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When a son beats his father, he has to look twice
The author should not stop updating. Who is the heroine? Such a beautiful novel must be added to the bookshelf and a small ticket must be arranged.
If you want to read this book, I suggest you read Chapter 3 and Chapter 4. If you can read on, there shouldn't be much problem after that.
It's extremely poisonous, and it's written in a wrong way. What is this fourth chapter about? Why is this fourth chapter so different from the previous three? The system suddenly came out, and it was clear that the male protagonist could only plant, but the system came out and said it could extract.
Who are the heroines? Will the heroine be Liu Shen?
He said the writing was pretty good and the content was very exciting.
It's not a loss to get into, the writing is smooth and natural, the plot is unconventional, and there are no flaws throughout the process.
Have seen similar
I've seen something similar. After that, I changed the world and ran as a pirate.
The writing is okay, there are relatively few of this type, come on! ! !
I've read dozens of chapters, and I feel pretty good so far.
I've read dozens of chapters, and I feel pretty good so far.
Not bad, pretty good. It's been a long time since we drank... Why don't you make arrangements?
There are more plots of cultivation, fighting, growth, adventure, etc. Love can be included in daily life but not too much (you must always be wary of the power of the laws of the Supreme God King of Love). It is a bit difficult to write a Dou Si comic book well. Come on🤧🤧🤧
It's good-looking, and the heroine is strong. It's a pity that it didn't tell what happened after entering the turbulence of the universe and what happened to her parents, but it seems like it would have been a natural thing if I didn't tell it.
Empty comment area. I'm curious, what is the background of this world?
Is it interesting to upgrade to level 4 in two years?
Protagonist of the Virgin (make up the word)
It's a new book, but it's quite interesting. I just don't know if it has a male protagonist. And that Song Jingci is the heroine's biological brother (guess)
Overall, it's pretty good. I hope it won't be unfinished at the end, and I don't want to cut the book. I also hope that the protagonist will add a second martial spirit. I hope you can refer to it. Although it may not be added, I will also say it. I hope the author will consider it and consider adding a martial spirit.
Not bad, keep it up and update soon
Except for the a bit toxic at the beginning, the rest of the reading is pretty good. I hope there will be more.
Chapter 2, failed.
Meaningless verbosity + water word count. In just 2 chapters, the protagonist's rebirth routine and plot design are very long-winded and boring. It would have been nice to explain the events of the previous life in a few sentences, but instead, he carefully described how to find a job, write a novel, and then, a woman came to his door and was embarrassingly given two choices. Then the protagonist was looked down upon by the company, and he was ruined. He was reborn, chose another one, was forced to sign a contract while drunk, and did not explain the content, and then the protagonist ran to the peninsula. Chapter 2 is still a big chapter of 3,000 words, and it just explains something! Although the "scratch-off" plot in the front is boring, it at least plays a role in the subsequent plot of contacting female idols. Those few hundred words are not considered nonsense. I also thought I could watch it later, but in less than three minutes and two chapters, I lost interest in the following plot. Don't talk about "the outline is well designed" and "what happens next". If you can use more than 5,000 words to just explain the reason for the protagonist's time travel, it is enough to judge how verbose your writing is! As for the plot of explaining the protagonist's reason for time travel, some authors explain it in just a few sentences! Because, unless it is a fantasy plot such as "time and space are reversed, and the protagonist's future body is cheating on his present body", it is necessary to arrange the foreshadowing of the current plot. Otherwise, in a purely urban type, what is there to explain in such detail about the protagonist's previous life? !
Bad review Why is an anus not a butt god?
What, make it colorful? Why does your description of the Gollum Ball look so much like a Poké Ball? Cloud?
Is there a missing chapter after chapter 125? I feel like it's not very coherent and the truth hasn't been fully told. Can you please fill it in?
Thank you babies for your support!
This book has tested the waters! I will continue to work hard to live up to your love for this book and ensure the quality of updates to my dear little darlings every day! 😘😘
Xiao Wu, don't be a pet or a heroine
This kind of thoughtful interest entanglement and analysis is far more interesting than the purely mindless and refreshing literature.
I like it very much, I like the subject matter. Good books must be shared.
There is too much nonsense and there is no point in repeating it.
A hundred chapters of Zai Shui can't solve the problem
Is the author Gu Yuena also the heroine?
