
Douluo: the Sims, Rescued Zhang Lexuan at the Beginning
About This Novel
Su Chen traveled through the peerless Tang Sect and awakened into a life simulator. [First simulation starts] [6 years old]: You awakened the martial soul Pluto Sword, and you are innately full of soul power, and you are known as the light of Shrek's future. [13 Years old]: You become the Soul Emperor and join the team to hunt soul beasts. Due to the arrogance and gluttony of the leader Xuanzi, he encountered a hundred thousand year soul beast, all the Shrek elites were killed and injured, and you also died unfortunately. Because the resentment cannot be eliminated, Pluto moves his sword! You return from hell and awaken [Realm of the Past Life]! [23 Years old]: You were promoted to Super Douluo, went to Shrek Poseidon Pavilion alone, killed Xuanzi by force, and shocked the world! Labeled "Evil Soul Master" by Shrek, he is the enemy of the whole world. [25 Years old]: When you ascend to Extreme Douluo, the God Realm sends an olive branch. Faced with the solicitation of Tang San and the God of Destruction, you decisively chose destruction. [Ending]: Tang San was furious, scolded you for "already having a way to die", ignored the rules and imposed divine punishment, and you died. "..." Looking at himself who fell under God's punishment in the simulator, Su Chen realized. In this Tang continent, those who follow the Tang Dynasty will prosper, and those who go against the Tang Dynasty will perish? "In that case, then I will be the biggest extraterrestrial demon!"
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Official(74)Scraped 1d ago
Don't accept some useless female supporting characters
Especially for Meng Hongchen, the quality of her martial soul determines her limit. It's not as good as Tang Ya, who went from soul master to soul saint in five years. Instead of giving Meng Hongchen a lot of talent, it would be better to develop Tang Ya's devouring ability. In her second appearance in the Holy Spirit Cult, she devoured seven blacks and one red. There is no need to collect too many accessories, just go with the flow and write some crappy cliche plots. People will get visual fatigue after watching too much. I really want to say this book is a masterpiece, but I'm afraid it won't be finished later. To quote a sentence, a phoenix soaring over thousands of feet would not rest on a phoenix tree. The protagonist makes me feel like a phoenix, unable to eat anything other than bamboo. He collected those pendants like eating some chaff, lowering him For example, when marrying a man or a wife, it is usually important to have a well-matched family. The two parties are not of the same class, and will either be implicated or dragged down. What I want to express is that if Party A has offended a class higher than him, he will have to trouble Party S to help him settle it, which is a waste of time, energy and money. Of course the protagonist can do whatever he wants, but there is no need to cause trouble to himself over trivial matters. The protagonist is a person who has achieved greatness. If he cannot give up even some common things that are not enough to care about, it is just a trap, trapped in a small space.
Zhang Lexuan didn't write well.
The protagonist died because of Zhang Lexuan, and was later resurrected to kill Xuanzi. Zhang Lexuan also asked the protagonist why? Later, he also met Zhang Lexuan. How do you, a time traveler, have any feelings for him? You feel soft when he cries. You are just greedy for her body, garbage. If you don't believe me, I'm just having fun, and I definitely won't put a lot of emotion into it. Just like the Emperor's auspicious beast, he believes in the protagonist. Do you want a woman who will believe in you no matter what you do, or a woman who will oppose you for the sake of others.
I feel there is no need for Zhang Lexuan to stay in Shrek any longer.
Can a person write this introduction?
Even though Destruction has recruited you, Tang San dares to blatantly attack the lower realm directly?
This is good, it simulates the most feared and outrageous death method, but this is fine in the Peerless Tang Sect. Any death can be attributed to Tang Buddha.
I can only say that it's okay. There are many inconsistencies. I clearly said that the simulation will not come to reality. In the end, I still inherited the memory and it is still the same old routine. The two simulations were already full. The second simulation of the two martial arts simulation gave an enhanced version without saying that the two were fused together. Well, the timeline of the first simulation was chaotic. It took hundreds of years to create a god in seclusion. In the end, it took a few years for Huo Yuhao to rise to the top. The main theme is a mutual eating setting like Tang Sanshao, and even more than a dozen left and right brains fighting each other. It can be used as a short and exciting article, but it will not be long if it is written.
