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The fighting force was too much. There was a 6-year-old child in the non-magic world and the prehistoric innate spiritual roots in the same flow. The Naruto Uzumaki clan shared the same physique. The result given was that it could only be defeated by dealing with a calf.
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Don't tell me, it looks a bit cool from the front
So, I won't update until I get to the most exciting part, are you deliberately trying to scare people's appetite😄
Just watch it
When I saw that no one said a word, I was stunned.
I can't understand how I became smarter after just one stick.
You know how to deal with others, you know how to draw inferences about other cases, and you know how to understand cheats. Isn't this nonsense? If you get a treasure, the natives might be able to use it, but if you get a panel, they'll be able to use it. As a result, the car didn't come, would he still tolerate the incident? How did he become wise? It was extremely poisonous when I opened the book. I even went back to see if it was soul-piercing. The language is good, but the logic doesn't make sense.
The update frequency is super fast, and it's also very interesting.
Author, you must not stop updating, you must not stop updating! ! ! ! ! The heroine Qian Renxue, the heroine Qian Renxue! ! ! ! Give you a monthly pass! ! ! !
The progress is relatively slow. When I read the latest chapter, only a week has passed in reality. But the quality is still okay
How could Qiu Liju capture tens of thousands of people? ?
Can he afford to feed himself with so much food? Are they eating grass?
The writing is too verbose, the plot is protracted, the heroine is not very clear, and the plot is too shallow. The plot setting is relatively novel, there are many foreshadowings, and the updates are stable. If it is a new author, the flaws will not hide the flaws and the progress will be great. Second grade but a good book.
I am publishing this because I really hope that many people will read this book.
I hope you can come in and read this book. I really don't want it to end so soon. It's so sad. I think it's quite interesting. It's my personal opinion, but I hope you can click in and read it.
Stop coming, eunuch, there has been no update for several months.
I hope that the protagonist's soul ring can bring some of the prophetic IQ of a time traveler. Is it okay if he doesn't have to be brainless?
Are you writing a soliloquy?
This is really weird. How is this written? In a few chapters, I don't see a single person speaking, you are all talking to yourself. If you don't know how to write, learn from it.
Hey, I can't do it anymore, I'm laughing so hard. It's pretty and funny from Kuaishou
a question
The skills are great, the skills are full, there is no shortage of resources, player information, and a lot of elixirs, but the state is like constipation. The state of Qi training is written like this. Is it the law that the Nascent Soul will not be available later, and the great road is coming?
Are there Medusas and Green Scales? ? ? These few
How come there is such a talent school that specializes in sacrifice? If this kind of person can be on the list, can't you watch something good? It must be a mess.
There are attractions and expectations in the early stage, but there is a lack of innovation in the later stage, and it is 95% repetitive.
The plot feels like there are no fluctuations, the replicability is straight forward, and most of the emotional lines are jealous and vying for favor. There are highlights in the front, but there is almost no innovation in the back, and it feels the same in the back. The exciting points are revealed quickly, and there is no counterattack. It is a bit boring. It is understandable if it stops at 9.0 Points. The female protagonist and female villain are three-dimensional and distinct, while a small number of male protagonists are a bit OOC. Some of the sentences in the article are very interesting, the logic is basically correct, and the villain is not brainlessly weakened to reflect the protagonist's IQ. The only shortcoming is that there is no innovation in the plot. Although there are several male protagonists' stories, there is a plot but not enough expectations. There are no vests or pretending to be pigs and tigers. It just piles up the villains and then tramples them away. The heroine keeps getting stronger and is very repetitive. When you feel sleepy, you will be handed a pillow. The trials and hardships are brushed aside. Basically, it is the so-called refreshing point. There is no experience of how to become stronger, only the smile of the strong who directly become stronger.
Overall, it's okay. It's based on the last novel. I hope it can be longer.
In today's cliched novels, it is a rare breath of fresh air.
