
This Npc is Ahead of the Game
by Yu Guyun
About This Novel
Thank you for the invitation. I am in "Star Skeleton". I have just opened my eyes. I am an NPC and I am currently locked up in a laboratory. There was a group of armed guards at the door, and there was a troublesome silver-haired girl in the bed next to her. The only goal is to survive. Originally I just wanted to develop in a low-key manner and live a stable life, but they insisted on implanting some S-class gene source into me. Then I won't be polite. Wait, why does my NPC still have a player panel? [You have awakened the S-level power: [Kinetic Energy]! Alas, there is nothing we can do. It seems that I can only be forced to embark on this invincible road of defeating everyone.
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Official(27)Scraped 21d ago
I can't even understand the homework I copied.
When a normal person is in danger, he doesn't first think of ways to save his life, but first thinks of saving the world to make up for his regrets🤐
Ink stains, constant small bugs, and the plot fails to grasp the key points.
From the first 10 or so pictures, it was said that a group of small trash would be established as a peripheral stronghold, to the 40 or so pictures that had not yet entered the door. Each choice had to tell a story about the past life, and the key points were not very relevant. There is also the fact that the plot setting has not been thought out at all. The past life has become real. Logically speaking, you should know the principles and how to use all your skills. All basic knowledge should be acquired when the game becomes real, or learned later. There is no profession that does not overlap with the city in this garbage place like Azure Star. If you don't have skills, you can't acquire them, especially the same abilities as in the previous life. There is also a research institute on a planet that is backward in everything. There are guide agents for S-level abilities in the research institute. In the future, S-level powers will not be allowed to fly all over the world? Also, it would be reasonable for you to escape after injecting kinetic energy at the beginning, but as soon as you wake up, you can counterattack with extremely fast and violent operations without even getting familiar with your body? A relatively important research institute must use alien technological shackles that can be opened with a piece of iron wire? You said you're the leading version, but you're hacking us to see what you're leading the version of? Fighting mobs with a few deliberately rude and stupid little characters is where you lead the version?
This plot is too long, right?
With 300+ chapters, it's still dangling in D-level, and it's still a small independent force that has just started.
The back and forth ink marks, the plot just doesn't push forward, or it makes a lot of seemingly high-level pitfalls. Is it useful? I have done a lot of things, but in summary, it is just wiping people's butts everywhere. It has been dozens of chapters. I don't do any of my upgrade tasks, just waiting for others to come to my door. I am deliberately stuck in the level, right? Some plots are even more inexplicable.
Quite wordy
Luo Liba's explanation is that there is some human nature, but not much. Forcibly reducing intelligence, just to set off. The escape from the very beginning was full of poison, without any complaints.
At the beginning of the time travel, I didn't know where I was going, so I talked about regrets and salvation. At the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was stupid and not what a normal person could think of.
Some are like "From the Star Abyss", the descriptions of the abilities are quite similar, and the paths are somewhat similar.
Unable to survive
It must be that the protagonist written by this author only knows how to show off, but also does so inexplicably. The readers cannot understand the point of showing off at all.
The seemingly strong second turn is actually a big hole dug by the author. He is directly emotionally indifferent + has a strong appetite, and he immediately ceases to be a human being. The author chose a route that no normal person would choose, and the follow-up will definitely not conform to the setting.
This kind of amber flow is a virtue. When you enter the game, a woman must have died, which is a pity. Licking a dog may also be erotic. You lick a prophet who doesn't care about the world and say how messed up the world is. To change the fate of some people. Protect yourself first! A person being chased is like a dog. It cannot be resurrected and just wanders around, messing around. The earth is broken, don't be sad, just be sad for a woman from another world!
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Official(27)Scraped 21d ago
I can't even understand the homework I copied.
When a normal person is in danger, he doesn't first think of ways to save his life, but first thinks of saving the world to make up for his regrets🤐
Ink stains, constant small bugs, and the plot fails to grasp the key points.
From the first 10 or so pictures, it was said that a group of small trash would be established as a peripheral stronghold, to the 40 or so pictures that had not yet entered the door. Each choice had to tell a story about the past life, and the key points were not very relevant. There is also the fact that the plot setting has not been thought out at all. The past life has become real. Logically speaking, you should know the principles and how to use all your skills. All basic knowledge should be acquired when the game becomes real, or learned later. There is no profession that does not overlap with the city in this garbage place like Azure Star. If you don't have skills, you can't acquire them, especially the same abilities as in the previous life. There is also a research institute on a planet that is backward in everything. There are guide agents for S-level abilities in the research institute. In the future, S-level powers will not be allowed to fly all over the world? Also, it would be reasonable for you to escape after injecting kinetic energy at the beginning, but as soon as you wake up, you can counterattack with extremely fast and violent operations without even getting familiar with your body? A relatively important research institute must use alien technological shackles that can be opened with a piece of iron wire? You said you're the leading version, but you're hacking us to see what you're leading the version of? Fighting mobs with a few deliberately rude and stupid little characters is where you lead the version?
This plot is too long, right?
With 300+ chapters, it's still dangling in D-level, and it's still a small independent force that has just started.
The back and forth ink marks, the plot just doesn't push forward, or it makes a lot of seemingly high-level pitfalls. Is it useful? I have done a lot of things, but in summary, it is just wiping people's butts everywhere. It has been dozens of chapters. I don't do any of my upgrade tasks, just waiting for others to come to my door. I am deliberately stuck in the level, right? Some plots are even more inexplicable.
Quite wordy
Luo Liba's explanation is that there is some human nature, but not much. Forcibly reducing intelligence, just to set off. The escape from the very beginning was full of poison, without any complaints.
At the beginning of the time travel, I didn't know where I was going, so I talked about regrets and salvation. At the beginning, I felt that the protagonist was stupid and not what a normal person could think of.
Some are like "From the Star Abyss", the descriptions of the abilities are quite similar, and the paths are somewhat similar.
Unable to survive
It must be that the protagonist written by this author only knows how to show off, but also does so inexplicably. The readers cannot understand the point of showing off at all.
The seemingly strong second turn is actually a big hole dug by the author. He is directly emotionally indifferent + has a strong appetite, and he immediately ceases to be a human being. The author chose a route that no normal person would choose, and the follow-up will definitely not conform to the setting.
This kind of amber flow is a virtue. When you enter the game, a woman must have died, which is a pity. Licking a dog may also be erotic. You lick a prophet who doesn't care about the world and say how messed up the world is. To change the fate of some people. Protect yourself first! A person being chased is like a dog. It cannot be resurrected and just wanders around, messing around. The earth is broken, don't be sad, just be sad for a woman from another world!
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It's similar to a book like The Super Mechanic. I'll only talk about the shortcomings/toxic points I feel in this book (except for the shortcomings listed below, it's pretty good, and it's the first book by a new author, so I can still give more support) Disadvantages: The current descriptions of the heroine and other female characters are really unsatisfactory, and the data panel of the paid chapters sometimes takes up a bit too much space. Some plot settings are a little too classic or unreasonable, and the strength settings are also a bit confusing (maybe I haven't seen the latter yet)




The protagonist was reborn and traveled through the game to become an NPC with a system panel. The time was one month before the first closed beta. A common experimental subject starts the experiment by cooperating with another experimental subject to kill the experimenter in a sneak attack and break out of the experimental base. After killing the three pursuers who were following him, he was temporarily safe. The eunuch rate of this kind of writing is a bit high, I hope this one can be stronger.












