands, he must not be surrounded by anyone who can support him. Life should be like life, and officialdom matters should be like officialdom.
Although some places are not good, I feel very happy and great
Hurry up and write
When will updates resume? Could you please tell me and serve some snacks?
I came here after watching Douyin's recommendations for a few hours. I still think that the protagonist is better paired with Na'er. It can provide an opportunity to separate Gu Yue and Na'er. Moreover, there are so many descriptions in the past that Wu Lin likes the senior sister, but you don't want Gu Yue and Na'er later. I'm writing about Wu Lin and Senior Sister Be again. It ruins the reader's impression. Otherwise, just write about Senior Sister instead. I think the heroine was selected by vote. If you don't choose the heroine well, then don't describe Na'er and Gu Yue too much in the early stage. It's not enough to write so much. She was the heroine and then asked her senior sister Wu Lin to force herself to be with her. Then she entangled with Gu Yue and Ye was conquered by the strength of the protagonist and fell in love with her. This kind of protagonist wants a partner to accompany him to move forward, not Ye Xinglan. Her talent is destined to not be able to continue with the protagonist. It seems that only the talent of Gu Yue or Naer has this possibility. So I still advise the author to carefully consider voting for the heroine. Potato made the fire, but she was the second in the vote, so the reputation has not collapsed.
There should be no female protagonist. I think this setting is suitable for making ambitions bigger and bigger.
Fortunately, Liu Hong met Chi Zhou, otherwise he would be really speechless!
The plot is average, and it has no ending, which is too short.
Very nice, please update soon! ! ! How about the author writes ten chapters a day?
The writing is nice, but the updates are too slow.
running account
Apart from the first few dozen chapters, Goldfinger basically has no sense of existence. It makes sense that Xundao Daqian, an indiscriminate gun plug-in that gives you equipment experience as long as you chop down trees, doesn't feel any fun at all. You are also a talent. Maybe you don't write plug-ins at the beginning, but just superimpose two souls, absorb others and me, have a slightly higher understanding, and directly cultivate immortality slowly. The growth of your family will be more suitable for your writing method.
What an interesting plot!
The characters are all unique in just a few strokes, the plot is clear and interesting, and the author is too clever. I feel like surfing at first glance, and it is obvious that the female author's unique tolerance and humanistic care are obvious. The whole story feels very soft and comfortable. Please write it quickly. The child keeps crying at home. It turns out that the service of Desolate Continent has stopped updating.
It's good, but the plot develops too slowly
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The author can do it. He didn't blackmail Tang San or lick Tang San hard.
I can't write this book without some mental illness
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I can't understand.
I left after the protagonist stole the Blue Silver Emperor's soul bone but failed to kill the Blue Silver Emperor. The protagonist absorbed the soul bone on the spot, and I endured it. But instead of killing the Blue Silver Emperor, the protagonist gave his blood to it, took him away to train him, and said that he accepted the Blue Silver Emperor's kindness, so I left on the spot. You take away people's property and don't think about eradicating the roots, but you actually cultivate enemies. I've seen a lot of people like this, and they usually end up feeling itchy in their lower body.
It's so detailed that the mother-in-law turned into a dancer in the sky
Parallel to a native who has reached the God King by his own efforts, then I ask, what is the use of you, a time traveler, passing through? Disgusting, everyone?
Babies, don't hoard articles🙏🥺
This book is being recommended to babies. I hope you don't hoard it and try to keep up with the updates. I'm very grateful to all the adults. 🥺
That's the three golden chapters?
Maybe I'm not a licker, I'm not used to this book