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The first chapter scared me. In a 1,500-acre reservoir, the protagonist uses 8 water pumps to drain it. Well, I have an idea. May I ask the author, are your water pumps powered by nuclear energy? The power must not be 10,000,000KW.
I really can't stand it anymore. Where do you get so many talents?
I have written more than 100 chapters in this book. I have already written about it when Luo Xiaoyi was exposed. The Star Dragon Sanctuary is built in the small world of the Douluo plane! Moreover, when I wrote about Jiujiu's visit to the Star Dragon Sanctuary, Shiloh also said that it is an artifact that is convenient for people in the small world to travel and refine! When writing about Pisces and Leo, he also specifically explained, "Obviously, this is a small world in the Star Dragon Sanctuary." As a result, during today's inventory of Aries Star Dragon, some characters are still saying that Dou 2 has no concept of planets. So you don't understand what I wrote earlier? Why are you so confident about AI, so often shocked, and so wrong in logic? Carved from a template, Aren't you just going to be shocked? There's no plot in what I wrote, right? I really can't bear it. If you don't read the first few dozen chapters and start screaming at the back, you can still pretend. I suggest you slowly read from the first chapter to the back. Talent is here!
It's hard to imagine who can read three million words. Let me put it bluntly, you have been reborn. Hunhua Entertainment is so awesome, rich and talented, but you are still here to play innocently? I feel sick and vomited. A normal man will never experience just one woman in his life. You made me feel sick and vomited.
This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan*, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's 'To Flower A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Guoshan, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good.
1 star.
There are too many scenes for Chen Jinfei, and he looks very professional. He is not as good at art as Lu Zheng. At least Jing Tian has acted in many movies.
It's quite interesting to look at the current setting and story development. The heroine is kind and tough, but maybe interstellar beasts and other themes have become very popular recently? Although I can be moved by the delicate writing style and emotions, I would like to see a more novel world view presented. Come on, I really want to stop updating. As the chapters increase, there will be more and more readers.
nice!
It's quite good-looking, with novel themes. I like the heroine's sobriety, independence, and beauty. It's more exciting, fast-paced, and refreshing.
I haven't read it yet. Let's give it five stars first. Good luck to the author.
By the way, are there just a few of us? I think this book should be quite good. I clicked in but didn't see anyone commenting.
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Most damn annoying. Baffling. Just take women out. Oh shit! All dead. It can also be taken out and resurrected. Instead of being killed, longevity has arrived. Even if the longevity power of Zhetian is reached, he must die after death. You can be resurrected by being brought out from within. Just fucking outrageous. Let's say they are masters and apprentices. He didn't even say "Master".
Why weren't they shot in order? What the hell.
Shouldn't it be a hegemonic route to use this kind of cheat? For example, first capture the fixed resource-producing areas and stable logistics in the Americas, then destroy the Qing Dynasty in Australia and Southeast Asia, then conquer all of Asia and Africa, and finally surround Europe and kick it. Are you unhappy? It was supposed to be a fun game, but the author made it so petty. Not to mention North America, even California has not yet settled it, but it somehow went to China to get involved. It's a big surprise. 🙄
The protagonist is a true virgin, and she feels uncomfortable eating some gangster meat. Is it fake or not, Yi Zhonghai?
Cut it and rewrite it. Tang San and Yu Xiaogang were a perfect match just now. As long as Tang San has the soul bone of the Immortal Grass Human-Faced Demon Spider, the soul bone of the Blue Silver Emperor, and the beard of the Blue Silver King, Yu Xiaogang will defeat Yu Xiaogang. In the original work, Tang San said that after entering level 30, he can practice The speed was greatly reduced. Later, the immortal grass was used to purify the pollution of the martial soul's original poison. Otherwise, the Blue Silver Emperor's bloodline would be contaminated, and Tang San would not be able to break through the soul king at the age of twenty. He wanted to take off after he was at least 25 years old, when he added soul rings to the Clear Sky Hammer.
It's such a mess, I can't stand it anymore, there's no level at all, I read it and I don't even know what it's about.
I haven't read such a good novel in a long time! Looking forward to updates every day😽😽
Please update it quickly. There are so few. Please update it quickly.
