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Author, can the protagonist extract the origin of Yu Xiaogang's martial spirit?
Rich in ideas
I hope the ending won't be too tragic and the heroine will also have an awakening sequence
I really enjoyed reading this novel.
I made a special trip to Jiazhou and Suji. I couldn't finish all the delicious food.
Author, author, does the heroine have any shrimp?
What surprised me was that I swapped identities with the waiter. It was really awesome.
Not to mention cliches. Write whatever comes to mind, and saying it sounds good is just filling in the blanks. To put it bluntly, the logic is confusing.
The author has changed from updating twice a day to once a day, and now to updating once every two days, which makes us readers very disappointed. We are afraid of eunuchs.
No wonder it's only 7.7. This is a typical example of being a jackpot, setting up an archway, and being a 9-card waste. Chapter 9 still feels awkward. If you feel awkward, please don't accept the benefits of the system. Don't use it. Don't use the benefits of the system. If you use *** and feel awkward, who could spoil you? Double standards and hypocrisy. You are worse than a villain.
I can only say that this book is still outrageous, and the characters have no brains at all.
I can have your technology for half my life
Is it a fallen knight at the beginning? I didn't expect that there are still people whose photos are rare.
It is set that the protagonist of the original route will become the big BOSS, and then the protagonist is nothing in the plot, so you might as well follow the setting.
I have been waiting for the update for a few days. I have a few Q version pictures of Tangtang, leopard, fox, fish, eagle and snake.
I revised it many times, hoping to match the description in the book as much as possible (please note that the original reference picture was posted by a teacher in the comment area)
The heroine's town hall
Qinglin: One of the heroines, the future Empress Qinglin, and the mistress of the Great Thousand World Star Pavilion.
I gave up reading this book several times, but the main character's writing is very good and I picked it up again. Many things in the book are not logical at all. For example, the main character studies so many exercises, especially the one that changes the root bone, which is almost abnormal. It is equivalent to turning the lower middle root bone into a genius and a higher level, and then like the protagonist's second brother, he will increase his understanding after practicing it to a certain extent. . . . As for the second brother of the protagonist, his current master level is equivalent to the late stage of foundation building. . . The protagonist has practiced qi to build the ink for more than ten years. In order to lay the foundation, you can understand that if you get stuck on the third or fourth level of the foundation building, you can go up to the 2nd to 3rd level if you have resources. As a result, everyone has been upgraded, but the protagonist has not been promoted. Besides, it is an unsecret legend. Hundreds of people in your Zhang family have practiced. This is an extraordinary world, and you can just grab anyone and ask them. How can you keep it secret? You have to write it down. The exercises you are studying must have special medicines or something. The secret method that can change the bones is no one around to spy on it. Isn't it nonsense? There are other things that really lower your IQ. The most important thing is that the protagonist is now in contact with immortals. The emperor and queen are all in the Tribulation Realm. The protagonist has only reached the first level of Foundation Building after dozens of chapters. I am a little desperate. How many chapters do you have to write?
It's really well written, but it was a bit slow in the later stages, and it didn't feel like a strategist. It's a pity that it was cut.
After the destruction, destruction, and annihilation in your previous works, there should be an annihilation, right? Why not use it in this work?
Not bad😊, it suits my taste, but there are too few updates
Only fifteen chapters! ! ! ! ! ! I'm in a trap, my God, grandma
Come on, come on, the author is right, that author is the protagonist, who will become a soul saint in his teens?
I hope the author can persevere. Now the results of the super fandoms on QQ and Tomato are not very satisfactory. I hope the author can persevere.
I checked in on 3.21. I recently went to other platforms to read books. I missed checking in a few times on QQ.
I'm really speechless. So in Qingshan Town, do we have to avoid the character of the cemetery? Why are you talking so much when you just slap him to death? There are still so many psychological activities, can't we cross this hurdle? Can't we simply destroy those groups? You have to talk nonsense here and say that my other things are okay. You are just a Qingshan Town, and you just can't get around it, right? After bypassing Qingshan Town, you can write anything. I just feel that if you write a small character like Qingshan Town, what did you do for so long?
He is the same diaosi protagonist as he was a few decades ago
It is my first time to write a novel, and it is indeed not satisfactory. Let's just accumulate experience. The next one will definitely be better. Come on!
Please update, take a good look at "Three letters, six appointments, eight sedans, the matchmaker is marrying"😹😹😹
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
It's beautiful. I hope the author can hurry up. Hehe, I can't read it every day.
It's so exciting to watch, seeing the three major families, the Holy King's Palace, and all the forces want to condense the life dew to extend their lives. However, our protagonist not only has the physical strength to hold the Yixuan Sword, but also has the resourcefulness. They want to condense the life dew in the next life.
Okay, okay, great. Very nice. Love skills are useful.
It feels better if you hit it. This book is a delicacy of the prosperous age. I like this teacher's style very much.
The protagonist slowly develops, and the player Wang Qi grows up with it. It's very beautiful. Come on, come on.
Come on, come on, you can do it, I believe that if you persist, you will win! ! ! !
I went to see the author and opened a new book. I vaguely remember that the breeze in that book made me feel...
Passing by, I give you a five-star review
A foreigner should not forget to be a foreigner after traveling through time. If he really doesn't want to stay in China, he shouldn't write novels and just publish it. This book has no sense of immersion for a foreigner. I don't know how many foreigners in this era are still reading this kind of book
20 updates a day, quick update, quick update Aba Aba
It looks good, it looks too good. I can't eat more of this shit by myself.
Why do we have to make up a Dragon King? Yanlong was originally the boss and had the strongest overall strength. During the civil war with Bei Sanshui, when facing Black Rhinoceros with a meteor gun, Xinnan was able to fight back with his bare hands.
Yu Feihong already has an illegitimate child, so why write about her?
It can be said that the writing was like dragging out the defense and forcibly adding scenes, which made me lose all my brains about traveling through time.
It's not easy to create, so I'll give you a five-star review.
Wolf rules the world
Finally found the original novel
The Danfang will get 20% of the profit. What do you think? When you become strong, you are repaying the favor. When you are weak, you talk about feelings. You are a small head controlling the big head.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Everything that is fake is fake, whether it is a god or not, it is also a virus. They are all viruses. The world is sick. Only I am not sick, no, I am the most seriously ill, no, I am not sick, I saved the world. I just carry them all inside my body.
Check in on 3.21st
Check in today, you can rest tomorrow
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
It's pretty cool, but it feels like the necromancy is a bit watered down.