Good books need no words
This article is well versed in the charm of earthly fireworks, and is completely different from the popular works that are pretentious and sweet. Based on the mundane relationship, it depicts the emotional entanglements between men and women in this world, and the writing is delicate and sincere. The writing is gentle and elegant, and the composition is relaxed and moderate. There is no false story of falling in love at first sight, only the feeling of people slowly getting to know each other. When they first met, they were cautious and secretly thinking about each other; after getting together for a long time, they let go of their guard and became considerate and harmonious with each other. It vividly depicts the hesitant, lingering and hopeful feelings of children's love in this world. The story is in line with human emotions in the world, and expresses the confusion and desires of men and women in marriage and love in this world. The characters are created plainly and realistically, without empty settings, and all emotions and thoughts arise naturally. The ordinary years hide tenderness and love in both directions. The emotions are clear and gentle. Reading them is enough to soothe people's hearts. The sea of people meet by chance, and fireworks stay with each other day and night. At this time, I realized that the best love in the world is never a sudden and dramatic thing, but the most important thing is the harmony of the three views. I will stay with you for the rest of my life.
This work has one hundred and seventy-eight chapters on the Formation Realm. The author of the previous work also had the same number of chapters as the Formation Realm. I feel like I don't have to worry too much about upgrading. It would be nice to have more original plots.
Where did this rubbish novel come from?
I saw two things that were directly blocked. What the hell?
The idea is pretty good, but you made it too big and upgraded too fast. How will you write it later?
I want to know how many chapters were removed before the update was discontinued, but I can't find it.
So pretty
The author must not be a eunuch. Don't waste such a beautiful book.
You can omit some content and don't write it in too much detail.
It's okay, but the pace is too slow. You can omit some content. You don't need to write too detailed. You can jump a little bit about the arrangements. It's too slow. There are more than 80 photos. I only shot Journey to the West and the Spring Festival Gala. I have already made at least three of the other ones.
Come on, author! Write well. Four shifts a day is not a dream.
The pace of Qi training is too fast. I hope the next chapters can be more fulfilling. In addition, the nature of the businessman should be changed as soon as possible.
Already promoted, please submit
This book has been promoted, please take a look at it! Xiaobao must throw pods!
Gee, this book is going to be written in the real timeline of 2080. That would require at least 50 million words.
It's hard to criticize, I feel like this book is a parody of Seal's book.
Do foster fathers have any particularly favorite hot scenes, but I'll mention them here.
If there is anything you particularly like, whether it makes you burst into flames or makes you cry, you can tell me about it. If it is suitable in the world view, Xiaoyao can relay it to Xiao Tian through dreams and ask him to see if he can arrange to reproduce it in "Douluo" to increase Xiao Tian's popularity. D(⸝｡⸝◉⸝ω⸝◉⸝｡⸝)b
Six, it's so maneuverable, but it would be great if Dou Yi was reborn.
In fact, there is nothing wrong with writing about twin martial souls, but martial souls pay attention to the bloodline theory. You are a dragon and a phoenix. To be honest, it is completely illogical. If you are two dragons, two phoenixes, or one animal martial soul and one weapon martial soul.
Sorry, but Tang San won't be particularly disgusting in this book.
I know that writing Tang San as an extremely selfish and disgusting image is the current traffic code of Douluo, which is politically correct. But to be honest, Dou Yi and Tang San didn't have many black spots. (Hot knowledge, the Douluo Five Parts are all parallel worlds. Theoretically, Fight One, Fight Two, Fight Three... Tang San in each world is a different Tang San.) Although Tang San is still Xiao Tian's opposing camp in this book, I prefer the feeling of close friends turning to old enemies, like Kakashi and Obito. It's just that Xiao Tian's tricks are more and stronger, and everything is under his control. The same goes for Yu Xiaogang. Although his character is average, he did play the role of a father to Tang San, especially in the early stage. Yu Xiaogang did regard Tang San more seriously than himself in the early stage. What I mean is: It's not OOC, I just wrote it according to Dou Yi's setting. It has shortcomings but also has bright spots. Let the story grow naturally. I just present the story to you adoptive fathers. By the way, I admire Third Young Master. Please spray lightly, glass heart. ( °̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥˟°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ )
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There are too many people and lack of characterization. And it can be regarded as selling mutton with a dog's head. Most of the characters who appear are from FD novels such as "Dang Kou Zhi", and there are also some Tian and Wang's subordinates in the 120 chapters. There are not many real Water Margin characters.
Test the waters, please watch to the end, click to remind me of updates, and give you recommendations and monthly tickets.
The heroine does not accept Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, Dugu Yan and others The protagonist's soul skills are compiled by the author himself. Except for the original effect of Buddha's Fury Tanglian, the author will compile all the soul skills more fully. If you drive, the author will try his best to drive better.
Why doesn't the author update again?
It's very interesting. Please update it. Come on, author, please update it three times a day.