But the author of the brain has been seeking death, and Cong started to seek death in the first chapter. Warriors are not always seeking death, others are trying to make themselves stronger, and the protagonist wants to make his weapons stronger even if he wants to die!
Rubbish in rubbish rubbish in rubbish
Four stars for now to show encouragement
The classic Bo city opening (in my eyes, it is a deduction item, there are too many fan Bo city openings, and I am tired of aesthetics. I can think of things to do later at a glance. There is no new idea). Secondly, there are the Genshin factor, the Seer number, and the evil tiger of Love Continent. There are many things to stitch, but the more things you write, the more messy it will be. If you feel that you can grasp it If you feel that your writing skills are not good enough, don't write about the heroine in the end. It will be a big disadvantage. Because it is a new book and there are only a few chapters, I only read the title and did not read the content without making an evaluation. There are too few chapters and the evaluation is of little value. It mainly depends on whether you can keep writing and the plot direction. If you follow the original work completely, you will be deducted points.
The first time I read this book was in 2014. At that time, I stayed up all night in an Internet cafe with my friends every day. I read it a second time a few days ago when there was no signal on the train. This time I read it very seriously, so seriously that I cried after reading it😭. I saw the ending that I had not seen more than ten years ago. My favorite Qian Meng finally reunited with Yu Luosheng. Together, the ending is so happy, why can't I breathe so hard😭, I cry for them in the story😭, I cry for the 12 years that have passed before I know it😭, I cry for facing life, and never having a youthful relationship with friends 5 anymore😭, time passes so fast, the memories become full of tears
The first one has a high talent setting, the second one uses a ginseng to break through to the late innate stage, and the third one starts half a year later, still in the late innate stage, is it such a waste?
Couldn't Tang San's broken opportunity be changed to the fifth spirit ring to increase the life span of the spirit ring? You just have to check out the spots, get stuck on time and get stuck on level. It's written like shit. If you haven't eaten shit before, you can give it a try.
It's a rubbish novel and insults IQ. When it appeared, it was 9 years old and level 36, and later it was forcibly lowered to more than ten levels. Normally speaking, the protagonist was 12 years old and drank two fairy grasses, so he must be at least level 50 or above. Even close to level 60. The protagonist is not a fucking ultimate martial spirit. ***How is the card level? How to reduce the cultivation speed? He has a little bit of talent, but in terms of coolness, he can't compare with other fans of the same genre. If it weren't for Qian Renxue and the protagonist's kind of alternative relationship, this book would be a mess, and the writing is unclear now. I can't even write.
Let's just say we can't afford it. Don't play if you're level. After breaking through the level of soul-breaking power, it is almost the same as the original protagonist group. He also used the best cultivation environment, oh, no, he still drank the fairy grass. Damn, what a waste. Others normally have fairy grass and have taken off long ago. How many levels did it take for *** to improve? Calculate for yourself what the difference is from the protagonist group that just appeared in the original work, it is even worse than others. I don't have to use my brain to think about it, I have to adopt the soul beast level in the original work. Increase the death toll to 20,000 or 30,000. It is normal to make the fifth soul ring. He had to grab the fourth soul ring and force himself to a dozen levels. Damn it, idiot.
It doesn't feel like it's cost-effective to apply that broken patch to the protagonist's soul power in the next few chapters. The protagonist was level 36 when he was 9 years old, and now he is 48 when he is 12 years old, which is equivalent to the third grade level increased by 12 levels, four levels in one year. In the original Xiao Zhan San, the sixth grade level increased by 19 levels, and there are still blacksmiths. What do you think of the protagonist who is level 3 in one year? It looks like he is 1 level higher than Xiao Zhao San, but in fact, others are doing more shit. Even if the protagonist does not practice Kung Fu, the environment he is in, the top-level environment, is only 1 level higher. Quite speechless. In fact, if the protagonist is changed to level 50, and then breaks through to 53 or 54, it will be almost the same. Then increase the age of the soul beast in the outer soul bone or simply change it. To put it bluntly, the author was too lazy to think about it, so he just copied the original work, which made it look very unpleasant. The talent of the expressive protagonist right now is even less than that of Yakuza. Just disgusting.
Meow, meow, meow, even the children said yes after eating it.
