Depose the Dragon

The setting of the article is quite attractive, but the order of unfolding the story and the logic of the language really made me uncomfortable. The character creation of Pig's Knuckle is inconsistent, and the reasons are unclear. He often looks like a fool and then suddenly becomes enlightened and understands the truth that he should have understood after a few words. He forcibly adds drama and twists, and I can't watch it anymore.

Deposed Dragon (×) Chulong (√) ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶ (Aren't the hateful emoticons not counted as words?)

Are there any book friends who have read for 25,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

In difficult situations, sometimes the shortcomings of human nature will be revealed. Not everyone will repay the kindness, let alone a few people who are just acquaintances. The basics are not clear at all.

Others are okay, such as He Dumeng, the defeated army, the earthquake caused by Fenshanjun, and the thieves who killed Yuan Wu. The logic and writing are very good. Later, when Bai Siyu was written, it was useless. Although the investigation this time is you, but after the investigation, people Why don't you leave? You're not busy. Why do you have to work so hard to send you to Hongshan? It's just a kindness to help you cross the river. Even if the author wants to arrange for them to go to Hongshan together, there must be a valid reason, so he forces them to be sent to Hongshan. You want to say that people admire your loyalty. You have to send your comrades thousands of miles home after their death. Loyalty is indeed there, but no matter how much you try to make it up, it won't make people admire you if this kind of loyalty is even slightly correct, because this kind of thing is 100% a lot. There are so many soldiers and so many people are sending home corpses. No matter how much you make up your mind, you cannot be the only one. Moreover, Hongshan people pay attention to fallen leaves returning to their roots, and this kind of thing is not uncommon. When you went to that inn, the boss was not surprised, and thought it was normal. Besides, people like Bai Siyu are not much more knowledgeable than you, and they don't see as many weird things as you. So this is not the reason for people to leave official duties so far away and send you to Hongshan. To say it was love at first sight would be even more nonsense. It cannot be that someone has never met the man before. Also, do you think your conversational skills are extraordinary? Again, with all the people's status and official positions, how rare can it be to have people who are more extraordinary in conversation than you? Don't think that just because you are a time traveler, you can just say a word to make people feel fresh and happy. Also, not only did they send you all the way to Hongshan, but they also answered all your questions. Is this logically reasonable? Do they owe you anything? Why do they treat you so well? What do you say when you ask? This is the only time I'll meet you. You're still a soldier. Do they need to treat you like this? What I said above is already unreasonable for someone to send you as a gift. You should also give me a brief explanation and answer all your questions. Can't you lay the groundwork a little more?

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The ungrateful stragglers should be punished. Du Meng and Zhang Xing kindly led a group of people to the small village, but they didn't expect that these people were white-eyed wolves. What they ended up with was a crime.

The first two books were quite good and fully subscribed, but this transformational book was awkwardly written, and it didn't feel like it had a goal.

I bought both Fu Han and Shao Song in their entirety. There is really nothing wrong with the writing. But I don't know that this kind of deliberate ostracism is really awkward. Is it because you can't travel through time in online novels? It's really better to just name the real people in the late Sui and Tang Dynasties. You brought out the Nine Lao Xing Sui Dynasties in the Sui and Tang Dynasties. They are also characters in the official history. It's really too awkward to make up the characters based on what you wrote. Wu Yunzhao, Wu Tianxi, Xiong Kuohai, Li Mi, etc. Just write them like this. The Sui and Tang Dynasties are also fictitious. It's too awkward to write like this. People who don't like to read historical texts are not interested. Those who like history feel like they're stuck in their throats. They always feel stuck and uncomfortable. It's a little bit of a double-take.

I personally feel that the biggest failure of this book is that it did not dare to fight Li Shimin head-on. In the end, it chose to drag Li Shimin into a girl to the protagonist's side, and only let Li Yuan be the boss on Guan Long's side. The funniest thing is that it did not dare to let Li Shimin play his role. Bai Sanniang's poor performance has been too many for Li Er in history. The most important thing is that since the theme of this book is to depose the dragon, you don't dare to let the protagonist face Li Shimin. I actually quite like Dan Lingdi's works. I've read Shao Song Dynasty and Overturning Han Dynasty before, and they always felt a bit strange. Now I'm reading this book and realize what's strange about it? It's just that the author's own style is not worthy of his protagonist. If you ask Zhang San in the current book, if Bai Shimin suddenly appeared in the Bai family, would he dare to fight? He would definitely dare, but I obviously feel that the author does not dare, and the author feels that his protagonist does not dare. Dan Lingdi likes to write about the growth of the protagonist, and readers can also see the growth of the protagonist, but the problem arises, the author outside the book will not grow with the protagonist. The protagonist in the book has grown from a little person who is struggling to save his life to a great hero who shoulders the responsibility of Kyushu, while the author outside the book is still a small citizen who makes a living by coding. This is why readers who follow up will feel that Gongsun Xun will not kill Lu Bu, and Zhao Jiu will not make excuses to slander the reputation of a hero, because the protagonist in the work has grown into a hero far beyond the author, but just like in the eyes of parents, their children will always need them Like the children he protects, in the eyes of the author, Gongsun Xun is still the wanderer who thinks "working hard to reach the princes and survive in troubled times", Zhao Jiu is still the college student wandering around the well, and Zhang San is still the confused soldier walking all the way to the Red Mountain. Dan Lingdi is a talented author, and the protagonist in his novel can grow up outside of his control, but it is a pity that the author himself is not aware of this.