It's well written. It would be nice to update it more. Don't be a eunuch.
Let me just say...
He couldn't keep it in one update, why three? 😂
It looks good, but the update is too slow.
Garbage garbage garbage garbage
Take off your pants and fart
After some research, the author has set a total of seven levels of cultivation, and one can become an immortal at the seventh level. The protagonist is now at the first major level, and the third is promoted to the fourth minor level. If you accept it, can you tell me if this setting of yours makes any sense? The popular Qi training and foundation building are so popular, don't you feel dizzy? It makes no sense to spend a long time looking at your settings. Also, the first major level and the fourth small level are really passed down. Your sect is so rubbish.
In the third chapter, the protagonist is described as being like a fool, which is not at all like the description at the beginning, where he was the manager of several artists.
Since I don't understand. Don't write in such detail.
Looks stupid. Baffling
[Clock in on Day 17]
3.21 Check in on the seventeenth day of the points activity, la la la
🌟This novel really stood out to me✨, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are three-dimensional and layered👏. After reading it, I couldn't calm down for a long time, as if I had experienced a spiritual baptism🌊. The author's writing style is delicate and his emotional expression is sincere and moving💌. Highly recommended to you who like in-depth reading📚!
I take it too much for granted🤐I don't consider the consequences or whether it will be successful. I just follow the logic that whatever I think it will be, and I don't care whether it can be realized based on realistic logic.
I just write whatever I dream about. Chapter 1 is a battle between the left and right brains.
The first protagonist is like a stick, even if he doesn't have any brains, he feels insulted. It is ranked second, so it is not a good book. The score of 8.1 Is a bit high.
Why can't your book be searched by mortals?
There are too many people and characters. Can the author provide a list of the main personnel of the base and a brief background?
Who are the heroines? Are they Gu Yue and Na'er?
Fives vvf ddd Is it Brother Xu's? Expand and all of them are yours, Master?
For now, my personal reading experience is really good.
Looks good, looks good, highly recommended! Anyway, it's very beautiful. I just like to see this kind of thing.
There is a sense of violation that was forced upon me. It looks quite embarrassing. The dialogue between the protagonist and other people is never on the same channel.
It's too slow, I have no desire to read anymore. Nowadays, overpowering novels are no longer popular, and invincible novels are no longer popular. There are more mediocre readings. No one likes that after reading 50 chapters, the pig's feet are still useless.
Please update soon. I really like this.
I think it's okay. It's quite refreshing. I think the plot is quite novel.
Why isn't it updated? Isn't it updated?
Licking that Zhu again, I asked you who gave birth to her? Or are you her licking dog?
I have read Chapter 42 so far. I personally feel that it is well written. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
8 points is not much more than that
A veritable starting point orphanage, he doesn't just do it when he wants to, but he can only do it when a disaster is imminent. It is really difficult to advance the plot if he is really overwhelmed. Fast paced, well, it is, it's like eating fast food.
The best - {Lingxiao Flower}!