I don't quite understand what's so good about the mock article (you're right if you're arguing)
The simulated writing is not very interesting. Every simulation is like writing the introduction of a novel.
Fighting strength collapsed
Your combat power has already expanded to this in just a few chapters. I really don't know what you are going to write next. Are you going to forcefully suppress your combat power?
Generally speaking, the first simulation was okay, but the second simulation was a mess. The focus of The Sims is that simulation is not life. The simulation was written as the main story in reverse order, and the last chapter was considered invincible, so what else can come up for the protagonist?
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Official(74)Scraped 1d ago
Don't accept some useless female supporting characters
Especially for Meng Hongchen, the quality of her martial soul determines her limit. It's not as good as Tang Ya, who went from soul master to soul saint in five years. Instead of giving Meng Hongchen a lot of talent, it would be better to develop Tang Ya's devouring ability. In her second appearance in the Holy Spirit Cult, she devoured seven blacks and one red. There is no need to collect too many accessories, just go with the flow and write some crappy cliche plots. People will get visual fatigue after watching too much. I really want to say this book is a masterpiece, but I'm afraid it won't be finished later. To quote a sentence, a phoenix soaring over thousands of feet would not rest on a phoenix tree. The protagonist makes me feel like a phoenix, unable to eat anything other than bamboo. He collected those pendants like eating some chaff, lowering him For example, when marrying a man or a wife, it is usually important to have a well-matched family. The two parties are not of the same class, and will either be implicated or dragged down. What I want to express is that if Party A has offended a class higher than him, he will have to trouble Party S to help him settle it, which is a waste of time, energy and money. Of course the protagonist can do whatever he wants, but there is no need to cause trouble to himself over trivial matters. The protagonist is a person who has achieved greatness. If he cannot give up even some common things that are not enough to care about, it is just a trap, trapped in a small space.
Zhang Lexuan didn't write well.
The protagonist died because of Zhang Lexuan, and was later resurrected to kill Xuanzi. Zhang Lexuan also asked the protagonist why? Later, he also met Zhang Lexuan. How do you, a time traveler, have any feelings for him? You feel soft when he cries. You are just greedy for her body, garbage. If you don't believe me, I'm just having fun, and I definitely won't put a lot of emotion into it. Just like the Emperor's auspicious beast, he believes in the protagonist. Do you want a woman who will believe in you no matter what you do, or a woman who will oppose you for the sake of others.
I feel there is no need for Zhang Lexuan to stay in Shrek any longer.
Can a person write this introduction?
Even though Destruction has recruited you, Tang San dares to blatantly attack the lower realm directly?
This is good, it simulates the most feared and outrageous death method, but this is fine in the Peerless Tang Sect. Any death can be attributed to Tang Buddha.
I can only say that it's okay. There are many inconsistencies. I clearly said that the simulation will not come to reality. In the end, I still inherited the memory and it is still the same old routine. The two simulations were already full. The second simulation of the two martial arts simulation gave an enhanced version without saying that the two were fused together. Well, the timeline of the first simulation was chaotic. It took hundreds of years to create a god in seclusion. In the end, it took a few years for Huo Yuhao to rise to the top. The main theme is a mutual eating setting like Tang Sanshao, and even more than a dozen left and right brains fighting each other. It can be used as a short and exciting article, but it will not be long if it is written.
I don't quite understand what's so good about the mock article (you're right if you're arguing)
The simulated writing is not very interesting. Every simulation is like writing the introduction of a novel.
Fighting strength collapsed
Your combat power has already expanded to this in just a few chapters. I really don't know what you are going to write next. Are you going to forcefully suppress your combat power?
Generally speaking, the first simulation was okay, but the second simulation was a mess. The focus of The Sims is that simulation is not life. The simulation was written as the main story in reverse order, and the last chapter was considered invincible, so what else can come up for the protagonist?