Reluctantly. If you say this is a small one, it has over-the-top props. If you say it is big, it feels average. Although it is said to be a fan, it must at least have an original plot. If you keep following the original story, it will be uninteresting.
It's a very interesting book with a strong story. Other Douluo fandoms are too homogeneous. It's almost the same over and over again. Come on!
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The settings are good, but there are too few. You must have some manuscripts to publish, right? 🤓
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Soul skills also have side effects. It's okay if one soul skill has side effects. All of them have side effects. Let's just have a soul skill without soul power. Why do we need soul skills? Is this because we are afraid that the protagonist is too strong? Then have innate tenth level soul power. The protagonist needs to practice quickly but is afraid of being strong, which is inconsistent.
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It's like a combination of game invasion novels and infinite streaming. Our heroine is really strong and the first person to survive in desperate situations. There are also cold-faced cute Lucy, Yu-Gi-Oh Xiaoying, childlike Zoe, and the cat-loving king Bai Qiang. Every character is well portrayed.
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The only drawback is that the author seems to have used artificial intelligence. Of course, I may have misunderstood, but there is really no need to go through more than ten pictures. After 20 pictures, I have forgotten all the previous settings. Can't even remember the time span? Do you want to change it? Take a look at what you wrote. When you wrote about the protagonist and the Right Corps, they trained for at least more than a month. Then later on, the villagers just said that they trained for more than a week. Look at the preface and follow-up of your words. This does not use artificial intelligence, but there is no time span record. As an author, it makes no sense to write a novel without recording time!
This book looks very familiar. The first time in the second time travel is the artificial man in Fate, summoning the heroic spirit, and the words he said to Xiao Hongchen and Meng Hongchen about the choice of soul skills when he obtained the second soul ring in the Sun and Moon Empire.
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What a fucking stupid plot, what kind of divine brain circuit can think that just by relying on a gangster identity to force Leng Yaozhu, a disciple of a four-character battle armor master, to flee the world?
(Personal opinion, don't read if you like the above-mentioned chapters) It seems to be ok. There are more than 500 chapters at present, and there are many poisonous points. It is a good no-brainer and refreshing article, suitable for reading in leisure time. Most of the attractions are some tasks that are pretentious, light-hearted and funny, etc. The emotional line is very awkward. There are some grass-roots teams in the sect that rely solely on system rewards and have no strict division of labor. , The quality of the protagonist is sometimes high and sometimes low, and he recruits disciples very casually (mainly because he doesn't write anything at all and just mentions it when he thinks of it). Sometimes he doesn't care about the life and death of others in order to show off, especially when Ye Xingchen challenges the previous part. At present, this is a systematic and smooth article with clear advantages and disadvantages. The writing is relatively smooth. It depends on how the author arranges it later.
I feel like I only wrote it based on my own ideas, without explaining the logic of the background at all.
Direct shooting means there is no government? Since I can shoot, I can also get a few anti-equipment snipers, or bombs with a temperature of thousands of degrees, or I can't modify it into an armored vehicle. Just writing it as a matter of course, negative review.
The rest of it is just random writing and I don't want to read it. What you wrote about Half Saint is even worse than Dou Huang.
What I have written so far is okay, but there are too few updates and it is not enough to read. Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !
The protagonist is a double-standard dog. He shows malice towards the Wuhun Palace for no reason. He is a wolf with evil intentions and wants to overthrow the Qian Family. He talks about being a dictator. He is crazy. This is fucking fantasy. Even in ancient times, it was hereditary. Later, when I have to be the pope (to be the savior) and I have time to recruit my own people, it is better to unify the continent, abolish slavery, reform the soul master system, and kill a large number of noble soul masters. If you want to do this, you can't rely on the Spirit Hall in the future.
Well written, a very promising book, looking forward to it
It's well written, and it's fun to watch him chase someone.
It's not good at writing and it doesn't update. It's better not to open so many
The training system is complicated
The training system is too complicated and messy, everything is being practiced, and there are too many loopholes, especially the sword energy. It is a little outrageous to say that sword energy can become a physical entity in the front. In the back, it is written that thousands of sword energy appear directly. It feels like I am writing whatever comes to mind, and whether to follow it up or not is purely up to the reader's imagination.