☆☆☆☆ [Plum blossoms without snow are not spiritual, and snow without poetry is too vulgar. [The poem at dusk is full of snow all over the sky, and it is very spring when combined with plum blossoms. Ziqing's writing style is unique! When I first read the title, I thought it was an old book, but when I checked the update section, I discovered it was a new book! It's a pity that we have to wait for a while Yu Hualing: Miss Fan Yang, the ninth lady of the Lu family, has seen how miserable the lives of the girls in the family have been since she was a child. There are all kinds of rules, big and small, and they cannot have any personal thoughts at all. They have to be manipulated by others from the time they are born! There is only one purpose: to obey! My whole life is for the family. In the first half of my life, I sold a good price for my mother's family. In the middle half of my life, I traveled to various houses for my husband's family. In the second half of my life, I continued to plan for the children of the family. In this way, I became a famous family generation after generation. "Zheng Liang at the southern foot, Liu Lang in Longxi." Li Zixiao/Li Anyu: The sixth son of the Li family in Longxi! Gentle and polite, modest and casual, dignified, talented, and extremely beautiful! After being targeted by the Empress Dowager for many years, Li finally sold the future heir of such a family head to his wife. In order to resist the clutches of the Queen Mother, she was willing to commit suicide, in order to separate the family, she was willing to marry a son-in-law, and because she gave half a jar of wine to the dying Yu Hua, she seized this glimmer of hope in desperation and relied on her only chance to survive! This also ended the hope of the family. Yun Heng: The grandson of the Guo family who has been missing for many years! He met Yu Hualing when he was a beggar. He was the adopted son of the Langya Yun family. He was later found by his family and was unwilling to go home. After learning that she had entered the court, he decided to return, firstly to help her block some hidden arrows, and secondly because of the hidden love in his heart (it was his grandfather who poisoned Yu Hualing in the palace.) Cui Zhuo: The fourth son of the Cui family in Qinghe! After being sent away by her family for many years when she was a child, she unexpectedly became Lu Hualing's senior brother. Because of this, he saw her casualness and gradually became the Bai Yueguang in his heart! Cui Zhao: He did not hesitate to drug himself to avoid the Queen Mother Ling Yunji: Senior Brother Yuhua Ling! She also likes her and does it silently, but when she knows that the poison she sells is used on her? Junior brother Lu Ye came down from the mountain to help her, with the purpose of helping the two of them achieve good things. There is also a very famous junior uncle [Lu Fusheng]... Wang Xi: Dad is the Queen Mother's male favorite, so he became the eldest son of the new family! Because he and Lu Hualing had experienced the same life and death, they also developed a love for her, but was intercepted by Li Liulang. Yuan Hong: A thoughtful little puppet emperor? Although some are still powerless, there are no simple people in the royal family. Being young is the original sin. They have to play both sides among many forces. Not only must they know how to pretend to be stupid and incompetent, but they must also learn how to win over and protect themselves. Send a song... Peach Blossom Temple: ...①...... Acting to the Peach Blossom Temple I will do my own thing and sell it. There is no trace in the story and I am lazy That period of half dreaming and half waking No flowers or wine answer For future generations to see Believe and doubt and say goodbye to rumors I just want to have flowers and wine cups Before Che Ma resigned Throw down one sleeve and be relaxed My best friend and I are in love Dare to take care of your liver and gallbladder I talk freely I have fun with you all I laugh but no one can see through it After sobering up, listening to Zen under the moonlight I talk freely I have fun with you all I laugh but no one can see through it After sobering up, listening to Zen under the moonlight Flowers with eyes all night long Shake out clothes ...②...... It writes that Peach Blossom Temple is vaguely visible Courageous and knowledgeable joys and sorrows Every word after being handed down is difficult The crazy part The concealment of solitary sobriety this life Biography of Farewell to Yao, Both True and False I just want to have flowers and wine cups Resign in front of the carriage Throw down one sleeve and be relaxed My best friend and I are in love Dare to take care of your liver and gallbladder I'm like this I am a cloud in the world I laugh at the fact that everyone has no time to spare Borrow an acre of land from a layman Before I get drunk in this life I'm like this I am a cloud in the world I laugh at the fact that everyone has no time to spare Borrow an acre of land from a layman Before I get drunk in this life Shake out clothes : Guandong Zhang family, Taiyuan Wang family, Hedong Liu family, Boling Cui family, Xingyang Zheng family, Fanyang Lu family, Langya Yun family, Taiyuan Guo family, Jingzhao Wei family, Hongnong Yang family, Longxi Li family, Shangqiu Mu family... There are only a few that can be passed down through the ages! They are all passed down as "official careers"
Awesome, awesome, awesome👍, basically every character has their own characteristics. I can basically remember all the names of the 123 generations of the Li family, and I feel sorry for them all. So well written. So well written.